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"Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
-Isaac Watts
05/29/2005 07:33 PM (UTC)
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I saw that edit Dan. You didn't get them ALL in when I posted EP 15. Nice try though. wink

- Answers-

Q1 -
IcedOutLinKueiWarrior Wrote:She is at the door breathing heavily, says she know who Chanzie Mingers is, tried to go in the Manions, CM blocks her way. She then whispers in her ear “Well no.


Q2 - Master Bedroom
Q3 - C. He works for someone famous
Q4 -
Bloodline666 Wrote:
TPB was sitting down at his desk when he was iced. His body was slumped over his desk when he died (if you've played Final Fantasy VII and saw the scene where Cloud, Barret, Aeris, Red XIII, and Tifa find President Shinra dead, then you'll know how TPB's body was positioned when he died). One window to the garden was open, and it was raining hard. ]{0MBAT was suspected of the crime, since he was seen in the same room TPB died in by Bleed, but he claimed his innocence (which will later be proven).


Q5 - B. Looking for something that might shed more light as to why TPB was killed

- Scores -

[Tier MKO]

danadbab :: 27
SyraxLK4d4 :: 26
Toxik :: 25
secondgen :: 22

overkill_78 :: 14
Afghanblade :: 10
Sub-ZeroMasta :: 7
Malaris :: 7
Wisdom324 :: 6
~Crow~ :: 4
buterbals113085 :: 2
blackmagik :: 1
PrtgStevo88 :: 1
TomTaz :: 1
Lil~Colombiano~ :: 1


[Tier MKOMM ]

Chan_Ming :: 26
IcedOutLinKueiWarrior :: 26
Bloodline666 :: 24

Sektor101 :: 15
Shyriu :: 9
Blade-Tsung :: 4
Grizzle :: 2
TemperaryUserName :: 1


:: Questions For Episode Fifteen ::

Q1 - Which character will be killed in Episode 15 and who will be accused of their murder? (2 Points)

Q2 - Explain in detain how TemperaryUserName caught ]{OMBAT (2 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)


EPISODE FIFTEEN - Saturday, June 4 - OMG! 5 EPISODES LEFT!!! Keep reading to see how Chan Ming dies! OMFG! SPOILER!!! J/k tongue
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overkill_78
05/29/2005 07:38 PM (UTC)
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Q1 - Which character will be killed in Episode 15 and who will be accused of their murder? (2 Points)

Elton John will die, Jesus will be accused of his murder.

Q2 - Explain in detain how TemperaryUserName caught ]{OMBAT (2 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

He smacked him in the face and said, "Bitch, I'm going to choke you!"
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Mortal Kombat Online - The Ultimate Mortal Kombat Experience
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"Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
-Isaac Watts
05/29/2005 09:19 PM (UTC)
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Toxik Wrote:
GhostDragon Wrote:
SyraxLK4d4 Wrote:
OK, about 8 PM's sent this time. Hopefully one of them makes it to you. wink


OMFG! And they ALL made it too! See?! That's the kind of determination I wanna see from each and every one of you lazy bums!!!! tonguegrin

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SyraxLK4d4


Ghostdragon


If we have A LOT of determination, are we going to get extra points? tongue lol


No, but you will get a tasty chocolate chip cookie! grin

overkill_78 Wrote:
Q1 - Which character will be killed in Episode 15 and who will be accused of their murder? (2 Points)

Elton John will die, Jesus will be accused of his murder.


Lmao

overkill_78 Wrote:
Q2 - Explain in detain how TemperaryUserName caught ]{OMBAT (2 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

He smacked him in the face and said, "Bitch, I'm going to choke you!"


Actually, he was driving and pulled up next to ]{OMBAT while he was walking home and asked ]{OMBAT to help find his lost puppy. Loving puppies as ]{OMBAT does, he decided to get in. However ]{OMBAT quickly leared that there wasn't a lost puppy when they drove to The Neverland ranch. TemperaryUserName took of his mask and it was clear that he was really... *take a wild guess* Then.... then.... *insert Michael Jackson joke here*tongue

Anyhoo... get caught up on the previous episodes man. wink

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05/31/2005 04:23 AM (UTC)
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No, but you will get a tasty chocolate chip cookie! grin

Hot Ass, I get a cookie! grin

Anyway, I sent a few more PM's maybe I'll get another.
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06/02/2005 03:04 AM (UTC)
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Fine, I'll have the tasty chocolate chip cookie. tongue


Anyway...

