Zephyrus Wrote:
Oi leo mas tu so fazes os finais das gajas?
Faz ai o final do Rain.
Tds os finais tao bons
Oi leo mas tu so fazes os finais das gajas?
Faz ai o final do Rain.
Tds os finais tao bons
LoL, I have a little trouble understand Portuguese from Portugal, but I got the message
Legacy Wrote:
Sonya's ending was superb! I like the way she broke his neck like in the movie. However, I was a little confused about Ashrah's. Was Noob going to kill Smoke? What was that all about? And you made her die! I thought she was one of the better characters from MKD too! lol I wouldn't mind writing a few myself - you have gotten me into the mood to write!
Sonya's ending was superb! I like the way she broke his neck like in the movie. However, I was a little confused about Ashrah's. Was Noob going to kill Smoke? What was that all about? And you made her die! I thought she was one of the better characters from MKD too! lol I wouldn't mind writing a few myself - you have gotten me into the mood to write!
I meant to have Smoke be freed from Noob's control by having him re-programmed to follow his own motives, which would include getting Noob back for forcing him to act upon his wishes. And I thought Ashrah was alright, too, but too bland to fit into a new focus in a next-gen KM. Thanks for compliment on Sonya's ending! I particularly enjoyed writing that one.
Hikari715 Wrote:
Awesome as usual.
Awesome as usual.
JediSith Wrote:
You did the right thing, man. I never really saw Ashra killing Noob anyway. Great job man!
You did the right thing, man. I never really saw Ashra killing Noob anyway. Great job man!
Thank you for the compliments, guys! As long as you all continue to like the endings, they'll keep coming, until people start getting sick of reading then (lmao). :)
More to come...
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Great job, here is my little overview on each one...
Mileena: Great job with it. I think that is the best way that the story could have been written if you go on with that Kitana and Mileena rivalry thing. I have always preferred Mileena and Kitana teaming up on Kahn out of desperation, and defeating him. Then they have a neutral bit of respect for one another. However, reading your story, my perception has changed. Great job with it, it was so awsome.
Jade: The worst out of the four, but that is not saying much... it is still awsome
. I thought the way in which you explored this Tanya and jade rivalry thing was interesting, but I would like to see this rivalry go into more detail before Tanya (or Jade) get killed. But I guess that is what the actual MKA storyline is for, huh. I am a little disappointed that there was no interaction with Rain, Kitana, Sindel or even Onaga (the way in which you kept referring to Onaga vs. Kahn made me a little excited I guess), but nonetheless, it was still one of the best Jade Endings I have read for a while.
Sonya: The best of the four IMO. The only problem I had was the fighting bit... you said there was a fight between the two Dragon Clans and the OIA. Then does that mean while Sonya and Jax were taking on Mavado, the rest were:
Red dragon: Hsu Hao
OIA: Cyrax and Kenshi
Black Dragon: Kano, Kabal, Kobra, Kira, Jarek
I dunno... there were too many black dragon people to be versing the rest. However, that is only a VERY minor issue. I still thought that one was awsome, especially the part where Kano and Sonya versed each other one on one. I thought it was really well thought out, and a lot of effort was put into it.
Ashrah: A completely different concept to what I had in mind. I always thought Subby and Ashrah would go against Noob and Smoke with Smoke malfunctioning, leaving Ashrah and Subby to easilt kill Noob and Ashrah earning her ascention. I am not sure how Ashrah got to the Pyramid, she is either stuck in the Netherrealm or she has earnt her ascention, but it is still awsome. And with a character dying in their endings, it shows that the endings are true, which is a good thing.
Overall, I really liked them all - perhaps the four best ideas for those four characters I have ever read. i really thought that you thought outside of the box, and just did an amazing job.
5/5 (P.S. Do Sheeva
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Mileena: Great job with it. I think that is the best way that the story could have been written if you go on with that Kitana and Mileena rivalry thing. I have always preferred Mileena and Kitana teaming up on Kahn out of desperation, and defeating him. Then they have a neutral bit of respect for one another. However, reading your story, my perception has changed. Great job with it, it was so awsome.
Jade: The worst out of the four, but that is not saying much... it is still awsome
Sonya: The best of the four IMO. The only problem I had was the fighting bit... you said there was a fight between the two Dragon Clans and the OIA. Then does that mean while Sonya and Jax were taking on Mavado, the rest were:
Red dragon: Hsu Hao
OIA: Cyrax and Kenshi
Black Dragon: Kano, Kabal, Kobra, Kira, Jarek
I dunno... there were too many black dragon people to be versing the rest. However, that is only a VERY minor issue. I still thought that one was awsome, especially the part where Kano and Sonya versed each other one on one. I thought it was really well thought out, and a lot of effort was put into it.
