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the death of onaga
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posted08/31/2006 08:29 PM (UTC)by
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maxtono
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07/20/2006 11:01 PM (UTC)
once shinjinko found out his life was deception.shinjinko is now going to be trained by raiden to control lightning.now shinjinko went to raiden.raiden agreed to train him and did then after shinjinko's training he said we will get defeated if you just go but we still evryone on our side so we will make a team out of them we shall go to outworld and defeat onaga and now lets go gather them up and they did and now they will go to outworld and defeat onga once they got they shaterred the kamidogo and now they defeated onaga now there is peace in earthrealm.
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Nemesis316
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 •07/21/2006 03:45 AM (UTC) •
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0/5
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 •07/21/2006 03:51 AM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
0/5


What he said
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Legacy
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 •07/21/2006 04:08 AM (UTC) •
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Bad grammar, bad presentation. It is way too simplistic. My 10 year old brother writes better than this, I'm sorry to say.

0/5
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RyanRaiden
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 •07/21/2006 05:38 AM (UTC) •
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As I said in teh other post he made, don't worry about this. He's only a noob, and he's 9 yrs. old: he's my stepbrother. Apparently, when I accidentally got him in to MK, he came across this site, and... yeah. But he'll have fun. He just needs to use Microsoft Word before he posts, and spellcheck. Max, if you're reading this, don't worry. You'll have fun, eventually. -RyanRaiden
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 •07/21/2006 12:31 PM (UTC) •
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stop using his age as an excuse. im 11 and TRMK still expects me to produce quality work , even if i can't. if he's too young too take critism and improve, then sign him up for football or something.smile
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•07/21/2006 01:46 PM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
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 •07/21/2006 03:02 PM (UTC) •
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... It does suck though.

But don't worry. If you focus more on the storyline than the video gmae itself, you'll come up with something good.
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 •07/21/2006 04:12 PM (UTC) •
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Legacy Wrote:
Bad grammar, bad presentation. It is way too simplistic.

0/5

Agreed. 0/5
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ReptileJr
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 •07/21/2006 05:53 PM (UTC) •
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Well i would like to give some critisesem. but i think e can''t handle enoghe sense he's young
so just be nice i'll give him a 1/5 just to be nice
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 •07/21/2006 06:45 PM (UTC) •
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LOL, it's as bad as hilarious!
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 •08/09/2006 04:46 AM (UTC) •
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This kid doesn't understand that this is
THE INTERNET: SERIOUS FUCKING BUSINESS!

Don't be playing around here.

fail/fail
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Poasty-Guy
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•08/09/2006 04:47 AM (UTC) •
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Shit, I could have poured lukewarm fondu on my keyboard and still produce a better story than that.
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Shinnokxz
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 •08/09/2006 04:49 AM (UTC) •
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FISSION MAILED.
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We've got chicken tonight. Strangest damn things. They're man made.
•08/09/2006 04:50 AM (UTC) •
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Also, I think there should be a law banning people from the internet if their balls haven't dropped yet.


Or unless they bleed from their womanly place.
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RyanRaiden
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 •08/10/2006 05:34 AM (UTC) •
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... O.k. Max, this time, I'm going to be brutally truthful and honest... it sucked ass. This submission should be thrown against the wall, like Sophie was hit against the wall by The Chariot in The House Of The Dead.

-5/5.
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matthewhaddad
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 •08/10/2006 09:37 AM (UTC) •
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STORYLINE: 0/5

EFFORT: 1/5

AVERAGE: 0.5/5
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 •08/10/2006 12:15 PM (UTC) •
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You rule.
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fatalityman
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 •08/31/2006 08:29 PM (UTC) •
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that is the crappest thing ive heard so while he was training what about the other warriors o and raiden h8s shujinko he wld kill him.
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