Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
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Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/24/2011 04:35 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/25/2011 09:41 AM EDT
Although admittably rife with cliche, a lot of effort went into this, nice work.
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08/25/2011 10:51 AM EDT
A lot of work went into this, and it shows. Certainly better than the actual Mortal Kombat film.

Honestly, however, I can't imagine Scorpion ever saying "game over." It seemed really out of place. I also like all the little (admittedly corny) references to the people who worked on MK.
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/25/2011 04:36 PM EDT
Thanks guys! Yeah, it has it's cliche's, but a lot of action movies do, and with a concept like MK, it's bound to happen. tongue

I'm glad you caught those little corny references in there! I wasn't sure if anyone would. wink

Anyways, I put alot of work into this, it's gone through editing and such, and I'm actually quite proud of it, even with all of it's cheesiness and corniness (which was not entirely intended glasses). I've been thinking about changing the ending but I'm not entirely sure...
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/25/2011 07:06 PM EDT
This is awesome. I loved every bit of it reading it, although the stages had me a little confused like the barracks, and the resting quarters.

Nonetheless, keep making more and maybe a sequel. I think it would be pretty awesome.

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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/28/2011 09:55 PM EDT
That was good, man. I had a few small problems with it, mostly the romance between Liu Kang and Kitana and I think Goro could have had more time to shine, but it was overall a strong script. I love how it focused mainly on the seven characters in the original game.
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08/28/2011 11:04 PM EDT
Thanks! Yeah, I really wanted to see Liu and Kitana together but, now that you mention it, it's an almost pointless subplot (although it does give Kitana more screen time). I was concerned myself about Goro, especially since he gets killed off in the end, so I may try and find some spots for Goro to fill if I do another rewrite. tongue
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08/28/2011 11:10 PM EDT
Yeah, if you make a sequel I would definitely read it. Longer is better! I love reading things this long, it gives me more time to enjoy it and it was definitely a good read.
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat: My Own Skript
08/29/2011 01:38 PM EDT
I'm definitely considering a sequel but, for now, I'm taking a much needed break from writing anything Mortal Kombat. If anyone else wants to take a crack at writing a sequel, I think that'd be kinda cool glasses Anyways, thanks for reading, it's certainly been a pleasure to write this! grin

Just for future reference, here are some of the things I'd have in a sequel:

-It would follow the same basic story as the original MK 2 game: Sonya and Kano get kidnapped to lure the Earthrealm warriors into Outworld. There, Shao Kahn, along with the consultation of Quan Chi and Shang Tsung, begins meticulously planning an invasion of Earthrealm. Kahn sends out his general, Baraka, to intercept, and slow down, the Earthrealm warriors. Meanwhile, the warriors are stuck dealing with the other horrors that await them in the realm of Outworld.

- All of the fighters from the previous film return, along with the new Sub-Zero, Kung Lao (who will fight in the tournament), Jax, Mileena, Smoke, Jade, and Kintaro.

- Sub-Zero will enter the tournament to find his brother and Smoke, who were both lost during the first tournament, and assassinate Shang Tsung for the Lin Kuei clan.

-Jax and Kung Lao will be recruited by Raiden in their efforts to fight back against Shao Kahn and his evil forces.

-Jade will be watching over Kitana and Mileena throughout the tournament; they will all fight eachother.

- Kintaro will be another one of Shao Kahn's generals.

-Shao Kahn will create Skarlet during the tournament to uncover Quan Chi's true intentions.

- The ending will be somewhat of a cliffhanger, leading into the third film which will deal with Shao Kahn's invasion of Earthrealm.

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