~~ Self-Made Endings of Final FMV - !!! THE BREAKDOWN (PG. 15) !!! ~~
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09/04/2006 04:49 PM EDT

So far, the following ending scenes have been done (in order):

!! PAGE ONE !!
- Mileena (Kitana)
- Jade (Tanya)
- Sonya Blade (Kano)
- Ashrah

!! PAGE TWO !!
- Rain (Kintaro)
- Jax (Hsu Hao)

!! PAGE THREE !!
- Sheeva (Motaro)

!! PAGE FOUR !!
- Liu Kang (Shang Tsung, Kung Lao, Kenshi).

!! PAGE FIVE !!
- Smoke (Noob Saibot, [Sub-Zero] (not shown in completion).

!! PAGE SIX !!
- Johnny Cage (Goro, Bo' Rai Cho).

!! PAGE SEVEN !!
- Raiden (Shinnok, Fujin, Kai).

!! PAGE EIGHT !!
- Scorpion (Quan Chi)

!! PAGE EIGHT !!
- Cyrax (Sektor, Sareena)

!! PAGE TEN !!
- Frost (Sonya, Sub-Zero)

!! PAGE ELEVEN !!
- Reptile (Nitara, Khameleon, Chameleon) Part 1

!! PAGE TWELVE !!
- Reptile (Nitara, Khameleon, Chameleon) Part 2

!! PAGE THIRTEEN !!
- Shao Khan (Onaga, Reiko, Sindel, Shujinko, Scorpion, Nightwolf, Ermac, Li Mei) Parts 1 & 2

!! PAGE FOURTEEN !!
- Shao Khan (Onaga, Reiko, Sindel, Shujinko, Scorpion, Nightwolf, Ermac, Li Mei) Part 3


CURRENTLY ON: SHAO KHAN (ONAGA, REIKO, SINDEL, SHUJINKO, SCORPION, NIGHTWOLF, ERMAC, LI MEI) THE FINAL PART --- Pg. 15

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What's up, guys..

A few days ago I posted my KAK in the Official KAK Thread (just scroll down a bit), and I based my character's ending on the rumoured final FMV that we supposedly unlock after beating the game with all characters. Basically, I re-created a scene that sealed my KAK's fate, and included all the original MK characters who were part of her story.

Anyway, I had fun creating that scene, so I thought (since I'm bored) I'd do another one for an original MK character. Remember, this is the way I hope the final FMV will be, so don't take any aspect for my description as an MK:A fact. My endings include speech, multiple fighting shots, and even a final Picture/Subtitle combo that finalizes the character's fate and/or sets him/her up for MK8. I decided to do Mileena's, considering the intro isn't canon.

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~ MILEENA ~


The scene starts with the screen circling the area around and on Blaze's pyramid, showing all sorts of fights going on. It focuses for a few seconds on Sindel, who is locked in a fierce battle with Shao Khan. The screen then zooms out to reveal Kitana, who has just noticed her mother's struggle to defeat the emperor. A concerned look on Kitana's face, and immediately she takes out her Steel Fans and charges to the scene. She is forced to stop abruptly, however, when a Sai sinks into the ground just inches from her feet. Mileena lands in front of Kitana, who take a few steps back.

Kitana: "Alive once more, you grotesque monster! What do you still want with me?"

Mileena: "I was finally living the perfect life, leading your army as Edenia's princess and heir to the throne... I was hoping you'd remain under Onaga's control for the rest of your damned life, but I see you've managed to free yourself." (Mileena starts walking slowly towards Kitana, who continues to step back).

Kitana: "My army will soon realize who is the worthless usurper who took my place."

Mileena: "YOU'RE the worthless usurper! YOU took the life that belonged to ME!"

