CSI: Mortal Kombat
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CSI: Mortal Kombat
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Hmmm...pretty good!
I love CSI.
I love CSI.


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0/10
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Ekule Wrote:
why a zero outta ten. Dude getta life.
why a zero outta ten. Dude getta life.
Alright, I'll point out why blacksaibot gave you a 0/10...

This looks like an alright way to start a comic...

Wait, is the tree bleeding or something? Looks pretty odd, but that isn't my main problem with this comic...

Johnny's leg looks pretty crappy, and so does the blood coming out of it. And it looks like Kung Lao cut off Johnny's leg. Why is he even holding his hat? You should've edited it so the hat was on his head, or at least not there at all. And what's with Smoke saying "Can you please stop bleeding?". Is that supposed to be funny? Even if it isn't, it's still pretty lame. And what's Reptile doing in the back? It looks like he's licking his own balls. If that's what it is, then I have to give you props for the humor, but if it isn't, then it's just a needless distraction...

You only need one exclamation mark. I guess the humor in this is that it's obviously Reptile that did the crime (since he's holding the leg) but Johnny picks Jax anyways...

"Gee wiz, I was falsely imprisoned because of racism and a corrupt justice system. Gosh darnit!"
Honestly, I think he'd be a bit more angry than he looks. And again, you don't need so many exclamation marks. You should also work on the background alot more...

You should of edited Kung Lao's sprite so that his other arm wasn't extending outward. And I can't tell if this was supposed be funny in any way. I'm glad to see that you toned down the exclamation marks though...
I'm not trying to be an ass or anything, but I didn't find this funny at all (except for the "Reptile licking his own balls" part. That made me chuckle. In the next comic he could be arrested for public masturbation or something..). You could get better if you keep trying, but I still think you need to work on the humor...
I don't think that's reptile licking his own balls. I think that's the blood dripping from his mouth right after biting Johnny's foot off.
It's basically a silly spoof of CSI where the FBI's are morons and they can't see reptile in the back with blood all over his face and Johnny couldn't tell it was him with the leg later on, so he chooses the black guy and they do a homosexual pose or something.
It was pretty funny, but it could still use a lot of editing, and try using your own backrounds next time. As it was already mentioned, Kung Lao looks stupid in all of his poses and those could have been avoided with a few editing.
Pretty good nontheless.
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It's basically a silly spoof of CSI where the FBI's are morons and they can't see reptile in the back with blood all over his face and Johnny couldn't tell it was him with the leg later on, so he chooses the black guy and they do a homosexual pose or something.
It was pretty funny, but it could still use a lot of editing, and try using your own backrounds next time. As it was already mentioned, Kung Lao looks stupid in all of his poses and those could have been avoided with a few editing.
Pretty good nontheless.
5/10
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Wtf?
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I don't find it funny and I hate all CSI programs.
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Ekule Wrote:
why a zero outta ten. Dude getta life.
why a zero outta ten. Dude getta life.
Wow, another fat loser telling another forum member to get a life. How fucking original! Anyone who says that has no life of their own, seriously.
If a comic doesn't make me laugh, it's going to get a zero. FUCK, I didn't even crack a smile.


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I like the MKSM reference, "Are you okay?"
The rest is kinda meh.
The rest is kinda meh.
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