this one is sexier then the other one

Very nice! I'd love to see this coloured But the face does need some work.

Hmmm...

The body and the stance are pretty tight, but there's something off about the face. Is her head supposed to be leaning forward? I know how hard perspective can be to get right. I'll give this, say, 8/10

Sexy. Everything look good. Just need to work more on the face. 4/5

"Hello. You don't know me, but I know you. I want to play a game..."

lol

Nice I like it

It's good but if you make one little change her face will look 10X better.


Just erase the line for her bottom lip.


I just did it in Photoshop and it made a big difference.

Holy crap, where did all these replies come from? I drew this ages ago, lol

Looking back, there's undoubtedly a huge room for improvement, not least in her face. I should really practice drawing females more, but for some reason I seem to be quite hesistant to do so...

3.5/5

The pose is great but the face does need a little work. Good job!