Ashrah: A completely different concept to what I had in mind. I always thought Subby and Ashrah would go against Noob and Smoke with Smoke malfunctioning, leaving Ashrah and Subby to easilt kill Noob and Ashrah earning her ascention. I am not sure how Ashrah got to the Pyramid, she is either stuck in the Netherrealm or she has earnt her ascention, but it is still awsome. And with a character dying in their endings, it shows that the endings are true, which is a good thing.
Overall, I really liked them all - perhaps the four best ideas for those four characters I have ever read. i really thought that you thought outside of the box, and just did an amazing job.
5/5 (P.S. Do Sheeva
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wow these are really cool! yeah i didnt really get the part about smoke either but yay! you killed ashrah!... i never liked the big pyramid battle in the first place but these endings are starting to make me reconsider it a bit lol
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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Here's Rain's ending by request (Yes, I am paying close attention not only to all the comments, but also to the requests for endings).
~ RAIN ~
The scene starts as we get a bird's-eye-view of a large boulder. In the background, we hear the shouts and racket of the countless battles going on simultaneously. The camera starts to slowly zoom into the boulder. Suddenly, we see Kitana crashing through the boulder, apparantly having been hurled into it. Once she lands on the ground, she loses consciousness instantly, and we can also notice the large cut on her torso from Mileena's Sai.
The screen quickly shifts position to show the emperor Shao Khan, holding Queen Sindel by the neck and choking her. Sindel gasps for air and struggles to break free from Khan's grasp, but has no results. The screen slowly spins around and focuses on Khan's face, his eyes gleaming red through his Skull Helmet. Unexpectedly, we see a small pool of water rise from the sandy ground behind Shao Khan and take a human shape. Rain has materialized. Wasting no time, he opens up his right hand and touches Shao Khan's back. Instantly, we hear a loud thunder-like sound, and Shao Khan is shocked as though by lightning, shouting in pain. Dazed from Rain's assault, he drops Sindel to the ground and falls to his knees. The queen rubs her neck and gasps for air. Rain delivers a powerful kick to Shao Khan's side before he can get back to his feet, and sends the emperor sliding across the ground.
Rain: "Queen Sindel, you must escape from here immediately! You are in no condition to continue this battle, and two of Khan's allies are fast approaching to aid their master!"
Sindel (her voice sounding raspy): "No! I refuse to willingly allow Shao Khan this victory! It is time to put an end to his reign once and for all!"
Rain: "But my queen, you--"
Rain's statement is cut short as he suffers a deathly tackle from Shao Khan, who has regained his strength. The ninja refuses to be brought down so easily, however, and with an impressive motion, regains his balance. Rain raises his hands high in the air and brings a fast-paced lightning bolt down towards Shao Khan. As a counterattack, Khan raises his helmet high above his head, and allows it to be hit by the lightning bolt. Bolts of electricity start circling Khan's weapon, and he forcefully smashes it into the ground, creating a crevice amid the sandy soil that seems to spew bolts of electricity upwards. The crevice runs at an amazing speed across the ground and reaches Rain, who is knocked backwards by the electric projectiles emitting from it. Sindel starts to get back up slowly.
Shao Khan: "Curious that you would turn your back on your master after aiding him in past ordeals..."
Rain (forcing himself to regain his strength): "I was a fool to betray my home realm! But had I known that you caused my father's death, I would have preferred death over following your orders!"
As though having lost interest in Sindel, Khan starts making his way towards Rain.
Shao Khan: "It is true that your father was a feeble Edenian general... but one I thing I cannot deny is that he was a brave individual." (He continues walking towards Rain, cradling his War Hammer. Rain now begins to back away). "He willingly accepted death by my hands when offered the choice of joining me. Too bad his son lacks such courage. You are traitor to your own realm, you imbecile! Nothing will ever change that."
Rain: "ENOUGH!" (He assumes his fighting stance) "Leave the queen be! You will battle ME now!"
Khan has a hearty laugh at this.
Shao Khan: "I think you have... bigger things to worry about."
A pair of colossal, fringed hands suddenly wraps themselves around Rain's stomach and tightens its grip. Rain yelps in pain as Kintaro raises him high above his head, then flings him into a nearby boulder.
Shao Khan: "Have fun with that excuse for a warrior!"
