It's cool

I just dont like the Tremor sprites,they look bad,and the Kenshi render at the end has some stuff around him

Other than that its good
3.9/5

It's ok but the Tremor sprites look a bit more like Ermac. 3/5 from me.

Not bad, young padawan. 3.2/5

not bad- next time save as .JPG format at least.

Thank you Master 316

I thought the comedy missed, that art wasnt that good, and it to be to confusing. Not good. 1.2/5

You have to have seen the movie and know who Tremor is to get it. In MK the movie Kano was Australian.

wha?

The sprites are ugly, and I didn't find it funny. Nice try, but I know you can do better. 3/10

The Tremor sprites unfortunately will remain how the are. I don't know how to clean thm up.

I know who Tremor is, and I've seen the movie quite a few times. This comic still puzzles me to death.

I don't see why Cyrax goes ''do the robot?'' and then goes blue or something and this two colored blue thing comes out of him. I honestly have no clue whatsoever on what that's supposed to be.
The art is lacking SO bad. I remember Tremor's powers, and I don't think looking like a sprite saved as jpg on paint twenty times was one of them. The use of the GBA Kenshi was obviously not a good idea, there's no editing or ''pretty things'' to make the comic good looking, zero editing, zero effort (with the exception of the Tremor sprite but it looks so bad I honestly can't tell what you did to the poor thing), and in the end, the ''hung'' Kenshi also looks terrible. And I guess he became 3D when he died. Another one of the new powers you show us.
And it's Australian, not Austrailian.

There's really nothing I could compliment you about in this comic. I wish I could, I honestly do. But you really have to work ALOT harder next time.
Next time, you should either have a VERY pretty comic to look at with nice graphics and new, edited sprites, or a VERY good joke that'll make us laugh. Both of those are missing from this comic.

Ummm Tremor said I'm Tremor and I'm here to and then Cyrax interupts and says Do the robot? and the blue stuff is water which made him malfunction

I wholeheartedly agree with Zentile. Sorry kid, your comic blows. The image quality is awful, I suggest you save your next comic as .PNG. And what's the joke? Kenshi losing to Tremor? That's not funny. Oh, and there's absolutely no reason for Cyrax to "malfunction" because of "water" suddenly appearing out of nowhere...on the rooftop stage.

I don't mean to be an asshole, I'm just being honest. 0 points out of 10.

It was bad... very bad.

Vash, if you want to create a decent MK comic, start it with some montage, or some kind of special something that eventually leads to the comic itself. For ]{0MBAT, he kinda did a little prologue to all his series. For TCONS (Chronicles of Noob-Smoke), I used images from the MK: Deception comic to create a reason for how Noob discovered Smoke. These help people get a little tensed for the comic. Also, make it a bit more interesting, like the title. Instead of something random as..."Tremor's Misadventures," add a little creativity to the title. And for humor, don't do random shit, please. That gets you nowhere, so ask other people for help or think of something clever out of the MK series you can translate here.

Hope that helps.

Thanks.

Vash, if you want, I could consider helping you with the comic regarding graphics and maybe humor. Do you have AIM, man?

yes, whats yours?

NemesisTyrant316.

Ok, I sort of see the bucket with water now, but why is everything perfectly colored (except Kenshi), but the water only has ONE color? Don't you see how wrong that looks? And who put that bucket there? Why did it fall on Cyrax? WHAT?

1. I was too lazy to make an in depth bucket
2. Kenshi got it from the ground below the building using telekenesis and made it fall on Cyrax because he was being stupid

I thought they were partners facing a life or death situation.

Ahem... Wasn't I the guy that gave you some sprites?