I like to keep myself busy throughout the day, so I'll ask.

Could I be a judge?
I also didn't see this in the rules, but could you submit "enhanced" characters that were poorly developed throughout the past MKs?

That's It. That's Your Application.
I wonder how many people would hire you for saying that.
j/k.
C'mon Dude If you really wanna be a judge, which there will be competition for, i think you might wanna improve on that. Thanks. :)

Alright. I'm glad this has started again!

Here's my entry:



Name: Gabrielle
Age: 11015 yrs. (Being Edenian)
Ht: 5' 7"
Wt: 128

Fighting Styles:
Savate
Pencak Silat
3 Sectional Staff

Bio:

Gabrielle is Tanya's half sister. Her father had been involved before his life with Tanya's mother, and this resulted in the birth of Gabrielle. Gabrielle went to live with her father after her mother was killed trying to fight a theif in their home. Her mother was thrown out of a window and the impact made one of her ribs puncture her lung...she did not survive. Gabrielle is only 2 yrs older than Tanya. Their father, being the Embassedor of Edenia, felt that both of his daughters should be well trained in the martial arts to protect themselves...as his political position could lead to dangerous situations. They were both extensively trained in the arts of Pencak Silat and Savate, styles that took full advantage of their agile and lithe bodies. Even back when they were young and training, it was easy for Gabrielle to see that Tanya had a cruel, competative streak in her. Tanya was insanely jealous of Gabrielle. She wanted her father's affections, and the perks of his status all for herself. Tanya attacked Gabrielle many times, the two seemed more than evenly matched. Gabrielle knew that this was only a shadow of things to come, Tanya was going to get worse as her life progressed. She would become more cunning and decietful, and more importantly....more dangerous.
Gabrielle kept a close eye on Tanya as the years passed by, forever mistrustful of Tanya no matter how sweet and pure she pretended to be. Tanya didn't dissappoint Gabrielle either. One night Gabrielle was hiding in the shadows and saw Tanya talking with the Evil Sorceror Quan Chi. They were planning to help Shinnok overthrow Sindel, and conquer Edenia. Tanya's part in the plan was to keep Raiden and the other earth warrior's suspicions from rising until it was to late. As they would surely interfere if they knew about Shinnok's plans. This was especially important as far as Kitana was concerned. Tanya said it would be no problem for her to keep Kitana in check as they had been close childhood friends. Gabrielle was not surprised at Tanya's treachary, however she did not know how to warn Sindel or Kitana. Kitana would not believe such things about one of her best friends without solid proof. She would have to find another way. Gabrielle listened to the rest of the conversation and slipped away unnoticed.
Gabrielle knew she was running out of time, but still had no solid proof of Tanya's betrayal. Then a break came in the form of her father. He asked to speak to her privately, and told her of his fears about Tanya. He too, had begun to be suspicious of Tanya. Gabrielle told her father of what she heard of Tanya's plan to help Shinnok take over Edenia and possibly Earth, but that she hadn't gone to Sindel or Kitana because she had no proof. Her father told her that she was right about Kitana probably not believing the accusations on Tanya without any proof. But he told her she should warn Sindel of the looming tragedy, she may be more open to the idea of Tanya being a traitor and would see things more clearly than Kitana. Also, she was sent to warn Raiden and the Earth warriros of Shinnok's plans, as a result the Earth Warriors overcame Shinnok and Edenia and Earth were saved. However, Gabrielle was also told she must continue to protect Queen Sindel and Kitana with her life if necessary as Tanya was never captured, Gabrielle agreed and was set to carry out her orders when word came of Kitana's capture at the hands of Tanya for the Dragon King. The Dragon King had been revived, and Kitana was his prisoner. The Embassedor was familiar with the tale of the Dragon King and knew if he succeeded every realm was doomed.
Gabrielle was immediately dispatched to Queen Sindel to warn her of Kitana's fate. The two set off together to rescue Kitana at any cost.... Gabrielle vowed that her sister would be taken....dead or alive.

Special Moves:

*NOTE* Gabrielle is not Mystical or Magical in anyway. All of her moves are performed with her body (legs mostly) Except for Throwing Knife Flurry which of course is self explainatory.

Kick Crusher- Gabrielle takes advantage of her speed and does a hard round house to her opponent's face then fluidly goes into a lightning fast foot sweep, and as the opponent lays on the ground she jumps up and comes down hard with both feet on the chest of the opponent.

Cartwheel dizzy - Gabrielle does three fast cartwheels kicking her opponent each time, this dazes the opponent, as they stand there dizzy, Gabrielle performs a strong upward axe kick sending the opponent skyward. (This moves opens the door for juggle combo oppertunities as it ends in a pop up)

Throwing Knife Flury - Gabrielle takes out three silver throwing knives and throws them at her opponent. (Once thrown, if they connect, the first three throwing knives will stay in the opponent for the rest of the match, one in the shoulder, one in the leg and one in the stomach, it's like an impale type move. Any other knives thrown will cause damage but will dissapear.

Hurracanrana - Anyone familiar with Lita from WWE, knows what this move is. I think it fits nicely with her style of fighting. for those who don't know it's a throw move that entails jumping and wrapping your legs around your opponents neck either from the front or back and then taking them down to the ground slamming them hard into the floor. Gabrielle's is done from the front.

