Andrea!!! hows it goin babe, been awhile

i guess unless sumone beats me to it, ill be the first person to post...

Title - Its Raining Inside

I guess im starting to miss me
Look down in my lap but its empty
Keep looking for the old little kiddy
Right in my lap and its sleeping quietly

I guess I dont want to recognize its face
Deep down inside I dont wanna leave this place
So tired, and my vision has never been this stale
I want to stand up and let the past just drift away

Its more than a feeling
Where did the frustration go
Its more than a feeling
It will be raining soon

I guess I will put my life aside
It doesnt matter what I feel inside
The more I think the more time goes by
Tired of waking up in the middle of the night

Who even gives a damn anyway
When I ask for help they turn away
Theyll be sorry when I leave my stay
Whats in the mirror wasnt there yesterday

Its more than a feeling
Where did the frustration go
Its more than a feeling
It will be raining soon

By myself like a lonesome dove
Random thoughts are always rough
Who is looking down at me from above
Where is my heart if theres nothing to love

Its hot but the sun isnt out
The wind never blows away the clouds
Im always quiet when my shadow is loud
I wanna change but I just dont know how

Its more than a feeling
Where did the frustration go
Its more than a feeling
It will be raining soon

Being different isnt so great
Never works to keep me awake
I never understood it to this day
I guess the end isnt worth the wait

Getting out is the only way
Please dont ever say it will be ok
Im tired of being weak and bored
I cant even open this fucking door

Its more than a feeling
Where did the frustration go
Its more than a feeling
It will be raining soon

Its sunny outside but im always wet
Tired of this game but I cannot quit
Confused cause there are too many steps
Im starting to miss me, who cares, well me I guess

Its more than a feeling (why)
Where did the frustration go (why)
Its more than a feeling (why)
Its raining inside (its raining)
Its raining inside
Its raining inside
Its raining inside
But why?

Slica - u need to leave me sumthin once n awhile like old times!

Nice sumbmissions everyone.

Here's a new one of mine. . I don't know what to call it though.


Your sides tempt me
With every ounce of memory
You hope in your head that I will walk away
But alas, I will not budge
Your scent beckons me to bring forth feeling
You act impervious and pretend I dont kill you
I'll eat you away and you feel it
I know you are trembling with fear
What is to come is but a mystery
Break that shell dear
and come back home, you have something here
I know my wounds can be seen
You can hear their presence inside of me
Lick them, kiss them and mend them sweetly
The flies of despairity fly above my hot head
and you are the only thing that keeps winter in my hands
that cools me
which is you
I want to taste you again
and chain you to my heart and sow up your mouth
so the lies cant make the trip out of your mouth
I love you always and forever
even if I cut off your lashes and shaved off your skin
At least then you would never have to leave me again
Prolong this hurt
and become me again
become me again
I wont ever stop following the trail of blood you left in the snow
my footsteps at your door.
answer.

'Bout time. Here's to another 4,000+ replies!

"Eternal"
You and I, we're one and the same.
Fighting the same fight; playing the same game;
Except, I'm losing, and you're way out ahead,
Leaving me behind as if I was already dead.
We had something, something special and true,
Something that stood the test of time; just between me and you.
And now, I'm at a loss for what to do.
Maybe I should give up, and go my own way without you.
But then I think about all the times we've spent together.
Now I know, you and I will be bound forever.

It's eternal,
The love that we both share.
An infernal
Passion that proves how much we care.
I won't lie;
You tear me up and leave me half dead,
But then you try
To make it up, and we come out ahead.

Forget-me-nots and picking rose pedals.
"He loves me, he loves me not"- our own gold medals.
Kisses at sunsets and serenadings at night.
Holding hands in the theater, and kissing you good-night.
All that's find and dandy, but it wasn't enough for you.
You wanted more, and I was at a loss for what to do.
Off to dark alleys and closets at school,
Trying all the time to be popular and cool.
One of a kind; one heart, one soul.
One type of mind that made us both whole.