Khan resumes his battle with Sindel (who had just attempted to strike him from behind unnoticed). The camera turns and now focuses on Rain, who stars to get back up as the menacing Shokan Kintaro approaches him. We catch a brief glimpse of Goro also charging into battle against Bo' Rai Cho as he approached the unconscious Kitana. Kintaro reaches Rain and sends his lower arms angrily towards him, but does not land the hit as his target teleports in the knick of time and rematerializes behind the Shokan. With a huge leap, Rain hits Kintaro in the back with his "Windy Feet" flying kick. As the Shokan spins around with another wave of his powerful arms, Rain ducks them and performs an acrobatic backflip, landing a mighty kick to the monster's jaw. Before Rain can get his feet back onto the ground, however, Kintaro grabs them both and leaps into the air. All Rain can do is helplessly struggle to free himself as the 8-foot-tall warrior uses all of his might to slam Rain onto the hard terrain, creating a gaping hole. As though in a fit of rage, Kintaro continues the attack by landing a devastating kick to Rain, then picking him back up before he can react and hurling him into the far ground once again. We see that the two fighters are now far from Khan's battle area. Rain now appears to be knocked out, so Kintaro chuckles proudly and picks the fallen ninja by up by the waist with his upper arms, in order to make sure he is dead. With impressive speed, Rain shoots his "Water Spray" as he gets close enough to Kintaro's face, and the projectile hits the monster in the eyes. Screaming in pain, Kintaro lets go of his opponent, who falls to the floor on his feet. Rain groans in pain and rubs his arm, feeling the effects of Kintaro's blows. He knows he can't take much more of this, and so cannot allow himself to be overpowered again. He charges at Kintaro and throws two speedy punches, which are blocked by the creature's lower arms. Using his two free arms, Kintaro clamps his hands together in an attempt to crush his opponent's skull. Rain is quick to react as he evades the lethal attack, teleports into the air, and falls with a kick to Kintaro's face that lands in full. While Kintaro puts his arms to his face, Rain sums up a large amount of what energy he has left and lands an uppercut to his midsection. Giving his attacker no chance to land another hit, Rain takes out his Storm Sword, jumps over and ducks under two of Kintaro's incoming punches, then slashes his right leg with his weapon. Kintaro roars in pain and anger, and almost falls backwards. In hopes of completely annihilating Rain, he brings all of his four arms onto the ground. Rain jumps into the air to avoid this attack that would have killed him and lands on Kintaro's arms for a brief second. The scene goes into relative slow motion as Rain suddenly throws himself forward. We get a great shot of him as he gets close to Kintaro's face, and Kintaro's mouth wide as he roars furiously. Rain slashes the Shokan's throat with his weapon, and the scene returns to standard pace as he falls back to the floor and rolls to regain balance. Kintaro now falls behind Rain, a pool of blood accumulating under him. We get a close-up shot of Rain's face. Although half-covered, we can tell he has a strange expression on his face. Rain turns around slowly and looks behind him. The screen shows us what he sees: two now-indistinctable shadows locked in battle. Rain gives this scene a long, hard look, then faces foward once more, and walks away from Kintaro's corpse...
PICTURE: The picture shows Kitana standing on one of the Edenian palace's balcony, curiously staring down onto the lake beneat her. We also see Jade standing right behind her, placing her left hand on Kitana's shoulder. In the background, we see Rain's face unmasked, his image translucent.
--- Although Rain had his part in the newly-found peace that had befallen the realm of Edenia, he was still plagued by the immense guilt he felt from aiding Shao Khan in the past. Although he returned to his home realm, he remained hidden, possibly out of fear for lack of acceptance by the rest of Edenia's residents, who would never forget the events concerning Shao Khan's era of power. Still, he watched from afar as Kitana took her place as the new Queen of Edenia and reformed the army that Rain's father once was a part of. He knew that soon, he would encounter Kitana face-to-face once again, and would not only request a place in her reknowed army, but would also thank her for opening his eyes so many years ago... ---
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Boo-Hoo, how sentimental (LoL) - There ya go guys, Rain's ending, which I hope gave some more depth and meaning to his otherwise bland MK story so far. Hope you enjoy immersing yourselves into this one as well
Keep stating your opinions, guys, I love reading them all!
The scene starts as we get a bird's-eye-view of a large boulder. In the background, we hear the shouts and racket of the countless battles going on simultaneously. The camera starts to slowly zoom into the boulder. Suddenly, we see Kitana crashing through the boulder, apparantly having been hurled into it. Once she lands on the ground, she loses consciousness instantly, and we can also notice the large cut on her torso from Mileena's Sai.
