Hold up, I'm on and ready to release it an hour before expected! =)

Here's Episode 6 of the Deadly Dominion Series for your enjoyment!

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Deadly Dominion: Episode 6
"Break-In"

'Leona and Elandra begin the execution of their life-threatening plot, and hit the Dimentian Fortress with all they've got. Still, they will have to face those responsible for Dimentia's notoriety before succeeding in their assassination attempt.

Meanwhile, the ominous presence of new individuals manifest themselves in the World of Dimentia, and as the tournament draws closer, complications rise.'

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Thanks in advance for the feedback!

- Leo

Wow....just WOW! That is amazing! You have outdone yourself Leo!

* The Creature that attacks King Malickus sounds very intriguing. He reminds me a little of Voldo from Soul Calibur and Hazmat from Marvel Nemesis: Rise of the Imperfects. I'm curious to find out his story and who he is. I wonder what he's plotting?

I'm still laughing when Queen Minerva dropkicks him in the Back!


* I like the Tension between Davila and Vladimir, makes good Drama. I love how you used imagery to help me visualize Davila's Use of Dark Magic! Its Nice to see Hamon again, I want to see more of him though. (Nice work with making him look kind of Human!) Wonder how Vladimir's Plan is going to turn out.


* Lara's attitude never stops entertaining me! Quotes such as:

"Um... we're kind of back in the fortress, people. Why do I still see you? Shoo!"

"No, I haven't. He will be speaking to the fortress bimbo in the Throne Room shortly. I cannot interrupt."

Always make me laugh and have even more fun reading it. That is why she is one of my Favorite Characters. (Even though she called Bianca a Bimbo )


* The scenes with Elandra and Leona are fantastic! The Imagery in the Scenes allow me to actually Picture the Assassin's Movements, attacks, and Perfect Kills! Elandra getting in shock when she killed that Generic guard, eh? (its Great Character Developement!) Hmmm...A weakness Bianca can exploit.


* Awsome Cliff-Hanger! I also Like Maverick's hunger for more Life Energy, Its Like he Actually needs it rather than just to be more powerful as Compared to Shang Tsung. I don't understand why Luther won't let him eat a worthless Guard. (As you can see from the Leona/Elandra scenes the Guards aren't that helpful! Lol! )


Again, Amazing Episode Leo! Flawless Work! Cannot Wait for Episode 7!

That was great, gets better everytime.

Cannot Wait for Episode 7 because 1 of my characters will be in it.

Amazing as usual! I of course loved the scenes with Elandra, particularly how you brought in her signature kill

I like her turning from a reluctant assassin into something far more cold and deadly; can't wait to see episode 7!!

Im speechless..........Leo,this is amazing!

- Thanks for the great and insightful comment, B_C!



Well, we can already tell that Vladimir is decided on screwing over every other world and The Watchers themselves to get the Stone (you can't really blame him, given the circumstances). And Hamon fought extremely well against the demon Awren, but we have yet to see wether or not he can match up to the other figher's abilities.



She's definitely a unique character in the series. I love Lara's "tone" as well, and the way she reacts to the situations around her. Sexy AND funny is a great combination in any character!



Yes, from Maverick's bio, you can tell his powers drain his energy and take their toll on him. Since Luther couldn't really care less about wether or not this is so, he has to find alternate sources to replenish his energy. Only a little bit of time will tell wether or not Mace was a good choice for this or not!



That's right on! She's definitely going through some pretty noticeable changes, much thanks (or blame) to Leona. We'll soon see where this is going to take Elandra! Thanks for commenting, S_S! Always great to hear from you!



Thank you, khanswarrior! Glad you're keeping up with the episodes and taking the time to leave feedback!



That's the plan! It's about time Viper reaches his destination, and with that will come the introduction of two new characters!

