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11/12/2003 08:44 PM (UTC)
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subzero961 Wrote:
so is it safe to assume the dragon king takes khameleon as a bride since she was not killed off.


LOL. I forgot about her, so Ill just say she was killed during Shao Kahn’s war in Outworld (so was the other Chameleon even if he doesn’t count)

Irine4 Wrote:
Your not hearing any bashing from me. I think this is outstanding. You description was superib. I would like to see what happens if the hero's win and at the same time final mortal kombat idea.

P.S. You know you can submit this to www.fanfiction.net. They maybe interested in this.


Thanks a lot Irine4! :) Im glad U liked it, I will work on a similar story with the good guys winning soon.

About the fanfiction.net thing, LOL, Ill only submit it cause U said it would actually be interesting to them, I didn’t see this to be that good, Im happy U all liked it.

Thanks :)!
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LiuKangLIves
11/12/2003 11:41 PM (UTC)
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Great ending.
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-its not tradgic to die doing something you love...

11/13/2003 01:08 AM (UTC)
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I LOVED IT,it was great i love how you told how the world would live in hell.But i think the dragon king sould have been killed by someone like ....a new charecter stronger and faster then the dragon king yet not a male.I think that his queen whom ever it may be sould betray him and in a brutal matter.And this chick sould be the shit like a female sorcrer and she kills her armys and steals their souls and ever one centars and other outworld mutants leaveing only a few alive to starta a whole new story line in which new charecters would be introduced and the she can still be killed and all the old charecters could come out if the new story becomes gay.
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11/13/2003 03:36 AM (UTC)
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cybernetica Wrote:
I LOVED IT,it was great i love how you told how the world would live in hell.But i think the dragon king sould have been killed by someone like ....a new charecter stronger and faster then the dragon king yet not a male.I think that his queen whom ever it may be sould betray him and in a brutal matter.And this chick sould be the shit like a female sorcrer and she kills her armys and steals their souls and ever one centars and other outworld mutants leaveing only a few alive to starta a whole new story line in which new charecters would be introduced and the she can still be killed and all the old charecters could come out if the new story becomes gay.


Thank you cybernetica ! :) Im really glad U liked it, and I must say I love the way U think. I mean, on the part of having a brutal female win Mk and become the champion. I would actually like a lot to see a female win Mk, it would be cool, something different for a change. Thanks again!

LiuKangLives Wrote:
Great ending.


Thanks LiuKangLives! :)
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queve
12/23/2003 02:30 PM (UTC)
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Another story will be coming soon! :)
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new forum http://s11.invisionfree.com/ultimaterevange/index.php?act=idx

12/29/2003 03:57 AM (UTC)
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i have a way to end it shao kahn comes bak and kills the dragon king and rules all worlds with shinnok and shinnok eventully kills shao kahn
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outworld222
12/29/2003 04:17 AM (UTC)
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Perhaps thats in the future Snake, maybe in mk7 or 8?
Personally, I think mk comes up with new and provoking final bosses every few mk games. Lets just give the dragon King a chance and see shang tsung from mk1 and shao khan as extremely good and classic bosses.
thats my two cents.
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toxicvirus
03/15/2004 07:05 PM (UTC)
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OH MY GOD...

I need to say this is one of the best stories I have ever heard!!!!

It is completely awesome! You should post this again dude. I loved the way you used dark words and killed everyone!!!

Awesome stuff. I would give you a 10/10 points.
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deathring
03/15/2004 07:26 PM (UTC)
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WOW.

This is amazing! You should write more!!! I love it!

The way you killed my favorite character was awesome! I loved it. *_*

Wonderful thread.
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03/15/2004 07:52 PM (UTC)
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if queves story were the end story i would want all my favorite characters getting killed Hell i killed them playing the game, and to see that much story in video on screen would be cool
Versatile Wrote:
Even if this was just a story for the end of MK I still don't like it. I wouldn't want my favorite characters ever to be slaughtered. The end of MK should be a beautiful thing, not a massacre.

