Blade, you had me till you Rhymed nigga three times in a row. My vote goes to justin.

my vote goes for myself, don't know how you guys think he can rap even close to my level when he doesn't even use proper rhyme scheme, similes, metaphors, wants you to sing on a forum, he said himself he wrote this...its suppose to be free styling, and doesn't understand the concept of Ebonics, typing as fast as i think, or that this is suppose to be verbal....that's why i spell some of the things the way i did, you know the way he mentioned it a million times, no one uses -ing and the end of words in rap....sigh oh well

im not taking this to serious but its is kind of a shock to me, if you do win congratulations.....by the way battles or suppose to be fought like this
1st person- 18 bars (1 min)
2nd person- 27 bars (1 and 1/2 minute)
1st person- 9 bars (1/2 minute)
that way it is fair for a come back

look nothin' against you and your intelect but did you even bother with the rules...? this is NOT a freestyle obviously because of the same reasons that you're reading my reaction...

*exhales* look if you didn't even want to stop and think about it, you didn't even go back and proof read... thats on you, this is meant to express yourself in a way that you don't get to in a freestyle battle, don't get it twisted, we battle, but we have more time to write better things to better degrade our competition, in that sense you provide a geater show for the people which is what you should have done...

Blade did what Jay did to NaS only good, he got the people involved so he won them over, I'm not crediting his chorus but I'm just saying he did something original that wasn't even done in the last battle thread, in that sense he did well I dunno if he wrote it on the dot but if you did that, yo respect, that would have held up anywhere else but here...

I don't have the proper style? I guess that why everyone but 1 person voted for me. Face it man u got killed on here, imagine how bad it would be in peron.
Perhaps ur rhymes sound better in person, but no matter. Good round Justin, better luck next time.

JustIncredible Wrote: so who do i battle next?

Not in here... the people have spoken, it's really not my problem if you experienced any misunderstandings...

blade advances... no dick sucking required...

- R O S T E R -

Garlador
Jaybe2k4
Torchia
Kitana4Ever
error-Macro
Jamheads
LuoisTypo
ItsVab
Elder_god you will go first...
and NeoScorpion

Bajar < SubZedox (RIP to your homeboy by the way)
ShaolinChuan < UREIKO
Eldersin < Saxtard
Juastincredible < Blade-Tsung

since I'm not expecting much from either camp please don't tune away I got some really good toy commercials cming up I swear!

is cool i woulnt rhym like that in person for a battle i get more personal but ur an mk brother so good luck next round im out

I had hope with jaybe2k4, but since he can't rap, I don't feel like he's diggin it anymore, there's the kinda guy that sit's on their ass, writes stupid shit on a computer with no time to pass. I know jaybe ain't got his shit together cause when I step up you gonna feel some mighty weather, my own since of humor is what get's me to the top, you fuck with me again you gonna get yo ass shot. How many times you done wussed out on yourself? I'm gonna get my homeboy santa to turn yo ass into a fuckin' elf. Now run that shit little B cause no one's gonna take this pride away from me!

That's the best I got, jaybe2k4 is up next.

ok...

Elder_god, why you talkin bout Santa clause?
You sound like a lil ho on yo menopause
Threatenin to shoot like you really gonna break some law?
Naw dawg, that ain't it, you just talkin
With no clue half the shit you just walked in
I don't need a gun, you'll still get ur shit knocked in

Now I don't mean to diss you, you really seem cool
But most of your rhymes sound like you never finished school
So listen to this, here's my advice
Stop actin a gangsta, go back to junior high, and play nice
Cuz some reals get offended by bitches
Bust a cap or Baraka your ass up with stitches
I just won, clear cut, no competition
Cuz EG's played out like a Kitana petition

So holla at me, I'll be back in the thread
Gonna go find a dolla so Elder's mom give me head

NeoScorpion Wrote: ShaolinChuan Apparently believed that UREIKO was too 'hood' for him so he has regretfully retired... UREIKO advances... - R O S T E R - Garlador Blade-Tsung MK-Freak TheElderSin Torchia Kitana4Ever error-Macro Jamheads LuoisTypo Saxtardyou up 1st! JustIncredible ItsVab Elder_god and NeoScorpion Bajar ShaolinChuan

Ureiko too "hood" for me? lol ok I wasn't even here. I was on vacation. I'll give it a shot though. Even if it don't count anymore.


"Yo I'm at it again - I'm slappin you bitches again,
Coppin' head you fuckin a fuckin maneqine.
Bringin' you pain with a bottle labeled heineken,
Reach for the cabinet-ain't no medicine -
Hide your childeren,
Eat my adrenaline,
I can't stop cuz I go on and on and on-on,
I'm lookin for a toilet cuz ya'll ain't worth to shit on,
I be on top of the game,
That's right,
I'm "Capital G" Gettin G's is my mission..
Gettin paid All you see on my account is zero's,
I'm mortal kombat frozen like Subzero
Capital G's at it again----
Bringin you punishment you deserve and,
A whole lot more..
I rain, like glass shards on concrete,
Shatter your street with my teeth,
And still nobody know where I be.
That's right,
Cuz I'm a gangsta "B",
I don't give a fuck if I die!!!"