Break Arm/Leg - This is more of a defensive move, when performed Gabrielle will catch the opponent's attaking limb, then uses one of her free legs to trip the opponent to the floor while still holding the opponents attacking limb, and then Stomps hard on the arm/leg in question breaking it. There would be a sick crack soun effect for this move. And, of course, being MK the opponent will get up an still be able to use the limbs just fine. .

Fatalities:

Throat Slit - Gabrielle steps behind the groggy opponent and kicks them in the back of one of their knees forceing them into a kneeling position, then grabs their chin from behind and lifts the head exposing the throat, and takes out one of her throwing knives and slits the throat ear to ear.

Foot Neck Snap - Gabrielle brings her foot across her opponents face three times (Back and fourth with the same foot) She then cocks her head to the side and looks at the dazed opponent...and lets loose with a furious roundhouse that twists her opponent's head all the away around to the back, a very loud nasty cracking sound is heard and the opponent falls in a heap on the ground.

Hara Kiri - Gabrielle take out one of her throwing knives and drives it swiftly and deeply into her forehead.

Stage:

Gabrielle's stage is the Edenian Embassy Courtyard. You can be knocked inside the Embassy by the SW wall of the building. If you remain Outside you can be knocked to the lower level of the courtyard (You initially start out on a large balcony attached to the courtyard. Once you get to the actual courtyard the fighter will have to contend with would-be assassins in the woods sourrounding the Embassy throwing things like knives, and bombs at them. the knives take little damage, but if you do not move in time one of the bombs will take a large protion of energy. There are two death traps....Outside if a figher is knocked into a spot light that moves around the NE corner of the courtyard the fighter will be taken out by Sniper fire. If you have been knocked inside the Embassy there is a door that is marked "Embassedor's Office" If the opponent is knocked through this door a bomb goes off as there was a bomb placed in the office in an assassination attempt on Gabrielle's father. The opponents limbs fly about and there is blood everywhere.

Here is a Pic of Gabrielle:
Gabrielle Pic
*NOTE* Please dot NOT reply to the pic thread as it is very old (Back from FEB)

Please disregard the Story in the description of the pic. It is no longer relivant.

Mmm.. You can enter whatever character you want, as long as it's made up by yourself, but it's up to us to decide whether they're worthy. So if you do choose on creating an enhanced version of a poor mk character from the past, it would have to be amazing to catch our eye.
But using your own creativity is the best path.

Thank You Tom Taz for submitting Gabrielle.
You can submit your characters, although, the "BJE" if you read the rules will take place later on until the judges have been acquired.
So the list of characters will be updated later after we get the judges.
You can still submit your characters if you don't have time only, we'll save em for later.
Thanks ;)

I'm in for kombat.

Brodeur Wrote: Mmm.. You can enter whatever character you want, as long as it's made up by yourself, but it's up to us to decide whether they're worthy. So if you do choose on creating an enhanced version of a poor mk character from the past, it would have to be amazing to catch our eye. But using your own creativity is the best path.

Who was this for? Gabrielle isn't Tanya. She is completely original and made up by me.

TomTaz Wrote: Brodeur Wrote: Mmm.. You can enter whatever character you want, as long as it's made up by yourself, but it's up to us to decide whether they're worthy. So if you do choose on creating an enhanced version of a poor mk character from the past, it would have to be amazing to catch our eye. But using your own creativity is the best path. Who was this for? Gabrielle isn't Tanya. She is completely original and made up by me.

Oh that was answering Wanderer's question.
That wasn't for you TomTaz. You know how the tournament works.

Oh, Ok man. LOL Kinda threw me off for a sec.

Brodeur Wrote: That's It. That's Your Application. I wonder how many people would hire you for saying that. j/k. C'mon Dude If you really wanna be a judge, which there will be competition for, i think you might wanna improve on that. Thanks. :)

Haha. I was trying to half-ass it. Alright, here's your references:

I believe myself to be a very fair person yet highly opinionated, however, I do keep personal affairs out of business.

I have one year moderating experience (total) in two different settings. I am moderator on Pokemon NetBattle, an online battle simulation for the Pokemon games. Most people favor me over other mods, because many moderators abuse their power and threaten new and old users alike. I know when to make a fair call and look at different perspectives. At times, I am somewhat lenient in many decisions, and am not as highly critical in certain circumstances.

My other experience is on a small forum called "The Red Scare." Its a relatively quiet message board community which has had "drama" quite a number of times, and I've had to deal with many scenarios when judging is of great importance and could mean a drastic change for the community.

As stated earlier, I believe myself to be fair in terms of business and do not let personal opinions reflect my judgement. I've been recognized by many different internet users saying that I do a good job, and by my superiors.

And remember!


I'm also a judge for the fatality contest

Well done Wanderer.
I'll keep that in the judge's application file cabinet.
Until we get more people applying for these positions, there won't be any judges till then.
So bring people and help this tournament on its way. This process will take time. thanks.

