My Mortal Kombat:Davastation Shooting Script!!!
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posted01/20/2006 09:46 PM (UTC)by
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QueenAhnka
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Since Threshould is moving slow with MK3, i've decided to make my own MK movie. I'm going to be casting it and filming it once i get done with the script. Hopefully i can get Sony to distribute it for me. Anywho, here is my MKD Shooting Script:




MORTAL KOMBAT:DAVASTATION

BY:Keon Robinson



The screen is Dark but we soon starts to

FADE AND ZOOM IN:

A young beautiful Female face Appears on the screen. We can see that she slumbers with peace and happiness. Then her eye's shoots open
and we see that they are light green. She is a beautiful Tweenty-Six year old Asian and Oriantal Girl. She has the most Whitest, but most Prettyiest skin.The young woman yawns streches in her beautiful bed:

CUT TO:

A door opening,it's the girl coming out of her room down a long Hall.
The Hallway is filled with pictures of what we can guess is her family. As the young woman proceeds down the hall in her long black night gown and her beautiful black hair which is so long that it drags on the floor, she notices it's very quiet:

CUT TO:

The Woman finally makes it out of the long Corridor and into a small but warm looking kitchen. And there, lying on the kitchen floor is four decapitated heads, all in a row(Her Family). The young woman screams in terror. Then her terrified gaze goes to the refrigerator. Something draws her to it. She walks slowly to it and opens it:

CUT TO:

The refrigerator door swinging open and inside's lies a Tongue,Penis,eyeball's and many other body parts.



CUT TO: The young Woman running out of the house screaming bloody murder. She runs and runs untill she stops, she than starts to notice all the dead bodies around her. Body after Body lie in the street. She then looks at one body (Which belongs to an infant) and sees it's head had been bitten off.

CUT TO:

A close up of the nasty and bloody body

CUT BACK TO: The young woman who is now just standing there, staring straight ahead. We then get a look at what the woman is staring at:

CUT TO: A very Scary Female face who has a very sneeky grin on her face. She has long sharp fangs and red eyes. Her skin is very white and pale
indeed. The Scary woman then speaks:

"I Don't have a name, but you can call me Nitara. I am a death dealer and blood sucker, i have killed many many mortals,Demons,Imortals,Gods and some of my own kind to get to where i am now."

Nitara has a long black cape on. She dosen't have feet but Paws. She also has a long black tail and she also have's a Unicorn horn in the middle of her Pale forhead.

"I've heard about you, you are the great Li Mei, daghter of the late Fredsed Mei" Nitara then stops and smile's but goes on "I had a great time eating his heart and neck. I can still taste him" The rest of your family was so-so"

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Li Mei who is now bright red, you can see the anger hate and hurt on her face. Li Mei then screams:

"I CHALLANGE YOU IN MORTAL KOMBAT YOU MONSTER!!!!"

Nitara contiues to smile but said's in a very brave voice:

"Foolish little slut, I am Nitara, the grate Vampire Queen of the realm of Zardexasg of the pass 268495,00000000 years!!!! You dare challange me?

"YOU KILLED MY FAMILY AND I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Li Mei:

The two woman charge for eachother and starts to fight. Li Mei punches Nitara in the nose and scraches Nitara's white cheeks with her long fingernails.Nitara then grabs Li Mei's left hand and bite's all of her fingers off. Li Mei screams as all the blood gushes from her torn socket's. Nitara that grab's Li Mei's nose and breaks it. Blood drops from her nose but Li Mei does a back flip and kick's Nitara in the face whild doing it. Nitara falls backwards. But she flips on her paws again. She then swallows Li Mei's broken and severd fingers. Nitara than licks her lips and says"TASTY MORTAL BITCH FLASH" And with that, fly's into the air, held up by her golden wings."I'll get you Li Mei and when i do, i'm going to take you straight to hell where i'm going to eat your eyes out over and over again, because hell is reputitious"

CUT BACK TO"

Li Mei who's holding her hurt hands with tears falling down her cheeks. She than whisperds to her self "It Has Begun"

FADE TO BLACK"

I'll put up more of the screen play later, Hey i might get nominated for an Oscar,(lol)


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01/03/2006 05:00 PM (UTC)
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You of course realize you'd first need to buy the rights to the Mortal Kombat film franchise, which would be running in the tens of millions at the least!

