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posted08/20/2010 01:14 AM (UTC)by
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Sektorseven
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

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i have a lot of log entrys so to speak through the years and some of them make great fanfics so i am making those entrys public for all to to see and rate and comment on. all of these storys are in the form of offical documents and log entrys from my fictional agency sektor seven. i am trying to do something new and unique so thats why i wrote them that way. so once they are approved enjoy.grinsmilewink
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Ricardo Snow
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 •06/21/2010 10:04 AM (UTC) •
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Welcome to MKO

I am looking forward to seeing your entries.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •06/21/2010 01:45 PM (UTC) •
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if you think those will be kool then komimg soon is a simplified MK version of Dan Browns book and the movie Angels & Demons. It will be fast paced and full of grusome murders and the ILLUMINATI.wink
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 •06/21/2010 10:30 PM (UTC) •
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So your basically making a Mortal Kombat version of Angels and Demons?
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Sektorseven
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •06/24/2010 10:40 PM (UTC) •
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yes i am but i am changing the alters of sciance to temples all over the realms and the church of illumination to the biggest illuminati symbol in the mk world the pyramid of argus. the bomb will be a canister holding gallon of anti matter. thats enough to annihalate not just one realm but tear a hole in the space time continueum and annihalate all the other realms too. this means armageddon. and four cardinals will be elder gods.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/19/2010 05:39 PM (UTC) •
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sorry if this is bumping but this needs to be settled once and for all.

the reason why Crimson D. sometimes talks like a "kid in school" is because he has a personality thet is so cryptic and complex it cannot easly be explained. some might say he has multiple personalitys ranging from preteen to adult and they can be mixed and matched at his will.

to picture it in your head

imagine his personality is like a 4 dimentional maze of cubic rooms.

each room is one of his personalitys.

there are 17576 rooms and they keep shifting all the time.

they can also combine and make multiple rooms occupy the same space at the same time.

some rooms tend to combine more than others

this is the most simple description i can think of that can show you the complexity of Crimson D.'s personality.

also there are plot holes that i need to fill that is true so they will be
filled in due time.
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I need a new sig, something with Kabal from UMK3 would be sweet. Just imagine that here
 •07/19/2010 05:57 PM (UTC) •
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Dude, you are AWESOME! MK angels and demons FTW!!
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Sektorseven
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/19/2010 06:41 PM (UTC) •
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i am hoping to get the first chapter up but first i have to confirm that this is not plagerism.grin
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 •07/19/2010 07:51 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
sorry if this is bumping but this needs to be settled once and for all.

the reason why Crimson D. sometimes talks like a "kid in school" is because he has a personality thet is so cryptic and complex it cannot easly be explained. some might say he has multiple personalitys ranging from preteen to adult and they can be mixed and matched at his will.

to picture it in your head

imagine his personality is like a 4 dimensional maze of cubic rooms.

each room is one of his personalities.

there are 17576 rooms and they keep shifting all the time.

they can also combine and make multiple rooms occupy the same space at the same time.

some rooms tend to combine more than others

this is the most simple description i can think of that can show you the complexity of Crimson D.'s personality.

also there are plot holes that i need to fill that is true so they will be
filled in due time.

so he has a fucked up version of DID? That's way simpler than trying to make an analogy with rooms and combinations.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/19/2010 10:04 PM (UTC) •
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DID???confused
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 •07/19/2010 10:18 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
DID???confused

...DID means Dissociative Identity Disorder

If you must know, please read this.
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 •07/19/2010 10:26 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Really Wrote:
sorry if this is bumping but this needs to be settled once and for all.
the reason why Crimson D. sometimes talks like a "kid in school" is because I am inconsistent with how to develop the character. I don't know how people should speak in stories so I make him sound like he has the memories of a samurai, and the maturity of a 14-year-old. I'm trying to brush off my mistake by being as vague as possible in who he is meant to be and trying to build hype for him so that people stop bashing how he constantly changes and sounds like a kid.
to picture it in your head
imagine me having a bajillion ideas about mixing and matching ideas I liked over the past few years
each idea is really different, but really cool.
the ideas I have keep shifting all the time because I don't keep track of how to keep my characters in a certain way or know how to make them grow.
they can also combine and make multiple ideas occupy the same space at the same time because I'm not willing to take a good idea that I already wrote and re-write it to make it better, or even try to make it make sense.
some ideas tend to combine more than others
this is the most simple description i can think of that can show you the complexity of Crimson D.'s personality.
also there are plot holes that i need to fill that is true so they will be filled in due time.

Yup, sounds about right.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/20/2010 02:25 AM (UTC) •
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i read the article on wikipedia you posted and yes i guess it is a "f***ed up" version of it
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 •07/20/2010 02:34 AM (UTC) •
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Jerrod Wrote:
Sektorseven Really Wrote:
sorry if this is bumping but this needs to be settled once and for all.
the reason why Crimson D. sometimes talks like a "kid in school" is because I am inconsistent with how to develop the character. I don't know how people should speak in stories so I make him sound like he has the memories of a samurai, and the maturity of a 14-year-old. I'm trying to brush off my mistake by being as vague as possible in who he is meant to be and trying to build hype for him so that people stop bashing how he constantly changes and sounds like a kid.
to picture it in your head
imagine me having a bajillion ideas about mixing and matching ideas I liked over the past few years
each idea is really different, but really cool.
the ideas I have keep shifting all the time because I don't keep track of how to keep my characters in a certain way or know how to make them grow.
they can also combine and make multiple ideas occupy the same space at the same time because I'm not willing to take a good idea that I already wrote and re-write it to make it better, or even try to make it make sense.
some ideas tend to combine more than others
this is the most simple description i can think of that can show you the complexity of Crimson D.'s personality.
also there are plot holes that i need to fill that is true so they will be filled in due time.

