I'm still writing it. I think you may like it. I won't be killing him off officially...well you'll see....

The tension is killing me!

-We all ran off to fight these mysterious warriors in blue. Then they drew out these black mechanical devices.-

Smoke: Hm...I think I remember these.....RUN!

-The Kombatants dispersed amongst the people. Gun shots were heard, but they just kept going. Eventually M4L spotted Sm0k3.-

M4L: Sm0k3!

Sm0k3: M4L! Where do we go?

-M4L's eyes searched for a good spot somewhere, anywhere.-

M4L: Over there! Run into there!

-M4L and Smoke ran into a long dark alley. They ran to the end of the alley and spotted Haiku and Reptile-

Reptile: Guys! There you are! We need to get the hell outta here!

Haiku: But how?!

M4L: We must find Grailic! It's the only way!

-The four run on back to the original scene. Some of the blue warriors strike the kombatants when they get there. 2 sorround M4L. 1 comes at Smoke. 2 come at Reptile and Grailic-

Blue Warriors attacking M4L: GET HIM!

M4L: *laughs* Fools...-he then uses his telekenisis to smash the two warriors together-

-The blue warrior lunges at Smoke with his "black stick". Smoke simply dodges it, and sticks a shuriken in his gut-

-Reptile spits in one of the blue warrior's face, killing him. The other one, stunned, is kickly roundhouse kicked to the ground by Reptile-

Reptile: Thanks for all the help....

Haiku: Do not forget that I am your superior....

Reptile: Not for long...

Haiku: What did you...

M4L: Enough! Let us find Grailic.

-They move on, and eventually come upon Grailic, wounded by some small metal object. M4L shakes Grailic-

M4L: Grailic! Get us out of here!

Grailic: uhh...watch...out....-goes back unconscience-

M4L: What?

-Suddenly a mysterious man comes out of a portal, and knocks M4L in the back of the head, knocking him unconscience. Before he can react, he throws several shurikens into Smoke's shoulders. Smoke goes down. He then kicks Reptile to the ground, and punches Grailic to the ground. He picks up Grailic and attempts to take him back to the portal. But before he can, Reptile is back on his feet, and he kicks the man straight in his face-

???- ahh! You imbecil!

Reptile: You will not take the mage!

-The man then charges at Reptile, but Reptile is too quick! He moves out of the way, and hits the man with his Forceball. The man hesitates, and roundhouse kicks Reptile. Reptile goes down, seemingly defeated. The man takes Grailic on his shoulders, and heads back to the portal. Before he can, Reptile runs up, takes Grailic out of his arms, and kicks the man back into the portal-

Reptile: Fool....

-Behind Reptile Haiku starts to clap-

Haiku: Very nice Reptile. If Shao Kahn hears of this, he will surely rank you up. Maybe even above me. But then again, if he hears how I, Haiku, have defeated this great warrior, he will rank me up. Maybe even an Arch Assasin......

Reptile: You son of a bitch.....

Haiku: Reptile, I challenge you to MORTAL KOMBAT!

Ok i will take it from here

It didn't come out like I wanted. Reptiles...ermm "comments", discouraged me a bit. But, overall I think I like where it's heading.

its nice man

Good job, dude. That was cool.

Haiku: Reptile I challenge you to MORTAL KOMBAT!

Reptile003: What? I would not want to hurt a high ranking soldier in Shao Kahn's Army.

Haiku: You must accept it! I have challenged you to Mortal Kombat! A fight to the death. Whoever lives, gets the promotion.

Grailic: Why in the name of the Elder Gods Haiku? I thought you were trustworthy. But now i realize what you are. Reptile will kill you, and it will be over.

Haiku: Hahaha FIGHT!

He kicked me in my stomach and I slid back. He ran up to grab me but i initiated camouflage, flipped behind him and Roundhouse kicked him in the back of his head. He got up quick, and pulled out a large blade. He swung it at me and cut my chest open, a minor wound. As the pain seared on my chest, I hissed and wildly threw punches.

Haiku: Arghh! You fight well, but now I will finish you!

Standing weakened from the blood, I slowly back stepped. I trembled as he stepped towards me with his blade, and he swung and cut my chest again. Now I was losing my life force, and about to black out. He took one last swing, and a big shock of blue light flashed throughout the zone.

Everything turned black.

It was kinda rushed. Sorry if there are spelling errors.

Nothing - Edit

Less than some posts I've read. I like the rivalry between Reptile and Haiku. Very creative.

I also like how I'm outranking Haiku.

Go ahead.

lmao.

You go, i need time to make ur sig :P

I really like the ending here. I wonder what'll happen next.

ok my turn

M4L: What the fuck are we supposed to do with him? He's losing blood fast!

Smoke: -gains conscienceness- We need to take him back to Outworld. Let him get some rest.

M4L: Grailic, take us to Outworld!

-Grailic used all of his remaining power to open a portal-

M4L: Smoke, you carry Reptile, and I'll carry Grailic.

-Smoke grabs Reptile and the four jump through the portal-

-Back in Outworld-

M4L: Finalfreak! Reptile is losing blood fast, and Grailic is unconscience!

FinalFreak: What?!?! Okay, I'll do my best to tend to him.

-Smoke then lays Reptile and Grailic on the table-

FinalFreak: I'll watch after them here...

M4L: When he becomes well, send him to Earthrealm.

FinalFreak: Of course.

M4L: Smoke, you and I will be alone to stop Sairo and Haaka. Can you handle it?

Smoke: With ease.

M4L: I hope you're right.....FinalFreak! Open a portal to Earthrealm....we're going to Washington.....

Is Reptile003 going next or should I?

MK

I hate sounding like a piece of shit critique

Heres some things i have to say


First off, you completely disregarded my ending

I had a blue shock of light that stopped haiku, you made it so that didn't even happen

A wig and a fake mustache? cmon man ur better than that

If thats nastupic, then why would he attack before we found the Kamidogu? ( The thing we're are looking for)

And

to Smoke

Whos the mysterious guy who comes randomly from a portal?

What happened to Grailic?? How was he injured? I don't understand?

Its Hakaa not Haaka

BLAHHH

No idea.

Well, the mysterious guy can be whoever you write it to be. I wanted it to be one of the brothers though.

And Grailic was shot. I wrote hit by "a small peice of metal" or something like that. And Haaka was a typo

U guys take it from here, ima just observe...

I think you should finish it Reptile. You obviously had something in mind. If you need to backtrack, and act like certain things didn't happen, be our guest. I want to see what you had in mind.

Well, this is because I didn't know what the hell that blue shock of light was.



Haha what else could I have said? How else could he have disguised himself? I thought a mask, but I thought that might be a bit cliche, but I suppose a wig and mustache is too...



Because you pissed him off. lol.

So is it your turn or mine now, Reptile003?