You sure that ain't a dude in disguise?
Lighting and hair's been pulled off fairly well. Good job.

5 / 10

I'm not too keen on the face here, but the rest of the picture is great. Good job.

4/5

I think it's pretty good overall except for the face.

4/5 It's a big improvement over your Jade drawing.

What other people said.

Basically you need a bit of work doing ladies faces. I once read something in a book about the proportional differences between mens and women's faces, but can't remember what exactly what it said. I think maybe it's (from the front) something to do with the amont of head to the side of the edge of the eyes- there's more on a guy i think.

I say find a photo you like and follow that. Otherwise top stuff.

I like these better than the last bunch.

Better poses

and the faces are looking better
Sonya's eyes are still too high , but it's looking more like a woman now.

The face looks a lot younger than the Jade you made before too.

This new art has a noticeable improvement.

Very Nice Job 5/5

Thank you thank you.

Like I have said in your other submissions, I love the classic feeling you give your pics. The color is great, the only thing wrong with this is her face and hair, looks way too odd, but resembles her in the first comic I guess. Good job!