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mangatropi
03/15/2004 08:10 PM (UTC)
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Pretty good story, though it was dark a little.
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Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
03/15/2004 09:06 PM (UTC)
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This was AMAZING, man! Death and destruction at its creative best. Excellent work. If this was a real ending to MK it would be great. The series finishing in such a dramatic way would be unbelievable. This ending could give way to the new era o fighters.

Although the one thing wrong with all of that was this. You KILLED Raiden! LOL I'm joking man, but you saw that coming! lol wink I like how you killed him and everyone else. And I noticed how you saved Sonya until last! hehe wink
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SonyaBladeFan
03/15/2004 09:23 PM (UTC)
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WoW that was great and scary at the same time i love it but i dont want that to happen lol but it was great !!!
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Dark_No0B
03/15/2004 09:26 PM (UTC)
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That was sweet, i could really feel that happening. Great work.
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queve
03/15/2004 09:51 PM (UTC)
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WOW, thanks guys!

I cant beilive this is still alive! I have edited the story and corrected a few mistakes. I feel so happy so many people liked this, that I will make a new one right now!

Thanks guys!
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Grizzle
03/16/2004 02:37 AM (UTC)
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I like how Cage went out, he like had some sweet loving by Sonya and fought mad hard till he died. He ripped Nitara apart, killed Oni, and killed Moloch. That was sick, he was also the second to last guy to die.

I didn't like how Sub-Zero died, he was tortured by Mavado when Sareena betrayed him? actually I take that back, that was awsome!

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03/16/2004 02:40 AM (UTC)
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that is really good i like it good job (i could never think of something this good sadly i am a moron)




Ryu Is Cool
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queve
03/16/2004 02:53 AM (UTC)
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Thanks guys! You are all very nice. Im glad you all liked it. You can check my new story here. Its actually similar but improved with better grammar and NEW twists.

It has to do more with Deception....

http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?name=mk6&message;=37320
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izzy_daman
03/16/2004 03:26 AM (UTC)
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Queve, because you're really good at writing stories, I was wondering if you could write one like this only with Kahn beating the shit out of the DK and FINALLY reining supreme. If you do I'll be your friend FOREVER!!!!
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03/16/2004 03:30 AM (UTC)
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izzy_daman Wrote:
Queve, because you're really good at writing stories, I was wondering if you could write one like this only with Kahn beating the shit out of the DK and FINALLY reining supreme. If you do I'll be your friend FOREVER!!!!


LOL. Thanks dude. I can see you are a Kahn fan. smile I promise to do one, but not today though, I feel to tired to write another story!

I will PM you when I have it done. smile
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03/16/2004 03:44 AM (UTC)
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I think your story was in a sense refreshing to the story, simply because it bares impending doom on nearly every character. Maybe the only slip up could have been Rayden with this soul.. God's don't have souls. But other than that it was pretty neat reading something that was apocalyptic but still had amazing detail.

Cool read.
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03/16/2004 04:01 AM (UTC)
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Thanks guys! BTW, I fixed the Rayden soul thing here.

****New Updated Story*****

The warriors of light have failed to defeat the Great Dragon King, now, his undefeatable army of dead soldiers and loyal allies have managed to enter the realm of earth, thanks to the brutal act that has been committed .Deception.

Thousands of Vampires leaded by their Queen Nitara attack the helpless humans as the life in the world drowns quickly in chaos. The deadly Onis, leaded by Drahmin destroy everything they come across with, along side the Centaurs and mutants, who joined the King in battle. The world has come to an end.

The remaining warriors watched helplessly as the bright sunny sky becomes red as blood and darkness covers each corner of the world. They know there is no hope, but they have chosen to die in battle.

A great and magnificent Palace emerges from the ocean, transforming the once clean waters of earth into dark poison. Colossal waves are out of control as they lift high destroying all the islands and countries nearby.