Mileena growls angrily, picks up her fallen Sai, and charges at Kitana, who defends herself from the attack with her Steel Fans. They block each other's blows until Kitana finds an opening and swipes her Steel Fans towards Mileena, who sinks into the ground and performs her Teleport Kick just as the blades brush her hair. She comes back down with a devastating kick that sends Kitana crashing to the ground. Mileena flips forwards and brings her Sai down on the fallen Kitana, who rolls out of the way just in time. The princess kicks one of Mileena's sai from her right hand and tries to land another kick to her face, but Mileena easily dodges the assault and counter-attacks with a combination of punches. Kitana falls once again.

Mileena: "For the first time, I am the superior fighter." (Kitana glares at her 'twin', who simply laughs). "You, my sister, will be the most delicious meal I ever had!" (The camera focuses on Mileena's veil, and her Tarkatan mouth is slightly visible under it, as she licks her sharp teeth).

Kitana takes advantadge of the moment to quickly get back to her feet, and lands a hit on Mileena, who staggers backwards. Kitana unsuccessfully tries to attack Mileena with her Steel Fans once more, but manages to land a powerful kick to Mileena's midsection, which she follows up with her Petty Kick combination. As Mileena is thrown backwards, Kitana throws one of her Steel Fans at her sister, which cut her legs before she even lands on the ground. Mileena stays down for a few seconds, then struggles to get back up. Kitana approaches.

Kitana: "Surrender yourself now and I will do nothing more than send you back to an Edeninan Prison."

Mileena: (Struggling to speak) "I will not be humiliated by you again!"

Mileena chucks her Sai at Kitana unexpectedly. The princess does a backflip to evade the Sai, but as she lands, Mileena suddenly leaps towards her at amazing speed. Although Mileena's landing is unstable (her leg is severely injured), she gains strength from her sheer anger and lands a combination of kicks on her "sister". Kitana swipes her Steel Fans towards Mileena's face, but they only cut her veil; half of it falls off, showing Mileena's bottom row of teeth. Mileena roars frighteningly, and cuts Kitana's torso with a swift motion of her Sais. Kitana seems defeated as she loses her balance. Mileena raises her Sai to finish her off... and a blade suddenly sinks into her shoulders. Mileena yelps in pain as Baraka stands behind her.

Baraka: "My entire Tarkatan horde.... gone because of you! We had an alliance, and you betrayed me!"

Kitana realizes she can no longer fight, and does her best to flee the scene in the direction of her mother's battle. Mileena turns to face Baraka, who seems to not have a scratch on him. She knows she cannot win a fight against him now.

Baraka: "You have a chance to defeat me in Kombat! You may have the first strike!"

Mileena glares at him for a moment. She then leaps into the air, kicks Baraka hard on the head with her "good" leg, and flees the scene. Baraka is knocked down. When he looks back to try and find her, Mileena is nothing but a small shadow in the distance.........

PICTURE: A shot of Mileena leaning on a tree in the Living Forest, everything around her covered in darkness. A visible reflection on her eyes shows an image of people violently rioting.

-- Mileena had managed to survive the savage confrontation with her twin sister and her betrayed comrade, Baraka. She spent the next few days hiding out in the Living Forest, feeding on any wanderer who got too close. She knew that if Kitana believed Baraka had killed her, she would be safe until she regained her strength. She heard rumours of the former emperor Shao Khan attempting to regain control of Outworld, which was now in a state of violent disaster. Perhaps it was time for Edenia's true princess to return....
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Hope you guys liked it! Kind of long, but I think it's very entertaining to read! wink I appreciate some feedback! Thanks for reading!

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09/04/2006 04:58 PM EDT
OOh its good, i like it alot, but its not very endingy???

you should write a few more for the other characters, something for the ones with less story-Kintoro,rain sheeva etc
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09/04/2006 05:06 PM EDT
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OOh its good, i like it alot, but its not very endingy???

you should write a few more for the other characters, something for the ones with less story-Kintoro,rain sheeva etc


LoL, it's just that I would like to see Mileena coming back to next-gen, as well as Kitana and Shao Khan. My thoughts on Baraka's fate, however, are not revealed on this scene, which focuses only on Mileena.

