Fakes by Shinnok619
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Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 09:53 AM EST
these are some of my fakes...credit to Tetra_Vega for the weapons...









this one i call...Zaterra takeover



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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 10:07 AM EST
hey.... the stage in the reptile vs subzero fake is minefurious you could give me some credit for the stagefurious
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 01:28 PM EST
Their terrible.

The first fake have horribly arranged text. The next two lack in originality. I have no clue what is going on in the last. It is very clear that you used soft round brushes to make the the effects.

1/5.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 04:05 PM EST
Those fakes are disgustingly bad. Ew!!!
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 05:10 PM EST
These are not even good at all. You should get a program that actually makes effects look like they're not from Paint.

And not to mention, I strongly suggest that you credit lukiLucMac for his background to make your fake before someone considers that stealing.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/11/2009 09:56 PM EST
Ugh, well all aboard the hate train.

Anyway, they aren't very good, but atleast you're trying(?).

Try again, take your time, try to make them look realistic, use darker tones, etc.

Oh you need better ideas too.

Wat.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/13/2009 06:46 AM EST
It's a gimmick.

He's fake.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
03/17/2009 01:49 PM EST
I actually like them a bit.

3/5
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
04/08/2009 08:45 AM EST
0/0

I remember myself kinda being like that when I started out. Just take your time to make it believable.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
04/08/2009 05:20 PM EST
Shinnok looks good, but the rest...

everyone else spoke for me.

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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
04/12/2009 04:45 AM EST
Riyakou Wrote:
Shinnok looks good, but the rest...

everyone else spoke for me.


Are you kidding? Shinnok's head is twice the size of his body.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
05/06/2009 02:13 PM EST
The first is great and the last is pretty good. Second and third could use some work though, but good job.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
05/09/2009 09:38 AM EST
I like the TYM idea for sword clashes. Kinda like the beam struggling "mini game" in DBZ games.

I also like the eye glow effect in the last one. Simple, but effective. The blood could use more shading, spray paint splotches don't look good. Try a wider spray, or make it transparent/opaque in some areas.



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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/24/2009 09:11 AM EST
Thanks for the constructive critics guys,i will try to do better and...lukiLucMac,sorry...now i realize that the Abandoned Palace is yours in mortal-kombat.net I want to apologize for all of you...sad And i'm making a fake as apology for lukiLucMacwink for now i"m posting this PLZ comment...credit to Tetra_Vega for weapons and some props
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/24/2009 10:25 AM EST


To lukiLucMac

credit to Tetra_Vega for propsgrin
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/24/2009 06:38 PM EST
dude whats with the random blood stains everywhere like on the lifebars and the screen it really doesnt help and i can see ur getting a little better but they still dont look credible. btw nice editing on scorpions suit
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/24/2009 07:04 PM EST
Hmm...

The Sheeva and Cage pic:

The blood splatters look horrible. It looks like there's this random splotch of blood just splattered on the background of the sky right next to Cage even though I can see that he's being stabbed. You also have them on the bars and the Dragon Symbol for the timer... ehh... why?

Wouldn't the word "Fatality" be in front of Sheeva and Cage, not behind them?


Shinnok and Kano Pic

Shinnok looks way too bright.

I know it's supposed to be a hand that's hitting Kano... but that does not look like a hand. To me, it looks like a giant purple blob with white lines attacking Kano.

Surprised that there's no blood splatter.


Scorpion and Reptile pic.

Reptile's blood is too bright. Literally neon. Odd how Scorpion's blood is all splattered on the ground and on the Soulando and not Reptile's.

Reptile also looks too bright. He's also neon too.

The odd looking symbols that looks like a blue moon are just something not really interesting.

And again, shouldn't the word "Fatality" be in front of everything instead of behind it?


The last pic.

Now explain to me, what is Ermac doing exactly to Stryker? I really can't tell what he's doing.

The random numbers on the top looks odd.

The blood looks really horrible in this picture. Can you tell me why it's also on the the lifebars too? The blood doesn't do that.