The screen quickly shifts position to show the emperor Shao Khan, holding Queen Sindel by the neck and choking her. Sindel gasps for air and struggles to break free from Khan's grasp, but has no results. The screen slowly spins around and focuses on Khan's face, his eyes gleaming red through his Skull Helmet. Unexpectedly, we see a small pool of water rise from the sandy ground behind Shao Khan and take a human shape. Rain has materialized. Wasting no time, he opens up his right hand and touches Shao Khan's back. Instantly, we hear a loud thunder-like sound, and Shao Khan is shocked as though by lightning, shouting in pain. Dazed from Rain's assault, he drops Sindel to the ground and falls to his knees. The queen rubs her neck and gasps for air. Rain delivers a powerful kick to Shao Khan's side before he can get back to his feet, and sends the emperor sliding across the ground.
Rain: "Queen Sindel, you must escape from here immediately! You are in no condition to continue this battle, and two of Khan's allies are fast approaching to aid their master!"
Sindel (her voice sounding raspy): "No! I refuse to willingly allow Shao Khan this victory! It is time to put an end to his reign once and for all!"
Rain: "But my queen, you--"
Rain's statement is cut short as he suffers a deathly tackle from Shao Khan, who has regained his strength. The ninja refuses to be brought down so easily, however, and with an impressive motion, regains his balance. Rain raises his hands high in the air and brings a fast-paced lightning bolt down towards Shao Khan. As a counterattack, Khan raises his helmet high above his head, and allows it to be hit by the lightning bolt. Bolts of electricity start circling Khan's weapon, and he forcefully smashes it into the ground, creating a crevice amid the sandy soil that seems to spew bolts of electricity upwards. The crevice runs at an amazing speed across the ground and reaches Rain, who is knocked backwards by the electric projectiles emitting from it. Sindel starts to get back up slowly.
Shao Khan: "Curious that you would turn your back on your master after aiding him in past ordeals..."
Rain (forcing himself to regain his strength): "I was a fool to betray my home realm! But had I known that you caused my father's death, I would have preferred death over following your orders!"
As though having lost interest in Sindel, Khan starts making his way towards Rain.
Shao Khan: "It is true that your father was a feeble Edenian general... but one I thing I cannot deny is that he was a brave individual." (He continues walking towards Rain, cradling his War Hammer. Rain now begins to back away). "He willingly accepted death by my hands when offered the choice of joining me. Too bad his son lacks such courage. You are traitor to your own realm, you imbecile! Nothing will ever change that."
Rain: "ENOUGH!" (He assumes his fighting stance) "Leave the queen be! You will battle ME now!"
Khan has a hearty laugh at this.
Shao Khan: "I think you have... bigger things to worry about."
A pair of colossal, fringed hands suddenly wraps themselves around Rain's stomach and tightens its grip. Rain yelps in pain as Kintaro raises him high above his head, then flings him into a nearby boulder.
Shao Khan: "Have fun with that excuse for a warrior!"
Khan resumes his battle with Sindel (who had just attempted to strike him from behind unnoticed). The camera turns and now focuses on Rain, who stars to get back up as the menacing Shokan Kintaro approaches him. We catch a brief glimpse of Goro also charging into battle against Bo' Rai Cho as he approached the unconscious Kitana. Kintaro reaches Rain and sends his lower arms angrily towards him, but does not land the hit as his target teleports in the knick of time and rematerializes behind the Shokan. With a huge leap, Rain hits Kintaro in the back with his "Windy Feet" flying kick. As the Shokan spins around with another wave of his powerful arms, Rain ducks them and performs an acrobatic backflip, landing a mighty kick to the monster's jaw. Before Rain can get his feet back onto the ground, however, Kintaro grabs them both and leaps into the air. All Rain can do is helplessly struggle to free himself as the 8-foot-tall warrior uses all of his might to slam Rain onto the hard terrain, creating a gaping hole. As though in a fit of rage, Kintaro continues the attack by landing a devastating kick to Rain, then picking him back up before he can react and hurling him into the far ground once again. We see that the two fighters are now far from Khan's battle area. Rain now appears to be knocked out, so Kintaro chuckles proudly and picks the fallen ninja by up by the waist with his upper arms, in order to make sure he is dead. With impressive speed, Rain shoots his "Water Spray" as he gets close enough to Kintaro's face, and the projectile hits the monster in the eyes. Screaming in pain, Kintaro lets go of his opponent, who falls to the floor on his feet. Rain groans in pain and rubs his arm, feeling the effects of Kintaro's blows. He knows he can't take much more of this, and so cannot allow himself to be overpowered again. He charges at Kintaro and throws two speedy punches, which are blocked by the creature's lower arms. Using his two free arms, Kintaro clamps his hands together in an attempt to crush his opponent's skull. Rain is quick to react as he evades the lethal attack, teleports into the air, and falls with a kick to Kintaro's face that lands in full. While Kintaro puts his arms to his face, Rain sums up a large amount of what energy he has left and lands an uppercut to his midsection. Giving his attacker no chance to land another hit, Rain takes out his Storm Sword, jumps over and ducks under two of Kintaro's incoming punches, then slashes his right leg with his weapon. Kintaro roars in pain and anger, and almost falls backwards. In hopes of completely annihilating Rain, he brings all of his four arms onto the ground. Rain jumps into the air to avoid this attack that would have killed him and lands on Kintaro's arms for a brief second. The scene goes into relative slow motion as Rain suddenly throws himself forward. We get a great shot of him as he gets close to Kintaro's face, and Kintaro's mouth wide as he roars furiously. Rain slashes the Shokan's throat with his weapon, and the scene returns to standard pace as he falls back to the floor and rolls to regain balance. Kintaro now falls behind Rain, a pool of blood accumulating under him. We get a close-up shot of Rain's face. Although half-covered, we can tell he has a strange expression on his face. Rain turns around slowly and looks behind him. The screen shows us what he sees: two now-indistinctable shadows locked in battle. Rain gives this scene a long, hard look, then faces foward once more, and walks away from Kintaro's corpse...
