Is a pretty cool drawing. There are minor detalis that need some work like: the lines look hairy, gotta' make them sharper, the head is too big, the left breast looks incomplete and the Sais are too short and they're too thick, Sais are usually thin.
Anyway, 4/5 Dragon Points.

This looks pretty good.

2 things that bug me are that the head is way too big, and the arms are too short.



The large heads seems to be your style, so that's cool.

I would like to see a drawing with a realistic size head, just to see you you pull it off.