1. Chan will be killed & NovaStarr will be accused of killing her. ( I have no clue!? confused )

2. TemperaryUserName ran to Kombat & he firmly pressed his head downward forcing him to the floor with his gun pointed to his head. He did this because he saw Kombat next to a dead body. However Kombat said he was innocent.



These questions are getting harder. . . sad
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Chan_Ming
06/03/2005 04:28 PM (UTC)
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*bump*

Vote dammit!
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06/04/2005 10:53 PM (UTC)
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Q1~tough one, lady raiden will die. temp will be blamed
Q2~temp,blade and grizzle each went to the tool shed,they find a open tool box lying next to the door, open it to see a flashlight missing. they then hear a noise in the pool house. temp pulls out his gun, all three travel to the pool house to see what that noise was.they look for the lights for the pool house... then a flash of light is seen inside the steam room, temp halls ass to the room tells kombat "Don’t move!" . kombat runs out of the room and knocks temp down. temp grabbed kombat and puts his gun to his head. grillze picks the flah light that kombat dropped in the struggle. blade comments on how awful he looks
Q1 - Which character will be killed in Episode 15 and who will be accused of their murder? (2 Points)

Killed: Temp.
Accused: Chan.

Q2 - Explain in detain how TemperaryUserName caught ]{OMBAT (2 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

Inside the tool shed, Temp, Grizzle and Blade notice the toolbox is open near the door. They look inside and see that the flashlight is missing. Suddenly they hear a noise coming from the pool house, all three travel there, Temp pulls out his gun. They try and find the lights there but notice a flash in the steam room. They go in and Temp runs up to ]{, he “firmlyâ€? pressed his head downwards to force him to the floor. His gun was pointed to his head also. The reason why he done this is because he say ]{ next to the dead body. ]{ insisted he was innocent however.
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"Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
-Isaac Watts
06/04/2005 11:26 PM (UTC)
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danadbab Wrote:
ooo im home tonight. gonna post my answers now.. brb..


Well, lucky for you, I'm in a half way good mood at the moment. Which means I'm gonna give everyone till 5pm tomorrow. I really want people who have been lagging behind to catch up with the episodes.

And another thing. The questions for Ep 15 will be 10pts in total. This is the last chance for people who are lagging to catch up. If they don't answer the questions for Ep 15, then they will have no realistic chance of placing in the top 3 places in MKO Tier and top place in MKOMM Tier.

In the MKO Tier, these people need to answer the questions in Ep 15 to stay alive:

overkill_78
Afghanblade
Sub-ZeroMasta
Malaris
Wisdom324

In the MKOMM Tier, these people need to answer the questions in Ep 15 to stay alive:

Sektor101
Shyriu

You guys may be far behind, but there's STILL a chance to catch up. Ep 15 is your last lifeline.


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"Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
-Isaac Watts
06/05/2005 09:00 PM (UTC)
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Okay, I want to change things up a bit with the final 5 episodes. I really want to end the game as quickly as possible, so the final 5 episodes will be posted as so:

Episode 15 : Wednesday, June 8
Episode 16 : Saturday, June 11
Episode 17 : Saturday, June 15
Episode 18 : Saturday, June 18
Episode 19 : Saturday, June 22

This way things can be quickly finished and I can start drafting the next story and the rest of the cast.

After sketching out a basic premise over the last three weeks, there are a few things about the next story that I can say:

• There will only be approx 15 episodes, no more than that;
• The story will move in a rather swift pace;
• The cast won't be as large as 'A Killer In The House';
• The episodes will be a little longer, but not by much and they will be posted twice a week; and
• The story will be an action/thriller. Can you say, "Guns. Lots of guns."?


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06/05/2005 11:03 PM (UTC)
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GhostDragon Wrote:
Okay, I want to change things up a bit with the final 5 episodes. I really want to end the game as quickly as possible, so the final 5 episodes will be posted as so:

Episode 15 : Wednesday, June 8
Episode 16 : Saturday, June 11
Episode 17 : Saturday, June 15
Episode 18 : Saturday, June 18
Episode 19 : Saturday, June 22

This way things can be quickly finished and I can start drafting the next story and the rest of the cast.

