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08/11/2003 12:28 AM (UTC)
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Kung Lao too make the others even more freaked since he's such a good fighter, but keep Johnny Cage alive! Once again keep up the good work!
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08/11/2003 02:02 AM (UTC)
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I am wayy to tired to write a next chapter so Next chapter tomorrow!! Keep the comments coming!!
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Chapter 5: Nitara’s Army

Roughly 80 Vampires flew the to other side of the bridge to combat. Cyrax, a 650 pound piece of machinery currently working with the Special Forces, got into his Ninjitsu stance as a Vampire landed adjacent to him. This Vampire looked vicious and since Cyrax had a human face, he can be affected by a bite. Three other Vampires joined, so Cyrax used his multiple bomb attack, sending the enemies down where the bridge fell. “What else?!” Cyrax yelled out, as Kitana used her fans to decapitate her enemies’ heads off. After doing that five times she started doing a pretty kick combo to the rest. Unfortunately, Frost was having problems fighting all of her Vampires. She kicked and punched, but
lost in the battle, falling into the unknown. Raiden wanted to save her, but it was her destiny. As Johnny Cage was watching Frost fall, a Vampire went over to him and tried to push him also over the cliff. Johnny did a reversal, and instead threw the Vampire over the cliff. Frost appeared dead to Johnny, but there was no way to know. The bottom of this pit was very dark, and Johnny had to continue fighting. Raiden attacked Vampires with his staff when he noticed that Frost was gone. He didn’t make too much of it at the time, but instead aided Sonya. She took out her gun and shot several in the heart, which actually killed them. One snuck up on her and bit her on the neck. She screamed, but it was too late for help. Sonya was still alive but weakened, and may become a Vampire if not helped in time. “Help!” She yelled put, shooting some more Vampires. Jax got over to her aid before Raiden did, and carried her over to him. Everyone grouped up around Sonya and Raiden, guarding them. Johnny Cage did his Shadow Kick, causing the enemies head fall off, tripping a running Vampire. Sub-Zero decided to get creative, and froze five of them. He went over to one, and took their spine out. He held it out to show the Vampires, hoping to scare some. None backed away, but instead some more came running. Sub threw the skeleton at the runners, and some fell down. Kung Lao saw Nitara in the background, behind her dying army. Now with around 20 Vampires remaining, this fight was almost over. Sub, filled with anger, built up his ice and made a very large wall. The Vampires froze, and the rest went around to punch their heads off to kill them. Nitara, now also angry with the death of her army and family, ran around the dead Vampires, and starting flying. She spit blood at Sub-Zero’s face, and he fell.
“Soon she will become one of us!” Nitara yelled, at the group as she pointed at Sonya and Raiden. While aiding to Sonya, Raiden shot some electricity at the levitated Vampire and pulled her down to the ground. Jax held her down.
“Undo her curse!” Jax yelled.
“Curse? What curse?!” She yelled back, lying on the ground.
“Dammit! She’s becoming a Vampire! Undo her curse!” Jax yelled back.
“That would be impossible. Ask Raiden, he would know!” She said, while pointing at Raiden.
“We must kill the rest of the Vampires to undo the curse, but we must do this before she becomes a Vampire. We don’t have much time before she is forever gone. Two days maybe.” Raiden said, to the group.
“How many are left?!” Jax yelled at Nitara.
“It doesn’t matter anymore. If you kill me, then you still can’t save her!” Nitara yelled crazily.
“What do you mean!?” Jax asked.
“Kill me! I’m not talking anymore!” She yelled. Jax looked back at Raiden, and he gave him a nod of the head. Jax put his hand through her chest, and grabbed her heart. He then threw it over on the ground. Kung Lao stepped on the heart, making Nitara scream in pain, and eventually died.
“Damn! We lost Frost too! What could she mean by that we still can’t her?” Johnny Cage asked Raiden.
“You won’t believe this but .” Raiden started his stunning explanation, that no one knew.

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08/12/2003 03:07 PM (UTC)
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Wow nice action pact fighting sequence good twist with Sonya, you know you're really good at writing. Keep up the good work.
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08/13/2003 05:56 AM (UTC)
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Next chapter tomorrow probably! Anyone else read this chapter?!
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08/13/2003 05:12 PM (UTC)
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hehe yeah nice story lookin forward 2 the next chapter
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08/13/2003 11:38 PM (UTC)
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wow Awsome, keep it up.
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08/14/2003 06:23 AM (UTC)
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Chapter 6: The Legion