PICTURE: The picture shows Kitana standing on one of the Edenian palace's balcony, curiously staring down onto the lake beneat her. We also see Jade standing right behind her, placing her left hand on Kitana's shoulder. In the background, we see Rain's face unmasked, his image translucent.
--- Although Rain had his part in the newly-found peace that had befallen the realm of Edenia, he was still plagued by the immense guilt he felt from aiding Shao Khan in the past. Although he returned to his home realm, he remained hidden, possibly out of fear for lack of acceptance by the rest of Edenia's residents, who would never forget the events concerning Shao Khan's era of power. Still, he watched from afar as Kitana took her place as the new Queen of Edenia and reformed the army that Rain's father once was a part of. He knew that soon, he would encounter Kitana face-to-face once again, and would not only request a place in her reknowed army, but would also thank her for opening his eyes so many years ago... ---
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Boo-Hoo, how sentimental (LoL) - There ya go guys, Rain's ending, which I hope gave some more depth and meaning to his otherwise bland MK story so far. Hope you enjoy immersing yourselves into this one as well
Keep stating your opinions, guys, I love reading them all!
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Fantastic stuff! Keep them up!
PS: After Sheeva, do Kitana.
PS: After Sheeva, do Kitana.
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JediSith Wrote:
Keep it up, this is awsome. I like the slow motion part.
P.S. Shao Kahn is one bad motha'.....
Keep it up, this is awsome. I like the slow motion part.
P.S. Shao Kahn is one bad motha'.....
Thanks, and yeah, he definately is - one of the top reasons why I think he's the ultimate MK Boss!
deathgrave Wrote:
heh i liked them all, especially Rains, but not so much Sonya as i really wanted Sonya to die at the hands of Kano for once.
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heh i liked them all, especially Rains, but not so much Sonya as i really wanted Sonya to die at the hands of Kano for once.
Requesting Kabal and/or Reptile
LoL, I wouldn't have the heart to kill Sonya off. And besides, it's been proven that she bests Kano in one-on-one kombat.
TheSoulOfErmac Wrote:
Hey these are very well written, the detail is immense and can accurately depict the images of your writing in my mind. Great read, keep up the good work! My request after the others would be Kung Lao. Too many to name off but I'd say Kung Lao first.
Hey these are very well written, the detail is immense and can accurately depict the images of your writing in my mind. Great read, keep up the good work! My request after the others would be Kung Lao. Too many to name off but I'd say Kung Lao first.
Thanks a lot!
Keep posting your thoughts, guys, they're all welcome and much appreciated! More to come soon...
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Amazing job - absolutely flawless. I like how you used kintaro against Rain - he wont really have many other people to interact with, so kill off here .
The story itself was very well written, and I got a real sense of what Rain is all about from it. I also like how you used his moves in the storyline. All that I can say is it was faultless...
5/5
The story itself was very well written, and I got a real sense of what Rain is all about from it. I also like how you used his moves in the storyline. All that I can say is it was faultless...
5/5
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F**** awsome man... Great storyline...
5/5
P.S. plz make JAX'S ending i am falling to your knees man i am bagging you plzzzz!!!!
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P.S. plz make JAX'S ending i am falling to your knees man i am bagging you plzzzz!!!!
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These are so cool u should do all the characters and continue when MKA comes out
What's up, guys. Here's Jax's ending by request!