After sketching out a basic premise over the last three weeks, there are a few things about the next story that I can say:

• There will only be approx 15 episodes, no more than that;
• The story will move in a rather swift pace;
• The cast won't be as large as 'A Killer In The House';
• The episodes will be a little longer, but not by much and they will be posted twice a week; and
• The story will be an action/thriller. Can you say, "Guns. Lots of guns."?


Ghostdragon
sounds good gd. w/ the site being full of people w/ Hyper A.D.D people lost intrest in the story. but w/ u updating more often, it will keep people interested.. smile
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06/08/2005 03:56 AM (UTC)
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I come back from vacation to find that I HAVE TIME TO ANSWER THE EPISODE 15 QUESTIONS?! I thought it would've been posted by the time I got back.

Anyway....

  • RIP = LadyRaiden
    Accused = takermk (could also be the other way around, by the looks of things)
  • Well, Blade-Tsung saw a ight pointing toward the toolshed (Temp took Blade-Tsung with him to help catch ]{0MBAT because he wanted to keep an eye on Blade-Tsung). After a brief little argument between the two of them, they decide to follow the direction of the flashlight. Of course, Temp wants Blade to show him where it is. Then, a light comes from the top of the toolshed, and they notice ]{0MBAT grabbed a flashlight, since a flashlight was missing from the toolbox. Then a sound comes from the pool house, and they notice the light is outside. Once in the pool house, they notice the flashlight is in the steam room. Then ]{0MBAT gets out of the steam room and knocks Temp down, but Temp trips him, points his gun at his head, and handcuffs him.
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    "Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
    -Isaac Watts
    06/08/2005 10:31 PM (UTC)
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    Alright peeps. Episode 15 drops tonight @ 10pm Be here or get beaten with a bag of apples. Crow knows the effects of the bag of apples, so don't let it happen to you.


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    Chan_Ming
    06/09/2005 01:40 AM (UTC)
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    Q1 - TakerMK will dai, and NovaStarr will be accused of murdar.

    Q2 - BLT and Temp saw a light coming from the toolshed, and were like WTF, then decided to go check it out. Then they hear something, go into the pool house, and they find ]{ in there, who tries to make a break for it. Temp pwns him by tripping him and capturing his ass.
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    06/09/2005 01:51 AM (UTC)
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    Q1-Bye bye, LadyRaiden, Taker accused of murder.

    Q2-BLT and Temp saw a light coming from the toolshed, and were like WTF, then decided to go check it out. Then they hear something, go into the pool house, and they find ]{ in there, who tries to make a break for it. Temp pwns him by tripping him and capturing his ass.
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    "Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
    -Isaac Watts
    06/09/2005 02:33 AM (UTC)
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    EPISODE FIFTEEN


    *TemperaryUserName looks over the first draft of TPB’s book of skeletons in the master bedroom.*


    chan_ming: That’s what NovaStarr was looking for. A first draft of TPB’s book he was going to publish. I think you recognize some of the names in there on the third page. He’s given people their own chapters.

    TemperaryUserName: [looking at the draft] Jesus! He’s got names of two city council members, a few well known athletes... a Federal Judge?! That bastard has a federal judge as a chapter! And by the looks of it, it’s a lengthy one.

    chan_ming: [nods]

    TemperaryUserName: [to NovaStarr] Why were you looking for this? Were you going to show this to chan_ming and me?

    NovaStarr: I’d... rather not say.

    TemperaryUserName: You’d rather not say? Look honey, your employer was killed tonight and this is important. It might explain who wanted him dead.

    chan_ming: TemperaryUserName, look on page four. There’s more names. Tell me if you see something that might be interesting.

    TemperaryUserName: [turns to page four and studies it intensively] Alright...

    NovaStarr: It’s not that I don’t want to say anything, it’s just that...

    TemperaryUserName: You wanna save your own ass from being involved. Please. When I was on the force I heard that song and dance a thousand and one times. And what am I supposed to be looking for chan_ming?

    chan_ming: Sixth name down. Look at the initials.

    TemperaryUserName: You mean ‘G.B.L.’?

    chan_ming: Yeah.

