Mortal Kombat 2 (a possible remake of the MKA movie)
Mortal Kombat 2 (a possible remake of the MKA movie)
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posted05/21/2008 07:57 AM (UTC)byMember Since
07/09/2007 03:45 AM (UTC)
Temple of Light - Celebration
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.
What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.
What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?


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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
Temple of Light - Celebration
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.
What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?
Temple of Light - Celebration
Liu Kang, Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Princess Kitana meets with Rayden.
The sky changes to many fast moving, stormy skies.
The Emperor's voice echos throughout the land.
Earth/Outworld
The Emperor appears from lightning.
Temple of Light Ruins
Many shadow priest appears.
The Emperor chooses Rayden as Challenger.
Rayden VS. The Emperor.
Rayden weakens and gets held captive.
Baraka appears.
Mileena appears.
The Emperor and the many shadow priests with captive Rayden vanishes and disappears.
The Emperor then says that the Great Tournament shall be held in Outworld and not on Earth itself.
The skies change to the normal and sunny sky.
What do any of you think? I have a lot more down on paper. The screenplay has dialogue. This one doesn't. So, any comments?
Actually write a screenplay, then try again.
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To the comment above, do you like it or not? This version is not a screenplay. It's more like notes.


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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
To the comment above, do you like it or not?
To the comment above, do you like it or not?
Honestly? It sucked.
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.
Abysmal.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
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I don't like your idea because it is too MK2 video game-ish.

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I edited your thread title, as you are not allowed to have titles in all-caps.
Anyway, most of what you have written is no different form what happened in MKA, aside form Raiden's defeat, Mileena and Baraka appearing randomly, and the establishment of an actual second tournament. We don't want to read your notes, we want to see your results form the notes, the actual GOOD scripts that actually make sense. So far, you haven't shown anything that makes it a good story, so I suggest you brush up on your ideas and start going past the first scene.
Edit: To answer your IM, no, I am not bipolar, and I do not write like a maniac; I write like someone who can channel their creativity properly.
Anyway, most of what you have written is no different form what happened in MKA, aside form Raiden's defeat, Mileena and Baraka appearing randomly, and the establishment of an actual second tournament. We don't want to read your notes, we want to see your results form the notes, the actual GOOD scripts that actually make sense. So far, you haven't shown anything that makes it a good story, so I suggest you brush up on your ideas and start going past the first scene.
Edit: To answer your IM, no, I am not bipolar, and I do not write like a maniac; I write like someone who can channel their creativity properly.
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Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.
Abysmal.
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If you're making a screenplay, then format it like a screenplay. And if you consider these notes (wtf?) then they don't belong in the Fan Fic Forum. Also, stop bumping your threads.
Basically, stop posting shit you made in five minutes, because it looks like a six year old made this. Take some time and actually write a decent "screenplay."
And why did Baraka and Mileena appear?
Basically, stop posting shit you made in five minutes, because it looks like a six year old made this. Take some time and actually write a decent "screenplay."
And why did Baraka and Mileena appear?
Mystika Wrote:
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.
Abysmal.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
I have, and he didn't learn anything from it.
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Mystika Wrote:
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
Based on these "notes" of yours I beleive it has the potential to be a much better movie than the crap sequel they made in '97. However, I can't give any final and FULL opinion on the matter because I would need to see a FULL and complete version of the screenplay to base such an opinion.
So in short: I found your notes interesting but overly uninformative. You need to supply at least MORE or ALL of your screenplays content. As with all writers I wish you good luck.
Zentile Wrote:
Abysmal.
Abysmal.
Honestly Zentile, if your going to bash something at least have the good grace to explain WHY you're bashing it.
He doesn't need to have an explination, "Abysmal" explains everything for itself.
But for my reason:
Why not you stop posting the same thing over and over again and actually read other people's stuff before you start submitting becuase obviously you haven't learned anything and that your stuff is the same old same old every time with little changes but you're still making it look like the beginning of the second MK movie. Stop, please, why not you learn how to write before submitting anything else, because that's not screenplay.
CHEERS!
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Can you do better? They appear from the gateways. Do you know what I mean, AND, do you need more detail!?
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Why do you want me banned. You're my fan because you got your eye on me!! The evidence is here: You commented on this particular post. So, I guess I have a database!?
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this guy is hilarious!
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People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.
People like you make people like me a star. I don't quite feel that way though.
A bit like William Hung, eh?
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Because i am a better writer? You're CRAZY!
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Oh my god, can you please stop acting like your in love with yourself towards everyone? You're not a star, you're submitting things on a site that no major writer/script writter will ever see. So why not you put the mirror down and stop loving yourself, because you're really starting to annoy with your double posting and your plagerizing work. Why not you read the rules to this site before you continue to do anything else.
CHEERS!
(Are you going to steal my phrase too?)
CHEERS!
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
Because i am a better writer? You're CRAZY!
Because i am a better writer? You're CRAZY!
what?
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"No" and "Yes". You chose the latter!? - Cheers!
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