Character Name: Sabre

Age: 262 years

Height: 6"5

Weight: 275 lbs

Sex: Male

Alignment: Evil

BloodType: Dragon

Weapon: Dual Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger)

Fighting Styles:Dragon,Hapkido

Weapon Styles:Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger)

Arena: Ice Dragon Temple,a temple high in the mountains,only known by the Ice Dragon race or allys.Ice surrounding the arena,a giant cave is held there,rumoured to be where the legendary and only existing Ice Dragon alive today,pillars are surrounding the arena with a path of pillars leading to the cave with unknown writing on them.
Arena Weapon: Dragon Sword,a legendary sword used only by the allys of the rare Ice Dragons,placed in the middle of the Ice Dragon Temple,infront of a cave.

Arena Fatality: The opponent is kicked in front of the cave,a loud roaring sound is heard as the opponent scrambles to his feet,the noise eventually stops as the opponent begins to walk away yelling at Sabre.As the opponent is walking away a dragons head appears behind him and grabs him in his mouth,the dragon violenty swings his head around then stops,the opponent is seen laying in his mouth,almost all in blood,as the dragon freezes him then bites him clean in half.The dragons then proceeds back into the cave.

Arena Death Trap: The opponent is kicked off of the mountain,falling over 50 feet onto a bed of ice spikes.

Arena Interaction:The pillars can be destroyed and the opponent kicked into walls cause ice shards to fall causing minimal damage,but stunning them.

Special Moves1: Sabre grabs opponent by the throat,lifts them,choking them and violenty throws his opponent across the arena.

2: Takes out the Thrice Dragon and throws them at the opponent.

3: Looks at opponent and quickly dashes behind them,with the opponent not knowing where he is,sort of like a teleport.

4:Grabs opponent flips them upside down and drives their head into the ground in one quick motion.(aka Tombstone.)

Fatality1: Sabre stands infront of his opponent,you can hear him saying something to them but cant make it out,he crosses his arms and lets out a scream,punching the opponent over 20 times in less then ten seconds(think brutality),he then stands infront of the victim and reveals a thrice dragon in each hand,while the opponent slowly falls apart.

Fatality2: Sabre grabs the opponents head and tears it off,he then throws the head up high in the air as he slices the opponents arms and legs with the thrice dragon,does his victory pose with the thrice dragon in the air as the head falls onto the blade.Fatality.

Story: Sabre,once thought to be nothing more then a myth,a legendary ice breathing dragon,only known as the protector of a castle once called Danaria.He had been used only to keep out invaders with his icy powers.

The story goes that once,long ago,after years of being abused by the leaders of Danaria,the legend snapped and destroyed the whole castle unleashing a vicious attack freezing and killing everything in its path.

After years of regaining his strength Sabre set his sites on the earthrealm.But the thunder god Raiden had learned of this attack and readied himself for the battle of his life realizing that Sabre was much more than just a myth.

The two fought furiously Sabre with his ice and Raiden with the power of lightning,Raiden power of lightning came out on top in the end,but not without a fight.When the fight was over Sabre collapsed into a forest and stayed there.

After over 20 years of secretly searching,the sorceror Shang Tsung had finally found what he had been searching for,the legendary Sabre.Tsung had healed the injured dragons wounds trying to tame him,Tsung soon found out that this could not be done.

Refusing to except it,Tsung had come up with an alternative,as he one night,while the legendary creature was sleeping,he turned his body into a humans.

Sabre woke up the next morning looking for Tsung relizing what he had done to him.When he found the sorceror he was near killing him before he explained the advantages of his new form to him,his strength being increased,his speed being increased,at a cost,he could now never use his ice powers ever again.

Sabre with his new found strength is now out for revenge against the thunder god,Raiden.

Character Description: Ninja type mask,blue skin,similar to some ninja's,but also completely different.Alot is unknown about his clothes,but the fact that it was all provided by Shang Tsung himself.However the mask,that noone knows about except Sabre himself,not even Tsung,his savior has any idea.But it is believed to be built right into to his body and that he cannot survive wtihout it. Picture is here: http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/art/images/1653.jpg
Character's Signature Quote: "Let God have Mercy,for I shall not."

Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: Character Name: Sabre Age: 262 years Height: 6"5 Weight: 275 lbs Sex: Male Alignment: Evil BloodType: Dragon Weapon: Dual Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger) Fighting Styles:Dragon,Hapkido Weapon Styles:Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger) Arena: Ice Dragon Temple,a temple high in the mountains,only known by the Ice Dragon race or allys.Ice surrounding the arena,a giant cave is held there,rumoured to be where the legendary and only existing Ice Dragon alive today,pillars are surrounding the arena with a path of pillars leading to the cave with unknown writing on them. Arena Weapon: Dragon Sword,a legendary sword used only by the allys of the rare Ice Dragons,placed in the middle of the Ice Dragon Temple,infront of a cave. Arena Fatality: The opponent is kicked in front of the cave,a loud roaring sound is heard as the opponent scrambles to his feet,the noise eventually stops as the opponent begins to walk away yelling at Sabre.As the opponent is walking away a dragons head appears behind him and grabs him in his mouth,the dragon violenty swings his head around then stops,the opponent is seen laying in his mouth,almost all in blood,as the dragon freezes him then bites him clean in half.The dragons then proceeds back into the cave. Arena Death Trap: The opponent is kicked off of the mountain,falling over 50 feet onto a bed of ice spikes. Arena Interaction:The pillars can be destroyed and the opponent kicked into walls cause ice shards to fall causing minimal damage,but stunning them. Special Moves1: Sabre grabs opponent by the throat,lifts them,choking them and violenty throws his opponent across the arena. 2: Takes out the Thrice Dragon and throws them at the opponent. 3: Grabs opponents by feet and swings them around then throws them across the arena. Fatality1: Sabre stands infront of his opponent,you can hear him saying something to them but cant make it out,he crosses his arms and lets out a scream,punching the opponent over 20 times in less then ten seconds(think brutality),he then stands infront of the victim and reveals a thrice dragon in each hand,while the opponent slowly falls apart. Fatality2: Sabre grabs the opponents head and tears it off,he then throws the head up high in the air as he slices the opponents arms and legs with the thrice dragon,does his victory pose with the thrice dragon in the air as the head falls onto the blade.Fatality. Story: Sabre,once thought to be nothing more then a myth,a legendary ice breathing dragon,only known as the protector of a castle once called Danaria.He had been used only to keep out invaders with his icy powers. The story goes that once,long ago,after years of being abused by the leaders of Danaria,the legend snapped and destroyed the whole castle unleashing a vicious attack freezing and killing everything in its path. After years of regaining his strength Sabre set his sites on the earthrealm.But the thunder god Raiden had learned of this attack and readied himself for the battle of his life realizing that Sabre was much more than just a myth. The two fought furiously Sabre with his ice and Raiden with the power of lightning,Raiden power of lightning came out on top in the end,but not without a fight.When the fight was over Sabre collapsed into a forest and stayed there. After over 20 years of secretly searching,the sorceror Shang Tsung had finally found what he had been searching for,the legendary Sabre.Tsung had healed the injured dragons wounds trying to tame him,Tsung soon found out that this could not be done. Refusing to except it,Tsung had come up with an alternative,as he one night,while the legendary creature was sleeping,he turned his body into a humans. Sabre woke up the next morning looking for Tsung relizing what he had done to him.When he found the sorceror he was near killing him before he explained the advantages of his new form to him,his strength being increased,his speed being increased,at a cost,he could now never use his ice powers ever again. Sabre with his new found strength is now out for revenge against the thunder god,Raiden. Character Description: Ninja type mask,blue skin,similar to some ninja's,but also completely different.Picture is here:http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/art/images/1653.jpg Character's Signature Quote: "Let God have Mercy,for I shall not."

Wow. NICE! Sabre's cool.

You better believe I'm a judge for this biatch that or I mite enter.

I want to be a judge if it's ok for you guys.

Hey you guys all interested in becoming judges.
If you did read above, please submit a post with an application for becoming a judge, then i'll let you'll know after i tally them all up.

Application man I might as well enter this I"ll have a person for tomorrow. LoL u know me a lil from the other 2 tourny's I'm running and help running. Im a hard Worker and am fair at judging lol. PLus I have a lot of free time because im a kid and such lol.

DUDE I NEED YOUR VOTE FOR THE OTHER TOURNY TOO lol

WARNING! WARNING! WARNING!
Here comes trouble!!
Ask TomTaz or tgrant, they might know what this means.

What Do You Mean Warning??
Hey TomTaz, tgrant what is he talking about?
I see they're not online, so SmokeNc-017, what is this warning and trouble you're talking about? is it JRC?

This is a message from my new character.

Here comes trouble!!!

NAME:Unit TK-787
Code Name:Ravage
Height:6'7
Weight:749 lbs
Alliance:Tekunin (for now)
Race:Battle Android
Color/Construction:Triple reinforced titanium
Power Source: Nuclear/Ionic hybrid power cell
Disciplines:All known styles of martail arts
Favorite styles:Berserker, Kio Kushin Kiao, Ninjitsu, self-taught(no name)

Close Combat Weapons:
Dual elctrified tenticals from wrists.
Twin beam sabres on his back(support weapons. Not as powerful as the ion sabre but still deliver huge damage.)
Ion Sabre handle(turns into a sword) on his right hip.(total of three sabres)
Razor claws

Look:
Shoulders have laser guided twin Missle pods. Along with shoulder fins.
Back has two ion jets which stretch from top of shoulders to about a little below the his waist. Accompanied by two stablezing fins for aireal acrobatics.
Front: Chestplate has twin vents for cool down. Slims down abit at the waist. Two side mounted missle pods on the sides of the chest plate
Left hand:Built in laser canon attachment.
Head: Between shoulder missle pods. Five inches in from the front of the chest plate. Head is in the shape of a Zone of Enders mech. Red visor stretches across the head connecting to the mouth gaurd. Mouth gaurd has two small vents on each side for cool down and speech.
Legs:Titanium covering. Have supplemental sub boosts on the side to assist in lightning quick manuveres.
Feet:Titanium shin gaurds with slots on the sides which dispense pulse daggers. Two final small jets on the calves for maximum arieal efficency.
Overall:Complete titanium covering and structure. Each armor piece can seperate individually to reveal sub armaments.Chest has main ion laser, lower sides have twin gatling canons, shins have machine gun barrels.

