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posted11/04/2005 07:54 PM (UTC)byMember Since
09/26/2004 04:23 PM (UTC)
Shao Kahn Slaughter Fatality:
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Description:
Shao Kahn rip off Johnny Cage body with his streangth and jump on him to destroy his body. Then he walk backwards slowly to see how much damage he made to Johnny and then Smash his head with his war hammer. :P
Note:
-Some sprites are from MKT
Noob Saibot Cut off Fatality:
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I made this flash animation for my friend -A-nubis :P
description: Noob Saibot throw a Shuriken into Sub-Zero and the Shuriken slice half of Sub-Zero body. Then Noob Saibot come to finish the job :D
Note: I made this animation before Shang Tsung Morphing Fatality
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Description:
Shao Kahn rip off Johnny Cage body with his streangth and jump on him to destroy his body. Then he walk backwards slowly to see how much damage he made to Johnny and then Smash his head with his war hammer. :P
Note:
-Some sprites are from MKT
Noob Saibot Cut off Fatality:
Click here
I made this flash animation for my friend -A-nubis :P
description: Noob Saibot throw a Shuriken into Sub-Zero and the Shuriken slice half of Sub-Zero body. Then Noob Saibot come to finish the job :D
Note: I made this animation before Shang Tsung Morphing Fatality

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Hey,
1st one:
Okay, first off I'm not so wild about the background. I dunno, it doesn't seem to suit the animation well, I couldn't think of Shao Kahn being there really.
The MK3 music is fine, because music depends on the background I guess, but I don't like the MK3 lifebars with the MK2 sprites, doesn't feel right. If this is meant to be MKT, then the whole blood bubble thing wouldn't happen, and the MK2 blood effects suit this much better than any others (like the blood explosions that are there when Kahn jumps on him look no where near as good) -- if that makes sense
.
Secondly, I don't like that Cage's feet are on a completely different level to Kahn's, really doesn't look right. With such a light background as well, i might've liked to have seen some shadows too. Also, I think the background should go just a smidgen darker.
I like the way he rips Cage's torso off, that I like alot, but the throw, there's a couple of things I dislike.
a) The path the torse takes lookes like a straight line. if Kahn threw him with some force so that he took a straight line angle, the torso would either then bounce or skid along the floor (making for an opportunity to use some cool blood trails). I think a more curved angle would work better though.
b) The sound (from those free MKDA downloads
) doesn't suit the torso falling to the floor either. Perhaps two sounds combined, like the sound it makes when a blood drop falls to the floor coupled with a body landing on the floor from MK2.
After the rip though, the concept is okay I guess, but the jump is too slow.
This (obviously), slows down the animation, and without alot of sound effects, the fatality loses its atmosphere.
Then, when he's walking back, quite obviously, it doesn't look right. Try mathing the previous sprite's feet with the next to make it look real good.
Because this takes so long again, the ani is slowed down, and atmosphere lost (there is no sound during this period).
The hammer is done quite well, though I do think it's a bit of overkill.
The time limit between the fatalty music finishing (err, the "dunnnn!", heh) and the announcer saying Shao Kahn wins really shouldn't be that long. Again, it gives some atmosphere when the announcer is saying it over the music.
Btw though, the sound effect for when Kahn crushes the head is just perfectly freaky
.
Next, the announcer, MK:D and MK3? I don't like the mix. Also, the texts don't look quite rightly placed (as per the game anyway).
But, despite all that, heh, I kinda like it. 6.5/10?
2nd one:
I like this one better overall, however, I feel it's a bit slow again (and again, lacking atmosphere). If it were sped up a little I feel it would have ALOT more impact.
Firstly, when Noob throws the star, Sub-Zero wouldn't just stand there like that. Perhaps you could use his "stumbling" sprites as well, and then have him return to his daze, as Noob walks up to him.
When Noob uppercuts him, again, you've got the MK2 blood bubble sprites, which don't compliment the MK3 sprites or background - try doing an uppercut in MK3/UMK3/MKT - that effect would be much better, with extra drops falling to the floor.
The path that the torso takes - again, doesn't look natural, he flies over Noob's head, but then falls straight down. Looks a little odd.
Again, the announcer could talk a bit earlier imo.
As I said, I like this one better so 7.0/10? I dunno, heh.
Sorry, didn't mean to go on for so long, lol. Anyhow, you keep improving, and it's evident in every animation.
Nice work
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1st one:
Okay, first off I'm not so wild about the background. I dunno, it doesn't seem to suit the animation well, I couldn't think of Shao Kahn being there really.
The MK3 music is fine, because music depends on the background I guess, but I don't like the MK3 lifebars with the MK2 sprites, doesn't feel right. If this is meant to be MKT, then the whole blood bubble thing wouldn't happen, and the MK2 blood effects suit this much better than any others (like the blood explosions that are there when Kahn jumps on him look no where near as good) -- if that makes sense
Secondly, I don't like that Cage's feet are on a completely different level to Kahn's, really doesn't look right. With such a light background as well, i might've liked to have seen some shadows too. Also, I think the background should go just a smidgen darker.
I like the way he rips Cage's torso off, that I like alot, but the throw, there's a couple of things I dislike.
a) The path the torse takes lookes like a straight line. if Kahn threw him with some force so that he took a straight line angle, the torso would either then bounce or skid along the floor (making for an opportunity to use some cool blood trails). I think a more curved angle would work better though.
b) The sound (from those free MKDA downloads
After the rip though, the concept is okay I guess, but the jump is too slow.
This (obviously), slows down the animation, and without alot of sound effects, the fatality loses its atmosphere.
Then, when he's walking back, quite obviously, it doesn't look right. Try mathing the previous sprite's feet with the next to make it look real good.
Because this takes so long again, the ani is slowed down, and atmosphere lost (there is no sound during this period).
The hammer is done quite well, though I do think it's a bit of overkill.
The time limit between the fatalty music finishing (err, the "dunnnn!", heh) and the announcer saying Shao Kahn wins really shouldn't be that long. Again, it gives some atmosphere when the announcer is saying it over the music.
Btw though, the sound effect for when Kahn crushes the head is just perfectly freaky
Next, the announcer, MK:D and MK3? I don't like the mix. Also, the texts don't look quite rightly placed (as per the game anyway).
But, despite all that, heh, I kinda like it. 6.5/10?
2nd one:
I like this one better overall, however, I feel it's a bit slow again (and again, lacking atmosphere). If it were sped up a little I feel it would have ALOT more impact.
Firstly, when Noob throws the star, Sub-Zero wouldn't just stand there like that. Perhaps you could use his "stumbling" sprites as well, and then have him return to his daze, as Noob walks up to him.
When Noob uppercuts him, again, you've got the MK2 blood bubble sprites, which don't compliment the MK3 sprites or background - try doing an uppercut in MK3/UMK3/MKT - that effect would be much better, with extra drops falling to the floor.
The path that the torso takes - again, doesn't look natural, he flies over Noob's head, but then falls straight down. Looks a little odd.
Again, the announcer could talk a bit earlier imo.
As I said, I like this one better so 7.0/10? I dunno, heh.
Sorry, didn't mean to go on for so long, lol. Anyhow, you keep improving, and it's evident in every animation.
Nice work


