Mortal Kombat Sprite Comic Series!!! Raiden and Friends!
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posted11/21/2006 02:06 PM (UTC)by
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ScorpionMKSM
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Zentile
11/20/2006 12:43 AM (UTC)
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Sorry, it's nearly 1 AM. I cant be bothered to give you a full detailed response on why your comic is absolute internet garbage, but I'm sure someone will make a really long (and oh, it will be long indeed) post helping you out with every detail soon. If not, I'll type up the post myself tomorrow.
This comic sucks. Good luck.
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ScorpionMKSM
11/20/2006 12:53 AM (UTC)
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WHAT THE HELL IS UR PROBLEM!?!?! What the hell are you trying to do!?! If it's not good just say it's not good! Don't tell me my work is Internet GARBAGE YOU STUPID INTERNET GEEK! I bet your going to every fan submission you can find and shattering peoples hopes and dreams! What if there was a damn kid posting stuff!?! I wouldn't call it internet garbage!!! You have mental problems.
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TylerXtreme
11/20/2006 12:58 AM (UTC)
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XD Your on your computer at 1am? Get a life.
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Zentile
11/20/2006 01:25 AM (UTC)
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Oook...so this guy has two acounts. Should I report it or just leave it be? Well since I'm a dream-shattering demon geek, maybe I should report it and shatter your dreams of posting crap and having people say nice things about it.
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Iori9
11/20/2006 01:59 AM (UTC)
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woah, your worst than that one guy (dark saibot or whatever the hell his name is I dont care hell you might even be the same guy) but seriously, if your gonna post something so brutal then I suggest you put it in nicer words instead of saying its garbage you could say that there is alot of things that he needs to improve on.
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ScorpionMKSM
11/20/2006 02:01 AM (UTC)
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Zentile Wrote:
Oook...so this guy has two acounts. Should I report it or just leave it be? Well since I'm a dream-shattering demon geek, maybe I should report it and shatter your dreams of posting crap and having people say nice things about it.


WE ARE NOT THE SAME PEOPLE!!! WE ARE BROTHERS!!! This same thing got me banned at the Midway forums! TylerXtreme gets banned and since those people at Midway think we're the same people, they bann me! WE ARE NOT THE SAME PEOPLE!!!
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~Crow~
11/20/2006 02:59 AM (UTC)
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Two accounts are not allowed unless you plan to provide some sort of decent proof you are truly two different people, if not, TylerExtreme is banned. Please do not create any further clones.
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Godzilla
11/20/2006 03:31 AM (UTC)
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Well, if they're brothers, I can't really see a reason to ban them.

That said, this comic was pretty bad.

The image quality was bad. Seriously, did you actually try to make it as grainy as possible?

The text was pretty small, though I shouldn't be talking, seeing some of the comics I made.

The jokes were, well, virtually non-existant. Or, if they did exist, sucked.

And you forgot the background on the last strip.
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MyQueenSindel
11/20/2006 03:44 AM (UTC)
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Dude, first of all, constructive critisizm, I'm not trying to hurt you, I'm trying to help you.

You're comic sucks. First of all, the object of a preview, or whatever you'd call that, is supposed to build suspense.
Will Shao Kahn ever get his snacks?
Will Scorpion and Kung Lao ever fight?

here are some better questions you should add in the box:
Does anyone care about watching Shao Kahn eating snacks?
Why is the dialouge typed in the middle of the panel?
Why is it hard to tell who is saying what, why is the background in the last panel fucked up?
Why are you making a comic about a pointless topic?
What is the plot of the story?
What is the story?!
Why do you think an exposition will attract viewers?
Why are you getting mad at people trying to save your comics ass?

.5/10
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Nemesis316
11/20/2006 03:54 AM (UTC)
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Stop crying, Sally.
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Zentile
11/20/2006 01:58 PM (UTC)
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Iori9 Wrote:
woah, your worst than that one guy (dark saibot or whatever the hell his name is I dont care hell you might even be the same guy) but seriously, if your gonna post something so brutal then I suggest you put it in nicer words instead of saying its garbage you could say that there is alot of things that he needs to improve on.


Well obviously you've never seen Blacksaibot in action. I'm afraid I'll never be able to put down people's work as good as him, he knew how to blast fake pics to pieces using only a couple of curse words! Amazing.

Anyway, I didnt say it needs work because he should just stop. It's obvious that he has no sense of self criticism, otherwise he would've known his own comic was crap. The first step to getting better is knowing how bad you are. And since he wont admit it, he wont get better.
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11/20/2006 03:10 PM (UTC)
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Thats bad. 0/5
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JediTommy8
11/20/2006 03:46 PM (UTC)
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devilwithin Wrote:
Thats bad. 0/5


I agree


ScorpionMKSM Wrote:
Zentile Wrote:
Oook...so this guy has two acounts. Should I report it or just leave it be? Well since I'm a dream-shattering demon geek, maybe I should report it and shatter your dreams of posting crap and having people say nice things about it.


WE ARE NOT THE SAME PEOPLE!!! WE ARE BROTHERS!!! This same thing got me banned at the Midway forums! TylerXtreme gets banned and since those people at Midway think we're the same people, they bann me! WE ARE NOT THE SAME PEOPLE!!!