Yes, I am thinking about doing some more for other characters, especially ones that I believe are going to be killed off. But I'll only do them if I get good enough responses from people, so I know they'd like some more.

Thank you for your feedback, though! I'm glad you liked it! I'll definately think up some more for the characters you mentioned.

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09/04/2006 05:14 PM EDT
Very good...since you did one of my favorite characters tongue


This makes up for the Vampire Hunter rapist incidentwink
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09/04/2006 05:16 PM EDT
It's pretty good. Although there are a few things I would've changed:

- She needed to kill Baraka, there is no more use for him!

- Mileena and Kitana should've stopped their fighting and made truce. Their conflict has gone on long enough, what point is there in trying to kill each other anymore?

Other than that it was great. Good writing skills.
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09/04/2006 05:32 PM EDT
That was awsome! Also i'm new here...hi!

Scorpion rules! furious these smilies rule too!
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09/04/2006 05:49 PM EDT
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She needed to kill Baraka, there is no more use for him!

- Mileena and Kitana should've stopped their fighting and made truce. Their conflict has gone on long enough, what point is there in trying to kill each other anymore?

Other than that it was great. Good writing skills.


I have plans for Baraka as well, but you'd need to read his ending to find out what happens to him. Just because he didn't have a battle in Mileena's ending doesn't mean he lives. wink ... And I just couldn't see Kitana and Mileena having a truce, I don't think either of them would go that far after all that's happened, so I just kind of took Mileena "out" of Kitana's life for her ending, and hinted a new focus she could have in future MKs. Like you, I don't want too much Kitana/Mileena rivalry anymore, but I don't want either of them dead or making peace.

Barakaz_cuz Wrote:
Very good...since you did one of my favorite characters tongue


This makes up for the Vampire Hunter rapist incidentwink


It's the Vampire Huntin' Rapist, get it right! tongue (people who haven't seen the thread about this think we're both insane right now)...

BTW, thank you guys for the great comments! I'll definately write down some more later on! Wouldn't be cool if the scenes on the final FMV were rlly like this, tho? A guy can dream...

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09/04/2006 07:59 PM EDT
I decided to do Jade now, since her rivalry with Tanya has interested me ever since MK: Deception. Enjoy!

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~ JADE ~


The scene begins with Shao Khan striking the screen with his War Hammer, as the screen spins around to reveal Onaga being knocked down by his attack. Shao Khan raises his weapon high above the fallen Dragon King in order to continue his assault, but is suddenly interrupted by Tanya, who wraps her arms around the emperor's neck and attempts to choke him. Shao Khan struggles to get her off as Tanya takes out her Kobu Jutsu. Before she can stab him, however, Shao Khan manages to get a hold of her arm and violently hurls Tanya to the ground. She slides across the floor, her weapons falling from her hands in the process. Wasting no time, however, she gets back up just as Shao Khan resumes his battle with Onaga. Tanya starts to run towards Shao Khan again when, without warning, a long spiked staff swings at her and smashes Tanya across the face, instantly knocking her down. Tanya holds her nose in pain, and looks to see Jade standing in front of her.

Jade: "This was the last time you betray our homeworld and risk its tranquility, Tanya." (She swings her Bojutsu so that the spiked end is pointing at Tanya). "This time, I'll see to it that you are dead for good."

Tanya (scared): "No, no! You can't do this! Where is your code of honor? You would strike me with your weapon when I'm unarmed?!"

Jade glares at her for a moment, then lowers her Bojutsu.

Jade: "Retrieve your weapons, so that I can finally have the pleasure of besting and slaying you."

Tanya slowly stands up, and we can see a small wound in her face from Jade's sudden strike. She starts walking towards her weapon (in the distance, we see Onaga overpowering Shao Khan). As soon as Tanya walks past Jade, however, she stops, and strikes her opponent forcefully in the back. As soon as Jade spins around to face Tanya again, she is met with a strong roundhouse kick to the face. Jade is sent crashing to the ground. At an impressive pace, Tanya retrievers her Kobu Jutsu, and starts running away. Jade is quick to get back to her feet, however.