Moves:
Jet Rush: Ravage uses his ion jets to rush his opponet. On the pass by he grabs their head and flies twenty feet into the air. he then power dives into the ground with the opponets head first, still in his grasp.
Whiplash:Ravage grabs opponet with his tenticals and throws them to the ground. He then stands over them and beats their body with his tenticles over seventy times.(Doesn't count as combo chain.
Reverse jet thrust.Ravage throws his opponet to the ground and then steps on their chest so they can't get up. He then reverse the thrust on his ion jets and actaully press harder on the opponent's chest cavity. The total pressure is measured at 20,000 psi.
Ionic Crush:Ravage takes some of the energy from his jets and channels it into his arm cannon. A blue ball of energy is formed, he releases all of this energy in one blast at the opponet.
Jet Swipe (escape move):A technique where Ravage lifts several inches of the ground and side steps an opponet's attack, near or far and appears right behind them for a counter assult.
Berserker: He flies into the air and locks onto the opponent. He then takes out his twin beam sabres and flies down towards the enemy hacking them to pieces.(Only move which can also double as a fatality.
Plasma Wave:(Weapon move only)
Ravage charges all of his power into his ion sabre and unleashes it into a series of horizontal and vertical slashes which fly at his opponet.

Fatality:
Tri Sabre Suffering:Ravage sticks his two beam sabres cross ways into the opponets torso. He then takes out his ion sabre and cuts the guy up into seventeen pieces. He sheiths his ion sabre and rips the twin sabres sideways out of the opponets body. He then slices them two more times down the middle and spins the swords in his hands and sheiths them into his back. The opponets body explodes in a cloud of blood and fleshy chunks. At the end Ravages armor is covered in his opponets blood.
Berserker Rush:(See above in moves section)
1000 Ways to die:Ravage starts to pull out his pulse daggers and jumps into the air. He then shoots 1000 daggers into the opponent's body covering every square inch. He then systematicly starts to detonate each one working from the ground up. The opponet screams in pain as parts of his body are blown away little by little before the final two daggers in his head explode and the chunks fly all over the areana. The only thing left is a body which is blown up in the front with blood spilling out from the insides and fragments of bones and any left over pieces of organs are scattered next to the body.
Infernal Sundering:Ravage stabs his oponent in the feet with two pulse blades so they can't escape. He then flies into the air with his jets and faces his opponent. His armor splits open and shows of his hidden armaments. His center laser begins to charge up and focus onto the opponent.He then takes out his twin beam sabers and begins to flow power through them. His shoulder missle pods open and place laser guides on the opponent. Ravage makes an X in mid air with two slices of his beam sabres and fires the laser right behind it. The laser shoots down at the opponet, accompanied by a full on assault of his artilery, gatling canon, missles and machine guns. The massive explosion creates a blast sphere, Ravage then takes out his ion sabre and does one last plasma wave at the sphere detonating it. The explosion causes red rain, which is actually the opponets blood fall from the ski, along with his flesh chunks. The areana which the battle took place in was nothing but a flaming crater after the fatality, with Ravage still floating above the blast zone. Hara Kiri-Black hole Ravage internally sabotages his nuclear ionic core and creates it into a mini black hole. The black hole then causes Ravage to impload on himself. Story: Ravage was a prototype assasin which was being developed by the Tekunin. The power and strength of a full android was uncompareable to any cyborg ninja, including Sektor himself. However, since Ravage was an android he could never learn anything new or adapt to his current surroundings without constant reprogramming.Since cyborgs are part human, they can feed their information into their human brain and come up with stratagies, adaptations and preferances to their current inviroment. Robots can analyze, but the can never exceed their programing.The concience circut would make it possible for androids to react accordingly in any situation by learning moves, techniques and developing prefernces all at lighting speed on the battle field. He was designed as a last resort incase the Tekunin ever faced defeat. He was the ultimate killing machine, cold and emotionless. The plan was to later mass produce the Ravage modle and take not only Earth bu also Outworld and the other connecting realms by storm. He was programmed with every style of martial arts known to man so that he can incorperate it into his own fighting style. But sinc he was a robot, him actaully developing a stlye of his own was impossible. The scientist worked nonstop and created a concience circut to give Ravage a sence of self. He was then sent out to the dessert for a final test. The concience circut malfunctioned and drove Ravage berserk causing him to murder the scientists and anybody in the amidiet area. He was barely put down by Sektor and shut down with an EMP blast which shut down his systems. Sektor barely escaped with his life, however he saw the potnetial that a machine like this had. A unit of these could be sent in with fully operational concience circuts and eliminate their targets with the greatest of ease. A problem occurd when the scientists tried to extract the faulty circut from Ravage, it was fully merged with his bio-metrics. The scientist created an alternate path for the circut to follow so that the chance of Ravage going berserk were greatly decreased. Since it was too dangerous to reactivate Ravage, even with the improvements he was stored away in a suspension chamber until his problem was solved. Three years passed and Ravages power supply reactivated with the help of the original concience circut, now remmebered as havoc. This was the first time Ravage was truely awake. He quickly ran an internal scan which checked out positvley. He then recieved a message. It was a feedback video from his fight with Sektor three years earlier. His fight was a failure, Ravage believed that he had disgraced his clan and needed to proove his worth. He incorperated Sektors fighiting techniques into his own style and broke from the chamber. He knew his goal, he knew his targets, now he was off to bring back glory to the Tekunin by proving his worth and showing them he was not a failure. He know sets out un a mission unaware that his true purpose is yet to be discovered. Quote: "Resistence is futile, surrender now or face destruction" His visor glows and his hands spin while saying this. Level: Tekunin Holding chamber: This level is a holding chambre for experiments which were incomplete or are still being developed. The Tekunin will place the experiments into suspension cells, which look like individual escape pods to repair, destroy, or preserve experiments. The tubes are filled with nano fluid which is a type of gel composed of nano machines who will work on the project at a molecular level if a solution can not be found on a larger scale. Each cell is filled with one of three liquids, which can be determined by a tube which stretches across the floor and jacks into the suspension cell. Blue is a repair liquid, which can be used to restore life in a battle, read is a destructive liquid and can do massive damage to the player or the oponet. The green liquid is much like Sub-Zero's ice ball, a person can be suspended in animation during a fight if he is sprayed, or touching the liquid. The room is steralized so that no bacteria would infect the nano fluid. There are suspension cells lining the walls on both sides of the room. Each cell holds an eperiment. The eperiments are bio mechanic clones of all the MK figthers. The rooms color is a peral white with gray undertones and blue lights lining the tubes, walk ways, and the room itself. The lights give the room a blue light which alters its appearance.There is also a mist on the floor since the room is kept at a sub zero temp. There are monitors on all the sides of the room which display the room at several different camera angles so the whole fight can also be viewed from a top angle, showing the whole areana, a bottom angle from the glass floor which shows the ceiling and the fighters above. A camera from P1's view and another one from P2's view. These are all displayed on the surrounding monitors around the areana for a dramatic effect. This doesn't mean that they can't be broken or smashed into. Some of the danger zones in this area are faulty suspension cells, which will attack the players at random times if they get to close. The experiment inside will either grab the opponet or use one of their special moves on an opponet. Parts of the floor can be broken through. Underneath the floor is a gaint generator which provides power to the room. The opponet will take three counts of damage from this hazard. The first is getting knocked through the floor. The second is being electricuted in the current's flow, the third is from an explosion that occurs after the shock, which shoots the opponet back through the floor and back on the battle field. The newly broken floor will now act as a new hazard. The death trap is a giant container of red nano fluid. If the opponet is shot into it the glass breaks and the fluid spills on top of them. After a couple of seconds, the opponet falls to his knees and starts coughing up blood. His chest then gets eatin away and his organs spill onto the floor out of his chest cavity. All of his flesh dissolves along with any other organic material, as the nano machines destroy the new target. The stage weapon is a super powerful plasma whip which is usaully used to stimulate the nano machines. The whip is very powerful using a magnetic feild to control a stream of super heated plasma. This causes the whip to deal an additional case of heat damage to the opponet.

