FROST:

(Her story picks up after MK:UNCHAINED)

I awoke and saw that I was inside the Lin Kuei Palace. The last thing I remebered I was trying to get the medallion from Sub-Zero. That is all I remeber. As I began to get up, I saw a man, he told me his name was Taven. I thanked Taven for awaking me and I began on my journey through the palace, Trying to find Sub-Zero, to apologise for my behavior and to tell him it was all just temporary greed that caused this. But when I found him, he began to attack me, bewildered I asked him what was wrong, and that is when it all came back to me.......

When I tried to steal the medallion, I was sent into a hibernation and Sub-Zero thought I was dead, so he buried me in the Catacombs. I had awoke, and was half crazed and made my way back to the Lin Kuie Palace, I began to slaughter many of the Lin Kuie members, then Sub-Zero came and he must have sent me into another hibernation. I now knew why Sub-Zero hated me so....

Before he could send me into a third hibernation or kill me, I fled, only to be met by Sareena, Sub-Zero's new "Allie". Me and her fought, I managed to freeze her and I escaped from the temple and ended up catching up with Taven, the man who just freed me. He told me he was the son of Argus and the Sorceress of Delia, and that he was on a mission to prevent Armageddon. I asked him what was it he wanted from Sub-Zero, he said help, he was recruiting warriors to help him defeat Blaze, the thing that would cause armageddon. He told me his brother Daegon, was recruiting warriors from Outworld and the neatherealm. I asked Taven if I can join him in his quest, he said I could. Preventing armageddon would be the perfect way to tell Sub-Zero that I was all for the forces of light.

First off, the whole "no more bios will be released" thing is just a speculatory assumption made by a moderator at the Midway forums. There has not been confirmation on that, and that moderator didn't back up his saying with actual evidence. He just made an assumption, thinking that the MK team is busy focusing on making MK8.

The second thing I want to bring up is that MKA's story IS canon. There hasn't been anything that proves otherwise.

Now for your bio ideas. I'm just going to flat out say I don't like them. The problem with both of them is that they contradict establish story events as well as the characters themselves. Another problem is the writing itself, such as the wording being used in some parts (e.g. "But I deceided to continue to play the role of the fucked up bitch just to get out of this sticky spot.") There are also spelling and grammatical issues, such as "Allie", which should be ally and "Me and her fought", which should be "She and I fought".

For Li Mei's bio, it contradicts the plot point where Shujinko, with the help of the other warriors, take down Onaga. Also, Nightwolf didn't summon Onaga to the Netherrealm. He simply imprisoned him. Onaga was freed by Shinnok, btw. There's also the issue of Li Mei's character being the way you wrote it. You'd think that she'd be fighting the on other side in Armageddon's intro.

Frost's bio is worse. Taven didn't free her. She broke out of the deep freeze and attacked Taven, thinking he was Sub-Zero. Taven defeated her and she escaped, still delusional. Frost's ending indicates that she's still evil. When Frost awoke from the Catacombs, she realized the medallion was gone and assumed that Sub-Zero left her there to die.

Frost and Sub-Zero couldn't have interacted with each other then as by then, Sub-Zero would've likely been trying to fend off the Shadow Stalkers. Sareena couldn't have been there, because she was with Quan Chi, Kia, and Jatakka at the Red Dragon base.

Taven wouldn't be so open about such information and Frost joining him on his quest makes no sense and goes against his story. Taven was NOT asking for help and not recruiting warriors. He was looking for his armor and wondering about information regarding the warriors in red, whom he soon learned are from the Red Dragon.

Overall, both bios need major reworking. The first thing you should do is look at all the bios released so far and read them carefully. Then you should probably play through MKA's Konquest mode. That would help as well.

Someone shut this down, I'm already doing bios... and I'm doing them for those who don't already have one. There don't need to be two different ones this one needs to go.

Sub-Zero_7th : Are you sure this is not Taven who freed Frost?

Genku : What legitimacy have you to be able to claim to be the only one to write the missing bios?

I don't claim to be the only one.. But considering I volunteered to do it of my on free will... I'd at least appreciate it if that was respected enough to allow it to be the only one...because then it'll get confusing if like thirty different people make thirty different bios for each character... That's all I was saying though the exact words may not express that..

First off, i know that shit, im making MY OWN STORY and BIOS, so all u learned from the game, forget it. ITS MY STORY. Next i shall do Meat.

If you knew about the things I said, why does your initial post say otherwise? If you want us to forget all that we learned in MKA, which like I said, IS canon, then you might as well drop the Taven bits in Frost's story.

It's probably best that this thread be closed, because Genku does have his thread, which you can continue your bios in. At least try to see where I'm coming from with my criticisms of the way you write your bios.

To DK1983: If I remember correctly, Frost broke out on her own. When she saw Taven, she thought he was Sub-Zero, namely because she was delusional.

LOL! I made this post of my own free will, so I'd appreciate it if all you other members stop posting here and allow me to be the only one to fill this place with new messages.

I don't see where you're coming from. I just played conquest, Taven freed her. Why do i have taven in frost story? easy cause i liked it. I will not continue MY bios in HIS thread, these are professerahnka's bio's honey, not genku's. So you're the one thats in the wrong on all accounts. Go play out side. And I used the cusing in Li Mei's bio to make it seem a bit more realistic and to show she really have turned for the bad, it was only two curse words, please. So please vacate my thread, you don't have to go home, but you have to get the hell out of here:) And i never said MKA was non-cannon, I said non story meaning it has very little story. But that little story is cannon. And the grammar? My grammar is better than alot of other people on the net, but this is fan fic bios, i'm not writing them for midway, so why are you giving me grammar classes? We are all from diffrent places and speak diffrent languages, not everybody is how you say "proper". If my grammar is bad, than big deal, it shall stay bad Now you may vacate.

lol. You didn't fool me with your edited post. How the hell does "non-story" mean little story? I'm not trying to give you grammar classes. I'm pointing out something that needs a bit of sorting out, that's all. I'm not exactly looking for proper grammar. But since you're so arrogant, I guess you think you're too good, huh? Yeah, I'm sure that's what it is. Well, you can rot in your stupidity.

Btw, it's "canon", not "cannon".

Okay...

Genku's thread will serve as the 'Unofficial Bio Thread' and he's making revisions to it as well, so that people are able to post bios as well. Also, there's going to be a way people can contribute character bios, but Genku will clarity that in his thread.


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