TomTaz Wrote: SmokeNc-017 Wrote: WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! Here comes trouble!! Ask TomTaz or tgrant, they might know what this means. lol So you entered Ravage after all. Good.

Geez.... I feel so stupid.
I thought that Johnny_CageRules was here or something, lol.
well he was...oh well.

Well i will be one of the returning judges, i was thinking of entering my own character but i decided not to. Maybe next time. I dont think there is any need for me to fill out an "application" because i think i did a really good job with the first tournament.

TomTaz Wrote: SmokeNc-017 Wrote: WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! Here comes trouble!! Ask TomTaz or tgrant, they might know what this means. lol So you entered Ravage after all. Good.

So that's what he meant! lol I knew I'd read the concept before! It's great man! Good luck!

buterbals113085 Wrote: Well i will be one of the returning judges, i was thinking of entering my own character but i decided not to. Maybe next time. I dont think there is any need for me to fill out an "application" because i think i did a really good job with the first tournament.

Okay, okay.. you don't have to do it...lol
I give you a lot of credit for making the first one work. So buterbals113085 is going to be a judge. For the rest of the judges you'll will have to fill an application. Unless you have judged before Thanks.

Brodeur Wrote: buterbals113085 Wrote: Well i will be one of the returning judges, i was thinking of entering my own character but i decided not to. Maybe next time. I dont think there is any need for me to fill out an "application" because i think i did a really good job with the first tournament. Okay, okay.. you don't have to do it...lol I give you a lot of credit for making the first one work. So buterbals113085 is going to be a judge. For the rest of the judges you'll will have to fill an application. Unless you have judged before Thanks.

Thanks Brodeur. Haha.

Okay, here's what we have so far.

Character Judging Bracket Entries List:
1.Gabrielle-by Tom Taz
2.Sabre-by Rabid_Wolverine
3.Unit TK-787: by SmokeNc-017
4.Kilvan-by Shadaloo
5.Leon-by Johnny_Cage_Rules
6.Nemesi-by tgrant
7.Deceptame/Ryu Segan-by deceptame
8.Rajhul-by raiden_is_god
9.Psykong-by frozenspear2004
10.Pele-by LadyRaiden
11.Keilienaten-by slim3ddi3g
12.Amanuet-by DamRho
13.Slick - by mrmortalkombat
14.Sensui - by SmokeNc-017(2)
15.PX-07A2 - by phoenixwarrior
16.Ka Tian - by Deceptame
17.Celestial - by Slim3ddi3g
18.Ryoko Hikari - by tgrant 1
9.Ayido Hwedo - by DamRho
20.Vandon Sozek - by TheDragonKingakaReptile
21.Lorne - by Ko-jah
22.Vortex - by Shadaloo
Judging Application List
Wanderer
Raiden_is_god
Mk_Freak
lnkinprk777
krsx66

Judges:
Brodeur
buterbals113085
krsx66
Mk_FrEaK

I don't know if I can enter but, here it goes

Name:Leon
Age:19
height:6ft4
Weight:slim,but ohisically fit
sex:male
Allianment:good
Weapon:Warrior"s spear
fighting stance1:Jet-Kun-Do
Fighting stance2:Sombo
Weapon stance:Warrior's spear
Arena:The joke box
arena weapon:Spikes on the walls
deathtrap:Falling spikes from the ceiling
Interaction:a joke place made by Sho Kahn himself for his own humor
special moves1:Warrior's prance, Leon prances around the victome stabbing them in their side.
2:Kiss my axe, Leon throws a battle axe at the opponet's chin.
3:Spear, Leon tackles the opponet to startle him/her.
Fatality1:The circle of arrows, Leon takes out 2 huge arrow-heads and cuts a circle on the opponet's stomach (about 2ft in leinghth and width.)runs around, and kicks them in their back so that the circle of their stomch, organs, guts, and blood circle the opponet's limp body laying on the ground.
Charactordiscribtion:A Native American Warrior, with a red head band, blue shorts, and no shirt, that seeks revenge for what Sho Kahn did to his village, Kahn evaporated every one in Leon's village, but now Sho Kahn must pay!!!
Sig.Quote:Kiss my axe!!!




Well I hope you like it!!!!

Yes No maybe so

Here's my entry in the contest. I need to go over the stage and edit a lot of stuff in it. It's pretty rushed. He has plenty of special moves for variety and there is a pic, it just needs hosting. It'll be here soon.

Nemesi’s bio

Name: Nemesi

Owner: tgrant/Nemesi

Age: Eternal (unknown if he is immortal)

Sex: Male

Weight: Unknown (slim - slight build)

Race: God/Human

Family: Father: Raiden

Mother: Unknown

Group: Aligned with Jada, Raiden and the Earth warriors.

Clan: N/A

Side: Good

Eyes: None. Electrical. Change colour dependent on mood. Occasionally flare.

Hair: Short, black and spiky. Electricity runs through it (up and down the spikes too), making the hair stand on end. Because of his charged hair, he can use himself as a lightning rod when he is weak. The lightning bolt will give him extra strength and power, whilst also rejuvenating his health. (He can also change his hairstyle at will because of he charged nature.)

Look: Wears a long dark blue trench coat that is tied around the waist. Wears black gloves that have a lightning bolt on the palm. Wears a necklace, made of silver that his father gave to him. It is shaped like a lightning bolt and has some very special powers.

Weapons and styles: Nemesi is skilled with many earthly weapons, due to his long time on Earth. He has more skill with most weapons than those who use them expertly on Earth do. Due to his godly nature, he can wield any unknown weapon expertly too. However, his weapon of choice is the Staff. Unlike his father however, his staff is made from pure electrical energy. Although it is in a solid unmoving state, which he can manipulate at will. (Behaves just like a normal staff. If he thrust it through someone he would then have it return to its normal energy state, meaning the electrical energy is released in that persons body, killing him or her instantly.) When struck, the enemy is shocked slightly, even when they block an attack, allowing him to take advantage and attack once again. (Also allows for extra damage when hits actually connect.)

