(Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
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(Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/12/2003 04:44 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 06:19 AM EDT
My reply from the other thread tongue.

"Hmm, ok I like this.
This is definately the best work that either of you two have given out.

However, there are a few little things....

- Lifebars are pretty cool, but what is that "thing" in between them, it could use a few more colours. The "glow" effect, doesn't glow much.
- The glow effect around the win marks doesn't glow much either,
- No shadows?
- Parts of Skarlet's skin look like they have only one colour.
- There is a lack of blood imo, just a few more drops would make it look a little better.
- Scorpion doesn't really look as if he's "grasping" the sword around it's handle, or something.

Good things:
+ The Scorpion edit is very good, I like that alot.
+ The Skarlet edit is pretty cool too (just beware of those colours I mentioned above).
+ Everything in the background fits together nicely, along with the sprites.
+ The blood that's there is pretty cool too.

Definately the best thing that has come from you two, and nice fake smile."
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 06:22 AM EDT
This seems like a good idea, since this is the 'official' thread for this fake. Here is my response from the other thread as well.

"Ok, well I am a Skarlet fan, so I think its pretty cool. But why did you use a 'C' on her lifebar instead of a 'K'? Oh well, its only a small detail, and it doesn't really matter I suppose.

Anyway, the background ok, its a bit simple, but its still pretty good. The gate looks pretty good in my opinion. The lifebars I like, but is that thing between them the timer? It and the win tokens don't 'glow' much, if you used Paint, you needed to use more colors there. Is that the shadow? It looks like Smoke peeking out from around the tree in MK2. And I don't see one for Skarlet at all.

Scorpion's sprite looks pretty good mostly, though he doesn't look like he's exerting much energy holding Skarlet up on the sword. Skarlet's skin does look one colored around her stomach, and er.. backside, lol. One question though, whats that thing behind Skarlet's lifebar?

Overall, its very original, and thats always very good. It is the best fake either one of you have produced though, good job."
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 01:09 PM EDT
i hate it

it looks weird

keep trying..u'll get the hang of it! smile
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 02:41 PM EDT
can you atleast say what could I improve next time? that doesn't help me neither Jordanman at all.
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i hate it

it looks weird

keep trying..u'll get the hang of it!

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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 04:21 PM EDT
i like it the ideas kool and nice edit on the victim aswell 4/5
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/13/2003 04:40 PM EDT
"...If that's Scorpions MK4 sprite, you did a "kinda" good job on it. But I'm sorry to say that the so called Scarlet sprite is not very well done. She looks too much like Meleena or one of the two female warriors (Jade & Kitana).


The blood and gore effects could of been alot better, I'm sure of that. As for the stage background, I think it's awesome. But since this was a finisher you could of added the "FATALITY" text to it. My rating for this: 3/5. I'm not saying this is bad, so don't get it the wrong way. You just could of done a little better. So keep up the good work smile.


Oh... And next time, use the .PNG Image format, it's a whole lot better. Plus your picture would have more quality viewing to it.
" - What I said from my previous post.
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/15/2003 10:06 AM EDT
The Sprite is pretty good, but If you were trying to make the MKDA Scorpion, you forgot the details of his outfit., like the swords in the back, the chain and Spear attach to his belt, the chest,....
I like the Background. An overall pretty good jod!
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/15/2003 01:18 PM EDT
First thing is the Doom textures. Not a good idea, they look so dated and lo-res. The background overall is pretty weak. Reminds me of a back alley.

I realize this is the first few frames of the fatality but the Scarlet sprite is in an odd position for it. Don't forget gravity.

The sprites are not that much different from their originals.

I suppose this is descent since there was probably a time chrunch for the contest.

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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/15/2003 02:09 PM EDT
whoa whoa whoa

how did i get a skull point? i'm no fake pic maker, i cant give u pointers

i just said i hate it because it looks weird
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/15/2003 02:51 PM EDT
...w/ out saying "why" you think its weird and you hate it, you see everybody? they got dragon points because they were honest and they told Jordanman and myself what to do better next time. But you didn't explain, and you call that pointers?
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whoa whoa whoa

how did i get a skull point? i'm no fake pic maker, i cant give u pointers

i just said i hate it because it looks weird

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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/15/2003 04:21 PM EDT
You got skulls because you said it sucks.
It doesn't suck, far from it, it is just that you needed to explain why you don't like it and give some points on what would have being better to add or to retouch.
By saying thoses, you would have earned a Dragon at least!
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
06/30/2005 10:24 AM EDT
MaX That Fricken SUCKED HE DESERVES TO DIE AND HE IS THE SCUM OF THE FREAKING EARTH!
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
06/30/2005 10:32 AM EDT
Attention whore....

Anyways... I'll have to agree with Max on the Background and some parts of the Scorpion outfit. I don't really like the Skarlet costume because it seems more of a recolor Kitana/Mileena outfit to me than a Skarlet outfit...it just seems that way to me. Its not a bad fake...just try to make your own sprite in a position that's not traditionally seen...Try again.
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
06/30/2005 11:45 AM EDT
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MaX That Fricken SUCKED HE DESERVES TO DIE AND HE IS THE SCUM OF THE FREAKING EARTH!


sigh...plz don't come back.

anyways that's good...nothing more to say :O


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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
06/30/2005 01:06 PM EDT
Heh. an Original kharak killing off a fanmade one... good 1.wink
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
06/30/2005 01:57 PM EDT
10/10 i like it!

wasn't scarlet a glitch in MK2?confused
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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/06/2005 12:06 PM EDT
MK2 glitch or fatal error?

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RE: Fan Art: (Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
07/06/2005 04:55 PM EDT
This thread is two years old.

Jordanman and myself collaborated making that. =/
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