The anticipation of Raiden’s explanation was great. “You won’t believe this but, we need to kill one more individual to save Sonya.”
“Who?!” Johnny Cage yelled.
“The Dragon King. Let me explain. When the Dragon King was born, he was raised by top security. Unfortunately, the story goes that Nitara’s mother, Nitomla, took her army to the Kingdome in which the young Dragon King lived. The army easily broke through the walls but they were beaten. All were dead and the young King was safe. Or was he? While asleep that same night, a last Vampire was left, and snuck up on the King while he asleep. The Vampire was half successful at turning the King into their kind, when his father came in and killed the intruder. The Dragon King said he was never bitten; for fear that it would affect him going into throne. Ever since that incident, he always thirsted for blood.” Raiden explained.
“What’s the difference between half or a full Vampire?” Cyrax asked.
“He doesn’t have wings or fangs. He only thirsts for blood, and has the eyes of a Vampire.” Raiden started to get up from the ground, giving Sonya to Jax. “Carry her, Jax. We needn’t waste time!” Jax put her on his shoulders. She seemed to be sleeping or unconscious.
“So he’s half Vampire- half Human?” Johnny asked Raiden, while walking.
“He was. But now it’s unclear. Is he more of a Reptilian now? We won’t know until we meet up with him.”
“Hey, I know this is a stupid Idea, but how about a group name? I made a movie a few years back called the “American Legion”. How about the Legion?” Johnny asked, trying to ease the tension.
“Fine, just the Legion.” Raiden then started mumbling something to himself, probably wondering about how stupid this idea was. The Legion walked, and walked until they walked the bridge that fell. They all mourned the lost of Frost, and thought about what to do. Sub-Zero said a few words about Frost, then thought of an idea.
“I’ll make a bridge out of ice. Just give me a minute.” Sub started to move his hands around, filling his hands with cold energy. Everyone stood back, and he shot the ice across the gap in the ground. It took him a few minutes to get it correct, but he got it and the bridge was open for use. Jax with Sonya crossed first, while Raiden and Sub-Zero got on last. When Kung Lao got to the other side, he picked up a flower on the ground. He dropped it down to where Frost was as a tribute.
“We need to go through a fallen city now. Then when we’re through we should be by the Portal. We can sleep in the fallen city, if we have the time of course. Let’s move!” Raiden pointed to a hill, and down the hill was the city. The city was in ruins, much like most of the Netherealm but with more rubble. The Legion was halfway down the hill when they heard Kitana.
“Edonious!” Kitana yelled, while pointing at a large statue in the main entrance of the city. Obviously, she has been here before.
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08/15/2003 08:54 PM (UTC)
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Anyone read this chapter?! Please comment!
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08/16/2003 07:13 AM (UTC)
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Chapter 7: Edonious

“What’s Edonious?” Kung Lao asked.
“It was an Edenian embassy in the Netherealm. We lost contact with it, but now we know why. How long has it been a fallen city, Raiden?” Kitana answered, then asked.
“It was a large fighting ground with the Equitar people, and the people of Edenia. They waged war on each people, but a group of Shokan intervened. Everyone killed each other, and left the ruins in complete destruction. Goro was the only survivor of the battle, and was hired by Shang Tsung hired him on the spot. We must now walk through here. Let’s move.” Raiden explained, as he waved the Legion along the way. The Legion walked along the messy city trail and saw several skeletons on the way. The sky was getting darker, and the Legion was going to find a place to rest. Sonya was still not making many if any movements, and didn’t have much longer before she turns. Again Raiden sensed as if he was being watched, or was being followed. It could be the spirits of those who died here, or again can be the Specter, Scorpion. Or something totally different? The area that Raiden found was open, but had rubble around them, almost like a circle. Raiden found some material for making a small fire and brought it to the center of the new stop. “A smaller fire this time. Remember what happened last time? Be on alert, the Dragon King is almost at full potential.” Raiden said, while putting down the wood on the ground.
“What was that?!” Johnny Cage asked the group.
“Stay still!” Raiden yelled at the group. “Are you an enemy?!” Raiden asked the enemy that no one saw. Everyone was now alert of this noise that Johnny and Raiden heard. Then a cat came running out of the rubble, witch was apparently the noise the group heard. Everyone was relieved, and then a green spit was spotted in the air that was going to hit Raiden in the back. Raiden turned around in an instant and blocked the spit with his staff. Reptile was standing several yards away from Raiden, and Jax ran over to him for a fight.
“Let’s go!” Jax yelled out, while putting Sonya down and running at Reptile. Again Raiden backed the group away from the fight, not wanting to interfere in Jax’s chance of revenge for Sonya.
“What’s going on, Raiden?! Reptile shouldn’t exist anymore!” Jax yelled, realizing this problem. Reptile then quickly flashed into a woman then back to Reptile.
“Sareena!” Raiden yelled. “Beware, she’s a demon! You can only kill her by tearing her heart out, and putting it in a fire to burn!” Jax looked back at Reptile/Sareena wondering how to fight a demon. Could Jax’s metal arms be a match for Sareena’s super powers? Or will she just use Reptile as a façade and not use her own powers?
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Chapter 8: Sareena Vs. Jax