No one else can wield this weapon. (Except his father!)

Nemesi is trained in many styles. He has learnt Mantis, Shaolin Fist, Crane, Tae Kwon Do, Judo and Ninjitsu, to name a few. He has also learned several styles not known to mortal men. His vast expertise in styles and weaponry make him a force to be reckoned with. Has trained with his father, who taught him Nan Chuan and Jujutsu. He has trained for many years in these styles among others. He is unpredictable in Kombat, for the enemy will never know what he will unleash.

Styles of choice:

Crane

Tae Kwon Do

Staff

Powers: Wields the wrath of thunder and lightning just like his father. Has enhanced telekinetic and psychic abilities. (He does not use cheesy arm movements when using his telekinetic abilities. He will just stand there and move things with his mind. Looks almost thisthingisdisabledless.) These psychic abilities are enhanced due to his mix of human and godly intelligence. Also, he uses telekinesis and his flying ability to allow himself to do many moves others would find impossible. Due to the mix of his powers, styles, agility and expertise in weaponry, he is extremely formidable in battle. He mixes all of these in battle, proving to be extremely formidable in battle. (But has yet to defeat his father, Raiden in friendly Kombat.)

However, there is one drawback. Nemesi is prone to severe headaches if he uses his psychic abilities too much without rest or if he focuses to hard. The headaches result in his powers not responding and sometimes unleashing themselves independently. These independent triggers are powerful, and can be a help or a hindrance. Nemesi must rest in order to restore his control once again. He can still fight with his staff, but the pain from the headaches will eventually overcome him and he’ll pass out.

Special Moves:

Disable (1): Disables all of the opponent’s special attacks temporarily.

Disable (2): Disables opponent completely. They are unable to move. Allows for a free attack.

Confusion: Uses his psychic powers to make the opponent confused. They attack other adversaries or themselves.

Torpedo: Same as Raiden’s.

Lightning Blast: Standard electrical projectile.

Lightning Strike: Summons a bolt of lightning to strike the enemy.

Psyonic Jolt: Induces the enemy with a headache using telekinesis to transfer electricity into their head.

Thunder Wave: Throws a spark of electricity on the ground. It splits in thousands of different beams that seek the opponent. They will seek the opponent, even if jumped.

Thunder Cloud/Lightning Summon

These two moves act as aerial counters or juggle finishers. Thunder cloud sees Nemesi summon a cloud that wraps around the opponent shocking them and they fall to the ground instantly. Lightning Summon strikes them knocking them out of the air and face down on the ground. This would be extremely fast and the camera could rise maybe to show the full bolt.

Path of Thunder:

This works like Cyrax’s bombs, only a lightning blast from the ground knocks the opponent into the air.
(Before anyone asks how can lightning come from the ground, I suggest you learn some more about the weather!)

Seismic Stomp: Using a powerful uppercut, Nemesi launches the opponent into the air. After a quick teleport he appears above the enemy, steps on them and slams them to the ground!

Air Hawk: An aerial counter move. Nemesi performs a diagonal dragon kick from the ground to the air catching his opponent in the chest. A quick spin brings around his other leg, which sends the opponent back to the ground.

Flip-kick Toss: A quick forward flip kick to the opponent ends with Nemesi jumping onto the opponents shoulders and landing and tossing them overhead through the air.

Split Trip: Nemesi performs a quick leg split and then uses telekinesis to spin his body, tripping the opponent.

Staff: Can control his staff using his mind. Prefers to ride (surf) on top of it. Whilst surfing on the staff, Nemesi shoots projectiles at the opponent as well as throwing random objects from around the arena at them. (Can have a small number of weapons simultaneously attack the enemy).

Fatality 1: Telekinetic Rip.

Levitates the enemy in the air. He begins to concentrate on their body. The opponent’s arms stretch out. They become rigid and they scream in pain. After a few seconds, their arms fly off, flying across the arena. After more screaming, their head and torso split down the centre. Their body pieces drop to the floor in a pool of blood.

Fatality 2: Impalement Electrocution.

Rams his lightning staff into the opponent (as explained before). The staff glows and then it disappears as it takes its true form, as pure electrical energy. A wave of electricity is seen spread across the opponent as they explode. Their few tiny remains are scattered around the arena.

Fatality 3: Corruption of Mind

Using his psychic abilities, Nemesi channels into the opponents’ mind and soul. He is then able to tap into their power and release it’s power upon the opponents’ body, having it feed on their very essence. They’re consumed by their own power, and die in extreme pain. He saves this Fatality, for those he considers worthy of its torture.

Bio:

Nemesi has kept himself as a recluse for centuries, training in many martial arts forces and honing his powers and skills. He has been fuelled by his anger towards the Elder Gods, those he believed him to be an outcast, because he is part human. Those who believe that he will never amount to anything great. Those who believe he can never live up to his father. He has ignored his father’s wishes to help him aid the Earth warriors against the forces of Outworld, despite the fact that he knows how important the situation is. Now Nemesi abandons his training. He chooses now to fight alongside the Earth warriors and his father. He will attain revenge for his father by destroying the bane of his existence Shao Khan. He will make himself known as one of the great warriors of Earth realm and he will show the Elder Gods that he is no mere mortal. He has his own stand to make towards the eyes of the Elder Gods and he will make this stand and show them that he is more than the mere mortal they claim him to be. He hopes that one-day he will join his father in the Pantheon and become a god such as he. Though he has gained the respect from his father, Nemesi wishes for respect from the Elder Gods. Only time will show if he will receive his long life dream - to be seen and respected as a god by the Elder Gods.

Stage - The Sky Platform:

This is a square arena with no walls or barriers. It sits on a dark thunder cloud and floats along through the thundery sky. In the background you can see the lightning. You hear thunder and there is rain of course. Falling off the edge means falling into the thunder clouds below, resulting in you being shocked to death. The camera will lower showing your blood, limbs and flesh raining form the sky! (No cheesy KI fall to the ground here! This is MK!!)

