I apologize if I shouldn't be posting it, but if I can, I need some help with my writer's block. I have a fan fiction that I think will actually work, and I'm wondering what to do to make it better. Here's what I have as my idea:

I'm making a Mortal Kombat fan fiction called "Young Fury," which depicts a few Mortal Kombat characters as teenagers. I'm sort of splitting the story into "seasons," and hope to have my stories run for a few years. My first "season" involves the introduction of teen-aged characters from the game such as Liu Kang, Kung Lao, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade, Jax, Kitana, Jade, Sub-Zero, Rain, and etc., with some characters maintaining their original status, such as Raiden and a majority of the villains. I'm trying to eventually make it a Deadly Alliance based season, where Kahn is trying to claim the Dragon King Army, which is locked away in a krypt. In the end, Kahn ends up having my upsurpers such as Shang Tsung, Quan Chi, the Lin Kuei, and other groups that allegedly swore allegiance to the emperor. You probably know how it will end for the first season, but I still will withold full blown details.

Any suggestions?