THIS are the EVENTS that took place in OUTWORLD before the INVASION:

- A furious battle had shocked the very core of the Earth as the Great Monk KUNG LAO fought bravely the Dragon King in Mortal Kombat sadly; his life was violently consumed by the power of the King, his body exploded as it made contact with the incarnation of EVIL. His soul was forever lost, cursed to be tortured by the King.

- The Ninja specter known as SCORPION had managed to defeat MOLOCH in battle, but his mission was far from over. Moloch had managed to escape, but he only cared for the sorcerer known as QUAN CHI, to put an end to his long story of revenge. He found himself in battle once again with is old rival. It is told in ancient writings that it was one of the most brutal fights to ever take place in Outworld. Quan Chi shook in fear when he realized he was no match for the dead ninja, and as he tried to escape, Scorpion knew there was only one way to end this he conjured a storm of fire that consumed their bodies in flames to death. Quan Chi’s soul was stolen by the Dragon Kings power, so was Scorpions, but he extinguished with peace, he knew he had finally completed his mission, life wasn’t important now; he died, this time, forever, bounded to eternal torment.

- KITANA and Queen SINDEL died in battle defending the realm of Edenia from the forces of darkness. MILEENA leaded the attack, hundreds of mutants died by the hands of the Royal family, but they were no match for the fury of Mileena. They captured them in the Kuatan Palace were the SHOKAN RACE was extinguished forever. They lowered Queen Sindel and Princess Kitana in the hot lava, alive. Only their painful screams could be heard, and thanks to this, Sindel managed to produce one final Fatal scream that destroyed the Palace, killing everyone inside. Mileena died instantly.

- The Lin Kei warrior known as SUB-ZERO fought bravely. His partner FROST and his Lin Kei students marched in battle against the terrible Red Dragon Clan. Unknown to Sub-Zero, SAREENA had informed MAVADO (who had killed Kano) about their plans, Frost was killed by Sareena in a surprise attack, Sareena was badly injured, Frost had been a great adversary. The Lin Kei warriors were strong, but they were outnumbered, they were defeated by the Red Dragons. Sub-Zero was the last member to stay alive, but he was weak, he was brutally tortured to death by Mavado and his clan. All traces of The Lin Kei were erased that day, a New Era was awakening, the Red Dragons.

- JAX ignored that his life would soon end in the most unexpected way. He had managed to kill the Red Dragon Member known as Hsu Hao long ago, but he was told by his partner and best friend SONYA BLADE, that the Black Dragon Member known as KANO was still alive. She radioed him the location. Jax found himself inside a dark room that contained a deadly GRINDER spinning around. Something was wrong, he could smell the blood he could smell DECEPTION. He couldn’t act when he saw her coming; he was shocked to see his BEST FRIEND attacking him. Sonya Blade kicked Jax inside the grinder, where he suffered a most painful death. Before his life was torn apart, he looked into Sonya’s face, a single TEAR kissed his eyes as he watched her smile evilly, seconds later, the Grinder destroyed his body and Sonya left the room smiling with satisfaction.

- Lord RAYDEN had been fighting the most powerful sorcerer, SHANG TSUNG. It was a terrible battle, a mix of blood and thunder. Rayden could feel his powers vanishing; he soon realized he was being punished by his own allies, the Elder Gods. By defiantly leaving his status as an Elder god, they made his powers consume his own life. Knowing this, Rayden managed to cast one final apocalyptic storm. Shang Tsung had been laughing at the powerless god, but he late realized what was happening, his laughs became screams of “shock”, as his body exploded and millions of souls were set free, to later be consumed by the great King, including his own, and the dead warrior, LIU KANG. All cursed to live in eternal torment. Rayden has vanished from all existence.