~ JAX ~
The scene starts with a close-up shot focusing on a particular area of the rough terrain in which the final battles are taking place. We hear many faint yells coming from other battles that seem to be ocurring at a distance, as a small pebble falls on the area we are seeing. Then (almost with a startling suddenness) we hear a loud, close-up yell from Mavado as he crashes onto the ground. As the dust clears, we see him lying on the bottom of a large hole the impact created, a small gash on the side of his face. The screen zooms into his face slowly and soon reveals Jax's right metal arm as it grasps Mavado's throat and raises him back up. We now get a shot of Jax's triumphant expression, as Mavado helplessly attempts to break free. We now see Sonya Blade as she holds onto Jax's right shoulder and flips over it, her boot striking Mavado in full. The head of the Red Dragon collapses once again onto the hole on the ground. Jax approaches.
Jax: "Oooh, you're done now, punk!"
Jax prepares to bring his metal arms down on the fallen Mavado and finish him, but his action is cut short as none other than Hsu Hao rushes to the scene, and tackles Jax. We catch a brief glimpse of Sonya's surprised reaction before the screen quickly follows her partner and Hsu Hao as they fall to the floor. Hsu Hao manages to get back up quickly, but Jax (who was caught by the attack unexpectedly) is sent sliding across the floor.
Hsu Hao: "The Red Dragon will live on!" (Hsu Hao laughs crazily) "Who's the punk now, huh?"
Hsu Hao continues to laugh proudly, but barely has time to catch his breath as a red laser catches his left arm, pierces through it, and continues its course off-camera. He yells in agonizing pain and holds his arm tightly, losing balance and falling to his knees. Jax gets back onto his feet, and as we get a shot of his face, we notice an extremely angry expression overcoming it as he glares intently at Hsu Hao (who is still gripping his injured arm). Amazingly enough, Jax seems to pay absolutely no attention to the source of that red laser, as he abruptly charges at Hsu Hao, shouting furiously. The Mongolian Red Dragon member only has time to look up for a fraction of a second before he sees Jax's metal fist close in and strike his nose at an alarming pace. We see drops of blood fall onto the sand before Hsu Hao himself lands on top of them. Now that he has let go of his left arm, we see that the laser burned a hole through it. Hsu Hao scurries back as Jax approaches him once more, then forces himself to stand back up. Jax does not stop walking, however, and surprisingly enough, Hsu Hao looks frightened. He now starts to act out of desperation for his life: he leaps into the air and brings his right fist down towards Jax, who blocks it without difficulty. From this attack the battle begins.
Although Hsu Hao stays on the offensive for a good while, he is unable to land a full hit on Jax, who is having no problem evading and defending himself from his attacks (Jax also continues walking forward, and Hsu Hao is forced to attack as he backs up simultaneously). Soon enough, Hsu Hao tires from all his failed attacks, and Jax has more than enough time to land a powerful uppercut to his opponent. Hsu Hao throws another sequence of jabs at Jax, but is met with a kick to the stomach. He doubles over holding his midsection. Jax immediately jumps into the air and, as he falls back down, elbows Hsu Hao in the back of the head, and he falls face-down onto the ground, seemingly knocked out. Jax takes out his machine gun that was strapped to his belt and aims it at Hsu Hao's body. Realizing what's coming his way, Hsu Hao reacts quickly with all his remaining power to kick the gun from Jax's hands. As the gun slides across the ground, Hsu Hao takes out his Sun-Moon blades, and swipes it at Jax's legs. The blades cut Jax's right knee and scrapes his left ankle, and the OIA agent, caught by surprise by Hsu Hao's weapon, bends down and brings his hands to his wound. Hsu Hao gets back onto his feet with a devastating kick that reaches its target; Jax is thrown off balance from the blow and falls on his back.
Hsu Hao: "Ha ha! Mavado might just make ME head of the Red Dragon when I present your corpse to him!" (He laughs crazily once more). "I promise to bury you next to the rest of the agency's scum who died in that blast!"
We get a close up shot of Jax on the floor; he grits his teeth and trembles slightly with pure fury. Hsu Hao then charges at his fallen opponent with the intention of finishing him off with his Sun-Moon Blades. He is thoroughly unsuccessfully however; Jax sits back up just in time and uppercuts the Red Dragon member in the stomach. He does so with such power that Hsu Hao is seen dangling off his feet from Jax's right arm. Blood flows from his open mouth as Jax simply brings his cupped right hand to the floor and crashes Hsu Hao down onto it once more.
Jax: "Bad move pissing me off... punk!"