I think I shall not participate as a judge this time around, and instead enter the tournament myself...

Name: Kilvan
Age: Eternal
Height: 6'7
Weight: 189 lbs.
Sex: M
Alignment: Evil
BloodType: Unknown
Weapon: ParalaScythe
Fighting Styles: Devil Hands, Toreador Muerta
Weapon Styles: Scythe

Kilvan's Backstory and purpose:

In the places forbidden to mortals known only as the Chaosrealm and the Netherrealm, lurk many of the forgotten gods of old. The Netherrealm was home to Shinnok, the feared fallen elder god, known for his dark intent. However, other malign gods do exist, and the majority of them make their home in the Chaosrealm. Such is the case of the god of chaos, Zaggot.

Many thousands of years ago, when Shinnok was still amongst the elder gods, Zaggot, who was ruler of Chaosrealm, sensed the Elder god's dark nature and tempted him. They made a bet: If Shinnok could successfully wage war with the elder gods and emerge victorious, claiming the Heavens and Earthrealm as his own, Zaggot would willfully hand over rule of Chaosrealm to him. However, if Shinnok lost, he would forever remain in thrall to Zaggot, as his subordinate. Shinnok accepted, and waged a war against Raiden and the elder gods which he lost. But before Zaggot could claim his rulership over Shinnok, the latter was banished to the Netherrealm, lost from contact for aeons as he waged a war against Lucifer for the dominion of that realm.

Zaggot was infuriated. He could not openly rebuke the Elder Gods for their decision, for fear of a similar punishment upon their discovery of his bet with Shinnok. So he was contented to cut his losses, and ruled Chaosrealm in solitude.

However, in time, the god's paranoia overtook him. Zaggot discovered that Shinnok had kept scrolls of his deeds, and if those scrolls were to come into possession of the elder gods, then his doom was assured. He had his most feared subject, Kilvan, the God of death, search for them, but to no avail.

Ages passed. Shinnok resurfaced from the Netherrealm as its leader, far more powerful than he had once been, and made an attempt to overthrow the Heavens once more, as well as Edenia. During this time, he announced his intentions to destroy the god of Chaos by using the scrolls he had kept, engraved with the details of their bet.

Zaggot would have none of it. In fear, he dispatched Kilvan to capture Shinnok and bring him before him in chains, along with the scrolls, but before he could, Shinnok was destroyed by Quan Chi's treachery. Kilvan returned to Chaosrealm, furious at the notion of his talents and time being wasted.