    TemperaryUserName: ‘G.B.L.’ Huh. Okay. I don’t get it.

    chan_ming: Look at all those names in there. People that he’s dealt with over the years, right? You notice that guy, takermk’s name too?

    TemperaryUserName: Heh. Well there he is.

    chan_ming: Turn to the page ‘G.B.L.’ starts on.


    *As TemperaryUserName reaches the page and takes a minute to read the rough and unpolished sentences TPB had typed, looks and several sentences that freeze him where he stands. He looks at chan_ming and with a nod from her, he realizes how powerful this document is to finding out who killed TPB*


    TemperaryUserName: [gives chan_ming the handcuff key] If this ain’t interesting huh?

    chan_ming: You’re giving me this to let ]{OMBAT free?

    TemperaryUserName: So you came to the conclusion that the guy didn’t do it either?

    chan_ming: After I read that thing, I knew he couldn’t have done it. But how did you come to that conclusion?

    TemperaryUserName: I’ll tell you later. That’s for the chief, Blade_Tsung. You should bring him up here so we can talk to him about his name being on page four as well.

    chan_ming: And to think, I thought I was going to have to point that out to you.

    TemperaryUserName: Hey. I’m not that slow.

    chan_ming: You want to have NovaStarr stay here?

    TemperaryUserName: Yeah, I want her to tell me more about this draft.

    chan_ming: I’ll be back. [exit’s the master bedroom]

    NovaStarr: But I can’t help you with what I don’t know.

    TemperaryUserName: Please. You were looking for it, which means you know something about it.


    *As chan_ming leaves TPB’s bedroom, a loud roar of thunder is followed by pitch darkness as the lights in the mansion once again go out. She manages to reach the first floor hallway where she almost trips on something on the floor. She looks down and the light from the thunder allows her to see a familiar figure lying on the floor. She takes out her lighter from her jacket pocket and shines it at her feet. She see’s a lifeless Blade_Tsung on the hallway floor. She hears some one breathing heavy near by and she turns the light in the direction of where it’s coming from while quickly pulling out her gun. About seven feet away, she finds a bloody axeman61 sitting on the floor.*


    chan_ming: What the fuck did you do?!

    axeman61: [breathing heavy] I... I didn’t do anything!

    chan_ming: What do you mean? The guy is dead!

    axeman61: Will you shut your dumb detective ass up and wait a second?!


    *chan_ming Yells TemperaryUserName’s name loudly so he can hear it from the master bedroom as chan_ming keep her gun on axeman61.*


    chan_ming: God damnit! What the fuck did you do?!


    END OF EPISODE FIFTEEN
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    "Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
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    06/09/2005 02:35 AM (UTC)
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    - Answers-

    Q1 - takermk & Blade Tsung

    Q2 -

    danadbab Wrote:
    Q2~temp,blade and grizzle each went to the tool shed,they find a open tool box lying next to the door, open it to see a flashlight missing. they then hear a noise in the pool house. temp pulls out his gun, all three travel to the pool house to see what that noise was.they look for the lights for the pool house... then a flash of light is seen inside the steam room, temp halls ass to the room tells kombat "Don’t move!" . kombat runs out of the room and knocks temp down. temp grabbed kombat and puts his gun to his head. grillze picks the flah light that kombat dropped in the struggle. blade comments on how awful he looks


    - Scores -

    [Tier MKO]

    danadbab :: 29
    SyraxLK4d4 :: 27
    Toxik :: 25

    secondgen :: 22
    overkill_78 :: 16
    Afghanblade :: 10
    Sub-ZeroMasta :: 7
    Malaris :: 7
    Wisdom324 :: 6
    ~Crow~ :: 4
    buterbals113085 :: 2
    blackmagik :: 1
    PrtgStevo88 :: 1
    TomTaz :: 1
    Lil~Colombiano~ :: 1


    [Tier MKOMM ]

    Chan_Ming :: 28
    IcedOutLinKueiWarrior :: 28
    Bloodline666 :: 26

    Sektor101 :: 15
    Shyriu :: 9
    Blade-Tsung :: 4
    Grizzle :: 2
    TemperaryUserName :: 1



    :: Questions For Episode Sixteen ::

