The Kabal one was excellent! You had lifebars, win marks, and the animation was great. Not sloppy or jumpy at all IMO. You, sir get a 9/10 for this one.
The Sub-Zero one on the other hand, is too jumpy for my tastes. You care about details though (Sub-Zero getting four wins, the "Fatality" sign animated), I like that. Well anyway, the fatality itself goes too fast, and I'm just not a fan of these non-MK effects people seem to overuse lately. You get a good 6/10 for the details and for having (almost) everything in place.