But, anyway, it's always best to start with a spec script if you're trying to market your concept without having previously secured a buyer or producer. (A spec script keeps camera descriptions to a minimum and avoids things like "Cut To," "Fade In," and so on..) I'd recommend checking out some screenplays online if you're not sure how to format one.

On to the story, it's certainly creative, and on the bloody side, but somehow it doesn't seem like Mortal Kombat.
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01/03/2006 05:10 PM (UTC)
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Well thanks, and i wanted it to be VERY bloody!!!wink
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01/08/2006 01:33 AM (UTC)
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Any more comments?
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01/08/2006 02:40 AM (UTC)
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ProfesserAhnka Wrote:
Any more comments?

just one mate well its a question,
where's sonya?
she's my fav well i quess you can see that by my name lol.
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Zentile
01/08/2006 04:55 PM (UTC)
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well good luck with getting SONY to distribut it. Especially since Mortal Kombat is already licensed and you don't have the rights to it... though, you could try to get a bigger company to do it. I mean, lets be realistic, SONY is too small to film a random person's dream script. I do have a REAL suggestion though, and even though you're always striking at me, I don't mean this agressively. You do realize it's unlikely anyone will make that? I suggest going to film school first.
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01/09/2006 12:41 AM (UTC)
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I was just joking you idiot, and don't talk to me like i'm a retart.
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Zentile
01/09/2006 04:09 PM (UTC)
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You sounded pretty serious in another thread. I see there's really no way I can talk to you without you acting like a ''retart''.
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justycist
01/09/2006 06:22 PM (UTC)
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So far the script is horrible and badly written. I mean c'mon "I Don't have a name, but you can call me Nitara." WTF is that? I hope you're not serious about this.
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sonyas-bro
01/09/2006 06:55 PM (UTC)
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justycist Wrote:
So far the script is horrible and badly written. I mean c'mon "I Don't have a name, but you can call me Nitara." WTF is that? I hope you're not serious about this.






pmsl i was thinkin the same mate ,
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RussoRoss
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01/09/2006 09:59 PM (UTC)
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Oh, you were joking?
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Zentile
01/09/2006 11:07 PM (UTC)
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ProfesserAhnka Wrote:
I was just joking you idiot, and don't talk to me like i'm a retart.


Oddly enough you didn't say you were joking when RussoRoss gave you his views on your ''script''.
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01/10/2006 09:04 PM (UTC)
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-Unnecessary gore.

-Unfamiliar setting.

-Unneeded modwernism (a penis? C'mon.).

-Nitara is based ona himalayan myth and not on a vampire. Too bad english doesn't have a proper term for it, but it's a bloodsucker too. So
far, Nitaras only familiarity with Draculesti is that she can't bear the sun
without her amulet. (God knows what Midway was brewing then).

-a dialogue that makes Scream a Shakespeare compared to this.

-overall bad conception about an MK movie.

-I wasn't joking.



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01/16/2006 01:32 AM (UTC)
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Not tryna diss you or anything but you should really try learning script writing industry format b/c I guarantee if it's not in exactly the right format, which in the usa is courier 12, it won't be looked at by anybody, so I recommend you look at www.screenwriting.info before you decide to send the script in to anyone.
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01/16/2006 08:56 AM (UTC)
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"Foolish little slut, I am Nitara, the grate Vampire Queen of the realm of Zardexasg of the pass 268495,00000000 years!!!! You dare challange me?"

I'm not being offensive but at this point I stopped reading and made this post. The efforts there and I applaud you for that but it's just really bad man, dialogue is TERRIBLE.
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justycist
01/16/2006 05:57 PM (UTC)
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Do post more of it, though. It's hilarious...
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01/17/2006 01:25 AM (UTC)
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Well Sony said's they likes it.
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justycist
01/17/2006 02:41 PM (UTC)
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Sure they did. wink
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01/20/2006 09:46 PM (UTC)
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