The arena itself is huge! Why? Because as you travel through the sky, lightning bolts destroy the edge of the arena and sometimes central parts (randomly) and so you have to keep from falling off as best you can.
Also, the arena can also conduct electricity. There a resistor pads around the arena that you must step on before the lightning strikes the ground, preventing you from taking damage. Thunder will be the warning telling you to move onto them. Since lightning comes before thunder, the first lightning strike will strike one of the pads showing you that it is resistant to it. There’ll be an option to have that feature on or not. One or two weapons lie be on resistor pads and for a deathtrap, there will be a lightning conductor in the center of the arena. If an opponent is knocked into it, since they’re wet because of the rain, they’ll be blasted to bits. A stormy wind also blows on occasion and blows you towards the edge.

Name:Deceptame/Ryu Sagen
Age:11,254/22
Height:6'1
Weight:164lbs
Sex:male
Alignment:Red Dragon
Blood Type:AB
Weapon:Hook-Scythe Staff
Fighting Styles:Chuo Jiao, Fong Ngan

Arena:Red Dragon Base
A circular fighting area on top of a large mountain with a giant Red Dragon symbol in the center of it. Just outside the fighting area is Mavado standing with his arms folded.

Arena Fatality:Opponent is kicked out of the arena onto their back and stand up. Members of the Red Dragon ambush him and rip him apart.

Arena Death Trap:Launches opponent off and they fall down the side of the mountain breaking their bones and getting cut up. The hit the bottom in a bloody, twisted, lifeless heap.

Arena Interaction:The Red Dragon Clan will occasionally throw knives across the arena.

Arena Weapon:Crescent Rake

Special Moves
1:Pain Killer-stabs opponent in the stomach w/a dagger and kicks them off
2:Red Dragon Fist-punches foe in the stomach hard causing them to throw up blood
3:Shadow Orb-releases a dark energy ball that causes the enemy to flip towards you
4:Dirty Play-kicks up dirt in opponent's face(Sonya MK:DA effect) 5:Demonic Spark-black sparks crackled all over the opponent taking damage and immobilizing the opponent for a second.

Fatality
1:Self-Mutilation-Deceptame leaves his host's body and possesses the opponent's body. He makes them pull out a knife and stab theirself over and over again, then causes them to break their own neck and fall in a puddle of blood.
2:Demon's Portal-Deceptame's fist glows black, punches the opponent through the chest, removes his fist, and backs away. A swirling vortex comes from the opponent's chest wound and the vortex starts to wring them out. Blood and organs come flying out of the spiral. When the vortex stops the opponent is only a skin covered skeleton.
Hari-Kari:Soul Release-Deceptame pulls out a dagger and slashes his throat from ear to ear, he falls to his knees and Deceptame's spirit leaves the body. The body of Ryu Sagen falls back on his knees.

Story(Deceptame):Back when the Dragon King was alive, Deceptame was a warrior in the Dragon Army and one of the Dragon King's most ruthless warriors. Deceptame had a special power that allows him to possess the bodies of people for short periods of time and that intriged the Dragon King. But Deceptame had an alterior motive to get the amulet and overthrow the Dragon King. Deceptame made a very bad mistake and told one of the warriors of his ideals. The warrior told the DK and the DK killed Deceptame merely minutes later. Deceptame's spirit left his body and went straight to the Netherealm where he met up with a demon named Sareena. Soon after they met they became lovers and allies and planned to escape the Netherealm when given the chance....

Backstory(Ryu Sagen):He was a warrior under the training of Bo Rai Cho along with Liu Kang and Kung Lao. But Ryu was always jealous of Liu because Liu was a fast learner and he always felt that he was Bo Rai Cho's favorite. Ryu and Kung Lao were always good friends since the beginning of Master Cho's training. He knew Lao was best friends with Kang and that was the only thing he didn't like about Lao

Story(Deceptame):Quan Chi escaped the Netherealm in search of the amulet to awaken the DK's army, he left the escape portal open long enough for Deceptame and Sareena to escape. Deceptame told Sareena that she needs to get her beautiful exterior back so he told her go ahead without him because he needed to get a host body, they parted ways and he vowed to meet up with her again. He also knew that since his visit to the Netherealm his possession powers were intensified and he could stay in a host's body forever. He just needed to find a host who was grieving and guilty so he could take their body.

Story(Ryu Sagen):Ryu grew tired of Liu and joined forces secretly with the Deadly Alliance of Shang Tsung and Quan Chi. He allowed them into the courtyard when Liu was out training while he took Kung Lao down to the marketplace. Quan and Tsung killed Liu, took his soul, and left. Ryu and Lao came back to find Liu facedown dead in the center of the courtyard. Lao rushed over to Liu near tears. Ryu just stood there looking at the pain in Lao's eyes and began to feel guilty for what he did.

Story(Deceptame):Deceptame felt the dark energies of Ryu and knew that he had found his host body. He disappeared and reappeared beside Ryu and went into his body through his ear. Just because Ryu was guilty and had dark energy flowing through him he couldn't fight off Deceptame. Deceptame took over Ryu's body and decided to try and kill Kung Lao but was unsuccessful. He was kicked out Master Cho's class for aggressiveness and trying to kill a student. But Deceptame didn't care he was on a hunt for Quan Chi to get the amulet and destroy the undead army and the DK egg. He decided to join the Red Dragon because Mavado had ties to Quan Chi and it would make his quest easier...

Description:Wears 2 Black sashes that make an "X" across his chest with the Red Dragon Symbol on them in a straight line pattern. He has black pants, silver belt with black boots and the Red Dragon Symbol on the toe of them. He wears a black ninja mask over his mouth and wears a hat like Kung Lao to mask his glowing dark eyes.

Nice character tgrant.Thanks for bringin him in.
Already it looks like there is going to be quite a competition with the characters we have so far.

