Mortal Kombat 2 (a possible remake of the MKA movie)
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posted05/21/2008 07:57 AM (UTC)by
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Chrisjamwood
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Temple of Light - Celebration
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.

What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?
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Darklord_Xel
11/30/2007 02:17 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
Temple of Light - Celebration
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.

What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?


Actually write a screenplay, then try again.
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Chrisjamwood
11/30/2007 05:55 AM (UTC)
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To the comment above, do you like it or not? This version is not a screenplay. It's more like notes.
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Darklord_Xel
11/30/2007 06:06 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
To the comment above, do you like it or not?


Honestly? It sucked.
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Zentile
11/30/2007 06:22 AM (UTC)
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Abysmal.
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Mystika
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11/30/2007 04:26 PM (UTC)
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Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.

So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck. wink


Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.


Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
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superliu
12/07/2007 08:13 PM (UTC)
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It would be bettter if Kahn sent Tarkata`s or what ever you call it down to kill the fighting monks.And have Mileena sneak behind Kitana and kidnap her.Also have Sonya kidnapped.Have Baraka slit Liu`s grandfathers throat.
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Chrisjamwood
05/12/2008 09:12 AM (UTC)
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I don't like your idea because it is too MK2 video game-ish.
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05/12/2008 02:36 PM (UTC)
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I edited your thread title, as you are not allowed to have titles in all-caps.
Anyway, most of what you have written is no different form what happened in MKA, aside form Raiden's defeat, Mileena and Baraka appearing randomly, and the establishment of an actual second tournament. We don't want to read your notes, we want to see your results form the notes, the actual GOOD scripts that actually make sense. So far, you haven't shown anything that makes it a good story, so I suggest you brush up on your ideas and start going past the first scene.
Edit: To answer your IM, no, I am not bipolar, and I do not write like a maniac; I write like someone who can channel their creativity properly.
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-Jago-
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05/12/2008 06:36 PM (UTC)
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So has this guy been banned yet
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XTREEMIST
05/12/2008 06:59 PM (UTC)
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Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.
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SubMan799
05/12/2008 10:17 PM (UTC)
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If you're making a screenplay, then format it like a screenplay. And if you consider these notes (wtf?) then they don't belong in the Fan Fic Forum. Also, stop bumping your threads.

Basically, stop posting shit you made in five minutes, because it looks like a six year old made this. Take some time and actually write a decent "screenplay."

And why did Baraka and Mileena appear?
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Zentile
05/12/2008 10:20 PM (UTC)
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Mystika Wrote:
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.

So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck. wink


Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.


Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.


I have, and he didn't learn anything from it.
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Sub-Frost055
05/12/2008 11:07 PM (UTC)
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Mystika Wrote:
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.

So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck. wink


Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.


Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.


He doesn't need to have an explination, "Abysmal" explains everything for itself.

But for my reason:

Why not you stop posting the same thing over and over again and actually read other people's stuff before you start submitting becuase obviously you haven't learned anything and that your stuff is the same old same old every time with little changes but you're still making it look like the beginning of the second MK movie. Stop, please, why not you learn how to write before submitting anything else, because that's not screenplay.

CHEERS! grin
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Chrisjamwood
05/16/2008 08:35 AM (UTC)
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Can you do better? They appear from the gateways. Do you know what I mean, AND, do you need more detail!?
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Chrisjamwood
05/16/2008 08:39 AM (UTC)
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Why do you want me banned. You're my fan because you got your eye on me!! The evidence is here: You commented on this particular post. So, I guess I have a database!?
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-Jago-
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05/16/2008 06:15 PM (UTC)
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You're right, you do amuse me....so I guess I want you to stay in a way.
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SubMan799
05/16/2008 10:41 PM (UTC)
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this guy is hilarious!
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 01:45 AM (UTC)
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People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.
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05/17/2008 02:00 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.

A bit like William Hung, eh?
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SubMan799
05/17/2008 02:04 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.


Yes, clearly you're talents are above mine *cough*

>_>
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:33 AM (UTC)
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Because i am a better writer? You're CRAZY!
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Sub-Frost055
05/17/2008 03:45 AM (UTC)
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Oh my god, can you please stop acting like your in love with yourself towards everyone? You're not a star, you're submitting things on a site that no major writer/script writter will ever see. So why not you put the mirror down and stop loving yourself, because you're really starting to annoy with your double posting and your plagerizing work. Why not you read the rules to this site before you continue to do anything else.

CHEERS!grin (Are you going to steal my phrase too?)
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SubMan799
05/17/2008 03:49 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
Because i am a better writer? You're CRAZY!


what?
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:51 AM (UTC)
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"No" and "Yes". You chose the latter!? - Cheers!
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