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Also, I'd like to let everyone know that I'll soon be posting a sort of "extra feature" before the release of Episode 7: an online quiz that anyone can take in order to test out how well you're doing in keeping track of the series so far It's fun to try, so give it a shot when it's posted!

Greatness with the episodes. No Drake . It's still a great epi. Can't wait for seven!

Umm, I hate to break it to you, but I wouldn't count on Drake being in Every Single Episode. He isn't one of the Main Stars, such as Mace, Leona, Vladimir, Lara, Luther, etc. He's Just a Supporting Character.

But that Really shouldn't matter to you. If you are a True Fan, Like I, its doesn't matter if your Character is in Every Episode or if he's the Main Character, as long as he adds to the Story and makes it exciting and Interesting is what you should be wanting.


- This Message has been brought to you By yours Truly, Barakaz_cuz (A.K.A., 2nd in Command)

I agree. That's why I'm saying it's a great episode. I know he won't be in every episode, but I still hope to see him in episodes. But they're still great, so whatever I said in the last post, you must have taken the wrong way. Great job Leo.

Hey guys,

Here's something for you to try!

"How Well Do You Know the Characters?"

Try and get through it without going back to previous episodes for answers, and see how many you can get right! Feel free to post your score here on the thread!

Also, shout out to B_C for finding the web site!

- Leo

Well, I got an 80, but I suppose it could have been worse


Nice little quiz, Leo; I laughed when I saw the Exotic Dancer option for Elandra

I seriously can't wait for Episode 7!!

Heh, I knew you would (but now everyone knows that's the wrong answer) lol.

What questions did you trip on, out of curiosity?

I got 70

100



Did you Expect any Less?



Where are my Shouts! >=( (lol )

What's up, guys.

Episode 7, "Scaling Strife", is up!

Deadly Dominion: Episode 7
Scaling Strife

"Tempers rise in various locations of Dimentia as different powers collide and impatience stems from many fighter's determination to achieve their goals.

At the same time, the secretive assassination plot aimed at Luther is about to reach its conclusion..."

1. Be sure to leave your feedback, since they're what keeps these episodes coming!

2. Don't forget to give the QUIZ a try, and feel free to post your scores here as well as what questions stopped you from getting a perfect score (so I can kill my curiosity).

AND

3. I felt there wasn't that much "interaction" with Episode 6 as there were with many of the others, in terms of posts-in-between, comments, etc. So I'd like to ask everyone who is involved in the project or just plain likes the series to advertise it a little bit: PM some of your friends and invite them to keep up with the eps. as well, etc. Let's keep trying to make this project grow more and more!

FINALLY,


ENJOY!

Wow. That was great, Diavol was great (I create him).

10/10

P.S. This story has more cliffhangers than Lost

Brilliant! Absoultely Brilliant!

* The Maverick/Mace scene was Interesting and Creepy! Great Imagery when describing Maverick's Life Force Suction made it all the More Scary to read! I also Love how Maverick's Clothing, Magic, and Servants are influenced by Serpents/Snakes! Got to see Some rage in young Mace in this Episode, Can't wait to see what happens Next!


* I Love The Description of Donnovan!

One last person walks in. DONNOVAN is a man seemingly in his late twenties with an evident look of strength commanding his features. His shoulder-length hair is tied back with a few strands falling over his measuring auburn eyes. He is dressed in archaic-styled warrior attire, wielding a sleek, gleaming sword with an extravagant handle adorned by a hefty red gem.

His Background, look, Dialouge, and Overall Character are becoming one of my Favorites!

Diavol is Pretty cool As well. He needs to get that Temper of His under control and needs to get his priorities straight. (And I bet if he doesn't Train as much, I don't think he can beat Bianca one-on-one either! )

Group Member #1 One is Funny as Hell!

"Diavol, shut the hell up!"

Viper murdering "MAN (O.S.)" was pretty interesting! Also how Many Minutes does he have on that Rock He talks to Maverick with? He obviously doesn't get good Reception out there!