Anyone wishing to be judges would be great, please submit your application forms. Thank you.
A brief one would be fine, if you want to make it long then go ahead, depending on what i collect from you guys, i'll pick from those, so it's up to you what you want to put in them and how much.
Thank You.

tgrant Wrote: Here's my entry in the contest. I need to go over the stage and edit a lot of stuff in it. It's pretty rushed. He has plenty of special moves for variety and there is a pic, it just needs hosting. It'll be here soon. Nemesi’s bio Name: Nemesi Owner: tgrant/Nemesi Age: Eternal (unknown if he is immortal) Sex: Male Weight: Unknown (slim - slight build) Race: God/Human Family: Father: Raiden Mother: Unknown Group: Aligned with Jada, Raiden and the Earth warriors. Clan: N/A Side: Good Eyes: None. Electrical. Change colour dependent on mood. Occasionally flare. Hair: Short, black and spiky. Electricity runs through it (up and down the spikes too), making the hair stand on end. Because of his charged hair, he can use himself as a lightning rod when he is weak. The lightning bolt will give him extra strength and power, whilst also rejuvenating his health. (He can also change his hairstyle at will because of he charged nature.) Look: Wears a long dark blue trench coat that is tied around the waist. Wears black gloves that have a lightning bolt on the palm. Wears a necklace, made of silver that his father gave to him. It is shaped like a lightning bolt and has some very special powers. Weapons and styles: Nemesi is skilled with many earthly weapons, due to his long time on Earth. He has more skill with most weapons than those who use them expertly on Earth do. Due to his godly nature, he can wield any unknown weapon expertly too. However, his weapon of choice is the Staff. Unlike his father however, his staff is made from pure electrical energy. Although it is in a solid unmoving state, which he can manipulate at will. (Behaves just like a normal staff. If he thrust it through someone he would then have it return to its normal energy state, meaning the electrical energy is released in that persons body, killing him or her instantly.) When struck, the enemy is shocked slightly, even when they block an attack, allowing him to take advantage and attack once again. (Also allows for extra damage when hits actually connect.) No one else can wield this weapon. (Except his father!) Nemesi is trained in many styles. He has learnt Mantis, Shaolin Fist, Crane, Tae Kwon Do, Judo and Ninjitsu, to name a few. He has also learned several styles not known to mortal men. His vast expertise in styles and weaponry make him a force to be reckoned with. Has trained with his father, who taught him Nan Chuan and Jujutsu. He has trained for many years in these styles among others. He is unpredictable in Kombat, for the enemy will never know what he will unleash. Styles of choice: Crane Tae Kwon Do Staff Powers: Wields the wrath of thunder and lightning just like his father. Has enhanced telekinetic and psychic abilities. (He does not use cheesy arm movements when using his telekinetic abilities. He will just stand there and move things with his mind. Looks almost thisthingisdisabledless.) These psychic abilities are enhanced due to his mix of human and godly intelligence. Also, he uses telekinesis and his flying ability to allow himself to do many moves others would find impossible. Due to the mix of his powers, styles, agility and expertise in weaponry, he is extremely formidable in battle. He mixes all of these in battle, proving to be extremely formidable in battle. (But has yet to defeat his father, Raiden in friendly Kombat.) However, there is one drawback. Nemesi is prone to severe headaches if he uses his psychic abilities too much without rest or if he focuses to hard. The headaches result in his powers not responding and sometimes unleashing themselves independently. These independent triggers are powerful, and can be a help or a hindrance. Nemesi must rest in order to restore his control once again. He can still fight with his staff, but the pain from the headaches will eventually overcome him and he’ll pass out. Special Moves: Disable (1): Disables all of the opponent’s special attacks temporarily. Disable (2): Disables opponent completely. They are unable to move. Allows for a free attack. Confusion: Uses his psychic powers to make the opponent confused. They attack other adversaries or themselves. Torpedo: Same as Raiden’s. Lightning Blast: Standard electrical projectile. Lightning Strike: Summons a bolt of lightning to strike the enemy. Psyonic Jolt: Induces the enemy with a headache using telekinesis to transfer electricity into their head. Thunder Wave: Throws a spark of electricity on the ground. It splits in thousands of different beams that seek the opponent. They will seek the opponent, even if jumped. Thunder Cloud/Lightning Summon These two moves act as aerial counters or juggle finishers. Thunder cloud sees Nemesi summon a cloud that wraps around the opponent shocking them and they fall to the ground instantly. Lightning Summon strikes them knocking them out of the air and face down on the ground. This would be extremely fast and the camera could rise maybe to show the full bolt. Path of Thunder: This works like Cyrax’s bombs, only a lightning blast from the ground knocks the opponent into the air. (Before anyone asks how can lightning come from the ground, I suggest you learn some more about the weather!) Seismic Stomp: Using a powerful uppercut, Nemesi launches the opponent into the air. After a quick teleport he appears above the enemy, steps on them and slams them to the ground! Air Hawk: An aerial counter move. Nemesi performs a diagonal dragon kick from the ground to the air catching his opponent in the chest. A quick spin brings around his other leg, which sends the opponent back tot he ground. Flip-kick Toss: A quick forward flip kick to the opponent ends with Nemesi jumping onto the opponents shoulders and landing and tossing them overhead through the air. Split Trip: Nemesi performs a quick leg split and then uses telekinesis to spin his body, tripping the opponent. Staff: Can control his staff using his mind. Prefers to ride (surf) on top of it. Whilst surfing on the staff, Nemesi shoots projectiles at the opponent as well as throwing random objects from around the arena at them. (Can have a small number of weapons simultaneously attack the enemy). Fatality 1: Telekinetic Rip. Levitates the enemy in the air. He begins to concentrate on their body. The opponent’s arms stretch out. They become rigid and they scream in pain. After a few seconds, their arms fly off, flying across the arena. After more screaming, their head and torso split down the centre. Their body pieces drop to the floor in a pool of blood. Fatality 2: Impalement Electrocution. Rams his lightning staff into the opponent (as explained before). The staff glows and then it disappears as it takes its true form, as pure electrical energy. A wave of electricity is seen spread across the opponent as they explode. Their few tiny remains are scattered around the arena. Fatality 3: Corruption of Mind Using his psychic abilities, Nemesi channels into the opponents’ mind and soul. He is then able to tap into their power and release it’s power upon the opponents’ body, having it feed on their very essence. They’re consumed by their own power, and die in extreme pain. He saves this Fatality, for those he considers worthy of its torture. Bio: Nemesi has kept himself as a recluse for centuries, training in many martial arts forces and honing his powers and skills. He has been fuelled by his anger towards the Elder Gods, those he believed him to be an outcast, because he is part human. Those who believe that he will never amount to anything great. Those who believe he can never live up to his father. He has ignored his father’s wishes to help him aid the Earth warriors against the forces of Outworld, despite the fact that he knows how important the situation is. Now Nemesi abandons his training. He chooses now to fight alongside the Earth warriors and his father. He will attain revenge for his father by destroying the bane of his existence Shao Khan. He will make himself known as one of the great warriors of Earth realm and he will show the Elder Gods that he is no mere mortal. He has his own stand to make towards the eyes of the Elder Gods and he will make this stand and show them that he is more than the mere mortal they claim him to be. He hopes that one-day he will join his father in the Pantheon and become a god such as he. Though he has gained the respect from his father, Nemesi wishes for respect from the Elder Gods. Only time will show if he will receive his long life dream - to be seen and respected as a god by the Elder Gods. Stage - The Sky Platform: This is a square arena with no walls or barriers. It sits on a dark thunder cloud and floats along through the thundery sky. In the background you can see the lightning. You hear thunder and there is rain of course. Falling off the edge means falling into the thunder clouds below, resulting in you being shocked to death. The camera will lower showing your blood, limbs and flesh raining form the sky! (No cheesy KI fall to the ground here! This is MK!!) The arena itself is huge! Why? Because as you travel through the sky, lightning bolts destroy the edge of the arena and sometimes central parts (randomly) and so you have to keep from falling off as best you can. Also, the arena can also conduct electricity. There a resistor pads around the arena that you must step on before the lightning strikes the ground, preventing you from taking damage. Thunder will be the warning telling you to move onto them. Since lightning comes before thunder, the first lightning strike will strike one of the pads showing you that it is resistant to it. There’ll be an option to have that feature on or not. One or two weapons lie be on resistor pads and for a deathtrap, there will be a lightning conductor in the center of the arena. If an opponent is knocked into it, since they’re wet because of the rain, they’ll be blasted to bits. A stormy wind also blows on occasion and blows you towards the edge.

