Here's my updated character, Keilienaten. I just fixed her story a bit, change her second fatality around, and added more supermoves, and her costume just a bit. Thanks.
Character Name: Keilienaten
Age: Very Old (but looks 24)
Height: 57
Weight: 110 lbs
Sex: Female
Alignment: Evil
BloodType: Unknown
Weapon: Two Egyptian Falcon Knives
Fighting Styles:1 Lua
Fighting Styles: 2 Koshi Mawari
Arena: The Tomb
Arena Weapon: Anubis Spear: Its very long, thick, and shoots huge white fireballs.
Arena Fatality: Pit of Souls: Theres a strong earthquake causing the ground to open
under losing opponent. He/She will fall but will hang on the edge trying
to pull him/herself up. In the pit there are millions of burning souls,
trying to pull him/her down. The winner will stomp on losers hands
making him/her lose grip and fall into the pit. The burning souls rip
him/her apart before they burn to ashes.
Arena Death Trap:
The Tomb has many different rooms where opponents can be knocked through. In every room there are four huge Anubis statues, very hard to even be pushed. These statues prevents from the beetle-like flesh eating critters from entering. What every room also has are these critters all over the room, and background. Once a statue is knocked
down, the critters invade that section. Now, and opponent can be pushed unto the swarm of the beetle-like critters devouring them. Winner must stay in between the perimeters from the three remaining Anubis statues, or he/she will also get eaten.
Arena Interaction:
Theres lots of interactions in The Tomb. Theres always earthquakes, causing the ground to crack open. You start where Pharaohs are
mummified. They can be knocked over, but then a poison gas is released, slowly killing both opponents. Theres two more rooms you
can knock an opponent. One is full of traps and weapons. Here you can
be harmed with spikes that come out from the ground, arrows that shoot
from the walls. Another room is the treasure room. You can used huge gold things to throw at opponent, but if you pick up the wrong thing, more poisonous gas is released. The last section an opponent is knocked through is the underground. You have to do this once the
quake has cracked the ground big enough to fit through. Down here
is the only way you can do the Stage Fatality. Theres also no death
traps down here.
Special Moves
1: Fireball: She creates a basketball size fireball and tosses it roughly.
2.Double Fireball: She shoots two basketball fireballs(one after another)
3: Slow Fireball: She makes the same basketball sized fireball, but this
one spins around fast. She doesnt toss it. She just lets it go, and even though its spins fast, the fireball floats towards the opponent very slow. Slower than a turtle. This fireball comes handy, you can leave three fireballs, do a combo, and then knock opponent unto one of these, and theyll ricochet to the other two fireballs, then shoot a regular fireball, and continue your combo juggling opponent in air.
4.Slam Dunk Fireball: She leaps up in the air, forming a fireball, and once she hits the ground, she slams the fireball on the ground, causing a huge explosion around and over her.
5.Fire Uppercut: She does a flying flaming uppercut.
6:Teleport: She just teleports to another side of the battleground.
7:Teleport Stab: She teleports behind opponent and stabs him/her
repeatedly.
8:Tornado Kick: Its similar to the bicycle kick, but swirls around upwards while kicking opponent. The hard fall also takes good damage from opponent.
9:Energy Theft: She grabs opponent, and sucks some energy away to
regain some of her loss of energy.
Fatality1:
An Egyptian Surgery:
She slices his/her throat. He/she falls to his/her knees. She kicks them, so he/she falls on their back. She summersaults, landing on his/her stomach and pinning their hands on the ground with her knives. She then jams her entire hand through opponents mouth, as they scream in agony, and pulls out the heads inner organs(brains and attached the eyes, vocal cord, and the tongue)
Fatality2:
Getting Rid of the Old:
She holds his/her head tight, and starts to french kiss them. [Male opponents respond back happily, but Females try to fight her off] She slowly pulls her head away sucking out the opponents life. The opponent starts to get old. Once shes done, she releases opponent, leaving him as a very old weak man/woman. Still holding opponent, she poses happily. The she looks at opponent, and frowns. She raises the old opponent off of the ground, by the neck. She charges up fire from the same hand she holds the opponent, and fires. The fireball blows the head away, but then the fireball slowly slides and blows up the rest of the body, from the chest down.
Hari Kari:
Poison Bite: Keilienaten is a sore loser, and has always hated to ever be killed off by winning opponent. She has her own suicide plan, of course, if she does it quick enough.
She pushes winning opponent away, and magically appears a cobra around her neck. The snake wraps around her neck, biting her face repeatedly. The cobra releases her neck. Shell fall to the ground puking blood and vomit. She turns different colors, then shes left looking like a bulimic person. She just drops dead on her blood and vomit.
The cobra wants to attack winning opponent, but he/she stomps on the snakes head.
Story:
Keilienaten has warped through a portal no one, not even the Dragon King, knows its open. After the Dragon King was reborn, lots of portals and gates were opened, and the Elder Gods immediately chose warriors to guard them. The Elders were too blind to see the invisible portal that leads to a world much stronger. Its a world just like the Egyptian, but with powers never witnessed that can destroy an Elder God and powerful sorcerers. This place is called Rahankatut.
Keilienaten is said to be daughter of Pharaoh Akhenaten and Nefertiti, but was raised by the Goddess Isis. She was brought up to serve and protect those who are weak. The only thing was that Keilienaten has grown with an evil mind. She cares for no one but herself. She had murdered her guardian, Isis, and claimed her position as Goddess. She then took her own parents life, and took over the entire Egyptian Realm, Rahankatut For the last thousands of years, she has ruled this land, always wanting more. She has now found the portal that warps through her world and the Outworld opened. Something she has been waiting for a long time. Always planning an invasion on Outworld, and now that the portal is open, Keilienaten has gathered her troops, but waits for the perfect moment to attack.
First, she travels through the portal along with one of her guards, Anubis, to check out the alien Realm to her. In Outworld, she has aligned with the Dragon King to destroy the Earth warriors. She will help the Dragon King to the end, and secretly plans on bringing him down right after, and sneak her clan through the secret portal, and kill all of Dragon Kings minions, and those who get on their way, to claim Outworld as her own. After that, itll be easier for her to travel through different portals, and out rule other realms, and become Queen of all that is living and the non-living.
Character Description:
She has a very slim and sexy body. Her look is almost like the girl on
The Mummy Returns. She has the same small gold skirt, and a gold top. She has smooth long hair, with bits of golden locks. She has golden high heels that have thick golden laces wrapped around her thick juicy legs. She has lots of thin golden bracelets on both hands. Her makeup is astonishing, and makes her look even sexier. [I love Egyptian chicks]
Character's Signature Quote:
I curse all who dare discover me!
art by fear-sAs
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at least tell me why dont you want me to......