Jade: "A coward to the end, Tanya!"

Jade sprints towards Tanya, and as the screen follows her, we catch a glimpse of the many battles going on around the area. As Jade closes in on Tanya, she hurls her Bojutsu at the traitor. The screen follows Jade's weapon as it reaches Tanya and strikes her in her midsection. Tanya falls to the floor, severely injured. Jade approaches her and takes out her weapon. Tanya looks back at Jade with an expression of pure fury, then looks around as though searching for someone.

Jade: "No one can help you now, Tanya. How does it feel, to realize that a traitor has no true friends?"

Tanya shouts in rage and attempts to attack Jade with her weapons once again. Jade effortlessly blocks her blows with her Bojutsu. Before long, Tanya tires (mainly because of her injury) and falls on her knees.

Tanya: "My master Onaga will find you... you will be torn to pieces, as you deserve!"

Jade: "There is no more sense in me wasting my time with you. You're clearly finished."

Jade turns around and walks away. Tanya struggles to pick her weapons back up, then unsuccessfully attempts to crawl towards Jade and starts cutting the air with her weapons in vain.

Tanya (her voice fading): "Bitch..."

The screen focuses on Jade once more, as she heroically walks towards it...

PICTURE: Jade standing alongside Kitana on the balcony of a large palace, looking down on the new Edenian army. On the background, we can see that Edenia is more beautiful than ever, as two suns set in the horizeon...

Now that Kitana had taken her rightful place as the queen of Edenia, she was quick to reward Jade for her undying loyalty and assistance throughout all the past years. Jade was made the new commander of the reformed Edenian army, as well as the new queen's advisor. Kitana knew their home realm would always be safe under Jade's firm and effective regime. At last, Edenia was to enjoy the years of peace it so rightfully deserved...

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Hope you guys liked this one as well! Let me know what you think! grin

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09/04/2006 08:24 PM EDT
Wow nice i like it, you dont directley kill tanya,which is good considiring she might survive to mk8 but i doubt it, hopefully the endings will be this good but i doub it sad
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09/04/2006 09:59 PM EDT
Very nicely written endings. I have an issue with Jade showing Tanya so much mercy, though - Jade isn't really honorable. In her Deception ending, she used sly tactics to get Tanya ripped apart. In Konquest (Non-canon, but still showing her character.), she ambushed Rain. And she was once an assassin, was she not? I don't think she would fall into the trap of combating Tanya, who is a known sneak and traitor, honorably. And I can't see her leaving without making sure Tanya died (But hell, it's Mortal Kombat. Tanya could die and return anyway.) She'd most likely slaughter her and move on.
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09/04/2006 10:08 PM EDT
Very nicely done! I loved both of them. I liked Mileena's alot. Though I have to say, as far as Jade's goes, I agree with Stahlgeist's post. I believe Jade (out of pure hatred for Tanya and all she'd done) Would have made certain Tanya was worm food before she left. However, yours leaves it open for a possible Tanya return (though we all know how very unlikely that is sad She's great as far as villains go) Great work over all though. Surprised that there haven't been any Dragon points. Maybe if you posted this in Fan Submission?

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09/04/2006 10:12 PM EDT
Once again, great! However, like others, I think she should've killed Tanya. Jade is not one for showing mercy, she's a tough gal. But I'm guessing you have plans for Tanya too?
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09/04/2006 10:26 PM EDT
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Once again, great! However, like others, I think she should've killed Tanya. Jade is not one for showing mercy, she's a tough gal. But I'm guessing you have plans for Tanya too?