Oh bloody hell! I'm happy and horrified at the same time! I'm glad your a competitor this time around T! But I'm also worried now, cause I think Nemesi is gonna clean house! *Prepares to pack Gabrielles bags and hit the road* j/k Glad you entered buddy!

BEWARE TOMORROW ITS ALL OVER.

When The God Of War makes his appearance.

"Lights Dim" Eriee Laugh HAHAHAHHAHAAHAH.

Teh FrEaK wants to be judge but i have not recieved any reply from brodeur! >:O, well i think ill hafta wait for another PM or maybe ..........Scythe can make a comeback!!!!! but i rather be a judge!!!!!

All the created characters so far are great . They are all have alot of depth. This tournament is going to be tough for the judges .

Yeah tgrant, I think I read about your character a while back. This guy is shweet. GL to you and TomTaz in the tournament. I think that Nemisis is one character that Ravage will have problems with.

Good Luck to you as well bro!

Drum roll wow 7 mins until tomorrow I was wrong here he is Ta Dah lol

Name: Rajhul("Ray-jhool")

Age: Eternal
Height: 7'11"
Weight: 327lbs
Sex: Male
Status: God of War
Allignment: Bad/Dragon King
Weapon: Huge ass one sided Battle Ax its pole has a redish look to it. With a sword on the other end so he can do double hits.
Fighting Styles: Jujutsu and Ninjitsu
Weapon Style: Battle Axe

Look:

His look has changed alot check Picture

Story :
He's said to be the brother of Raiden. He once serverd the Dragon King(first time he was alive) to form a Army and conqure. When they had lost long time ago. Rahjul got possession of an Egg he used his powers so that when the egg hatched the Dragon King would have returned. He had then had used his powers to store the Dragon Kings Army where no one would find them until his return. With this in mind Rajhul had escaped to the netherealm before they could find him and kill him like they did to the Dragon King. He lived in netherealm and helped bring Chaos to it. He had been searching for a way to get the DK back and making things just right. He figured if he could get Lui Kang out of the picture Earth would be as hard to take over. He had then foresaw of something that could help him.

He saw that Quan Chi was planning on trying to take over the Dragon Kings Army. So he looked for Quan all throughout the netherealm. He found Quan Chi and disguised himself. He followed Quan Chi out of the Netherealm. He heard of the Alliance between Quan Chi and Shang Tsung. He started planing on how he could use these two and get a hold of the Dragon Kings Ammulet. So he promised Shang Tsung immortality only if he got control of the ammulet and killed Earth's greatest warrior. Shang Tsung instructed Kano to do so and shang and Quan Chi killed Lui. Quan Chi expected a attack. Rajhul told Cyrax where the Orb was so that he could return to earthrealm. He told Cyrax that Nitara would be waiting for him in the lava Shrine. Rahjul used his psychic powers to see what Reptile wanted he knew he would want Cyrax and NItara(thats why he helped Cyrax). Reptile was indeed searching for a Nitara and Cyrax when Rajhul confronted him and told them they were in the Lava Shrine. Reptile and Rajhul both went to the shrine he lead Reptile right to the egg and disapeared. He heard the egg crack and a beam of light shot into him. His meanless body was twisted and transformed.