ShaolinChuan Wrote: Ureiko too "hood" for me? lol ok I wasn't even here. I was on vacation. I'll give it a shot though. Even if it don't count anymore.

well thats really on you since you could not come and post I passed you myself...

Jaybe2K4 Wrote:
With no clue half the shit you just walked in
I don't need a gun, you'll still get ur shit knocked in
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Ooooo

Jaybe2K4 Wrote:
So listen to this, here's my advice
Stop actin a gangsta, go back to junior high, and play nice
Cuz some reals get offended by bitches
Bust a cap or Baraka your ass up with stitches
I just won, clear cut, no competition
Cuz EG's played out like a Kitana petition
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whOA

Jaybe2K4 Wrote:
So holla at me, I'll be back in the thread
Gonna go find a dolla so Elder's mom give me head
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Oooo, damn, men hold up, its a wrap, its a freaking wrap. I haven't been here for a while and I see alot has been going on. EG has some bouncing back to do or J might just take this win. Blade Tsung has to make it to the finals by the way, that man got some skills.

Here's a quick rap, fast like Elder_god's mom/ Damn, I pimp slapped EG, like a Don Juan/ Looks like it hurt too, cuz his ass is long gone/ But Elder was soft, pussy like he Sean John/ He must be on a vacation, like Shaolin Chuan

Here's my other rap I just thought of, It can be replaced by the other one cause I know this one is better-

Yo, listen up...
Jaybe got the rythm but I got the style , He thinks he knows it all but he ain't worth my while. I feel what he's doin and he doesn't know it yet, gettin a blow job from my momma gonna give him somethin' he gonna regret. So know your words when it comes for the time, I don't wanna be rude but you don't got the rhyme, you don't know the half of it because your so fucking dumb, yo momma was fuckin me all night long, plus she swallowed my cum while suckin on my ding-dong, Is it wrong for me to write this shit? maybe so, I know one thing for sure, I'm gonna give MKO one hell of a show!

O.K. that is the good one...

I oppose those, who pose and profile/ Half that shit didn't rhyme, Elder_god what style?/ This wanksta thinks he can flow cuz he bit 8 Mile/
Your last rap was more crap than a shit-pile

Man you sound like a plain white-rapper/ I'm not dissin that, cuz I'm half-a-cracker/ But I could beat my dick on this and your rap's still whacker

Forget that tho, I won't get racial/ The only thing yo ma got from me was a facial/ And all I got was almost a son, your new brother/
But she made mistake one, she don't need another
That ho, I won't be sendin child support to/
But after this you'll wish she decided to abort you

Seriously, I'm sick of this shit/ It's ridiculous/
All I picture is kickin your ass/ While you writin raps bout St. Nicholas

I'm sick of your whack flow with no beat/ You came back, you shoulda accepted defeat/ Just forfeit and shit, after the first time/ But you had to respond, with a fuckin worse rhyme

Just like before, I killed you, 'God' is dead/ Tell your ma she owes me change for that $5 head

well this went under way rather quickly of course voting will take place and the winner will advance...

choose who to loose

Well they both had good lines and bad lines. But I liked the overall rap of Jaybe2K4. So I pick Jaybe2k4.

Altho, Elder_God had a few good lines too.

Thanks to razorxz for the kind words.


I have to go with jaybe. Elder had some nice lines but Jaybe's first flow was the best of the 4 IMO.

btw Jaybe, i've been sittin here stoned starin at ur sig for like 5 mins what the hell is going on there lol

Elder you got murdered.

blade-tsung Wrote: btw Jaybe, i've been sittin here stoned starin at ur sig for like 5 mins what the hell is going on there lol

I think it's Sub-Zero, cuz.

Hey NeoScorpion, I don't mean to interrupt or anything but when and who do I get to battle against?

Oh yeah, I forgot to vote, I vote for ElDeR_GoD but whenever I get my chance to rap I'll blow all you bitches away!!! LOL

jaybe.


GD

jamheads41 Wrote: Hey NeoScorpion, I don't mean to interrupt or anything but when and who do I get to battle against?

read the rules man... you battle whenever you're drawn, and that'll happen sometime after me or Elder gets eliminated... coulda sped things up by voting for me tho, ha

about my sig, UREIKO got part of it right. It's an ice-god type shiz... kind of a sub-zero vibe

Jaybe (Sorry Elder_God...)

UREIKO Wrote: Moogleman90 Wrote: You guys are fuckin insane. Why the fuck do you keep syaing that?!

I'm just tellin it like it is.I calls em like I sees em.