This story is hot can u make sub zero up and go? I mean like next ur gonna put about the Oni army right can u say that it was Sub versus Moloch and Sub'Zero becomes enraged and keeps hitting Mocloh then he uses Ice shaker and freezes Moloch and kicks of moloch's head and it lands in front of drahmin and drahmin is shocked take it from there ur a good writer keep up the good work and don't let sub zero die!

I'm not sure what i will do with the ONI yet, but thanks for the suggestions!! Keep the comments coming!!

put the followed thecdragon king but they came in comtact with the 2 oni moloch and drahmin

Like an ambush? Good idea but i make the Onie battle on the side of the Dragon King fight, like 2 battles in 1!!! Keep the comments coming!!

that sounds cool! Moloch sometimes givs me a problem when I verse him so when the battle begins plz hav Sub kick molocg's ass!

Anyone else read this chapter? Keep the komments coming!!

freakin tight ¿

i have enjoyed all chapters i cant waitt for the next one :)

Next chapter should be on Saturday night!! Keep the Komments Koming!

hey u should have sonya become a vampire and kill jax

p.s. i hate jax and sonya

Sanmadon_The_Shadow he is the best character ever kill all of mortal kombat people hahaha

wow =-0 those are hella tight

oops

Next chpater probably tomorrow!! Who should be in the final battles?

they should all die and dragon king should win and take over everything

Great chapters! Sorry for lak of comments i just moved so lack of time. Anyway of course Cage in final battle, and Sub-Zero and Scorpion.

Chapter 11: The Tough Wall

As the Legion ran up the stairs, the door at the top of the stairs slammed shut. Raiden tried opening it with his staff, but remembered he had only mortal power in Outworld. The door would be impossible to open against the Dragon King’s power. “Damn!” Raiden said, while hitting the door in frustration. “We cannot open it! We are hopeless!” Raiden looked back at the group. “His power is too great at this point. We can’t get to him even if we combine all of our power. Inside the doors, we can kill him, but we need to get in there first!”
“Is there no way to get inside?! Can we disable his power?” Sub-Zero asked Raiden.
“I’ll venture to find the whereabouts of a special tool. Johnny, come with me. The rest of you, stay here!” Raiden and Johnny started to run down the wide stairs. About half way down they felt vibrations in there feet. Now loud thumps were heard, coming closer to them. Raiden and Johnny ran down the rest of the stairs to find two large Oni running to them.
“They look like three Molochs!” Johnny said.
“They are Oni. The same kind of Oni as Moloch. We need to make them chase us up the stairs! Maybe there great might can break the doors! Quick run!” Raiden yelled, as he and Johnny started to run up the stairs. The three Oni started to run up the stairs in anger while almost causing the stairs to fall in rubble. The rest of the Legion left the immediate area because they may have distracted the disgruntled Oni group. Raiden and Johnny Cage stood against the door jointed together. One Oni threw a punch at the them, so quickly ducked the punch, causing the door to be striked and weakened by the punch. The other two Oni threw large boulders and they also hit the door. “One more hit should do it!” Then out of nowhere, an ice-slide was being created in midair over the Oni. Then a large frozen power flew in the air and hit the door. The door fell over and the all of the Oni ran in the room. The rest of the Legion came out from hiding, and looked for the being responsible for the door opening. Suddenly, a being jumped off the ice-slide and landed next to the Legion. Although her appearance changed, it was Frost. Now she had the bandana of achievement on her head. Meaning she has advanced as a fighter.
“Your dead!” Cyrax yelled out.
“I fell and fell until I landed in a body of water. To get out I had to battle nonstop for over a day. I almost died several times, and learned the true meaning of life. I now come back with my improved powers! The Dragon King should be in there right!?” Frost yelled, while pointing at the door. This room was very large, and was now in a mess since the Oni came in. On the other side of the room there was another door, and since this room was now empty, the Legion ran to the door. The door opened easily, and the room was a portal room. There was a portal recently used, and leading to an unknown location inside of the room. “We must leave!” The Legion jumped into the portal and now were concluding the mystery. Will Sonya survive? Will the Oni go through the portal too? Will good prevail over evil?

Hey, if you want to read more by me, i wrote a short story last night and posted it on the General Discussinon forum here. Enjoy!

nicce but frost should have died

I wanted a surprise, but i thought that she would have been better coming back smarter and better.

I hate frost she should hav stayed dead

ok let me just say that chapter suck i think u need to rethink everything before u post it

why was it bad?

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Chapter 12: A Much Awaited Fight

The Legion landed in a large fighting arena, perfect for a battle of this magnitude. After staring at each other for a few seconds, the Dragon King challenged Raiden to a fight. Quan Chi challenged Sub-Zero and both members of the Legion accepted the challenges. As the rest of the Legion backed away from the battle, two Oni fell into the arena. The rest of the Legion was needed to keep these guys away, and the Quan Chi match started.

Quan Chi Vs. Sub-Zero

The arena was an all-out brawl. Everyone was fighting everyone at the same time. Sub-Zero stood in a defensive position, and Quan Chi started to run at him. Quan gave a jumping kick, but was caught by Sub in midair. Quan fell to the ground and took out his two swords. Sub took out his frozen sword and swung it at Quan. Quan dodged the strike and impaled on of his swords in Sub’s leg. He fell on one knee in great pain. Then out of no where Quan fell down in pain, and on fire. Scorpion appeared in back of Quan Chi’s fallen body. Quan Chi died on the floor, and Sub-Zero healed his leg. Finally, Scorpion Vs. Sub-Zero. “Have we not waited for this moment for many of years?!” Sub asked. Scorpion shot his spear at Sub-Zero. Sub dodged away while touching the spear, causing it to freeze and break apart on the ground. Sub threw down his frozen sword and tried to speak. “You said you wanted to kill the Dragon King!”
“I had to say that! I was surrounded by my enemies, and I had no other way to get out unharmed! Now it’s time to finish this! I must protect my King!” Scorpion started to walk in a circle around Sub-Zero. Sub was disgusted at the news, and shot an ice ball at his enemy. His shot was right on target, and froze the Specter still. Sub walked over to him, and this battle was about to end. He pulled his hand back, but was disrupted by a chop to his neck from someone behind him. It was Frost. Sub turned around.
“You’re on there side too?!” He asked.
“Of course I am! I’ve been helping Scorpion all along, and he’s been helping me.” Frost responded. Sub sensed Scorpion behind him so he ducked. It was a spear and it hit Frost. She fell to the ground, and no one was able to save her life. Now two have died in this massive battle. Scorpion was temporarily distracted by what he just did to his partner. Sub picked his frozen sword up and impaled it into Scorpion’s torso. He screamed when he was impaled and fell onto his knees. He took his Ninja Sword out, but he just released it to the ground. He was then abruptly engulfed in flames and disappeared. This was the third death in the battle. Scorpion just may be back though. Not now or anytime soon, but in the distant future, he may be needed. Now the Oni were still fighting, and the Dragon King was still battling Raiden.

Nice chapters! Keep them coming. Can't wait for the final battle.