Yup, sounds about right.

lol Jerrod, nice.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/21/2010 02:05 AM (UTC) •
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so does that solve the inmaturity mystery, or do i need to say more?confusedconfused
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 •07/21/2010 05:03 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
so does that solve the inmaturity mystery, or do i need to say more?confusedconfused

It didn't seem like much of a mystery, but yeah.

The only problem with developing a character who has DID that I could see is that his personality changes on the fly, so you never know who is learning what, and at any moment he could change and lose all that character development, which would make it nearly impossible to make a character that is useful to the story. In the end some people who read the story give up on the character because he is pretty useless as a character.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •07/22/2010 01:30 AM (UTC) •
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Jerrod do not put words into my mouth. i did not say those things. it is one thing to joke around. it is a totaly differant thing to quote someone and then twist their words around to match your own opinion. this can be considered a form of trolling on some sites. not that i am accusing of trolling i am just letting you know that it is a possibility to some people and that i am not amused at all.furiousfuriousfurious
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 •07/22/2010 02:35 AM (UTC) •
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Constructive Criticism - your mileage may vary.
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 •07/22/2010 02:58 AM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
Jerrod do not put words into my mouth. i did not say those things. it is one thing to joke around. it is a totaly differant thing to quote someone and then twist their words around to match your own opinion. this can be considered a form of trolling on some sites. not that i am accusing of trolling i am just letting you know that it is a possibility to some people and that i am not amused at all.furiousfuriousfurious


Well he's not putting words in your mouth, its basicly a summary of what you said and I found it very amusing.
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 •07/22/2010 06:23 AM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
Jerrod do not put words into my mouth. i did not say those things. it is one thing to joke around. it is a totaly differant thing to quote someone and then twist their words around to match your own opinion. this can be considered a form of trolling on some sites. not that i am accusing of trolling i am just letting you know that it is a possibility to some people and that i am not amused at all.furiousfuriousfurious

You know, they are pretty much the exact same thing if you read them.
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 •07/22/2010 01:20 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
Jerrod do not put words into my mouth. i did not say those things. it is one thing to joke around. it is a totaly differant thing to quote someone and then twist their words around to match your own opinion.

Do you honestly believe I'm the only one here who thinks that? You gave a flowery explanation to try and sound cool and sophisticated with your writings, when what I posted is the most likely truth. You have no direction, no focus, and no idea what you want to do with your stories. You just want to incorporate your favourite aspects and characters into nonsensical stories and don't care how you do it. Seriously, the last story you wrote with Scorpion using H4X to win duels and being skinned and eaten alive by Crimson D (the cyborg/space pirate/samurai/kid) sounds like a joke. Scorpion has no reason to be fighting in a "kolosseum" anyway, for anyone's amusement, where in the world did you come up with that idea and think, "SCORPION WOULD H4X!11!! L0LZ!" and think it was awesome enough for everyone to enjoy it?
You need to have one uniform idea, then write. I suggest you scrap these logs and bone up on some real literature before coming back to this.
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 •07/22/2010 10:07 PM (UTC) •
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Amen.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.

"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.

 •08/02/2010 02:00 PM (UTC) •
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ok well then heres another multi chapter story i am writing. i call it MKSF S7 CYBER KOMBAT. it is about sektor sevens entire computer network being crashed by an AI computer virus.

sektor sevens network also includes the special forces, the red and black dragon, the takunin clan, and the space pirates.

to stop the virus Crimson D. and some other kombatants must traval into cyber space and fight the viruses daemon programs that hold each network hub down. these daemons are useing mk boss kombatants as virtual avatars. to erase the daemon and restore the hub and that sector of the network, they must defeat the avatar it uses in mortal kombat.

hows that for uniqueness?confusedconfusedconfused
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 •08/02/2010 02:29 PM (UTC) •
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Sektorseven Wrote:
ok well then heres another multi chapter story i am writing. i call it MKSF S7 CYBER KOMBAT. it is about sektor sevens entire computer network being crashed by an AI computer virus.
sektor sevens network also includes the special forces, the red and black dragon, the takunin clan, and the space pirates.
to stop the virus Crimson D. and some other kombatants must traval into cyber space and fight the viruses daemon programs that hold each network hub down. these daemons are useing mk boss kombatants as virtual avatars. to erase the daemon and restore the hub and that sector of the network, they must defeat the avatar it uses in mortal kombat.
hows that for uniqueness?confusedconfusedconfused

Those ideas are seen in the following...
1. Diehard 4.
2. Metroid (space pirates)
3. Tron/Lawnmower Man/Super Human Samurai/Yu-Gi-Oh (when they are in Battle City, they enter a computer program to duel Kaiba Corp's former corporate team)
4. Reboot: Daemon Rising
5. Again, Yu-Gi-OH, same season, when the villains take on the avatars of various Duel Monsters.
Yup, these are unique ideas alright...
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 •08/02/2010 05:00 PM (UTC) •
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There aren't any "true" unique ideas in the world. Still, there's a difference between creativity with some borrowed ideas and blatant rip offs.
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