    Q1 - What seems to be Shyriu‘s motivation(s) for knowing about what TPB had on the guests and give an example? (3 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

    Q2 - Explain in detail what thetruth4 revealed. (3 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

    Q3 - In detail, describe takermk’s view people in important positions or status and give an example of his opinion. (3 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

    Q4 - What’s on page three in the draft of TPB’s book? (1 Point)



    EPISODE FIFTEEN - Saturday, June 4 - 4 EPISODES LEFT!!! And they will be MUCH longer! I gave people a reading break this time.
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    06/11/2005 04:43 AM (UTC)
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    damn those are some tough questions.. gonna have to work for them..
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    06/11/2005 11:56 PM (UTC)
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  • Shyriu needs some stories to report for his news thing. The biggest example I can give is the incident with takermk overcontributing to my campaign, and TPB's involvement in the whole thing.
  • thetruth4 revealed that he killed someone on the road while driving home.
  • Takermk thinks that people in certain positions are complete assholes; most notably, TPB and LadyRaiden.
  • The names of the people he's exposing on his book (they are the names of the chapters he's writing).
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    06/12/2005 02:13 AM (UTC)
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    *bump*

    GD's posting in like 48 minutes, so vote. D:
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    "Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
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    06/12/2005 07:22 PM (UTC)
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    EPISODE SIXTEEN


    *chan_ming is looking at a recently tired axeman61while having her gun trained on him after finding Vlade-Tsung lying on the floor of the main hall.*


    axeman61: Hey! The fucker knocked that Grizzle guy down when the lights went out and ran out of the living room.

    chan_ming: [yelling] What?! So you thought you’d chase him down and bash his head against the fucking hall floor just for that? What the fuck were you thinking?

    axeman61: Hey! It didn’t go down like that at all, cop!

    chan_ming: Then how the fuck did it go down? Tell me!


    *TemperaryUserName is running downstairs in the dark with his gun drawn after hearing chan_ming’s yell from the master bedroom. His nerves are a bit rattled due to the events and his mind is preoccupied with thoughts about the past. A past that he feels has haunted him for as long as he can remember.

    He reaches the hall and the light from chan_ming’s lighter is providing enough light for him to get a small glimpse of the scene.*


    TemperaryUserName: What?! What’s wrong?!

    chan_ming: TemperaryUserName!

    TemperaryUserName: What damn it?!

    chan_ming: Bottom of the stairs! Only a few feet in front of you!

    TemperaryUserName: [nearly tripping over Blade-Tsung] Shit! What the hell is...

    chan_ming: Do you see?!

    axeman61: Listen to me for fuck’s sake!

    TemperaryUserName: What the hell is this?

    chan_ming: [walking over to TemperaryUserName and shines the light on the floor] Here! See!

    TemperaryUserName: [looking at the floor where the light is revealing Blade-Tsung] Huh?! [pauses] What?! What the hell?! What the hell happened? chan_ming? [yelling] What happened here?!

    axeman61: [getting up off the floor holding his side] Look! He ran out and tried to make a break for it.

    TemperaryUserName: What? Who’s that? Who’s that over there?!

    chan_ming: It’s axeman61, TemperaryUserName!

    TemperaryUserName: [bends down and checks on Blade-Tsung] What are you doing out here?!

    axeman61: I ran after the guy when he tried to run!

    chan_ming: He made it all the way out here? Where was everyone else?

    axeman61: Hey, everyone else was just talkin’ and then the lights went out!

    chan_ming: Where the hell were you in there?

    axeman61: Hey! I’m telling you that the guy must have thought that it was his chance to bolt and he did!

    chan_ming: So you decided to go after him?

    axeman61: Shit yes!

    chan_ming: Why?!

    axeman61: [pauses] The guy killed that Bleed guy. Fuckin’ stabbed him up and all! What? Was I supposed to let him run out on us?!

    chan_ming: What happened...


    *chan_ming’s stops for a brief second and looks around the room in surprise as the lights come back on and the mansion it lit again.*


    chan_ming: ... What happened when you got out here?!

    axeman61: Look, I just followed the guys footsteps and tried grab something in the dark! A caught a look of him when it thundered and tried to cat up to him! I...

    chan_ming: Yeah, you caught up to him and he’s now on the floor.