The Dragon King had returned Rajhul had been waiting for this day. He went up to greet his master once again. The Dragon King renewed his promise with Rajhul that he would rule Outworld, Ediena, and the Netherealm if he would align with him. Rajhul accepted and told the Dragon King where he could get control of his amulet to his Army. The Dragon King had went and found Quan CHi and took his medallion. Also that Shang Tsung had did most of the work for him. With the help of Rajhul the Dragon King was unstoppable. Rajhul used his powers to finish the work Shang Tsung had started and made DK's army unstopable again. They could only die if they lost there head. Rajhul was ready to BRING WAR TO ALL THE REALMS. Rahjul had got the possesion of Lui Kangs soul and all of the others Shang had. He released it hopin that he could help them. Rahjul then planned on making Earths greatest Warrior on there side. Did it work?? Rahjul had seen that he could Trick Earths warriors into believing he was good. Then the DK could suprise attack the realm and Rahjul owuld turn on them.


Special Power: He can possess things, he can transform his body into anything, he has psychic powers, can tranfer souls, he's telekenetic, and can take souls. He has a love for blood and war so he'll cause as much Chaos as he can. He also can summon Fire. He can also see the future.

Special Moves:

Spinning Pain: Rajhul takes his battle axe and swings it underhand up that it hits the opponent from the bottom and lifts him in the air. Then he swings it around so the axe part it hits there stomach then spins it around and nails them with the sword. It cuts them from the bottom and leaves them in the air for a chance at a juggle.(not a long move just takes a while to explain.)

Possession: Rajhul Posses his oponent and they walk over to Rajhul and there stunned. Leaving a chance open for Rajhul.

Drop from Above: Rajhul concentrates and his hand glows a red color and then he lifts his opponent off the ground and turns them upside down and drops them.

Figure Change: Rajhul(like Shang Tsung move in MK 1 2 or 3 i forget which one) He changes into a random Mortal Kombatant off the select list and does a strong attack then changes back after 30 secs.(Can only do the move one time per round)


Hari Kari- He pulls out the Dragon kings sword from his back and sticks it down his throat then once its fully in he turns it and it slits his throat.

Fatality One: Spining Death- Finish him/her Rahjul concentrates and raises his opponent into the air with his telekenetic powers. Theres a green glow that outlines Rahjul and his opponent. He then pulls out the sword that once belonged to DK. and impales it into his opponents stomach they scream loudly. He then spins them around and throws them up higher as they fall Rahjul swings the sword at a angle that cuts the opponent at a angle from the neck to his chest or middle of his spine. Fatality

Fatality two: Soul Attack- Finish Him/Her Rahjul starts lighting up a bright red and the room lightens up to red. He then summons One of his thousands of souls. You can see the green Soul Leaves his body and transforms into a great warrior. The Warrior then goes over to the dazed opponent and rips its arms off then the opponents legs this is very slowly and painfully. Then the soul shootes into the body and blows up his insides until the opponents body explodes and parts go everywhere. Then the soul goes back in Rahjul. Fatality

Arena: Rahjuls Lair -It's in a lava shrine. Theres a platform right above the lava. The plat forms held up by 5 metal post one at each corner and one in the middle. The lava will fill up in the chamber and surrounds these and start melting them away. So the battle won;t be long as the plat form slowly falls apart.

Death Trap: If you fall off or are knocked off you will hit the lava and it will eat at you. There are loud screams then you here a roar and two yellow/orange eyes appear and then a dragons head comes out and tears what left of your body apart. then throws your head up in there and snatches it and swallows it.

Stage Fatality: Right belowe the platform theirs a chamber off to the side.It glows a blue color. When it says finish him or her and u know ur opponent down to here it will transfer them to the netherealm because its a portal. It then shows you in the netherealm be torn up by oni and demons. They torture you and there are loud screams, cracking, and other disturbing noises.

Hidden Weapon: Hangs along the side quick grab it quick its a huge sword that has the power of fire in it. Hit your opponent and watch them burn.

I also have a pic of his weapon I made but don't know how to post it yet.
Took all day to make him too lol. You like YES or NO

Here is my character.


Name:Pyskong

Age:25

Height:6'0

Weight:140

Clothes:Gray shirt with a picture of Lui Kang on the front and Chow Kang on the back,Gray pants with fireballs on the them,white socks,blue tennis shoes.

Eyes:Both eyes covered in green(because of souls)

Face:Pale brown,clean

Hair:Orange,messy

Powers:He can cause confusion,make opponent spin until dizzy and attack him/herself to snap out of it(and causes damage)sends bright light to temporary blind opponent,controls opponent's mind.

Special Moves
1.)Confusion:
Shoots green beams from his eyes at his opponent that when it hits,the opponent starts to stagger backwards and hits him/herself to snap out of confusion(the hit causes damage).

2.)Blinding light:
Pyskong turns a green color and sends a bright green light to his opponent that when it hits it blinds and stuns his opponent for a short period of time.*This attack is blockable and Pyskong is left open for a counter-attack*.Covers a medium distance.

3.)Dizzy Spell:
Sends a green shockwave at his opponent that can spin(if makes contact)the opponent real fast,and stops to have his opponent dizzy and stun for a shor period of time.*This attack is also blockable and leaves Pyskong open for a counter-attack.*

Race:Human

Status:low-profiled person and life lonfriend of Lui and Chow Kang

Fatalities
1.)Mind Control:
Pyskong constrades hard,focusing on trying to control the opponent's mind.All of a sudden,both Pyskong and his opponent start to glow a pale green color.Then the camera swings over to Pyskong's opponent to see him/her try to control him/herself,but can't and beats himself to a bloody pulp.

2.)Inside Out:
Pyskong sends a huge green shockwave that hits his opponent with such impact that it spins his opponent so fast that it looks like a blur.Suddenly,he stops and begins to cough.Then he begins to puke.Shortly after t=he stars puking,he starts puking blood.Seconds later he is barfing his organs and stuff.Finally,he stops puking and falls in a pool of puke/blood/insides,pale and flabby.

Styles:Dragon,Pi Gua,Axes(2)

Hara-Kari:He takes out his axes and throw them,to have them come back to cut to have one ax cut the head and the other ax cut the torso.

