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posted10/08/2003 05:21 PM (UTC)by
Yo. I'm the new guy.
Some people here might know me as "Sektor" at MKAlliance or MKWarehouse. I'm just here to show my work.
This is my newest Animation, please rate it.
Some people here might know me as "Sektor" at MKAlliance or MKWarehouse. I'm just here to show my work.
This is my newest Animation, please rate it.
About Me
It's time to run away with the sideshow.
Full speed, right ahead.
Don't stop, you can sleep when you're dead."
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Yes, I remember seeing this at MKW, but got no time to say anything. So, here we go:
It's a very nice animation, MUCH better than I've seen being produced recently.
Your lifebars are excellent, and the detail of the right hand win text being slightly left of the end of the lifebar shows that, well, you know how it works, lol.
This is good, as I said, but there are a few problems.
Most are blood related:
The blood falling animations could be better, more fluent, and could use more sprites, it makes them a little bit jumpy.
The blood at the end isn't so well done, they would have different motion paths to the ones you used, and could be more fluent as well.
I also heard you say about MK Tradition that the characters feet stand there, at the warehouse. That's true, but however, there is always some blood at the top of them. There isn't here.
As Scorpion is falling from Jade's staff, he has no blood at his torso, but when he lands he does. Careful with that.
Finish Him text, it isn't perfect, but it really isn't too important. Nice anyway though.
Jade's "ripping" actions are a bit jumpy. You could have used the sprites from her "stick wiggle" (lol) fatality, which may have helped the fluency.
However, this is a good animation, and it's evident that you're improving to no end.
So, rating:
I give this an 8/10.
With the jumpiness and the blood fixed, I would give you a 9/10.
If you added just that little bit extra of un-important touches (because you added some already), I would then give this a 10.
Still however, nice work
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It's a very nice animation, MUCH better than I've seen being produced recently.
Your lifebars are excellent, and the detail of the right hand win text being slightly left of the end of the lifebar shows that, well, you know how it works, lol.
This is good, as I said, but there are a few problems.
Most are blood related:
The blood falling animations could be better, more fluent, and could use more sprites, it makes them a little bit jumpy.
The blood at the end isn't so well done, they would have different motion paths to the ones you used, and could be more fluent as well.
I also heard you say about MK Tradition that the characters feet stand there, at the warehouse. That's true, but however, there is always some blood at the top of them. There isn't here.
As Scorpion is falling from Jade's staff, he has no blood at his torso, but when he lands he does. Careful with that.
Finish Him text, it isn't perfect, but it really isn't too important. Nice anyway though.
Jade's "ripping" actions are a bit jumpy. You could have used the sprites from her "stick wiggle" (lol) fatality, which may have helped the fluency.
However, this is a good animation, and it's evident that you're improving to no end.
So, rating:
I give this an 8/10.
With the jumpiness and the blood fixed, I would give you a 9/10.
If you added just that little bit extra of un-important touches (because you added some already), I would then give this a 10.
Still however, nice work
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