It's eternal,
The love that we both share.
An infernal
Passion that proves how much we care.
I won't lie;
You tear me up and leave me half dead,
But then you try
To make it up, and we come out ahead.

So it wasn't what I wanted. I can see why you'd lash out.
But love is about mending the tears and taking all the shouts.
All your insults and fits of rage,
All were well-deserved, and every fight I'd wage
Was for you, despite the blood I spilt.
And the bruises and scars I received built
A future for me and you, and you expressed your gratitude.
I couldn't have made it this far without your great attitude.
So, we're in this together, from now till the day the earth burns to ash.
Here together, taking everything together; every bruise, scar, and gash.

It's eternal,
The love that we both share.
An infernal
Passion that proves how much we care.
I won't lie;
You tear me up and leave me half dead,
But then you try
To make it up, and we come out ahead.

Fatality.

A walk through the product store and 15 aisles to see
all the pretty, pretty packages staring back at me
which is my favorite, where is my chance
to remove the product and stick it in my pants

cuz I want to see, what's on sale whats for free
(every time I go to shop I steal from) enemies
who steal from me, and from you
(if only you knew, then you would steal too)

adrenaline rushes, the products in my grip
I am only shopping, but now it's time to lift
I look for my moment, and down my pants I stick
the product I've selected is concealed against my dick

cuz I want to see, what's on sale whats for free
(every time I go to shop I steal from) enemies
who steal from me, and from you
(if only you knew, then you would steal too)

paranoid as fuck security in tow
is he really traling me and does he really know?
of my little secret my pride and his shame
this is so exciting kid, it's like a fucking game
I'm almost to the counter, will I make it to the door
will I get away like a million times before?
or will i be caught, jailed, banned from the store?
like if the product I've selected slips and crashes to the floor

Five finger discount!

and I want to see, what's on sale whats for free
(every time I go to shop I steal from) enemies
who steal from me, and from you
(if only you knew, then you would steal too)

paranoid as fuck security in tow
is he really traling me and does he really know?
of my little secret my pride and his shame
this is so exciting kid, it's like a fucking game
I'm almost to the counter, will I make it to the door
will I get away like a million times before?
or will i be caught, jailed, banned from the store?
like if the product I've selected slips and crashes to the floor

I get to the door and out the door I slide
I feel a sense of dignity, I feel a sense of pride
I do a happy dance and down the street I bail
as I have a little feast of what's on sale.

LOL.
Fatality.

I haven't posted or been here in a while, so I decided to add to this thread since writing is one of my deepest passions. This is a rap I wrote not to long ago. Enjoy.

I gotta know, is this for real,
cuz don't be fucking wit my emotions and the way I feel.
Where's this gonna end up at, me smiling or crying?
I gotta know right now, cuz my thoughts are flying.
Thinkin bout you and everything so far, don't dare leave me any emotional scars.
You see, I got enough of em as it is, and cried to many damn tears,
been left for the wolves to eat, been beat and filled with many fears.
Just waiting for someone better to steal you away, and realize it was all a sick game you play.
I'm just babblin on again about stupid shit, I really need to quit, but it's so hard to stop thinkin about it.
I fall to hard and way to fast, you'de think I'de learn from the past, that love is something that just doesn't last.

Toodles,
Sarah

"Lost Eden"
Turn on the TV. What do you find?
Violence and war, and nature unkind.
Corruption, greed, and grief beyond compare,
And you wonder what it was like when we weren't there.
Paradise. Forgotten and despoiled now.
Mankind has lived so long but still can't see how
To improve. We just live each day without concern,
But after all our mistakes, we still don't learn.

Lost Eden. The time long ago.
When things were perfect, or they say so.
No bloodshed or tears;
No horror, freedom from fears.
Lost Eden. Among us today.
We just have to pave the way.

Through the dirt and the grime,
Past the pestilence and crime,
I see a shimmer of home in the dark corners;
A fragment of comfort to all the afflicted mourners.
And if that shimmer could spread,
We'd no longer have to dread.
Just pass it along, from one soul to another.
Pass it on, from yourself to your brother.

