Ok.....Finish it completly and colour it. Then do some shading! Detail lots of detail it looks plain. The boomerang needs to be bigger. Show her face and if you can't draw faces make it look better. The clothes need to be more detailed. 1/5 dragon stars and I gave you that cause you tried.
It's looking interesting, but still needs a lot of work.
The boomerang should be bigger than her head.
Also, try to give her some shape like some muscle definition to give her some curves. Especially in her legs. You could start to define her abbs some, just so you see a hint of muscle there.
Here is a perfect example, not too much muscle, but enough to give her a nice shape. click here
vampyre Wrote: it looks like she has a banana in her pocket, maybe she will feel peckish during a fight and leave the peeling on the floor..lol
LOL! Thanks for your comments, they will help me get better. It was a kinda rushed pic, as i did it in class. With the face thing i was just seeing what you guys would think about a ninja type tanya, but ill change that in a second version.