LoL, no, all that I imagined happening to Tanya is right here, there's no "watch other ending" to it. I love Tanya as a villain, and it was tough for me to wanna kill her off. However, I do not see much potential for her return. The best thing I could think of that would fix this problem is giving her a fate where she's killed, but still leave that very slight possibility of a return much, much later on, if I wanted. (Now I'm speaking like I'm the story write for MK, but you know what I mean, lol)

Also, to Stahlgeist, I do agree with the points you made. I guess it's my own fault for viewing her as honorable, because of her immense loyalty to Sindel and Kitana even though they have more status than her, etc. It totally slipped my mind how she used to be an assassin and how that could come out at any moment, especailly regarding her pure hatred for Tanya. So yes, you got some great points there.

And I love how everyone is not only giving feedback, but also making adittions and their own modifications to the endings. I'm really seeing a lot of things about the MK characters that I didn't before, and we're all bringing up possibilities for the finality of the characters. Great stuff, this is going way better than I expected!

Thanks to the wonderful response, I'll keep this up, and hopefully you guys will continue to give your opinions and thoughts! Thanks a bunch! Stay on the lookout for the next character! wink

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09/04/2006 10:37 PM EDT
Damn...she lives? I hate that bitch! lol
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09/04/2006 10:46 PM EDT
those ROCK! You need to do more.
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09/04/2006 11:57 PM EDT
~ SONYA ~


The scene starts with the screen running across the sandy ground. It then moves upwards to reveal the many fights going on near Blaze's pyramid. In a split second, the screen zooms into a particular area where a final showdown is occurring between the remaining Black Dragons, Red Dragons, and the OIA Agents.

Now the screen focuses on Sonya Blade and Jax Briggs, who are teaming up against the Red Dragon Mavado. The duo stays on the offensive, and Mavado does his best to evade the incoming metal arms of Jax and the menacing kicks of Sonya. In a speedy motion, Mavado manages to duck as Jax throws one of his punches, then swiftly uppercuts the agent with all his might. Jax staggers backwards. As Mavado turns around to attack Sonya, he is met with an unexpected roundhouse kick to the face. The kick throws him off-balance for a moment, but he manages to evade Sonya's second oncoming kick, then tackles her with all his might. Sonya is knocked backwards. Mavado starts to smile, but it is soon wiped off his face as Jax's metal hand clamps around his neck. Mavado barely has time to try and escape, as Jax slams him into the ground forcefully. He then raises a dazed Mavado back to his feet (there is a large hole on the ground now). Sonya grabs a hold of Jax's shoulder and leaps over him, delivering a flying kick that lands and drains Mavado of his remaining energy. The Red Dragon criminal falls to the floor.

Jax: "Ooooh, you're done now, punk!"

Jax prepares to bring his metal arms down on the fallen Mavado and finish him, but his action is cut short as none other than Hsu Hao rushes to the scene, and tackles Jax. The two fall from the camera's view. We now see Sonya, who gives Jax and Hsu Hao a worried glance, but just as soon turns back around to face Mavado.

Sonya: "He can take care of himself... I'm not giving you a chance to escape!"

Mavado groans in pain and attempts to crawl away, but Sonya closes in. She has time only to reach for her handgun, however, as Cyrax suddenly grabs her by the arm and brings her down. As the two agents fall to the ground, the red laser that was meant to strike Sonya shoots towards the screen and barely misses the fallen Mavado. Eyes wide with surprise, he looks up to see where the laser came from, and is surprised to see...

Mavado: "Kano?!"

The screen shows Sonya lying on the ground alongside Cyrax. We see a petrified look on her face as she slowly sits up and looks behind her, only to see the Black Dragon criminal Kano coming closer. She stands up, with an expression of deep surprise on her face as she realizes that Kano is alive, and is coming closer, with Jarek, Kabal, Kira, and Kobra by his side.

Kano: "There ya are, baby... I missed you so much." He looks at his fellow Black Dragon members. "That one's mine. Take the rest."

Kira and Kobra walk towards Sonya, who assumes her stance, prepared to fight them both. The two of them, however, walk past her.