    *TemperaryUserName is carefully looking over Blade-Tsung as he’s listening to the conversation between axeman61 and chan_ming. Three minutes into checking him over, he’s determined that his neck was broken after taking a hard fall. He stares into space thinking about what’s he’s heard so far from the conversation and the wheels in his mind start turning. After a few more moments, he interrupts the yelling session.*


    TemperaryUserName: [to axeman61] Hey! Why are you the only one here?

    axeman61: What?

    TemperaryUserName: You’re the only one that came out. Why?

    axeman61: Cause I noticed him right off the bat and was the first to go after him. I don’t know about the others.

    TemperaryUserName: So you were right by him? All by yourself, right?

    axeman61: That LadyRaiden was standin’ next to me.

    TemperaryUserName: What happened when the lights went out?

    axeman61: Me and her were talkin’ and all and poof! The lights go out and he bolts, knocking Grizzle down.

    chan_ming: What about everyone else?!

    axeman61: Fuck if I know! He bolted and I went after him!

    TemperaryUserName: He was handcuffed. Where was he really going to go?! He couldn’t have gotten far since he would have had to turn his back to open any door, specifically the front door. That would have taken some time to do and of course very hard to do. Not everyone can run out and reach the front door, turn their back so that they can use their handcuffed hands to open a door in the dark. But I guess he was special, right?

    axeman61: [stands quietly in a angry mood]

    TemperaryUserName: [kneeling down near Blade-Tsung] chan_ming. Give me the keys to my cuffs.

    chan_ming: [hands keys over to TemperaryUserName] Here.


    *TemperaryUserName proceeds to remove the handcuffs from Blade-Tsung’s wrists and quietly looks over him and shakes his head that shows his frustration. After all that has gone on this evening, he feels as if a possible light at the end of the tunnel has been dimmed.*


    axeman61: Listen. I... I didn’t mean to hurt the guy. I wanted to...

    TemperaryUserName: You fucking broke his neck. You!

    axeman61: [stands quietly]

    chan_ming: [to TemperaryUserName] We can’t ask him anything now.

    TemperaryUserName: [coldly] Nope.

    axeman61: Hey look you two, I...

    TemperaryUserName: [quietly] Shut up.

    axeman61: The fuck you just...

    TemperaryUserName: I said shut up you tattooed freak. You just fucked us here, cause the guy we were liking for killing TPB and Bleed is lying here cause of you.

    axeman61: Hey pal, I said I’m sorry...

    TemperaryUserName: [stands up and starts walking towards the kitchen] Whatever.

    axeman61: [angered] Oh! So you found something on him or did you just set him up like LadyRaiden said you did to someone years ago?

    Grizzle: [running from the living room] Mr. axeman61. Did you find Blade-Tsung?

    Shyriu: [running from the living room close behind Grizzle] Where did he go? Huh?!


    *TemperaryUserName stops just as he goes through the kitchen door, then continues to walk in without saying a word. chan_ming takes a long at TemperaryUserName as he walks into the kitchen after hearing what axeman61 said just a second ago.*


    axeman61: [to chan_ming] LadyRaiden told us something about him framing someone. He didn’t say jack shit about it. He just told her what he thought about her then left looking for you and that NovaStarr woman.

    Grizzle: [looking and Blade-Tsung lying on the hallway floor] Dear god is he alright? He looks in bad shape.


    chan_ming: [walking after TemperaryUserName] Everyone stay here and don’t touch anything.

    Shyriu: What happened to him?

    Grizzle: Oh my... he’s not moving!

    Shyriu: No. No he’s not moving. [to axeman61] What the hell happened?

    axeman61: [sighs heavily] Look. I run after the guy... I catch up to him. I grabbed a hold of his collar and we both fall and... fuck! It...

    Shyriu: You two fall? What happened.

    axeman61: I guess... his head went into the floor. I dunno.

    Grizzle: [shocked] Please don’t say that he’s dead.

    axeman61: Fuck! I didn’t mean to hurt the guy.


    *As chan_ming enters the kitchen, she notices TemperaryUserName over at the sink drinking a glass of water. She stands in front of the door as TemperaryUserName notices that she’d walked in.*


    TemperaryUserName: It’s fucking irony, you know?

    chan_ming: What do you mean?

