The Bachelors (sprite komic)
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posted07/07/2004 05:40 PM (UTC)by
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03/08/2004 06:23 PM (UTC)
Well guys, this is my first attempt of submitting a comic, i've never worked this hard on any sprite submission. I ripped some sprites myself, other courtesy of MKW, and some from K0MBAT, anyways maybe it's not to funny but i made my best effort, pls i need your feed back , to imporve in the next chapter.









special thanx to tgrant, krsx66, TomTaz,]0MBAT, DAB for their opinions and help.
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krsx66
07/06/2004 04:49 AM (UTC)
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Good on your first attempt. I like it, its creative - I think the next part will be even better (hehe FrEaKgrin) but this is still well done, good job!
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SubScorpTile
07/06/2004 06:09 AM (UTC)
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i think its ok..at least i wanna see the next chapter
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Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
07/06/2004 09:28 AM (UTC)
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lol Nice work, bro! Where are Kangs turkey noises though? It'd have been funny if he was making them whilst dancing! tongue

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07/06/2004 01:55 PM (UTC)
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SubScorpTile Wrote:
i think its ok..at least i wanna see the next chapter


Well, it'd have been better if you have told mewhy was it only ok, and not better, ty and dave, thanx for the comments and support.
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07/06/2004 02:37 PM (UTC)
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Nice, but I'd like to see the ending when liu finds out Kitana has a crush on lao lol
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07/06/2004 07:13 PM (UTC)
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hehe thanx for the comments, and yeah I will be working on chapter 2, i hope it'll be ready for next we, i'll try to make the story long enough nad funnier cause i think this chapter wasn't that funny!!!
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Sub_ZER0
07/06/2004 07:31 PM (UTC)
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cant see it.Red X same stuff sad
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SubScorpTile
07/06/2004 07:35 PM (UTC)
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id tell you how to improve, but I dont know how to im not an expert on komics, I suggest listening to someone like ] or someone that knows what their doing like him
Mk_FrEaK Wrote:

SubScorpTile Wrote:
i think its ok..at least i wanna see the next chapter

Well, it'd have been better if you have told mewhy was it only ok, and not better, ty and dave, thanx for the comments and support.

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07/06/2004 08:26 PM (UTC)
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My only beef with it, is the the writing. It seems too small, and at times, too stretched out, i hope you can fix it for next week. Great Comic man.
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<img src="http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/3329/tommywithtool2tz.jpg"
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07/07/2004 10:35 AM (UTC)
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It's original. My favorite part is when Kung Lao tells Liu that it isn't a bachelor apartment, and then Liu says "What is monk dood?"
Heh. Hope you do good on the next chapter.
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07/07/2004 05:40 PM (UTC)
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Sponge-Zer0 Wrote:
It's original. My favorite part is when Kung Lao tells Liu that it isn't a bachelor apartment, and then Liu says "What is monk dood?"
Heh. Hope you do good on the next chapter.


Thanx for the feedback guys, i'm really hoping the next one will be better and that i could fix the quality of the fonts. grin
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