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Jesus Christ, TimsMK said enough for the entire MK Community.
I'll just give my scores since he wrote the essay.
1st: 4/5
2nd: 3/5
I'll just give my scores since he wrote the essay.
1st: 4/5
2nd: 3/5
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You didn't make the 1st background on the fake, that's -1.. I noticed some of the sprites looked really blurry, or poorly edited.
3.5/5
2nd one..
Meh..Not in the mood to pay that much attention.
3.5/5
2nd one..
Meh..Not in the mood to pay that much attention.


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Eh they are both quite boring (and the Kahn one is way too slow/long). 2.5/5 for both.
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|Khaos| Wrote:
You didn't make the 1st background on the fake, that's -1.. I noticed some of the sprites looked really blurry, or poorly edited.
3.5/5
2nd one..
Meh..Not in the mood to pay that much attention.
You didn't make the 1st background on the fake, that's -1.. I noticed some of the sprites looked really blurry, or poorly edited.
3.5/5
2nd one..
Meh..Not in the mood to pay that much attention.
The background was created by Silent Chazz and he gave me permission to use it. You can see a credit for him in the end of the animation.
If you dont want to pay that much attension dont bother to reply.


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Asesino Wrote:
The both animations are HORRIBLE.IMO.
You dont deserve even 0.
The both animations are HORRIBLE.IMO.
You dont deserve even 0.
Your opinion is just about worthless... you're judging based on your personal grudge against people.
Good luck with that Noob Saibot render by the way.
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Asesino Wrote:
The both animations are HORRIBLE.IMO.
You dont deserve even 0.
The both animations are HORRIBLE.IMO.
You dont deserve even 0.
Rofl! I laugh on your stupidity :P
Anyway I made a little update: Shao Kahn walking backward is less longer than the old version.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/24696659/


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I don't like how the quality of the sprites change during your animations. Kahn blurs up for a couple of frames and Sub-Zero's cut off body parts (the blood) is not good quality.
6/10
7/10
6/10
7/10
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Asesino Wrote:
10x for the skull.That was pathetic.So if i express my opinion and the guy that gave me Skull dont like it i get skulled huh ?Why are you trying ?My opinion is still the same.Why do you want to change it ?You cant.I'll eat you
10x for the skull.That was pathetic.So if i express my opinion and the guy that gave me Skull dont like it i get skulled huh ?Why are you trying ?My opinion is still the same.Why do you want to change it ?You cant.I'll eat you
You only gave me a 0 because you don't like me and I dispise you. Why don't you leave me alone? I don't like n00bs like you who pm me and start to flame me. Gtfo

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I like them, loved the background with Kahn. So i'll give a rating of 8.5/10 for the first one, and 7/10 for the other. Edit: My gawd, I forgot about Sub's custom torso rip! The rating is now a 9/10.

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TimsMK pretty much took the words out of my mouth. The main things that bug me are animation related and how Kahn and Cage are standing on separate planes.
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I couldn't place Johnny at the same place where Kahn stand because the MKT could rip his head and not his torso =/
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