Sareena, still using Reptile’s looks, would fight like Reptile. Jax took out his gun and started shooting at Sareena. She dodged all but one bullet, with that bullet hitting her in the arm. She took out Reptile’s sword and started slashing at him. Jax used his metallic arms to block the sword. He then gave an around-house kick to her face. She fell down losing her sword, which fell into Cyrax’s hands. Jax went over to Sareena to kick her while she was down, but she grabbed his leg and flipped him over to the ground. Now she got up turning back to her normal form, which was a woman. She floated above the ground and started to power up energy. Jax ran to her and piston punched her in a combo. She flew away and hit the back of a standing wall. When she fell she was lifeless, and Jax went running towards her. Since he had to take her heart out to kill her, he put his hand back and was going for the heart. Just as he touched her skin he started to have spasms, obviously from Sareena’s powers. Sareena opened her eyes, and touched Jax with a powerful jolt causing him to fly away. He got up to see Sareena floating to him, and gave an uppercut to her. She returned the blow with a hard slap to his face, clawing him with her fingernails. Jax’s face was now had three cuts on his face, with blood coming out. Jax, now confused about what to do now, got up on his feet. “Fight me now!” She yelled, transforming her appearance again. Jax ran over to Sareena while she was transforming, but stopped when he saw who she turned into.
“Sonya?! She’s over there!” Jax pointed to the real Sonya on the ground. “You can’t hide behind her!” He ran with his fist out at Sareena.
“Jax! Stop! It’s me, Sonya! You’re friend!” Sareena yelled putting her hand out, to stop Jax from coming closer. To everyone Sareena looked identical to Sonya, every detail.
“Sonya?! Stop it!” Jax threw an open hand towards her heart, and easily grabbed it out of her body.
“Jax! Throw it in the fire, fast!” Raiden yelled out. Jax ran to the fire with the heart in his hand, and threw it in the fire. Sareena’s body slowly turned into dust, and finally disappeared. The fire grew larger, and the Legion gathered around it. “It’s the portal!” Raiden said to the Legion.
“What?! Did you know this would happen?!” Jax asked Raiden.
“Of course I did. The portal would only open once a demon’s heart was thrown in a fire. We need to give the portal an hour or so before it’s ready for us! I will be able to fight in Outworld, but I can’t use any of my special powers. We must rest now!” Raiden and the Legion sat around the fire, and rested until the Outworld portal was open. What is awaiting the Legion? What could be in store for this group?

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08/17/2003 07:17 AM (UTC)
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Because of lack of popularity this story will soon end faster than i planned :( Keep the comments coming!!
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08/18/2003 09:02 PM (UTC)
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Come on! Where is everyone!
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solidSimpson Wrote:
Because of lack of popularity this story will soon end faster than i planned :( Keep the comments coming!!


Hell no, don't, it going great. I like it, keep it up.
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08/19/2003 01:09 AM (UTC)
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I will finish this story but a little faster, and since school starts tomorrow, i wont post as often. Keep the comments coming!!
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08/21/2003 02:53 PM (UTC)
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Good Story but where is Scorpion. LOLLOL to whoever said that that's what i should have said. I love Scorpion!
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08/22/2003 05:34 AM (UTC)
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Sorry for the lack of comments from me I've been grounded, and I'm not supposed to be on now anyway the story is still amazing keep it up and if you can throw in some more fight scenes but keep the story strong. And throw in a Johnny fight.
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08/22/2003 06:50 AM (UTC)
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"Reign of Chaos..." hmm...where have I heard that before? (jk)

Nice story. I would, hovever, like to see some more Sub-Zero development.
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08/22/2003 10:05 PM (UTC)
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Next chapter should be tonight!! Keep the comments coming!!
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08/23/2003 06:00 AM (UTC)
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I got home later than planned, so next chapter tomorrow! Sry for the inconveniance! Keep the comments coming!!
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08/24/2003 07:43 AM (UTC)
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Chapter 9: Blazin’

