WOW!!! The last one is even better then the first!!!! I love it!

Probably the best MK story I have seen around for years.

Great stuff dude! good job!

That is wonderful!!!

I love them both! The second one was even better!!!

Great job!!! Keep writting more!

You shock me dude!

the second one is so much better!!!!

Awesome!

Thank you guys! I'm really flattered that you all liked my stories.

I haven’t forgot about the Kahns request but you might want to check out Tgrants story! It was awesome! And your fave character killed everyone.

Once again thanks guys!

That is one Awesome story!!! Even better then the first one!

Great job!!!

I think he never mentioned Kintaro. Was Kintaro confirmed dead or something?

o wow that was great, when i looked at how long it was i didnt think i was going to read the whole thing, but when i started i didnt want to stop reading it. Thats was REALLY put together good, really entertaining to read. It seemed like such chaos if that really happened. I just think maybe u killed off to many of the good guys. Even so that was GREAT, u could be a writer Im startin to think ur really Boon or sum1 and ur just testing to see how we like the story of the real game, lol who knows

I dunno, well written, but far to dark and I dunno, gothic for my taste. The only real thing that was out of character was Mavado torturing Sub-Zero, remeber Mavado may be evil but he is very honorable.

THIS 1 is SO Much better then the first one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think this is the best story I have seen!!! Its AWESOME! So dark and cool! I LOVE IT!

AWESOME SHIT!!!!!

AGriffin Wrote: I dunno, well written, but far to dark and I dunno, gothic for my taste. The only real thing that was out of character was Mavado torturing Sub-Zero, remeber Mavado may be evil but he is very honorable.

Mavado isnt honorable, if u watch his ending in Mk:Da, Sub-Zero and the Lin Kuei becomes enemy #1 for the red dragon

I enjoyed blind Kenshi's one. I can kinda picture Ermac forming a rivalry with Kenshi. I would also agree that Ermac may go evil in MK:D. The only thing is I think someone besides Nitara should kill him

Yeah, I love the second story even more! That was dark and evil!

Great job dude!

JoRdAnMaN Wrote: o wow that was great, when i looked at how long it was i didnt think i was going to read the whole thing, but when i started i didnt want to stop reading it. Thats was REALLY put together good, really entertaining to read. It seemed like such chaos if that really happened. I just think maybe u killed off to many of the good guys. Even so that was GREAT, u could be a writer Im startin to think ur really Boon or sum1 and ur just testing to see how we like the story of the real game, lol who knows

Thanks man! im glad you liked it, and yeah, sorry, I killed SIndel but she died in a very COOL way.

Thanks to everyone else too! Also I thank everyone for saying I could be a writer, thats actually what I want to be!!! Thanks!

LOL; I might be boon...who knows??????

queve you should work for midway men like i said before you have a big imagination and youre a great writer i hope you keep writing these story and dont pay attention to the people that think youre storys are dumb thyre just punks thats all. keep it up queve

sektor101 Wrote:
queve you should work for midway men like i said before you have a big imagination and youre a great writer i hope you keep writing these story and dont pay attention to the people that think youre storys are dumb thyre just punks thats all. keep it up queve

You said it

queve you have a great talent for this tou should make this into a book or something you are good at this and hope to see more of what you can come with dont let this talent die out and for those of you who dont like what queve is doing then you have no imagination and should stick to playing checkers or something. the bottom line is keep up the good work

shadow51 Wrote: sektor101 Wrote:queve you should work for midway men like i said before you have a big imagination and youre a great writer i hope you keep writing these story and dont pay attention to the people that think youre storys are dumb thyre just punks thats all. keep it up queve You said it queve you have a great talent for this tou should make this into a book or something you are good at this and hope to see more of what you can come with dont let this talent die out and for those of you who dont like what queve is doing then you have no imagination and should stick to playing checkers or something. the bottom line is keep up the good work

Thanks guys! Both and everyone else.

I really appreciate what you say, thanks a lot. You made me feel happy!! Thanks!!!

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The second story is AMAZING! More bloddy and dramatical then the first one!

Excellent gothic style! It was incredible!

I love the way you killed my favorite character!

It was sad to see Scorpion go in such way, but so cool at the same time:

"he died, this time, forever, bounded to eternal torment."

That was amazing. I see you also decided to add your dream idea of an evil Sonya getting married to the evil beast. Cool dude.

The way she killed Jax actually made me feel sorry for the bastard. And the way Sonya died and realized what she had done was cool.

LOL, the drama of Sonya/Cage was so "sweet". *starts to cry*

thats more dark and great than the black plague!! I think im gonna add 'and Queves ending' to me signature!

tmatte04 Wrote: thats more dark and great than the black plague!! I think im gonna add 'and Queves ending' to me signature!

LOL. How could you possibly do that?

I also love this story. Its the best I've seen.

I thought it was good though I had a tough time with all the grammatical errors.

The_Kosai Wrote: I thought it was good though I had a tough time with all the grammatical errors.

Did you read the second story? It is improved with better grammar and added stories.

Fantastic i want to here the next one
classic story

Fantastic i want to here the next one
classic story
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