Lost Eden. The time long ago.
When things were perfect, or they say so.
No bloodshed or tears;
No horror, freedom from fears.
Lost Eden. Among us today.
We just have to pave the way.

Now it's time to say good-bye.
Parting is sad, but don't you cry.
I leave behind the truth, and that will suffice,
Because to spread hope is the greatest sacrifice.
But it's one I'll bear, if for your sake alone.
Maybe one soul can melt a heart of stone.
Don't despair! Go on and smile,
Because happiness comes only once in a while.

Lost Eden. The time long ago.
When things were perfect, or they say so.
No bloodshed or tears;
No horror, freedom from fears.
Lost Eden. Among us today.
We just have to pave the way.

Fatality.

I HATE EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU! WHY DO I LOVE YOU...damn thats been done already!

SOMEWHERE I BELONG!
damn...that too

SHE MOVES SHE MOVES O BABY WHEN SHE BANGS SHE BANGS...Oh fuck it....

death

Damn I wish I can write like I used to. But I lost it, oh well. Nice job people.

OBSESSION
I watch you, sitting, laughing and smiling
While I sit alone crying
I want to hate you, but I'd be lying...to myself

Havoc I wreak
Your name I dare not speak
I hope you die in sleep...tonight

I smell your breath on open air
I will follow you everywhere
Turn around and I am there....watching you

I will die for you
If needed, I'll kill you too
You have no idea what I'll do...for love

u guys post nothing but emo shit

I got one! YOU MUST RAP THIS

There once was a girl from nantuckett
Who lived in a giant bucket
one day she fell out
and started to pout.
that crazy girl from nantuckett

(chorus)That crazy girl from nantuckett,
a dooo dooo dooo doo
That crazy girl from nantuckett,
she lived in a bucket

Yo yo yo i knew this chick
she used to watch the Tick
she lived in a bucket
in a place called nantuckett
yo yo yo, the chick from nantuckett

CHORUS

Beep beep a doodle doo
the crazy girl is a coming fo yu
shes coming in her buckett
you better huck it

CHORUS

Shiddle Dee Dee
Why cant you see
How she fell out of her buckett
in a place called nantuckett

CHORUS X2

THAT CRAZY BITCH FROM NANTUCKETT
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Yeah I know it rocks

Shut the fuck up. You listen to Slipknot.

migle Wrote: u guys post nothing but emo shit

emo?

what the hell are u talking about?

mister_satan666 Wrote: emo? what the hell are u talking about?

I've been asking myself the same thing

looks like he misspelled elmo

Hyuga YOU,
Mother ing
penfaced monkey
moose pussy -.-

...right

anyway, anyone else got poems? or comments on poems?

Clown you ain't shit. Turn around and get your face split.-KoRn(clown)

Migle, a bit of advice. NEVER insult Hyuga. No matter what you say to him, he just absorbs it and will find a way to insult you back. He's like the freakin' terminator. And why are you insulting the lyrics here anyways? Oh yeah, to the authors of the songs, great job! I really enjoy them!

only for the songs?
what about the poems? did u like the poems!?!?!
oh for the love of god i hope he likes my poems!!!!!

This is a poem I got off an Introspective T-Shirt written by Jamaro F. Kindred. On the T-shirt is a yin-yang symbol with an Angel and a Demon fighting each other. Around the symbol are the Seven Sins and the Seven Virtues.

The battle of good and evil has been written on the scrolls of time. Echoes of the fallen scream within my mind. While the tears of mankind renders me blind. This battle has been fought since the beginning of time. I look within and find the spirit to shine. And I look in the sky and knows who has mine. So I stand absolute 360 degrees complete. And I fear no evil because I know your obsolete. And from day one I knew we would meet. And I would stand victorious becuase I know no defeat.

mister_satan666 Wrote: only for the songs? what about the poems? did u like the poems!?!?! oh for the love of god i hope he likes my poems!!!!!

He sent me a PM where he told me that he liked every poem...except yours. He said it sucked. He said it was the worst poem he had ever read in his life and it was probably the worst poem he would ever read.

What's that you say? I'm lying about this supposed PM? Nah