Umm.. well I just don't like this very much. The saber sprite is.... not good. I'm really just not understanding him at all, a human head, with some sort of green texture as a body, not a good idea. Like another fake I remember seeing recently, this is just a texture in a human shape, and the smoke you added really has no place at all.

You have everything correct in the lifebars, but the screen hasn't darkened for the fatality, and there are no shadows. Also, the sprites don't appear to be level at all.

As for the fatality, sorry but I'm not really liking that too much either. The 'spinning blade' doesn't look so badly formed, but the blood isn't good. The skeleton, at least I think its something of the sort, doesn't look so bad, the blades are going through nicely. But that blood just looks a little stiff to me, like its not actually running. The blood on the blades themselves isn't that bad really. Also, the blood on the part of smoke thats on the ground is not the greatest.

You can and have done much better, but it might help me and all of us critique this better if you would include a description of what the fatality actually is. Its always a good idea to do that, especially when you don't submit it.

DESCRIPTION: After an easy battle Saber he finnally finishes Smoke off by taking out his trusty blade and it tores him in half, with organs coming out and being revealed.

i think its pretty well done

I seen this before in the mkwarehouse and just like in the warehouse im going to say here "I don't lke it".

...Life would be better for you, if you could just stop using MS Paint, SubScropTile.

Right, I am not a huge fan of this either, and in all honesty, it looks like it was done pretty quickly without attention to great detail.

Here are some things:
- Win marks should be at the other end of the lifebar, and they shouldn't have a gap between them.
- No shadows, and you do know how to do them .
- No wins texts, which would be a welcome addition.
- The texts within the lifebars should be in italics for MK3.
- Has the background gone dark? I'm almost certain it hasn't.
- The "Saber" sprite. Now, I am pretty sure it's a pose of Stryker with Liu Kang's head, covered in a weird texture. If that is what it is, then it's not very creative, and if it's not that, either way, it doesn't look very well done either. In a way, it kind of looks "cheap", lol.
- I'm not so sure on how exactly, a huge metal thingy comes out of his hand/gun/implant, a long metal thingy mind, which has a huge spinning blade on it. Coming from a cyborg's chest I can understand, but the hand/gun/arm implant seems a bit impossible.
- The blood is just slapped on there in a shape on the floor, it looks really bad, it looks very square at the edges, and it wouldn't be shaped so well either.
- The blood texture on the corpse, is perhaps decent at best, but it's still lacking. It's just repeated all the way down. The actual boney/organ parts are like a continous line through it, which I don't like. You should've perhaps used the actual red skeleton thingy from the game.
- The smoke from Saber. Why? It just seems like it has no place really .

Good things:
+ I think it's good that you are experimenting with new stuff, just make sure that you don't overdo it at times .

Keep it going .

Wow, that just plaing sucks. WTF is all over "Saber"'s body? And you could have at least tried and editied his head....

I vote this one of the worst fakes here. It makes no sence, and the sprite is just horrid. gg.

NoobSaibot Wrote: ...Life would be better for you, if you could just stop using MS Paint, SubScropTile.

Hey Ms Paint works for me. Just sayin, no comment on the pic (its thats bad)

I dont understand that saber sprite.. its just horrible