    TemperaryUserName: [pauses] I’m bringing this guy in that I’d been looking for a little over four months for raping three women and beating the hell out of a fourth and... [pauses] a fucking rookie fucks up by contaminating the weapon he was using to threaten the women when he did his thing. He was supposed to bag the knife in his house, but the kid comes out with the damn thing in his hand and he bumps into another uniform as he’s walking over a sewer grate and SPLASH! The fucking thing takes a dip in the sewer.

    chan_ming: ...

    TemperaryUserName: So he starts yellin’ and carrying on about dropping the knife in the sewer and I look at him and then at the sick son of a bitch in the squad car. The window was rolled down and he heard what happened. Before the uniforms got there, I read him his rights and told him a few more rights that he didn’t know he had with my fists. They uniforms knew what happened and went along with the common idea that he walked into a door when the sick bastard was yelling police brutality.

    chan_ming: ...

    TemperaryUserName: So with a bloody nose and a jacked jaw, he smiles at me. I never forgot that look. It’s like it was Christmas and this fucker got that toy red fire engine he always wanted, but never got as a kid.

    chan_ming: What happened?

    TemperaryUserName: They fished the knife out of the sewer and I knew that it would be thrown out of court and the guy would walk. So I took the knife when no one was looking and drove to a park and sat there for almost an hour to think. I mean... this fucker was going to get see loose and have another chance to do what he did to another woman. So... I did what any cop would do. Or any cop that didn’t wanna see another girl get hurt.

    chan_ming: You what? What could you do with the knife? It was already...

    TemperaryUserName: I cleaned the knife up. All spic n’ span like. Then I called in telling my Lieutenant that I was in traffic and would get in late. But I went to the hospital.

    chan_ming: Why did you go there?

    TemperaryUserName: The last victim was the one that was beaten pretty bad, but she was still breathin’ and could talk from what I heard about her earlier. I went into her hospital room and woke her up. I told her that we caught the fucker, but... something went wrong and he might get off cause of a ‘rook’’s mistake. So, I broke it down to her about what I wanted to do and after I was done, she was quiet for a minute.

    chan_ming: What did you have in mind?

    TemperaryUserName: The knife had blood from a previous victim and hers as well on it. The sewer fucked that all up for the D.A. and I knew that the blood would have sent that fucker away for life, plus another one hundred years or so. So, I thought that I’d replace the blood that was lost with new blood. And since he had knifed her pretty good and she still was bandaged up...

    chan_ming: You replace lost blood with new. What? You asked her if she’d go along with it?

    TemperaryUserName: [pauses and takes another drink of water] She was quiet for a minute then she started to cry. I just stood there looking at her crying her eyes out. The guy did a number on her and I was pissed thinking that he might get off. I lowered my head in shame and started looking at the floor. Then she asked me a question. She asked me if it would work and would he go to jail if she said yes. I said, “It be the nail in his coffin.” She looked at me for it must have felt was a lifetime and pulled back her covers showing her bandaged scars.

    chan_ming: Jesus!

    TemperaryUserName: All I did was undo the bandages of one wound and dab the blade edge of the knife with her blood. Didn’t take long and I re-bandaged the wound. I wanted to stay and tell her that it’d be alright, but I wanted to get the knife to the station before anyone started to question. When I got to my car I remembered that I had an old hair dryer in the trunk.

    chan_ming: What about the blood? It would be fresh when you turned it into the evidence room.

    TemperaryUserName: Heh, I knew that it would dry the blood on the knife quickly, but it also needed to look as if it had come directly from his house. So I made a quick stop back to the house and ran into other uniforms, one of whom was the rookie that dropped the knife in the sewer. I sorta told them in a group of what I wanted to do. Since I was well liked amongst the guys and the kid wanted to make his mistake go away, they went along with letting be goin in his house and brush the knife on the carpet and not say a word about it. Wham bam, the guy’s doing life plus an additional fifty years.

    chan_ming: [quietly] So... how did it get out?

    TemperaryUserName: Well... guys talk and eventually it goes up the ladder to the boss. My Lieutenant called me in soon after the verdict comes down and lays it all out to me. How I gotta go away and just disappear. I knew that staying on the force would mean an investigation and knew what I needed to do. He looked out for me and I appreciated that! So I guess it wasn’t so difficult for me to turn in my badge. And since the guy was going away for a long time and never was going to hurt another girl, I was actually happy.

    chan_ming: So TPB found out I guess.