THIS are the EVENTS that took place in EARTH after the DESTRUCTION of Outworld, the remaining warriors left to fight the Apocalyptic and Alarming New HELL:

There was no hope left in Outworld. Fire and shadows consumed all the life that was left there. The souls of millions were eaten by the Great Kings Power:

- BO RAI CHO was determinate to die fighting AND drinking, he killed many mutants with his powerful skills, but he died facing one of his old friends. He could see in the eyes of one of the death walking soldiers of the undefeatable army of the great King, that LI MEI was fighting to escape, but she was cursed to live forever inside the soldier, who cut Bo Rai Cho in half. Li Mei could not escape this torment, she was bounded to the King, she was a eternal slave. She had failed her people she had failed her world.

- BLIND KENSHI could sense the darkness invading his mind. He could not focus. Even though he showed his true powers and skills when defeating the vampires, he died helplessly at the claws of NITARA. He was no match for the Vampire Queen. Nitara celebrated her victory drinking the blood of his victim. ERMAC watched the scene from a hidden place he was laughing. Ermac had joined the Kings side.

- GENERAL SONYA BLADE had led the Special Forces to battle. Even though her agents were strong, none could resist the force of the Onis, Centaurs and Mutants, their weapons weren’t any help, for most of the powerful ones, were destroyed during the invasion by someone who worked inside the Special Forces.

The TEAM late realized that their weapons had been CORRUPTED they destroyed themselves not knowing someone inside their base had programmed a lethal VIRUS inside the computer system that corrupted the weapons.

- CYRAX killed many of the Onis and mutants, including DRAHMIN. Help came when the forgotten warrior SMOKE joined him in battle after discovering that his old friend SUB-ZERO had died. Terror stroke both of them when the lost cyborg ninja known as SEKTOR appeared with his army of TEKUNIN that had joined the King in battle. They fought bravely, but knowing they had no choice, both programmed themselves to auto-destruct; by doing so, they exterminated Sektor and part of his giant army of robots.

- The Magic of NIGHTWOLF and his people was very useful in battle, but sadly not enough. Their lands were invaded and easily destroyed. Nightwolf had known this day would come, he and his ancestors knew about the legends of the Great King, but they had done nothing to stop this from happening in the past now, they paid most painfully for their ignorance. It is known Nightwolf died at the hands of DRAHMIN, before he had been killed by CYRAX and SMOKE.

- STRYKER had been injured during SHINNOKS invasion. He fought RAIN and ERMAC who had escaped Outworld to serve the great King. Stryker defeated Rain in an incredible display of kombat, he fought bravely, but Ermac’s power destroyed his life. Stryker was no more.

- ERMAC was later killed by JADE, who had been captured in SHAO KAHN’S castle (he was killed by TSUNG and QUAN). She had managed to escape. After knowing of the death of her friends, princess Kitana and Queen Sindel, she decided to fight with all her might to show her loyalty, here on earth, for Outworld was already lost, forever.

- MAVADO had returned to earth to celebrate with blood the downfall of Outworld, and hell of earth he did not expect to die at the hands of this warrior. MAVADO was shocked to see KABAL standing in front of his eyes. He could not believe the once black dragon warrior was still alive. The furious battle ended with Kabal’s victory. He claimed his hook-swords, and used them to cut in half the Red Dragon member.

- KAI later found JADE in the chaotic scenery. Kai had been badly injured during Shinnoks invasion. The two fought an army of Centaurs, but the centaurs were no match, hope came when the god of WIND FUJIN joined battle and finished them all.

- NOOB SAIBOT attacked Kai by surprise, Kai died when Noob consumed with his shadow powers the body of Kai. Seeing this, FUJIN fought Noob and destroyed him. JADE was then facing the lost mutant BARAKA who had joined forces with Noob to finish the chosen warriors. Jade was brutally killed by Baraka who had awoken in fury when he discovered the death of his friend Mileena.

- BARAKA was killed by JOHNNY CAGE in a furious battle. Baraka had managed to cause some serious damage, but CAGE proved to be the best. With a powerful uppercut, he sent Barakas head to the red sky.

