what is this?

a story.

it sucks and ease up on caps why don't ya?

oh sorry.. i tryied didn't i?

first off, stories would probably be sent to the submission threads, secondy, stories are suppose to have a beginning middle and end... i dont see anything. nobody would probably like this because there's no proper grammer, "Well becuase i just you kill me" surprisingly is not a sentence fragment but makes absoultely no sense there's no plot. and what the fuck is a bigger bomb? and you will probably get more comments about the caps. you need work... big time.

Where and when are Baraka and Scorpion fighting? Why are they fighting? Why did Baraka suddenly, out of nowhere, start pondering the meaning of his life? He never really struck me as the existential type. Why does Scorpion believe Baraka's purpose is to kill him? Furthermore, why does Scorpion want Baraka to fulfill this purpose? And why are there bombs going off?

This really isn't a story...there's no context or sense to it. It's a random scene involving two characters with no prior relationship fighting for no reason and talking about nothing.

What the fuck is this bullshit? close this thread

not to mention, by the time you're 10 years old... you're supposed to know how to spell words...

This is the most epic story I have ever read...EVER.

who's bombs are they?

sektor's bombs.

wait, wait, wait... you're not making any sense here whatsoever...

why are you now saying that sekor is in here, when he was never mentioned in the story at all?

this is just a horrible excuse for a story... and this is not baraka's purpose... read his bios from every game he's been in and there's his purpose...

just somebody please lock this!

Stop making all this pointless bullshit,it pisses some people off you know...?

i appreciate what your trying to do n00b i really do but some peole just dont like it, it doesnt piss me off if i dont wanna read it i take 2 seconds to click a damn mouse a coule of times and im gone, not a problem.

Im not gonne be one of those people who bitch and moan tell some their shit just because they wrote a bad story. All you need to do is basically tell why things are happening in the story and dont leave out any details

where is sektor when the blades of purpose go off? why does john candy look so good in National Lampoon's Vacation? Who is your daddy and what does he do? See, these are the answers of life's purpose. You rock little guy, nice captivating story.

wha oh i fell a sleep reading this story umm barakas perpose is to kill scorpion right?