Zaggot was furious. His rightful property had been destroyed. What was worse, he now had no way of locating the scrolls. He dispatched Kilvan again, this time to destroy Quan Chi, but again was robbed of his vengeance, as Quan Chi was destroyed by the efforts of Raiden and his mortals. Kilvan again returned to Chaosrealm, his efforts made useless a second time, and becoming weary of his ruler's paranoia. He began to make plans of his own.

With the rise of the Dragon King, Zaggot's fears were made all the more horrible by the realization that Noob Saibot, once servant to Shinnok, and later to Shao Kahn, has now allied with the Dragon King, and has bestowed unto him the late Netherrealm Ruler's records. Zaggot dispatches Kilvan once more.

This time, Kilvan's mission is two-fold. He must kill the Dragon King, acquire Shinnok's scrolls, and return them to Zaggot. Also, he must destroy all those who have earned the god's wrath: Raiden, for banishing Shinnok to the Netherrealm, and his Earthrealm warriors, for destroying Quan Chi.

But Kilvan has plans of his own. Exhausted to the absolute limits of his patience by Zaggot's wanton whims, he will instead use the other God's blind dependence on him to his own advantage. He intends to use the scrolls against Zaggot once he obtains possession of them, and win his freedom by causing Zaggot's downfall. Then he will step into his rightful place as Chaosrealm's ruler.

Accompanied by his tiny faithful demon servant Piroh, he opens a portal into Outworld, takes on mortal form, and begins down the path that will lead to his freedom from incompitence and servitude, towards superiority and domination. Along the way, he chuckles to himself, in anticipation of the bloodshed, torments, suffering and death that is sure to come.

Kilvan's personal Bio:

Kilvan has been known through time by many names, such as Anubis to the ancient Egyptians. He became the servant to the god of Chaos many epochs ago, losing a previous bet, records of which were never created, these events happening long before the creation of even the Edenians. However, it is rumored that Kilvan was once the ruler of Chaosrealm, until Zaggot stole it from him.

Kilvan could be said to be the most despicable of the malevolent gods. Pain and suffering are his only pleasures, and he delights in inflicting torments upon all who cross his path. Vain and narcissistic, he views himself as the only being suitable to rule Chaosrealm, and despises his status as Zaggot's underling. However, the word of a god is not easily broken, and so through the aeons, Kilvan has remained loyal to his word, serving Zaggot.

Although quite the capable fighter (and the inventor of Toreador Muerta, a fighting style now used by some netherrealm denizens involving mainly hand chops) Kilvan preferrs to remain on the sidelines, setting traps for his opponents and watch as they suffer and bleed, rather than fight them directly. Once he administers a killing stroke, he truly feels he is accomplishing his duty as the God of death. He views the Mortal Kombat tournaments as a waste of time. For this love of cruelty, he was viewed as an abomination by the other gods, and when he chose solitary rule over Chaosrealm, leaving his place in the heavens, they were glad to be rid of him. Now under the command of Zaggot, Kilvan begins a plan to overthrow his ruler, and reclaim his lost realm.

Character Description:

Kilvan is fearsome in appearance. His face is covered by a black steel mask. This mask has golden trim around the eye sockets, which taper down into a small line where a nose would be. Only blankness can be seen through the eye sockets. There is a gash in the mask over the mouth, extending from one side to the next in a parody of a sadistic grin. This gash is very thin, and since the mask is constructed from steel, no mouth or jaw movement can be seen when he speaks.

On his head, surrounding the mask, he sports a round black headdress, which extends to half a foot to either side of his head, as a half-circle. Small tabs of metal adorn this half-circle, extending from the head towards the edges. At the left tip of the headdress, dangles a small star. At the right tip dangles a small crescent moon. The headdress, at its hem, flows into a series of triangular flaps, which at their tips connect to blue jewels. These flaps cover a dark red robe which covers Kilvan's shoulders, upper arms, and the higher portions of his chest.

Below the robe he wears a leathery black suit with gold trim,extending into two tails behind him. The suit is tucked into golden steel gauntlets which feature demented claws at the fingertips, and the suit is as well tucked under a large hexagon-shaped emerald jewel affixed around his waist, from which dangle small golden chains.

Below the jewel are crimson red leggings which are tucked into yellow boots with black trim.

He is accompanied by all times by his tiny demon servant, Piroh, who wears a simple steepled hat and dark blue gown. A cyclops, Piroh has one great eye and thin, cruel lips. No one knows what the connection between Kilvan and Piroh is, but they are never apart, the sole exception being when Kilvan fights. Piroh floats away, to rejoin Kilvan once the match is finished.

Kilvan's weapon, the Paralascythe, is a combination of a deadly weapon and a musical instrument. A great golden scythe with a wide blade, the handle is hollow, and features holes like those of a flute. When he plays this instrument, hypersonic waves are emitted which can cause temporaray loss of sight, hearing, and paralysis, depending on Kilvan's preference.

Special Moves:

Tune of Despair: Kilvan plays a shrieking tune upon his Paralascythe, sending a hypersonic wave a short distance forward. If this connects, it will cause the enemy to stumble back, blinded and deafened (so yes, this affects Kenshi, too) - He may use this time to attack.

Phantom Razor: Kilvan performs the impossible by reaching into his headress to one of the metal tabs there, removing a thin two-foot blade, and throwing it at the enemy. If this connects, it will remain in the enemy's body.