Story:Ever since he could go to school,Pyskong knew Lui Kang.Pyskong was there for Lui Kang and Lui Kang was there for for Pyskong.After Lui Kang's parents died,they took care of eachother,including Kang's new younger brother,Chow Kang.As they grew,they began to grow a big bound with each other.Often though,Lui Kang went off to train with a peson named Bo'Rai Cho.Chow and Pyskong came along,too.They tranied hard.Then tragey struck.Shang Tsung kidnapped Chow and later on killed him.Lui Kang was furious.2 weeks after the murder of Chow,Lui got an invitation from Raiden to fight in a tournament for the sake of EarthRealm and other realms.Two other fighter from Earthrealm were called as well.Their names were Lt. Sonya Blade from the Special Forces and Johnny Cage-a movie star and director with a big ego.This tournament was held on an island by Shang Tsung.Lui accepted the invitation and joined Raiden,Sonya,and Johnny Cage on a boat.Meanwhile as Lui left,he was sad to see his firend go.He wanted to go,but wasn't invited.He wandered around for a couple weeks until he met Bo'Rai Cho in a forest.Pyskong asked if he could get extra training so he could go on a search for Lui Kang because he hasn/t came back yet.Bo'Rai Cho trained with him for 3 months.Bo'Rai Cho had taught every thing he knew.Pyskong felt he was ready.Little did he know,his mind,body and soul had reached a unbelieveable point that he could take in a diease and be sick for a day,or possess a lot of souls.Pyskong took off for a search for Lui Kang.He had packed food,water,and clothing with him.1 week after he had started his search,he seen a blue glowing figure in the distance.He had a blue ninja outfit with a medal on the front.Pys kong ran to him.This per son was caught off guard and jumped into a fight with Pyskong.Pyskong didn't get a chance to explain his presence.They fought for 5 minutes until they were to tired to fight and Pyskong had explained why he was here.The blue person introduced himself as Sub-Zero.Sub-Zero lisened to the story of Pyskong.SUb-Zeor had some bad news.Lui Kang was killed by the Deadly Alliance of Quan Chi and Shang Tsung.This outraged Pyskong so bad that he took off,after he said good-bye.Sub-Zero stopped him with something that might cheer him up.He said he would teach him the art of Dragon to help him along the way.Pyskong was very grateful,and was a very good student.After Sub-Zero thought he was ready,he let him go.Some time later,he came upon a portal.It was a portal to Outworld.If he was to get through the portal,he wpuld have to beat an image of his worst opponent.The image was Shang Tsung.He fought forever until he snapped the neck of the image.After the fight,he went through the portal to find a yellow person not so far away.When he met up with the yellow person,it introduced itself as Scorpion-a ninja spectre who could never die for good and comes back in the pits of Hell.Scorpion looked at Pysknog with great pleasure.Scorpion asked if Pyskong to do a favor.He asked if he could kill Quan Chi for him.Pyskong agreed.As a gift,Scorpion agreed to teach im Pi Gua and give him two axes.Pyskong was happy to learn a new style and get some weapons.Scorpion gave him a wekk leason and the axes he had promised.Then he continuted.3 weeks later,Pyskong came upon a palace.He entered the palace and seen a flight of stairs. He quietly went up the stairs to find at the top was a light blue figure.The figure turned around and found Pyskong.Pyskong realized that the figure was QUan Chi and attacked.They fought on and on and on until Pys kong gave a kick so hard that it sent Quan Chi flying over a ledge to fall to the very bottom of the palace floor and go splat.Pyskong did one thing.Now he must do what he sent out to do-kill Shang Tsung.First he has to find Scorpion and tell him that he has killed Quan Chi.On his way back,he took a different route than he took before.He seen a tower place a green tower shooting through the roof.He entered the place to see Shang Tsung. Just as he was about to surprise Shang Tsung with a kick,a ligkt flashed and 4 souls with the powers of confusion,mind control,shockwave spin,and blind light came shooting out of the soulado.Strange as it may seem,it didn't tear him to pieces,or make him roll with pain.He was able to control him.Shang Tsung turned around to find Pyskong in the distance.They fought for 7 minutes when finally Pyskong finished the fight with his new blinding light power and sliced Shang Tsung in half with his axes.Pyskon did what no man could do.He destoryed the Deadly Alliance-with the help of Bo'Rai Cho,Sub-Zero,Scorpion,the 4 souls,and the friendship of his live long buddies Lui and Chow Kang.


Stage:Cliff with a fan at the bottom.A small cliff with strong winds.Very old.

Stage Name:Outworld Cliff

Interaction:Stage crumbles and hard winds blow characters.

Stage Weapons:Rocky daggers.

Fatality:Knocked off cliff to fall to death and be eaten by vultures.

Death Trap:Knocked in the fan to be sliced in many pieces.

Character Descripon:A kind hearted fellow who is mild-tempered.Loves a challange.

Character Quotes:"Don't go for the fly.Let the fly come to you"-Pyskong

Gender-Male

Alliance-Good


What do you think

TomTaz Wrote: Oh bloody hell! I'm happy and horrified at the same time! I'm glad your a competitor this time around T! But I'm also worried now, cause I think Nemesi is gonna clean house! *Prepares to pack Gabrielles bags and hit the road* j/k Glad you entered buddy!

lol Thanks man! Thanks to you SmokeNc-017 and you too Brodeur. Good luck to you guys too! And Taz, you should be!

Like I said, I need to sort and edit some stuff on the concept. The bio was made before MKD's announcement so it still resides in the time of Shao Kahn as you can see.

TomTaz has seen Nemesi's pic and I'm sure the rest of you will love it when it's posted!

I mite add a few things to mine being that I just wanted to get it in here being my first character and all.
Also all of you who made a person or have a good arena for your person or just have arena and you havent entered my arena tourny yet do so no plz.

