Maybe you should of given a real storyline that makes more sense. It looks like you just took characters together to fight head to head. You could have done better.

What an absolute shitfest.

Please stop mocking my comic, because this is only a preview. Also the storyline is given.

Crocky Mate!!111 LMAO


With a quality remade, this might be a decend comic..

I'm going to put the comics in The Kombat Pavilion website to be exclusive and find some help for the flash sequel.

Yeah, I think it would have broader appeal if it was just Mortal Kombat versus Sonic, rather than specific to a certain message board.

Still, good stuff.

Heres a panel-by-panel (going from left-to-right and repeating) review of your little strip. Please note that I am not 'mocking' your comic, only pointing out whats wrong with it:
1.
-Your opening phrase is filled with typos. It should be 'Outworld's forces have been transported to another Realm. These warriors, lead by Shao Kahn, want only to Konquer it." Note the inclusion of the period, the inlusion of Shao Kahn (which ties into panel 7), the overall semi-dramatic writing in it and the inclusion of an N in KONQUER.
-Kano's sprite should be one whose resolution is a bit on par with the other MK3 sprites you've used. Might I suggest his MK3 one? Also, he seem to be holding a heart, but no mention is made of wherefrom he got said heart. This is an anomaly of sorts.
-I suggest using Photoshop, TheGimp or ImageForge when lettering and such, as MSPaint sucks for anything other then spriting.
2.
-These recolors suck and I'm fairly certain they are resized at different levels. Also, the contrasting styles and graphical depth of Sub-Zero and the others is fairly disconcerting and makes this seem juvenile and frankly, stupid.
-A kind of puncuation should end every sentence. For this I suggest an exclamation point.
3.
-The borders on your word bubbles are thin and pixelated. Try smothing them out by using descending shades of black around the outside edges. This should help them mold into the white of the background.
-Speaking of the background, it seems to have been improperly resized. It looks off and of poor quality. As does the Kori sprite which is named, though his adversary (which we at MKO would know, others may not however) is not.
4.
-What you have written here should be split up into 3 panels and reversed. If a person is reading from left to right, the sequence of events should follow that. For most cases, this is represented by Cause,Action, Effect. In this your's goes;
1.'You fight for Ame...'
2.'Don't worry...'
3.'Help...'
Or Effect, Action, Cause.
It shoudl really be;
1.'Help...'
2.'Don't worry...'
3.'You Fight for Ame...'
-And, as before, the sprites are poorly resized, your text is bad, and your word bubbles suck.
5.
-Pyro was not among those introduced in the first panel. To introduce one cast (ie the Outworlders) in its entirety and another (ie the SA Team) in part is poor design.
-Poorly resized sprites.
-Poorly drawn fireballs (this can be remedied by using fire effects from MK or some other game and superimposing them over the sprite in use.)
-Poorly drawn word bubbles and text.
-Moving on...
6.
-Rinse and repeat the earlier stuff.
7.
-This whole thing needs a rewrite. Here:
"These fighters must be strong in mind and in spirit if they are to defeat Shao Kahn. I can only pray that word has reached the others of their kind before it is to late. I, the Thunder God Raiden, will watch over them with the other Elder Gods and hope for their survival."
Cool, no?
-The sudden shift from 16-bit sprites to 32 bit rendor is sudden and unneccessary. You could have used an MKII raiden on an ethereal background and thrown in some other things to represent the Elder Gods.
8.
-This is bland and suggests that its Mortal Kombat vs. Sonic Team. I suggest you make your own logo.

Oh and this really is an absolute shitfest.

I never said there is no storyline, but you could of gone into more detail in a few panels, such as, how they were transported into another realm and how they got into fights with other characters. Also, you've never stated that it was preview in your first post.
I was not mocking, I was criticizing. Mocking would be laughing and talking crap about your work. I never said your work was a "shitfest." I would never do that to an amatuer who shows their artistic abilities. At least your trying even though you could of done better.

Realm doesn't need a capital...

The only thing I don't like about your opinion is calling my comic a shitfest.
Like I said, this is my first preview. I'll try to improve with my 12th comic.

*cries*

Dear God...a 12th?! As if the first one wasn't bad enough.

Oh, and it's spelled Amy. Amy Rose.

There are no Sonic characters, just fan characters.

Well it IS a shitfest. How anyone could call this ''good stuff'', by any standards, is truly beyond me.
Just reread that long post that Darklord wrote many times, until you get it. I know you still dont get it, because if you did, you would admit the comic is an absolutely amazing retarded, gigantic mistake. A typo in God's writing of the world.
I have nothing agaisn't you personally, I'm sure you're a great guy and all, but this IS a shitfest. And the only way to become better at anything, is to see how bad you are.

Please stop mocking his work by calling it a shitfest, he already asked everyone not to. We all know it's not very good but you don't have to mock it with your swearing, I don't mind you swearing but not at others unless they really do deserve it. He only trying to show his artistic abilities. Also, as for SonicX13, don't listen this asshole. Just keep practicing, and you'll get it. Practice makes perfect. You might also need some tutorials, thats just a suggestion.

There is no need for this "shitfest" parade.

And let this comic get worse? Good comics require harsh but good criticisms to make a good sprite comic. I know i'm mocking the comic by calling it a shitfest, but many comics I made in the beginning were shitfests, so I improved through harsh criticisms. Think I didn't get treated like this in the beginning? Think again.

Either learn to take criticisms like a man (or woman), or don't make sprite comics, we have enough bad ones as it is.

What the crap? You guys have no idea what mocking is. Long, elaborated jokes making fun of the comic is mocking. What pussies. You get one ''shitfest'' and you're asking us not to say anything else. I tell you, Nemesis' criticism was the best and most useful you got, other than Darklord's. If you want to post crap but have people say nice things about it, go to...well...a place where crap is apreciated.

''Practice makes perfect''? What the hell is that? Can't you see he thinks his comic is decent? If he cant see how much of a shitfest it is on his own, then he's not going to get there by PRACTICING, genius. If he just keeps making the same shit, and getting awesome reviews like:

''Yeah, I think it would have broader appeal if it was just Mortal Kombat versus Sonic, rather than specific to a certain message board.

Still, good stuff.''

Good stuff? Good fucking stuff? Then what the hell do you call }[OMBAT's comics, or shirt ninja's? GOOD STUFF? Man, I dont blame the comic ''artist'' for being such crap. But I do blame him for not taking critcism like a man. Why do you think Nemesis called your comic a shitfest? Just to annoy you? Just to piss you off? He wrote that post and posted it, for a reason. And that's to help YOU get better. And yes, you're damn right it's helpful. Alot more helpful than ''good stuff''. But you dont complain about ''good stuff'', do you? Of course not! It's mindless, standardless criticism, from someone who obviously doesn't give a shit.

Man, you kids are such spoiled brats. Learn how to take a push, and turn it into a push of your own.