(Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
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(Warehouse Contest) Scorpion and Scarlet
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This fake was made by me and MaRcElunbeatable for the Mkwarehouse contest. They didnt let us be in the contest because i guess we couldnt use Scorpion, w/e. So i decided to put it here and get it rated. I made the life bars, win symbols, timer, blood, sword, and scarlet. MaRcElunbeatable made the backround and scorpion. Hope you like it
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My reply from the other thread
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"Hmm, ok I like this.
This is definately the best work that either of you two have given out.
However, there are a few little things....
- Lifebars are pretty cool, but what is that "thing" in between them, it could use a few more colours. The "glow" effect, doesn't glow much.
- The glow effect around the win marks doesn't glow much either,
- No shadows?
- Parts of Skarlet's skin look like they have only one colour.
- There is a lack of blood imo, just a few more drops would make it look a little better.
- Scorpion doesn't really look as if he's "grasping" the sword around it's handle, or something.
Good things:
+ The Scorpion edit is very good, I like that alot.
+ The Skarlet edit is pretty cool too (just beware of those colours I mentioned above).
+ Everything in the background fits together nicely, along with the sprites.
+ The blood that's there is pretty cool too.
Definately the best thing that has come from you two, and nice fake
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"Hmm, ok I like this.
This is definately the best work that either of you two have given out.
However, there are a few little things....
- Lifebars are pretty cool, but what is that "thing" in between them, it could use a few more colours. The "glow" effect, doesn't glow much.
- The glow effect around the win marks doesn't glow much either,
- No shadows?
- Parts of Skarlet's skin look like they have only one colour.
- There is a lack of blood imo, just a few more drops would make it look a little better.
- Scorpion doesn't really look as if he's "grasping" the sword around it's handle, or something.
Good things:
+ The Scorpion edit is very good, I like that alot.
+ The Skarlet edit is pretty cool too (just beware of those colours I mentioned above).
+ Everything in the background fits together nicely, along with the sprites.
+ The blood that's there is pretty cool too.
Definately the best thing that has come from you two, and nice fake
This seems like a good idea, since this is the 'official' thread for this fake. Here is my response from the other thread as well.
"Ok, well I am a Skarlet fan, so I think its pretty cool. But why did you use a 'C' on her lifebar instead of a 'K'? Oh well, its only a small detail, and it doesn't really matter I suppose.
Anyway, the background ok, its a bit simple, but its still pretty good. The gate looks pretty good in my opinion. The lifebars I like, but is that thing between them the timer? It and the win tokens don't 'glow' much, if you used Paint, you needed to use more colors there. Is that the shadow? It looks like Smoke peeking out from around the tree in MK2. And I don't see one for Skarlet at all.
Scorpion's sprite looks pretty good mostly, though he doesn't look like he's exerting much energy holding Skarlet up on the sword. Skarlet's skin does look one colored around her stomach, and er.. backside, lol. One question though, whats that thing behind Skarlet's lifebar?
Overall, its very original, and thats always very good. It is the best fake either one of you have produced though, good job."
"Ok, well I am a Skarlet fan, so I think its pretty cool. But why did you use a 'C' on her lifebar instead of a 'K'? Oh well, its only a small detail, and it doesn't really matter I suppose.
Anyway, the background ok, its a bit simple, but its still pretty good. The gate looks pretty good in my opinion. The lifebars I like, but is that thing between them the timer? It and the win tokens don't 'glow' much, if you used Paint, you needed to use more colors there. Is that the shadow? It looks like Smoke peeking out from around the tree in MK2. And I don't see one for Skarlet at all.
Scorpion's sprite looks pretty good mostly, though he doesn't look like he's exerting much energy holding Skarlet up on the sword. Skarlet's skin does look one colored around her stomach, and er.. backside, lol. One question though, whats that thing behind Skarlet's lifebar?
Overall, its very original, and thats always very good. It is the best fake either one of you have produced though, good job."


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i hate it
it looks weird
keep trying..u'll get the hang of it!
it looks weird
keep trying..u'll get the hang of it!

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can you atleast say what could I improve next time? that doesn't help me neither Jordanman at all.
mister_satan666 Wrote: i hate it it looks weird keep trying..u'll get the hang of it! |
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i like it the ideas kool and nice edit on the victim aswell 4/5

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The blood and gore effects could of been alot better, I'm sure of that. As for the stage background, I think it's awesome. But since this was a finisher you could of added the "FATALITY" text to it. My rating for this: 3/5. I'm not saying this is bad, so don't get it the wrong way. You just could of done a little better. So keep up the good work
Oh... And next time, use the .PNG Image format, it's a whole lot better. Plus your picture would have more quality viewing to it." - What I said from my previous post.
The Sprite is pretty good, but If you were trying to make the MKDA Scorpion, you forgot the details of his outfit., like the swords in the back, the chain and Spear attach to his belt, the chest,....
I like the Background. An overall pretty good jod!
I like the Background. An overall pretty good jod!


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First thing is the Doom textures. Not a good idea, they look so dated and lo-res. The background overall is pretty weak. Reminds me of a back alley.
I realize this is the first few frames of the fatality but the Scarlet sprite is in an odd position for it. Don't forget gravity.
The sprites are not that much different from their originals.
I suppose this is descent since there was probably a time chrunch for the contest.
Wyatt
I realize this is the first few frames of the fatality but the Scarlet sprite is in an odd position for it. Don't forget gravity.
The sprites are not that much different from their originals.
I suppose this is descent since there was probably a time chrunch for the contest.
Wyatt


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whoa whoa whoa
how did i get a skull point? i'm no fake pic maker, i cant give u pointers
i just said i hate it because it looks weird
how did i get a skull point? i'm no fake pic maker, i cant give u pointers
i just said i hate it because it looks weird

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...w/ out saying "why" you think its weird and you hate it, you see everybody? they got dragon points because they were honest and they told Jordanman and myself what to do better next time. But you didn't explain, and you call that pointers?
mister_satan666 Wrote: whoa whoa whoa how did i get a skull point? i'm no fake pic maker, i cant give u pointers i just said i hate it because it looks weird |
You got skulls because you said it sucks.
It doesn't suck, far from it, it is just that you needed to explain why you don't like it and give some points on what would have being better to add or to retouch.
By saying thoses, you would have earned a Dragon at least!
It doesn't suck, far from it, it is just that you needed to explain why you don't like it and give some points on what would have being better to add or to retouch.
By saying thoses, you would have earned a Dragon at least!
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MaX That Fricken SUCKED HE DESERVES TO DIE AND HE IS THE SCUM OF THE FREAKING EARTH!


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Attention whore....
Anyways... I'll have to agree with Max on the Background and some parts of the Scorpion outfit. I don't really like the Skarlet costume because it seems more of a recolor Kitana/Mileena outfit to me than a Skarlet outfit...it just seems that way to me. Its not a bad fake...just try to make your own sprite in a position that's not traditionally seen...Try again.
Anyways... I'll have to agree with Max on the Background and some parts of the Scorpion outfit. I don't really like the Skarlet costume because it seems more of a recolor Kitana/Mileena outfit to me than a Skarlet outfit...it just seems that way to me. Its not a bad fake...just try to make your own sprite in a position that's not traditionally seen...Try again.

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Heh. an Original kharak killing off a fanmade one... good 1.


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10/10 i like it!
wasn't scarlet a glitch in MK2?
wasn't scarlet a glitch in MK2?

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MK2 glitch or fatal error?
(da da dum dish!)
(da da dum dish!)


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This thread is two years old.
Jordanman and myself collaborated making that. =/
Jordanman and myself collaborated making that. =/
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