OK if you want a harsh opinion and comment then highlight spoilers
Well theres ALOT of improvement you need to do on this, for starters rip the sprites better and take away the black box around the spites, read Kombats Tutorial and make it easier to read. I know its your first comic dude but you are going to get comments like this anyway if you do something like this again.
another thing you need and definitely need is the humor, make it funny
which sometimes saves the comics
PS please don't highlight spoilers lol
and please dont take what I said offensively im sorry if I ticked you off or
anything
http://www.kombat-pavilion.com/spritecomic-tutorial.html

This comic is pretty bad. Get rid of the background surrounding the sprites. The humor is almost non-existant, too. I strongly recommend that you take a look at ]{OMBAT's sprite comic tutorial.

1/5

Well I tried.

at least you didn't type in all caps and yelled at every comment like some guys do. But then again the comments toward that one guy were sometimes too harsh.

Wow...I uh...I don't know what to say...wow.

Being brutally honest here. 0/5.

-RyanRaiden.

Better than MKSMScorpion's comics. Still pretty shit. 0/5.

A for effort.

I figured that the hey kids grampa would be kinda funny but I was wrong.

yes but things cant be funny when you cant tell when a sentence begins and when it ends so that joke was a fail

No plot
No good dialogues
Sprite editing is unexistent
No separation between blocks
No proper introduction
No Humour


Well you need to work a lot and actually spend more than 2 minutes doing a comic if you wsant to success. Cheers.

Hmmm,this isnt really funny at all,and it doesnt look very good.No offence,but i think MKSMScorpion made better comics mainly because he had his sprites in the background(without the color box behind the sprites like yours in your comic),plus,his were horrible to the point where it was funny. But im sure you will get better if you remove the Spriteboxes,add a plot,make it funnier,etc. You might want to check out some comics from the Pavillion first,and then try to make another comic.


1/5