A Cruel Turn: Kilvan races forward and hacks with his scythe. If he connects, he will swing the opponent around and toss them a good distance away. Very good for breaking floors.

Sinsation: Kilvan jams the butt of his scythe into the enemy's face, and quickly uses the back to swing like a golfer and smack the enemy high into the air. Unlike "A Cruel Turn" and "Tune of Despair", this will automatically place Kilvan into Scythe fighting style if he uses it, so as not to abuse juggle combos.

Fatalities:

Serial Killer Thriller: Kilvan plays a dischordant melody upon his scythe. The enemy stops all movement, completely paralyzed, unable to do anything but scream. Kilvan takes the time to admire his scythe's blade. Turning toward the enemy with a sadistic cackle, he swings twice, with the second swing jamming the tip into the enemy's skull. All is still for a moment, until the enemy's body falls, separated at the neck by Kilvan's first slice. He hoists the head upon the scythe high, and chuckles.

Prime Evil: Piroh floats into the arena, and immobilizes the enemy with a light blast. As they vainly try to escape, Kilvan jams the blade of his scythe into his opponent's abdomen, and pulls. Stomach, intestines and whatnot spill forth. As his enemy screams in horror and anguish, he slowly slices them in half down the middle, bottom up.

Hara-Kiri: Painiac: Delighting in all agony, including his own, Kilvan slowly tears a hole in his chest with his scythe, giggling madly. He reaches in, and pulls out his own heart, stumbling forward and offering it over to the opponent. Still giggling uncontrollably as they step back, he falls over face first. Piroh floats over, and kneels by his side, weeping.


Signature Quotes:

1. "Your screams and wails...are the most beautiful melody..."

2. "Not even worth my time...wouldn't you agree, Piroh?"


Arena: The Locust Fields

Story (as posted in the Arena contest topic):

Outworlders, like Humans, need food, and like us, they derive a great amount of sustenance from wheat-based products such as bread. It is obvious that they too, have a series of farms and plains where such granaryis harvested. But again, like us, they have a problem: Crop vermin.

In one of Outworld's northern farmlands, close to five years ago, an immense plain existed, wheat stretching out as far es the eyes could see. It was one of Outworld's few attractive sites, and despite the fact that they performed labor for Kahn's benefit, the captured Edenians that were forced into slavery here found the scenery better than most. What was more, the supply was plentiful, so none ever starved, unlike the cituations so familiar in the Emperor's cobalt mines. The Edenians worked well, and for the most part, were treated well by the guards stationed there, who also enjoyed the peace and tranquility presented by the environment.

That all changed on one day. A migrating swarm of omnivourous Hive Locusts, one of Outworld's most infuriatingly resilient of insectoid vermin, deviated from its migration course and came into view of the fields.

Disaster occurred. The swarm descended like an immense dark cloud, and instantly began to feed. The laborurers and guards fought a helpless battle against the quickly reproducing locusts that lasted for a full month, and finally retreated when their ranks had been thinned out too far by the swarm's flesh-eating tendencies.

For five years, the swarm has replicated and remained here, still in the proceess of consuming the grain. The entire area was decreed a hazard, off-limits to all, under the order of Shao Kahn. But with his fall, and the Dragon King's newfound reign, the fields have been reopened, and small numbers of his vast army have been charged with the task of eradicating the swarm, the King's intention being to reuse the land. All attempts are failing. It is unknown to all of Outworld's citizens, but the plague of Hive Locusts was released by Kilvan himself, as a practical joke. He sought to sow destruction, famine and death in Outworld for his own amusement.

Description:

A lone round platform high above the surface of the soil is the battleground. It was from here that the Outworld guards supervised the work taking place below. More like it can be seen in the distance.

The surrounding atmopshere below is horrid. The swarm of locusts (and the occasional Rotfly), being low-flying creatures, is so thick that the ground below can no longer be seen from this height. All that is visible is a writhing, seething mass of grey.

The sky above is dark, almost midnight blue, every now and then a high-flying pest circles overhead. A large, sickly, glowing full orange moon shines in the sky, chasing away the small pink trails of dusk that lurk at the horizon.

The arena is composed of but one level, the round battleground.

Arena Weapon: Whip (2): For those rare occasions when the Outworld guards had to use discipline on the workers. Located near the centre, and close to the edge.

Arena Interaction: As one moves closer to the edges, they are assaulted by several of the locusts that can fly at higher altitudes than the rest.

Arena Fatality/Death Trap: If one is unlucky enough to be ejected from the battleground, a sure death is all that awaits. The victim will be assaulted during free-fall by a moving stream of the swarm, his tissues in the process of being stripped from his body as he screams, and upon impacting with the ground, the corpse will be assaulted and stripped of its remaining flesh within seconds, leaving only a skeleton.

Brodeur Wrote: What Do You Mean Warning?? Hey TomTaz, tgrant what is he talking about? I see they're not online, so SmokeNc-017, what is this warning and trouble you're talking about? is it JRC?

I think he means I'm entering! lol j/k

Seriously tough, I'm not asure what he means. I think he may be referring to his character Ravage. I'm sure I've read that concept before!

I won't be judging anymore. I'm going to enter some characters! I'll post the first later on.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! Here comes trouble!! Ask TomTaz or tgrant, they might know what this means.

lol So you entered Ravage after all. Good.