* Nice Scene involving Millena and Logan! Millena needs to stop caring for people who Have No Names and only have Numbers! (Lol!) I liked how you described the Heilig Structures and how the differentiate as compared to the Dimentians and Earthlings. Logan Humors us more with his attratcion to Lara and Zale gets an Urgent Message warning them about the Craeture that escaped into Dimentia using King Malickus's Orb...I wonder where he is and what he's up to...Hmmm?

* Lara is sadly Missing from this Episode but it seems that Vice has taken her spot as the Button Pusher of Bianca.

"fucking talking lizards"

LOL!

Poor Elandra, Leona split and now she has the Task of Killing the Emperor of Dimentia all by herself...and her sole reaction:

"Damn..."

Wow! The Dialouge between Vice and Leona is filled with Tension, Hatred, and Rage.

"Leona folds her arms while holding the Double-Edged in her right hand up to her lips. She slides her tongue over the razor-sharp tip of its front blade in sarcastic mockery."

Whoa Leona! (Where does that seem so Familiar? ) The Fight between them Is Eventful and Exciting! It Left Me hanging! Can't wait to see what Happens Next...Will She Kill Him?

...Hopefully


* This Scene is Powerful and Dramatic! Bianca's reaction to Luther is like a Teenager getting yelled at by the Principal. Sorry Bianca, those Puppy Dog Eyes don't Phase Luther.

I also like how you show that she cares about him, but Isn't afraid of his Authority either:

"(laughing)

Nice try, Luther. Why don't you just come right out and say it? She is my superior because you have passion and lust for her!

(tearing up)

A lot more than you'll ever have for anyone else!"

What a Cliff-Hanger! (So it Begin Soul_Stealer....Hmm)
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- Take the Quiz and See if you Can Make a 100 like Leo and I!

- I recommend that everyone that has a Character advertise in your Signatures for Deadly Dominion! Also invite your friends (Or Enemies O_O')Via PM and tell them to get involved in the Episodes!

Again Great Episode Leo!

10/10

Cannot Wait for Episode 8!

-2nd in Command

Diavol could kick Bianca ass because he's cool and she just little slut. lol

-2nd in Command = someone's bitch

Great job. The fighting is as ever so detailed, and the descriptions. I love Elandra's reaction "Danm." 5/5. It's perfect, what else is new.

Haha...

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How am I in any shape or Form being Leo's Bitch?

And thats Lame to Call Bianca a Slut...Everyone Else Knows she has Many More Talents! >= (

Also for those People who don't Know how to Make a Link for your Sig, Copy and Paste This:



[a href="http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?id=99961"]An Adventure is Born...Deadly Dominion[/a]

Of Course Replace the "[ ]" with "< >"

Wow... once again, that is fantastic. Bianca is my favorite.

Also for those People who don't Know how to Make a Link for your Sig, Copy and Paste This:



[a href="http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?id=99961"]An Adventure is Born...Deadly Dominion[/a]


Of Course Replace the "[ ]" with "< >"

You know I'm only having a joke.

Your not a bitch because your not 2nd in Command (don't lie, you told me on MSN.)

Bianca does have other talents just like Paris Hilton (and I'm not talking about her singing or acting). lol

I'm only having joke.

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People plz put link in the sig and let your friends know about this.

Leo put alot work into this so it's time we give something back.

Hey everyone sorry i havent been around. Got into a fight with the alphabet and the alphabet won. And im grounded. Just aloud to tell you wont be on

Are you 100% Sure I'm not, or do you just "Think" you know?


And that was really uncalled for...that is like the Worst Insult You could Call my Character. If Bianca is a Paris Hilton, then Diavol is an OJ Simpson that grew some hair and painted himself red all over! +unsightly and with a bad temper!


HWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I'm 100% sure (where your 2nd in Command)

To be fair, if my character OJ Simpsons then he will get away with murder (Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life).




White and Nerdy, lol