Jax grabs a hold of both of Hsu Hao's hands (which are still firmly gripping his blades) and then slowly bring them both towards Hsu Hao's throat. The criminal tries with all his might to stop Jax, but is overpowered. Jax continues to bring Hsu Hao's own blades closer and closer to his throat; they finally reach it, and very gradually start cutting through it. Hsu Hao yells in pain, but at last, manages to stop Jax when he lands a kick to the agent's back. Jax rolls to the floor. Hsu Hao then shouts with rage, and with almost newfound energy, hurries towards Jax and beings to land a combination of punches that successfully hit his target. Jax has had enough...
All Hsu Hao feels is a stinging sensation on his left arm as Jax grabs a hold of it and squeezes the injured area. Jax throws Hsu Hao to the ground, then leaps into the air once more, and summoning up all of his impressive might, lands his Ground Pound full on Hsu Hao's face. All we hear is a sickening noise, and Hsu Hao now remains motionless.
Jax takes a moment to catch his breath, then looks to his right and sees his partner Sonya boasting a fast combination of attacks onto a muddled Jarek.
Jax: "That's my girl..."
He walks over to join Sonya in crushing the remaining Red and Black Dragons.
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PICTURE: In the picture, we see Jax standing next to Sonya and putting his arm around her shoulder as the duo look onto the newly-reformed Outerworld Investigation Agency. In the background covering the sky, we see a mysterious black-and-white photo of the Black Dragon member Kira, along with a file containing her information.
Along with his partner Sonya Blade, Jax was finally able to reconstruct the previously-destroyed Outerworld Investigation Agency, assured that it would not come under hazard for a long time. The future of Earthrealm's most powerful defense looked bright at last, as it became reknowned throughout all realms as the biggest obstacle to all wishing to put the Earth in danger. However, Jax knew that there would still be much to do in the future... due to the events previous to the agency's restoration, he was not able to make sure that the Black Dragons Kabal and Kira had been killed for sure. And his newest discovery concerning the female criminal was nothing short of unsettling...
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Wow, Jax is one bad son of a mother, lol! I loved how, in Unchained, he had such a mysterious anger swelled up inside of him that could be unleashed at any moment, so I decided to explore this idea further in his MK:A ending. Interesting one, huh? *dun dun dun* (lol)
Let me know, guys!
The scene starts with a close-up shot focusing on a particular area of the rough terrain in which the final battles are taking place. We hear many faint yells coming from other battles that seem to be ocurring at a distance, as a small pebble falls on the area we are seeing. Then (almost with a startling suddenness) we hear a loud, close-up yell from Mavado as he crashes onto the ground. As the dust clears, we see him lying on the bottom of a large hole the impact created, a small gash on the side of his face. The screen zooms into his face slowly and soon reveals Jax's right metal arm as it grasps Mavado's throat and raises him back up. We now get a shot of Jax's triumphant expression, as Mavado helplessly attempts to break free. We now see Sonya Blade as she holds onto Jax's right shoulder and flips over it, her boot striking Mavado in full. The head of the Red Dragon collapses once again onto the hole on the ground. Jax approaches.
Jax: "Oooh, you're done now, punk!"
Jax prepares to bring his metal arms down on the fallen Mavado and finish him, but his action is cut short as none other than Hsu Hao rushes to the scene, and tackles Jax. We catch a brief glimpse of Sonya's surprised reaction before the screen quickly follows her partner and Hsu Hao as they fall to the floor. Hsu Hao manages to get back up quickly, but Jax (who was caught by the attack unexpectedly) is sent sliding across the floor.
Hsu Hao: "The Red Dragon will live on!" (Hsu Hao laughs crazily) "Who's the punk now, huh?"
Hsu Hao continues to laugh proudly, but barely has time to catch his breath as a red laser catches his left arm, pierces through it, and continues its course off-camera. He yells in agonizing pain and holds his arm tightly, losing balance and falling to his knees. Jax gets back onto his feet, and as we get a shot of his face, we notice an extremely angry expression overcoming it as he glares intently at Hsu Hao (who is still gripping his injured arm). Amazingly enough, Jax seems to pay absolutely no attention to the source of that red laser, as he abruptly charges at Hsu Hao, shouting furiously. The Mongolian Red Dragon member only has time to look up for a fraction of a second before he sees Jax's metal fist close in and strike his nose at an alarming pace. We see drops of blood fall onto the sand before Hsu Hao himself lands on top of them. Now that he has let go of his left arm, we see that the laser burned a hole through it. Hsu Hao scurries back as Jax approaches him once more, then forces himself to stand back up. Jax does not stop walking, however, and surprisingly enough, Hsu Hao looks frightened. He now starts to act out of desperation for his life: he leaps into the air and brings his right fist down towards Jax, who blocks it without difficulty. From this attack the battle begins.