- TANYA and REIKO (both believed dead) faced FUJIN and KABAL (who had joined the god) in a deadly battle, they were facing the Kings undefeatable army. Seeing they had no hope against the army, Fujin produced a wind tempest that swept his life along side Reiko’s, Tanya’s and his friends, Kabal’s.

-SONYA BLADE was fighting herself. A VOICE was screaming INSIDE her soul, telling her to stop. She could not control her acts, but when she came across the demon SAREENA, she finally managed to awake from the spell she was in. She remembered all. A dark shadow had blinded her eyes with tears, she remembered how Sareena hypnotized her. The fake WEDDING that took Place in Outworld.

This BRUTAL act caused a terrible disturbance between the worlds. By marrying the mortal woman, the GREAT DRAGON KING had the right to claim the Realm of Earth as his own. This allowed him to unite the divided the realms.

With pain and Fury, she realized she had not only killed her own Team by destroying them with their own weapons, but also, she had killed her best friend, JAX. With a most frightening fury, Sonya tormented the demon and brutally killed her in battle. Sareena’s spirit was consumed by the great King.

- Super star JOHNNY CAGE found SONYA alive, he declare his love to her before the end. With one last passionate kiss, they fought the forces of the King in separate ways, that was the last thing she ever felt of Johnny Cage. With his incredible power, he killed many of the Onis, including MOLOCH. Then he faced the vampire, Queen NITARA, who died when Cage ripped her body apart with a powerful shadow kick.

Johnny Cage fought bravely till the end, he was defeated by the army of the King, that stabbed him to death with spears and swords. His agonizing screams could be heard from distance .

- SONYA knew what she had to do. Knowing the spell she had been in, she remembered the Kings location and how to enter the castle. Pretending she was still under his control, she dressed herself in the long beautiful bride dress she had used when she involuntarily married the King.

She found herself at the side of the Great King, she watched with pain the apocalyptic hell and the death of all her friends and innocent people from the highest Tower of the castle, as tears blinded her eyes and silent screams of eternal torment could be heard inside her soul.

It is known she was the last survivor of the Forces of Light. Forgotten songs will tell about her brave acts, legends will sing about her incredible display of courage and power, and also they will tell how her thoughts betrayed her. The KING realized she was no longer under his command, and he no longer needed the mortal woman, Earth and Outworld were his.

Sonya fought bravely, but lost to the great king. He grabbed his beautiful bride and with the most evil of all laughs, he threw her down to the shadows and watched her white dress turn red into blood. He was the supreme Emperor darkness ruled over the Universe.

His Undefeatable Army marched victorious in the world betraying their own allies (The Tekunin, Mutants, Vampires, Centaurs, etc. were being killed by the Kings power, he no longer needed them. He was to rule the world alone.

An incredible, enormous Dragon lands in the new born castle. Watching with satisfaction from above all the death and chaos his shadows have brought. He turns into a smaller reptilian figure, after throwing a powerful cold scream; millions of souls fly to his castle. Reptile, the incarnation of the Great Dragon King...has won.
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This is like an update of my old story. It has new ideas and stuff on how to dramatically end the games story. I had done it before since many people were saying how much they would love to see the bad guys win for once.

Now, note that I hope none of this EVER happens. I don’t want Mk to end especially not like this!

I killed everyone.
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Grizzle
03/16/2004 04:26 AM (UTC)
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Thats deep..... Sad to see Jax die like that, And Sub-Zero to die like jesus christ...

Johnny Cage went out like a hero, but I didn't like the fact he screamed when he died. But still very awsome how he killed the Queen of the Vampire Race and one leader of the Onis.


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mangatropi
03/16/2004 06:53 AM (UTC)
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This story makes lord of the rings look like childs play. smile
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sektor101
03/16/2004 03:22 PM (UTC)
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yo queve how do you make this kinds of story men
this was the best story i ever heard in my life everybody died in a dramatic way that was cool men, i hope you make more stories like this in the future thanks
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