Scorpion Fatality
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Scorpion Fatality
02/19/2011 11:42 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Fatality
02/26/2011 10:44 PM EST
bumped for feedback [ i need it badly]
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Fatality
02/26/2011 11:07 PM EST
Its an interesting piece. since its about the fatality you might want to emphasize the event. try some lighting. light the specific areas you want shown and darken the background a bit. a great trick is to think of a spotlight right on top of the characters. That should help it give the feeling you want. good job!
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Fatality
02/26/2011 11:57 PM EST
The position's still seems stiff. You really need to work on that. Try taking a toy or something, and bending it into the position you want, then try to put those models into the same position. I do it all the time for drawing. If you work out the sitffness of your renders your work will end up looking a lot better
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Fatality
02/27/2011 11:54 AM EST
Vash_15 Wrote:
The position's still seems stiff. You really need to work on that. Try taking a toy or something, and bending it into the position you want, then try to put those models into the same position. I do it all the time for drawing. If you work out the sitffness of your renders your work will end up looking a lot better

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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Fatality
02/27/2011 10:37 PM EST
Definitely a cool piece, but try lighting the areas of interest more, as was said above. It took me a few seconds to see the spear coming out of Sub's head even though I was looking for it.
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