Lol,you're from the Midway Boards,i guess that explains why this comic has un-funny,random humor,and sucks.
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Iori9
11/20/2006 08:44 PM (UTC)
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thats more like it wink
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Hikari715
11/20/2006 08:48 PM (UTC)
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I completely agree with the majority here. 1/5
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ScorpionMKSM
11/20/2006 11:23 PM (UTC)
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You know what Zentile (WTF kinda name is Zentile?) You can go fuck yourself! Ur just tryin to make people mad and yell at you. And it's not my fault this thing sucks! For some reason, everytime I save my damn picture, the color gets fucked up. And guess what else? I just started on comics you fucking moron! You have no fucking soul! No1 trusts no1 here! Even though there is no way to prove I have a brother, you can't tell me I don't have one! Plus you have no proof that I don't have a brother so no1 can bann me!
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Ninja_Mime
11/20/2006 11:31 PM (UTC)
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ScorpionMKSM Wrote:
(WTF kinda name is Zentile?)


A better name than "ScorpionMKSM".
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DeathScepter
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11/20/2006 11:58 PM (UTC)
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devilwithin Wrote:
Thats bad. 0/5




I didn't know that it was that good.




at best, it is a negative number like a -10/5
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Godzilla
11/20/2006 11:59 PM (UTC)
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ScorpionMKSM Wrote:
You know what Zentile (WTF kinda name is Zentile?) You can go fuck yourself! Ur just tryin to make people mad and yell at you. And it's not my fault this thing sucks! For some reason, everytime I save my damn picture, the color gets fucked up. And guess what else? I just started on comics you fucking moron! You have no fucking soul! No1 trusts no1 here! Even though there is no way to prove I have a brother, you can't tell me I don't have one! Plus you have no proof that I don't have a brother so no1 can bann me!


A yes, a brilliant debate strategy, telling a critic to go fuck themselves. Zentile might enjoy crushing the hopes and dreams of others, but hey, I have to say, it's a pretty fun thing to do.

As for the whole "It's not my fault this things sucks" issue, I could tolerate a crappy quality comic, if it was marginally funny. This is crappy quality and about as humorous as a baseball bat to the groin. And hell, not to sound like an egotist, but I just started messing with sprites too, and (some really blatant errors aside), mine doesn't look like I purposely made it to look bad.

Finally, yes, they can ban you. They don't need proof of anything to take action. "Innocent until proven guilty" only applies to the Government, not private websites.
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ScorpionMKSM
11/21/2006 12:32 AM (UTC)
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DeathScepter Wrote:
devilwithin Wrote:
Thats bad. 0/5




I didn't know that it was that good.




at best, it is a negative number like a -10/5


Fuck you asshole! Your just another one of those soulless dickheads.
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ScorpionMKSM
11/21/2006 12:34 AM (UTC)
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Godzilla Wrote:
ScorpionMKSM Wrote:
You know what Zentile (WTF kinda name is Zentile?) You can go fuck yourself! Ur just tryin to make people mad and yell at you. And it's not my fault this thing sucks! For some reason, everytime I save my damn picture, the color gets fucked up. And guess what else? I just started on comics you fucking moron! You have no fucking soul! No1 trusts no1 here! Even though there is no way to prove I have a brother, you can't tell me I don't have one! Plus you have no proof that I don't have a brother so no1 can bann me!


A yes, a brilliant debate strategy, telling a critic to go fuck themselves. Zentile might enjoy crushing the hopes and dreams of others, but hey, I have to say, it's a pretty fun thing to do.

As for the whole "It's not my fault this things sucks" issue, I could tolerate a crappy quality comic, if it was marginally funny. This is crappy quality and about as humorous as a baseball bat to the groin. And hell, not to sound like an egotist, but I just started messing with sprites too, and (some really blatant errors aside), mine doesn't look like I purposely made it to look bad.

Finally, yes, they can ban you. They don't need proof of anything to take action. "Innocent until proven guilty" only applies to the Government, not private websites.


What the hell is ur problem? And isn't a baseball bat to the groin funny?
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Godzilla
11/21/2006 12:43 AM (UTC)
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ScorpionMKSM Wrote:
What the hell is ur problem? And isn't a baseball bat to the groin funny?

Okay, here's a fun little game. Have someone hit you in the groin with a baseball bat. I do admit, there is inherent humor in that situation, unless you are the recipient. Your comic is the baseball bat. I am the hapless soon-to-be eunuch.

So, in other words, your comic causes me, and presumably others, actual physical pain.
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11/21/2006 01:07 AM (UTC)
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LOL Constructive critisism! LOL

1.save stuff as PNG.
2.never use humour including the word "Ho" in any way unless you are SURE its appropriate
3.Im pretty sure the sky in the comic was orange/white...maybe I got colourblind for the last few panels

Ummmm...yeah thats all. Follow and you will improve.(BTW the word "snakage" sucks purty bad)
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ScorpionMKSM
11/21/2006 01:37 AM (UTC)
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Stop trying to be funny. and what I meant was, seeing some1 else get hit in the nuts with a baseball ball is funny.
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