cool! i like it a lot.

i love it great job

The Proportion is not correct, it lacks some details, the colors is not that great.
Sorry man but its a 4.5/10

Kitana is draw just fine but that backround does nothing for the picture, just brings it down
but Kitana is dwan really good

Kitana resembles Jennifer Lopez too much, I dont like the way u did her fans, and the costume kinda sux.
I dont like the pic much...

TheDarkDuelistX Wrote: The Proportion is not correct, it lacks some details, the colors is not that great. Sorry man but its a 4.5/10

Actually the proportion is correct for her, just the foreshortening and perspective used make things a bit misleading due to her stance.

[EDIT] Her waistline *could* be a bit wider though, now that I look at it again. [/EDIT]

What details do you feel are missing?
I find that females shouldn't be overworked in drawings as it detracts from a more youthful appearance.
It's a Spandex/Armour plated costume, so there's not much room for detailing there.

I just used the Traditional Kitana colour scheme if that's what you meant?

(and the J. Lo look wasn't intentional at all Zentile, trust me! I just thought it more realistic for her to fight with Short Hair rather than Long Hair which would both get in the way, and could be used against her in a H-T-H fight. )

I like the outfit. Reminds me that she started her MK career as an assassin. Cool...

Do you have ur own site?

WATS UP THE FANS THERE COMING OUT OF HER WRISTS INSTEAD OF HER HOLDING THEM

Jonin01 Wrote: TheDarkDuelistX Wrote: The Proportion is not correct, it lacks some details, the colors is not that great. Sorry man but its a 4.5/10 Actually the proportion is correct for her, just the foreshortening and perspective used make things a bit misleading due to her stance. [EDIT] Her waistline *could* be a bit wider though, now that I look at it again. [/EDIT] What details do you feel are missing? I find that females shouldn't be overworked in drawings as it detracts from a more youthful appearance. It's a Spandex/Armour plated costume, so there's not much room for detailing there. I just used the Traditional Kitana colour scheme if that's what you meant? (and the J. Lo look wasn't intentional at all Zentile, trust me! I just thought it more realistic for her to fight with Short Hair rather than Long Hair which would both get in the way, and could be used against her in a H-T-H fight. )

It's OK, not bad, but it could be better. The proportions DO look off... I see what you mean about the foreshortening of the stance, it's just that it isn't very apparent. maybe some more shading or some more visual clues to let you know that she is, in fact, in a slightly odd stance. I also don't really like the face too much... the eyes are off and the nose looks a bit rushed... still, it's a good job overall and I like how you got the fingers... I friggin HATE fingers, can't draw them for the life of me...

Maybe the head is a bit too big, but for the rest I like it! Good job

JoRdAnMaN Wrote: Do you have ur own site?

Yes I do. It's at the very bottom of my sig now as I re-added it the other night.

SubScorpTile:

Yeah, I tried to give the impression that she had the hilt of the fans buried in her palms for support and the fingers were over the side gripping them with the pads, but now that I look at it I should have tucked her thumbs in behind.

evilhomer:

True, I should hav shaded it better. That was my first experiment with blending modes in Photoshop. In time I hope to improve with it.
And yeah, I agree, her eyes are off a bit.
I should have ruled them across so they'd be more even than going 100% freehand on it all.

^*Jade*^:

Thanks! I tried to go by proportion and make her shoulders 2 head widths wide so that the huge head effect wouldn't happen, but I'm a little short on that now from measuring, but not off by too much.

Thanks everyone for the comments, this was my second MK pic I'd ever done and also second ever worked on with an Art Program.

I'm working on two new pics, one I'm pleased with and the other I'm not...I'll see on posting them up later.