All pics in general>

They're all missing shadows. All of them... Unless they're fighting in a very dark place to where you can hardly see the shadows, there should be them right underneath.

I think you can do much better than this with a fake. That's my critique on them.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/28/2009 12:50 AM EST
Looks as if the blood is splattered on the screen rather the floor. I'm not going to bother asking about Stryker. You clearly lack a constructive approach.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/28/2009 09:42 AM EST
yeah...you shouldn't splatter the screen, look at the background carefully and don't splatter areas that can be seen through(like the little pillars on the bottom). it gives the feeling that you tried to rush it.


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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/30/2009 07:38 PM EST
I got new fakes..i think they're better







Plz rate...oh,and by the way,try some constructive criticism,kay?

Bye

Credit to Tetra_Vega for some props and weaponsgrin
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/30/2009 08:24 PM EST
I really don't like the blood. It is way too thin. On the first one Kung Lao's health bar looks like you shaded it in with a Paint brush. I really don't like the bleached Hell arena. Try to make your own. I really don't know what's going on in the third one. It looks like Baraka's blocking, but he is taking a lot of damage. I do like the Ermac sprite though. And the third arena.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/30/2009 08:27 PM EST
To be perfectly frank, not really...

Ermac vs Kung Lao

What I don't get with the blood is, how come you don't make it look like it's from the game. It just really doesn't look right since it's much of a duller kind of color than the rest of the picture.

And the ceiling looks like it's the floor. The bars look like they're going behind the wall instead of like ending right at the ceiling... kinda hard to describe that part... but, do you get what I mean by they cell bars looking like they're going behind the ceiling?

And what's going on with Ermac? I can't tell if that's even him. For a second, because I see that mace, I thought it was Drahmin, then I was like, "He doesn't have telekinetic powers..." Yeah, it's kinda hard to tell who that really is.


Sub-Zero vs Kabal

What's with the red spot by Kabal's name?

The background looks like you just inverse the colors in Paint by going Ctrl + I

And what's on Sub-Zero's foot? Don't answer with the word: Blood... Blood doesn't do that.


Kabal vs Baraka

I think you should either get rid of your blood splattering and switch to MK's blood, or seriously try to fix it because its still horrible.

This entire scene confuses me... Did you attempt to make Kabal wear a coat? Because what ever that black thing is connected to him looks odd and bad.

I don't get the purple thing in the background.

And what's with Kabal's bright red hand?


In conclusion

I don't think they're better, they're still the same kind of Fakes you've been submitting. You really need to learn how to make blood because just random splatters over the screen doesn't look good, or just swtich to using the MK blood that's already given to you.
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/30/2009 09:05 PM EST
Shinnok619 Wrote:


Zoidberg is right, the lifebar looks like it was painted on, Apparently, you know of MKWarehouse based on your lifebars, so do a little Editing(NOTE:The following is from the MKDA Props Section), Cut a portion of the Red Lifebar on it's own(Be sure to have the edge in it) and paste it into the image.
What is happening to Ermac's right hand? it looks like the receiving end of a flail..

Shinnok619 Wrote:


Once again, work on the lifebars, the center and edges are the same, so you can just cut it in half to save time.
What happened to Subby's face? he looks like a skull almost.
The ice effects around his Arms should be more pronounced, they should have that icy smoky stuff(forgot the name of it) coming out.

Shinnok619 Wrote:

The Skulls representing wins are misaligned on the lifebars
the lifebars are lower in quality than the other ones
What is that cloudy stuff behind Kabal supposed to be? Smoke?

Overall it's good, but still not Great


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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/31/2009 04:14 PM EST
let me see...less bloodsplatter and brighty colors? I think i'm getting the idea Mirage Temple Try not to damage it too much,ok?wink BYEgrin
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RE: Fakes by Shinnok619
08/31/2009 06:23 PM EST
To help answer what you mean by smokey ice, Jironobou, you're talking about mist.