Kobra (shaking his head as he looks at Sonya): "What a waste..."

Kira and Kobra now charge at Cyrax (who has been standing behind Sonya) and start to team up on him. Mavado has gotten back to his feet by now, and immediately goes for Kabal. The two begin a weapon kombat, sparks flying from their hookswords. Jax is still locked in battle with Hsu Hao, and we catch a quick glimpse of Kenshi overpowering Jarek. The screen zooms out to show that only Sonya and Kano remain.

Without warning, Kano chucks both of his butterfly knives at Sonya, who barely evades them with a backflip. The knives brush her hair, as strands of it fall to the floor. She lands on her knees and barely has time to react as Kano lands a kick that knocks her off her feet.

Kano: "Things are gonna be different this time, love. No high building for you to throw me off of! Now I'm really gonna be forced to mess up that pretty face!"

Kano attempts to stomp on Sonya, who swiftly grabs a hold of his leg and throws him backwards. The two get back onto their feet.

Sonay: "How the hell did you survive that fall?"

Kano (grinning at the angry look on her face): "Aw, I made some friends!"

Sonya screams with rage as she charges at Kano with her Flying Kick. Kano ducks and comes back with uppercut, which Sonya evades. The two begin to fight, neither landing a hit for a good while. Sonya then throws a punch with her right hand, which Kano immediately catches. She tries again by throwing a second punch with her left hand, which Kano again grabs a hold of.

Kano: "What's the matter? Didn't expect me to come back so strong, did ya, baby?"

Sonya: "You? Strong?"

The screen follows Sonya's right knee, which strikes Kano on his stomach. He doubles over in pain, giving Sonya a perfect chance to land a powerful uppercut to his jaw. He swings his fist towards her, but she ducks it effortlessly, then comes back up with both hands cupped into a fist. Blood drips from Kano's mouth as her fists meet his already-injured jaw once more. Kano then sums up all of his brute strength in one devastating punch. Sonya defends her face from the attack with her arms, but even so, the immense power from Kano's punch are enough to knock her back a few feet, her boots sliding across the sand. Kano takes this chance to land a leg sweep on Sonya, who comes crashing down on her back. An enraged Kano picks up one of his Butterfly Knives from the ground and brings it down on Sonya. The liutenant is quick to react, however, and she leaps back onto her feet just in time grab Kano's wrist as the blade drew closer, then rips the weapon from his fingers. With his free arm, Kano grasps Sonya's neck and tries to choke her. She struggles to break free, but is unsuccessful, until she elbows the thug in the stomach. As Kano doubles over once more, she strikes him full in the face with her heel.

Sonya: "This time... you're staying dead!"

Sonya realizes she has Kano beat. She then performs an impressive and acrobatic combination of attacks on Kano, as she continuously spins around and lands many deadly kicks to his face. Kano is dazed... Sonya sums up her remaining strength and runs towards him with a Leg Grab. Her legs wrap around his neck, and she raises her torso in order to land countless jabs to his face. With a mighty backflip, she sends Kano crashing to the ground, her legs still firmly choking the remainig air out of him.

Kano (struggling to utter a single word): "I... I'll turn myself in! You don't gotta do this!"

Sonya: "On the contrary..."

We hear a loud cracking noise as Sonya spins around in a full 360 angle, letting go of Kano's neck, which snaps in the process. Sonya lands back on her feet, exhausted from battle. She looks back at Kano, his neck at an odd angle. Confident of his demise, Agent Sonya Blade walks towards the rest of her comrades. This time, there was no way anyone from the Black or Red Dragon would survive. She would see to that.

PICTURE: Sonya in front of the newly-reformed OIA, the surviving agents standing behind her in a neat line. In the background, we can see the Black and Red Dragon flags torn to pieces.

