The Idea Scorpion throws his spear at his enemy's head, it impales the head and flies into the camera, cracking it and spraying blood all over it, the then pulls on the rope and quickly says some weird incantation that turns the rope and blade into flame, causing the head to explode into a bloody and flame mess ,leaving a heavily burned decapitated body , this is just a portion of it, i had to change camera angle for the render though, made in XNAlara
Its an interesting piece. since its about the fatality you might want to emphasize the event. try some lighting. light the specific areas you want shown and darken the background a bit. a great trick is to think of a spotlight right on top of the characters. That should help it give the feeling you want. good job!
The position's still seems stiff. You really need to work on that. Try taking a toy or something, and bending it into the position you want, then try to put those models into the same position. I do it all the time for drawing. If you work out the sitffness of your renders your work will end up looking a lot better
Vash_15 Wrote: The position's still seems stiff. You really need to work on that. Try taking a toy or something, and bending it into the position you want, then try to put those models into the same position. I do it all the time for drawing. If you work out the sitffness of your renders your work will end up looking a lot better
Definitely a cool piece, but try lighting the areas of interest more, as was said above. It took me a few seconds to see the spear coming out of Sub's head even though I was looking for it.