    TemperaryUserName: Yeah, looks like it.


    END OF EPISODE SIXTEEN
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    06/12/2005 07:23 PM (UTC)
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    - Answers-

    Q1 - takermk & Blade Tsung

    Q2 -

    temp,blade and grizzle each went to the tool shed,they find a open tool box lying next to the door, open it to see a flashlight missing. they then hear a noise in the pool house. temp pulls out his gun, all three travel to the pool house to see what that noise was.they look for the lights for the pool house... then a flash of light is seen inside the steam room, temp halls ass to the room tells kombat "Don’t move!" . kombat runs out of the room and knocks temp down. temp grabbed kombat and puts his gun to his head. grillze picks the flah light that kombat dropped in the struggle. blade comments on how awful he looks

    Q3 - From Episode Eight

    takermk: [to Shyriu] So. You know what‘s going on, huh?

    Shyriu: Excuse me?

    takermk: Me and the Governor. You think what goes on between him and I is a bad thing?

    Shyriu: What...

    takermk: I mean it’s perfectly natural for important people to help each other’s interests whenever possible. It’s how things are done young man. It’s how the political process works.

    Shyriu: So you feel that helping to smear candidates that challenge Governor Bloodline666’s bid for re-election is a good thing?! Is that what you’re saying?

    takermk: [snickers] Huh. What? What do you want me to say? Okay, fine! Yes you little naïve punk! He does what he needs to do and so do I. And I respect that! What? Just cause you have some crusade to find out all the dirt about people like, you think you’re justified.


    Q4 -

    Bloodline666 Wrote:
    The names of the people he's exposing on his book (they are the names of the chapters he's writing).



    - Scores -

    [Tier MKO]

    danadbab :: 29
    SyraxLK4d4 :: 27
    Toxik :: 25

    secondgen :: 22
    overkill_78 :: 16


    [Tier MKOMM ]

    Chan_Ming :: 35
    IcedOutLinKueiWarrior :: 33

    Bloodline666 :: 31
    Sektor101 :: 15


    :: Questions For Episode Seventeen ::

    Q1 - What does ‘G.B.L.‘ refer to in TPB’s rough draft? (2 Points)

    Q2 - Explain in detail what Shyriu revealed. (3 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

    Q3 - What page was Blade-Tsung name on in TPB’s rough draft and describe anything else about what‘s in the draft . (3 Points. 1 point for a brief answer)

    Q4 - What’s on page three in the draft of TPB’s book? (1 Point)





    EPISODE SEVENTEEN - Wednesday, June 15 - 3 EPISODES LEFT!!!
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    06/12/2005 10:40 PM (UTC)
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    damn it furious i had to work more over time yesterday sad anyway i already did this epiosdes questions.. i sent u a pm gd. let me know if u got it.. if not.. i have it some where else on the site.. grin no one will find it. theres no way im gonna type that shit again.. tongue
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    06/14/2005 03:07 AM (UTC)
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    Q1 - 'G.B.L.' refers to all the people that TPB has dealt with in the past. He used that more as a "code" in order to not make a huge list of all the people that he dealt in the past with. confused

    Q2 - Shyriu revealed that he had a 'cooking a story'. He explained to thetruth4 and said: "Well... [pauses to take a deep breath] Hey! It was a big story for me cause it was my fist and it put me on the map. I mean... yeah I cooked it, but it was a thin story at the time and I wasn’t sure that I was ever going to get my big chance to have the opportunity to have a big story. So I took a shaky story that was going nowhere with scant leads and I... cooked it. Hell, my editor loved it, even all the lies."

    Q3 - Blade-Tsung's name appeared on page four in that first draft. The draft was about a book that TPB was planning on publishing. That book had everyone's secrets in it. It had all the secrets of the people that went to that house during that stormy night. It also had the name of two city council members, a few well known athletes, and a Federal Judge too.

    Q4 - In the 3rd page of the draft TPB, had the names of two city council members, a few well known athletes, and a Federal Judge's name.
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    06/16/2005 09:12 AM (UTC)
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    every one dont forget to post ur answers.
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