Thanks to her and her allies' amazing success in ridding the world of two of its biggest threats, Sonya rose through her ranks, and became globally known as one of Earthrealm's most effective and powerful protectors. No matter what danger was to rise in the future and pose a threat to humanity, the realm would be in good hands, because no menace can match up to Earthrealm's greatest defense, the Outerworld Investigation Agency.

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Whoo, that was a lengthy one, lmao. Hope you guys like this one as well. Sonya is involved in a few other endings, but this is the one that focuses mainly on her. Let me know what you guys think!

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09/05/2006 12:18 AM EDT
That was awesome.
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09/05/2006 06:36 AM EDT
Man that's tight.... Perfect dude ur the best... Ca't wait for Jax's ending...
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09/05/2006 09:56 AM EDT
Oh man...I couldn't picture a better ending for Sonya !!
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09/05/2006 11:08 AM EDT
Fantastic endings you got there!
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09/05/2006 02:58 PM EDT
Man I can't wait for the next one... just hope it's perfect like the others...C'MON WRITE AN ENDING MAN I'M BAGGING YOU PLZ....wowsad
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09/05/2006 07:31 PM EDT
Wow, these is some great feedback! I'm so happy you guys are enjoying the endings, and are looking forward for more! Thanks a bunch! wink

Here goes the demon-hunter Ashrah, with her insatiable goal to gain a human status and never again be confined to the Netherrealm!

~ ASHRAH ~


The scene starts with the screen following Ahrah's boots as she walks across the sand, making her way among the numerous battles going on around her. We can see that she is, for some reason, having a hard time moving. Slowly, the screen rises and reaches her face. Surprisingly enough, we see that Ashrah's eyes fade to black and her features become grotesque for a brief moment. She falls to her knees, apparantly in a weakened state.

Ashrah (gaping intently at her Kriss): "Damn the demon Ermac... ever since my loss at his hands, I have yet to slay another of his kind..." (Her teeth resemble an Oni's for a second, and she gasps as though in pain). "I cannot allow myself to lose the humanity I have fought to gain to this day!"

Ashrah forces herself to stand back up, and looks around the battlefield. The screen follows her gaze as she notices a few of the fights ocurring near the pyramid. The screen instantly stops, however, to show Noob Saibot dashing across the first level of the pyramid.

Ashrah: "At last I have found him... the demise of one of the Netherrealm's most powerful demons by my Kriss will undoubtedly be enough to strip me from my demonic state!"

Ashrah grips her Kriss firmly and dashes towards the pyramid, with the intent of crossing paths with Noob Saibot, who continues to run across the colossal structure as though fleeing from something. Ashrah reaches the pyramid and races up the flight of stone stairs to the first level. As Noob approached her location, she points the Kriss towards him.

Ashrah: "Stop right there, spawn from the Netherrealm! It is time for you to face your destruction."

Noob Saibot: "You would do well to flee from my sight, woman! I have no intention of wasting my time with meaningless combat!"

Ashrah: "I will never again have a chance as great as this one to certify my banishment from the Netherrealm! Fight, demon, or be killed!"

Ashrah rushes forward and attacks Noob with her Kriss. She is unable to land a hit as she slashes the air with her blade, but before long, successfully slashes the wraith's right arm as Noob attempts to evade one of her attacks. A black smoke-like substance spews from Noob's arm, and he groans in pain. Immediately, he realizes she is a menacing combatant. Ashrah follows up her attack by driving her Kiss forward in an attempt to fatally wound Noob, but he quickly jabs her arm away and strikes Ashrah in the face. At that moment, her eyes once again darken and her demon-like features resurface for a brief moment, once again gravely weakening her. Noob makes the best of the situation, and with an immediate swift motion, he lands a flying kick to the demon hunter, and she is sent tumbling down the pyramid's flight of stairs. Ashrah hits the ground below, sand filling up the screen. Just then, we hear the sound of fast footsteps approaching, followed by a mechanical whirring. Enraged, Ashrah gets back up and intends to continue her battle with Noob. It is interrupted, however, by none other than Smoke, who has just rushed into the scene. Noob now turns his attention to his former partner, as the two begin to fight, with Smoke gaining the upper hand. Ashrah is determined to not allow anyone else to defeat Noob, however, and immediately charges at the duo. The screen shifts to Noob and Smoke. Noob grabs a hold of Smoke's arms, and suddenly the two of them disappear, leaving behind a trail of black smoke. Ashrah looks around intently to locate the wraith. She races around the pyramid frantically. The screen follows her as she seeks her target. In the background, we catch more glimpses of ongoing battles, as well as a collection of souls rising from an obscure location just a small distance from Ashrah.