The Legion waited around the Portal for about an hour before it finished the transformation. “Go in one by one!” Raiden yelled to the group. The Portal was now very large, and may make you dizzy if you stared in it for a while. Jax with Sonya went in first, and was followed by the rest. Outworld looked no different then it did the last time Raiden was there. It looked like a much worse version of the Netherealm(READER’S NOTE: Think of the Outworld from MK1 the movie, to get a good picture of what it looks like) with many small torches lit around, fallen statues, and a long trail to the Dragon King’s palace. Raiden lit his staff for light and had Sub-Zero walking on his side. The unmasked Lin Kuei ninja started to speak.
“Who fights the Dragon King?” Sub asked Raiden, while walking.
“I don’t know yet. It just may be you, or it might be someone else. The King is back in power, and soon will be unstoppable if we don’t get to him in time.” Sub heard his name being whispered from a nearby flame.
“Was that flame calling my name?” Sub asked, and the Legion stopped moving and stared at the flame. Again the flamed whispered his name, and a figure started to move in it. Finally, from the fire a fiery human-like figure emerged. “Blaze!” Sub-Zero yelled while shooting an ice ball at Blaze. Blaze shot his fireball at the ice ball to contradict Sub’s attack. Now Raiden already knew this was going to be a big fight, so he cleared a way for the fight. Sub took out his frozen sword to fight Blaze with. Blaze ran over to the sword and touched it, causing it to melt in Sub’s hand. The Lin Kuei ninja, knowing that he can’t touch this walking fire, started walking backwards. Blaze shot fire all around the two fighters, like a circle to trap Sub-Zero. Blaze knew he had one this fight, but Sub realized what he must do. He needs to do his ice shower to surprise his enemy. Blaze looked up as ice fell on him, causing him to freeze. Sub-Zero walked over to the frozen Blaze, tore his head off and crushed it with his foot. Then he tipped the body over, making the whole body to crack into a million pieces. The circle of fire disappeared around Sub-Zero so he started to walk back to the Legion. The Legion was now very close to the Dragon King, and is fast approaching.

CURRENTLY IN THE DRAGON KING PALACE: “Is my army ready yet?” The Dragon King asked Quan Chi.
“Once you regain all of your power, then your army will regain its former energy, which shouldn’t be very long at all.” The King made a weird movement then spoke.
“He’s dead. Blaze was killed. It’s up to us now to stop them! What is wrong with that damn yellow ninja anyways?”
“Scorpion? No one knows much about his current whereabouts.” Quan Chi answered.
“There’re coming! Be ready!” Dragon King yelled, while getting up from his throne.
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08/24/2003 03:45 PM (UTC)
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i almost forgot to say Scorpion needs some story develpment (hookd on fonnix dun goodd 4 me)
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08/26/2003 02:25 AM (UTC)
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nice chapter keep it coming
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08/28/2003 10:06 PM (UTC)
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Next chapter should be on friday or Saturday!! Keep the comments coming!!
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08/31/2003 06:36 AM (UTC)
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Chapter 10: Flood Warning

Scorpion poked his head around a statue to eye the walking Legion. Cyrax spotted him and shot a bomb at him, but was dodged by Scorpion. The bomb exploded and Scorpion started running away. “This way!” He yelled at the Legion. The whole group started running with Scorpion with curiosity.
“Isn’t this where we going to go anyway?” Johnny Cage asked Raiden.
“Yes, and he knows that too.” Raiden answered. The King’s palace was only about 200 yards away now. Scorpion stopped running when he saw hundreds of the Dragon King’s servants guarding the palace. He ran to his right to a high and thick wall. The Legion arrived and Scorpion pointed at Cyrax, then at the wall. He implied that Cyrax should place an explosive on this wall. Cyrax took out two timed explosives and put them on the wall. They had 30 seconds to get out of there. Scorpion disappeared and the group ran away while the wall exploded. The wall served as a dam and water came flying out of the fallen wall. The servants saw this and tried to run but water drowned them. The Legion watched the mass destruction the water left. Hundreds of servants were dead, and the area was empty of security, making the palace vulnerable to attack. The Legion walked to the palace entrance, which was opened by the water pressure. When the group walked in they saw a large staircase and were standing in a foot of water. They thought it would be wise to go up the stairs, so they proceeded with Raiden as the leader.

CURRENTLY ON THE TOP FLOOR IN THE PALACE: “What do we do?! Our defenses are all dead!” The Dragon King yelled to Quan Chi.
“We wait, and fight them off oursel ” The King fell on the ground screaming, and started moving very unnaturally. The metamorphosis was over, and now the King is back with his full potential. Quan Chi helped the King up from the ground, but didn’t need the help. The King now had large muscles throughout his body, and grew small horns on his back, and two on his face.
“I don’t think we need to any help anymore!” The King yelled, then started laughing.

BACK ON THE STAIRS OF THE PALACE: “What was that?!” Kitana wondered, when she heard the laughing.
“He’s back. The Dragon King is back and very powerful.” Raiden said as the Legion stopped. Scorpion appeared next to Raiden.
“I am here to kill the Dragon King!” Scorpion said. The Sub-Zero started to smile at the news.
“Is that him!?” Jax asked while pointing up to a large figure at the very top of the stairs. “If it is then he is going to give us problems!” The figure moved back into the room he came from.
“Yes, that is him. Let’s move!” Raiden said while pointing his staff to the top of the long stairway.
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