Although Hsu Hao stays on the offensive for a good while, he is unable to land a full hit on Jax, who is having no problem evading and defending himself from his attacks (Jax also continues walking forward, and Hsu Hao is forced to attack as he backs up simultaneously). Soon enough, Hsu Hao tires from all his failed attacks, and Jax has more than enough time to land a powerful uppercut to his opponent. Hsu Hao throws another sequence of jabs at Jax, but is met with a kick to the stomach. He doubles over holding his midsection. Jax immediately jumps into the air and, as he falls back down, elbows Hsu Hao in the back of the head, and he falls face-down onto the ground, seemingly knocked out. Jax takes out his machine gun that was strapped to his belt and aims it at Hsu Hao's body. Realizing what's coming his way, Hsu Hao reacts quickly with all his remaining power to kick the gun from Jax's hands. As the gun slides across the ground, Hsu Hao takes out his Sun-Moon blades, and swipes it at Jax's legs. The blades cut Jax's right knee and scrapes his left ankle, and the OIA agent, caught by surprise by Hsu Hao's weapon, bends down and brings his hands to his wound. Hsu Hao gets back onto his feet with a devastating kick that reaches its target; Jax is thrown off balance from the blow and falls on his back.
Hsu Hao: "Ha ha! Mavado might just make ME head of the Red Dragon when I present your corpse to him!" (He laughs crazily once more). "I promise to bury you next to the rest of the agency's scum who died in that blast!"
We get a close up shot of Jax on the floor; he grits his teeth and trembles slightly with pure fury. Hsu Hao then charges at his fallen opponent with the intention of finishing him off with his Sun-Moon Blades. He is thoroughly unsuccessfully however; Jax sits back up just in time and uppercuts the Red Dragon member in the stomach. He does so with such power that Hsu Hao is seen dangling off his feet from Jax's right arm. Blood flows from his open mouth as Jax simply brings his cupped right hand to the floor and crashes Hsu Hao down onto it once more.
Jax: "Bad move pissing me off... punk!"
Jax grabs a hold of both of Hsu Hao's hands (which are still firmly gripping his blades) and then slowly bring them both towards Hsu Hao's throat. The criminal tries with all his might to stop Jax, but is overpowered. Jax continues to bring Hsu Hao's own blades closer and closer to his throat; they finally reach it, and very gradually start cutting through it. Hsu Hao yells in pain, but at last, manages to stop Jax when he lands a kick to the agent's back. Jax rolls to the floor. Hsu Hao then shouts with rage, and with almost newfound energy, hurries towards Jax and beings to land a combination of punches that successfully hit his target. Jax has had enough...
All Hsu Hao feels is a stinging sensation on his left arm as Jax grabs a hold of it and squeezes the injured area. Jax throws Hsu Hao to the ground, then leaps into the air once more, and summoning up all of his impressive might, lands his Ground Pound full on Hsu Hao's face. All we hear is a sickening noise, and Hsu Hao now remains motionless.
Jax takes a moment to catch his breath, then looks to his right and sees his partner Sonya boasting a fast combination of attacks onto a muddled Jarek.
Jax: "That's my girl..."
He walks over to join Sonya in crushing the remaining Red and Black Dragons.
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PICTURE: In the picture, we see Jax standing next to Sonya and putting his arm around her shoulder as the duo look onto the newly-reformed Outerworld Investigation Agency. In the background covering the sky, we see a mysterious black-and-white photo of the Black Dragon member Kira, along with a file containing her information.
Along with his partner Sonya Blade, Jax was finally able to reconstruct the previously-destroyed Outerworld Investigation Agency, assured that it would not come under hazard for a long time. The future of Earthrealm's most powerful defense looked bright at last, as it became reknowned throughout all realms as the biggest obstacle to all wishing to put the Earth in danger. However, Jax knew that there would still be much to do in the future... due to the events previous to the agency's restoration, he was not able to make sure that the Black Dragons Kabal and Kira had been killed for sure. And his newest discovery concerning the female criminal was nothing short of unsettling...
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Wow, Jax is one bad son of a mother, lol! I loved how, in Unchained, he had such a mysterious anger swelled up inside of him that could be unleashed at any moment, so I decided to explore this idea further in his MK:A ending. Interesting one, huh?
Let me know, guys!
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I actually thought about having him finish Hsu Hao off by ripping out the artificial heart and breaking it into pieces by smashing it down on the defeated Hsu Hao. But as I got to the end, I thought most people would prefer to not have the same death from DA happen again, and would have thought it was a bit repetitive...
Guess I was completely wrong
Guess I was completely wrong
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