Ashrah: "You will not escape me, demon!"

When she comes across Noob again, we see Smoke on the floor, sparks flying from his metal chest. Noob stands triumphant before his fallen opponent. He then holds out his right hand, and summons a swirling black mist that takes the form of a Scythe, which materializes in his hands.
Oblivious to Ashrah sneaking up behind him, Noob raises his weapon high above Smoke, only to be stabbed in the back by Ashrah's Kriss. Noob spins around furiously to face his attacker, and we see Smoke taking advantadge of this distraction to escape the scene, apparantly making his way towards an imperceptible warrior in the distance.

Noob: "You are becoming more and more of a nuisance! You leave me with no choice but to finish you off!"

Ashrah takes a step back, looking fretful that her surprise attack was not enough to kill Noob. The wraith grips his Scythe firmly and swings it at Ashrah. In a final attempt to fight for her life, she barely ducks the Scythe's blade and attacks Noob with a combination of fast-paced punches and kicks. Noob seems determined to annihilate the demon-hunter, however, and using his Scythe, stops all of her hits from landing. As Ashrah is thrown off balance by a missed uppercut, Noob hits her forcefully with the back end of his Scythe. Before Ashrah can take the offensive again, he releases a sphere of a black mist at her. The sphere immobilizes Ashrah, who hovers in the air and seems to be ensnared by the strange mist.

Noob: "Back to where you came from!"

In a final, hasty movement of his Scythe, Noob mortally wounds Ashrah, who once again falls to the ground and tumbles down the stone stairs to the sandy ground below. Noob takes out the Kriss from his back and chucks at her lifeless body. The screen fades as the Kriss falls from the stairs as well, a clanking sound echoing as it hits each step gradually. It finally falls next to its former owner, and the screen fades to utter black....

PICTURE: Ashrah kneeled down on the sullied Netherrealm ground, covering her face so that we cannot see it. We notice, however, that the skin of her arm has become almost deformed, and she has developped long, claw-like black fingernails. In the background, we see an image of her Kriss, surrounded by a luminous essense that stands out among the fiery setting of the Netherrealm.

--- Ashrah's death at the hands of Noob Saibot caused her essense to return to the depths of the Netherrealm, from where she belonged, and had stripped her from her human-like appearence. She grieved her damnation, and especially the loss of the holy Kriss, which was her only escape from the wretched realm. Ashrah's mission had indeed failed. Where the blessed Kriss had rematerialized, however, was unknown...

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sad Awww, poor Ashrah... I felt bad killing her off, but I just couldn't picture her as a character with good potential for next-gen. I figured once her dream of ascension from the Netherrealm had been realized, that was it for her.

Lemme know your opinions, guys! grin

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RE: ~~ Self-Made Endings of Final FMV - SONYA ~~
09/05/2006 08:03 PM EDT
Oi leo mas tu so fazes os finais das gajas?
Faz ai o final do Rain.
Tds os finais tao bons
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09/05/2006 08:11 PM EDT
wow

Awesome as usual.
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09/05/2006 08:18 PM EDT
Sonya's ending was superb! I like the way she broke his neck like in the movie. However, I was a little confused about Ashrah's. Was Noob going to kill Smoke? What was that all about? And you made her die! I thought she was one of the better characters from MKD too! lol I wouldn't mind writing a few myself - you have gotten me into the mood to write!
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