"Gets worried after seeing tgrants character tries to find something"

Aha He has 3 fatalities DQ him lol im just playing nice guy tgrant.

So...the God of War...and my God of Death...hmm...

I had the idea be4 u posted yours too actually i thought of the god of fire but there was one.

Mk_FrEaK Wrote: Teh FrEaK wants to be judge but i have not recieved any reply from brodeur! >:O, well i think ill hafta wait for another PM or maybe ..........Scythe can make a comeback!!!!! but i rather be a judge!!!!!

I will let you'll know eventually until i gather up more people wanting to be judges, but as time goes on i'll pick a few out of the bunch and make them judges. So thanks, and be patient.

Sweet characters everyone, there's a lot of details for them all. thanks frozenspear2004, tgrant, deceptame, raiden_is_god, n j_r_c.
We just need some more judges thanks. If you guys can bring anyone who would like to judge, that would be great. Thanks.

Character Rules:
Most of You'll Know How the first Tournament Worked, so there's nothing much new.
The only innovation if there is any I will mention to you below.

Character Name: Keilienaten

Age: Very Old (but looks 24)

Height: 5’7

Weight: 110 lbs

Sex: Female

Alignment: Evil

BloodType: Unknown

Weapon: Two Egyptian Falcon Knives

Fighting Styles:1 Lua

Weapon Styles: 2 Koshi Mawari

Arena: The Tomb

Arena Weapon: Anubi’s Spear: It’s very long, thick, and shoots huge white fireballs.

Arena Fatality: Pit of Souls: There’s a strong earthquake causing the ground to open
under losing opponent. He/She will fall but will hang on the edge trying
to pull him/herself up. In the pit there are millions of burning souls,
trying to pull him/her down. The winner will stomp on loser’s hands
making him/her lose grip and fall into the pit. The burning souls rip
him/her apart before they burn to ashes.

Arena Death Trap: The Tomb has many different rooms where opponents can be knocked
through. In every room there are four huge Anubis statues, very hard to
even be pushed. These statues prevents from the beetle-like flesh
eating critters from entering. What every room also has are these
critters all over the room, and background. Once a statue is knocked
down, the critters invade that section. Now, and opponent can be
pushed unto the swarm of the beetle-like critters devouring them. Winner must stay in between the perimeters from the three remaining Anubis statues, or he/she will also get eaten.

Arena Interaction: There’s lots of interactions in The Tomb. There’s always earthquakes, causing the ground to crack open. You start where Pharaoh’s are
mummified. They can be knocked over, but then a poison gas is released, slowly killing both opponents. There’s two more rooms you
can knock an opponent. One is full of traps and weapons. Here you can
be harmed with spikes that come out from the ground, arrows that shoot
from the walls. Another room is the treasure room. You can used huge gold things to throw at opponent, but if you pick up the wrong thing, more poisonous gas is released. The last section an opponent is knocked through is the underground. You have to do this once the
quake has cracked the ground big enough to fit through. Down here
is the only way you can do the Stage Fatality. There’s also no death
traps down here.




Special Moves1: Fireball: She creates a basketball size fireball and tosses it roughly.

2: Teleport Stab: She teleports behind opponent and stabs him/her
repeatedly.

3: Tornado Kick: It’s similar to the bicycle kick, but swirls around
upwards while kicking opponent. The hard fall also takes good
damage from opponent.

Fatality1: An Egyptian Surgery: She slices his/her throat. He/she falls to his/her
knees. She kicks them, so he/she falls on their
back. She summersaults, landing on his/her stomach and pinning their hands on the ground
with her knives. She then jams her entire hand
through opponents mouth, and pulls out the head’s inner organs(brains and attached the eyes, vocal cord, and the tongue)

Fatality2: Getting Rid of the Old: She holds his/her head tight, and starts to french
kiss them. [Male opponents respond back happily, but Females try to fight her off] She slowly pulls her head away sucking out the opponent’s life. The opponent starts to get old. Once she’s done, she releases opponent, leaving him as a very old weak man/woman. She poses happily because she regained youth, but then looks down at opponent who is now on his/her knees. She creates a much bigger fireball, and slams it down at him/her blowing him to pieces.

Story: Keilienaten has warped through a portal no one, not even the Dragon King, knows it’s open. After the Dragon King was reborn, lots of portals and gates were opened, and the Elder Gods immediately chose warriors to guard them. The Elders were also too blind to see the invisible portal, that leads to a world much stronger. It’s a world just like the Egyptian, but with powers that can destroy an Elder God and powerful sorcerer. This place is called Rahankatut.
Keilienaten is said to be daughter of Pharaoh Akhenaten and Nefertiti, but was raised by the Goddess Isis. She was brought up to serve and protect those who harm the weak. The only thing was that Keilienaten has grown with an evil mind. She cares for no one but herself. She had murdered her guardian, Isis, and claimed her position as Goddess. She then took her own parents life, and took over the entire Egyptian Realm. Rahankatut For the last thousands of years, she has ruled this land, always wanting more. She has now found the portal that warps through her world and the Outworld opened. Always planning an invasion on Outworld, and now that the portal is open, Keilienaten has gathered her troops.
First, she travels through the portal along with one of her guards, Anubis, to check out the alien Realm to her. In Outworld, she has aligned with the Dragon King to destroy the Earth warriors. She plans on bringing down the Dragon King right after, and sneak her clan through the secret portal, and kill all of Dragon King’s minions, and those who get on their way, to claim Outworld as her own. After that, it’ll be easier for her to travel through different portals, and out rule other realms, and become Queen of all that is living and the non-living.

Character Description: She has a very slim and sexy body. Her look is almost like the girl on
“The Mummy Returns”. She has the same small gold skirt, and a gold top. She has a small golden net-like cover on her head. She has golden high heels that have thick golden laces wrapped around her thick juicy legs. She has lots of thin golden bracelets on both hands. Her makeup is astonishing, and makes her look even sexier. [I love Egyptian chicks]

Character's Signature Quote: “I curse all who dare discover me!”