Brodeur Wrote: frozenspear2004 had wrote: are you going to pm the winner? Well, if you want, it's not necessary, most likely they'll find out through the tournament. As for this tournament, it will go on like it's been going since the start, as for other future tournaments, krsx66's ideas was something I was considering. With the same concept, except opponents facing off against one another, going up tiers, like an actual tournament. And only judges can vote, not outside people. And for that, we would need a bit of judges to vote, a little more than we have right now. But then, we will have to begin with all the characters in place for the tournament to actually begin, that will be the hard part. Good job buterbals, thanks a lot for your help. Thanks tgrant for helping out, really appreciate it.

I agree, lets keep this format for the remainder of this tournament. But I believe for future tournaments the VS idea of facing off against one another would be good. Like you said, you'd have to begin with all the characters in place. I suggest a "tryout" period, for a week or two accept all entries then pick the best 8,12,16....whatever. But judges are needed, and it seems that most people who enter this thread (understandibly) only enter characters. Hopefully more judges will arrive soon.

I'm updating Tiger soon.

OK those who have characters and want to enter then please wait. We have 5 challengers already and we need time to decide. The character bios are huge so its going to take us time to read through them and stuff. We eill be back with an update soon.

I'll be a judge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I didnt't think that my character would last this long. I'll be updating him soon so stay tight. Later.

This is really disappointing. We have someone who created two profiles. With one he entered the tournament with the other he tried to become a judge. I let him become a judge but quickly found out that he was a clone. Im talking about Johnny_Cage_Rules. He also created another profile named Kung_Lao-Rulze. Your created character will now be erased, you are no longer a judge and you can no longer add any new created characters. You are banned from the game.

buterbals113085 Wrote: This is really disappointing. We have someone who created two profiles. With one he entered the tournament with the other he tried to become a judge. I let him become a judge but quickly found out that he was a clone. Im talking about Johnny_Cage_Rules. He also created another profile named Kung_Lao-Rulze. Your created character will now be erased, you are no longer a judge and you can no longer add any new created characters. You are banned from the game.

Damn. Why do ppl have to pull this shit. Im glad you found out about this man. Youre deffinatly doing a good job.

We are looking for judges, and because of what happened earlier. Judges must have over 100 visits or more.

buterbals113085 Wrote: We are looking for judges, and because of what happened earlier. Judges must have over 100 visits or more.

Hmmmmm, if you need them that bad, I could drop my character out and become a judge.

Sorry if this is a redundant question but I thought I read somewhere that if your character goes through to the next round then you have to alter/update or tweak everything on your character, is this correct or am I just plain stupid?

tyrant-cenobite Wrote: Sorry if this is a redundant question but I thought I read somewhere that if your character goes through to the next round then you have to alter/update or tweak everything on your character, is this correct or am I just plain stupid?

you dont have to change anything. If you feel your character isnt strong enough compared to others then you can change bits of him/her. You cant start from scratch though.

tyrant-cenobite Wrote: Sorry if this is a redundant question but I thought I read somewhere that if your character goes through to the next round then you have to alter/update or tweak everything on your character, is this correct or am I just plain stupid?

No your not stupid lol.. You CAN update your character between eliminations if you choose to, to increase you chances of surviving. But you don't HAVE to. Hope this helps.

In about 4 hours im going to update the list. the judges have decided who is going and who is staying. I have to go to school now. i get in at 9:40 come out at 12:30.

Hi whoever is involved with the tournament (mods, etc) can you delete post number :

213 and 214

on PAGE 8,

(It prevented me from editing them so I have reposted it)

Much appreiated, thanks,

Tyrant-Cenobite

Reposted due to inability to edit errors on previous post.

Name:Sarakia
Real Name: Unknown
Origin: Outworld
Height: 5'11
Weight: 143lbs
Age: 12000+
Status: Voodoo Queen
Alignment:Evil
Fighting Styles:

Vornitua
- Mortizola
- Dual Scythes

Profile/Bio/Storyline:
A woman who became a legend in Outworld centuries ago...her memory still lives in their nightmares...Her untimely inevitable death struck her realm like an earthquake, her tribe spiralled into chao's.
During her expansive life she mastered every Voodoo incantation and spell and of coure the Dark Arts. Sarakia then became an inpregnable force to be dealt with, always protecting her realm of Kearenia.
Although her skills were simply drastic, she was unintentionally slain by Shao Kahn who had been an inch from death, with once last strike he flushed her into the Netherrealm, concealing her body and soul in a tomb, then lowered into the lava...
Then Shao Kahn did the unforgiveable in Sarakia's eyes- slaughtered all of her fellow Tribesmen alongside the Great Shamans' and the Witch Doctor, then claimed her realm as his....
But something happened..........
With the rise of the Dragon King,the D-Kunintentionally created a rift between the Netherrealm and Outworld, causing millions of Outworlders to plummet into the Netherrealm and millions of minions from the Netherrealm to resurface again...this included Sarakia, acknowledging all of what happened after her death, learning of her realms' inprisonment by Shao Kahn.
Determined to reclaim her realm, she locates the souls of her fellow Tribesmen, etc and ressurects then from the deceased, successful in doing so, she travels back to her home realm only to discover that The Outworld Emperor is dead and her realm released from his grasp, constructing her realm into its original sick, sadistic form...Only once again to be hailed as the "Voodoo Queen".
Excelling further into new methods of Voodoo, Sarakia has more depth into her arsenal.
But something trapped inside her soul is about to be unveiled...by the Dragon King, who has a somewhat unclear connection with her. Hell bent on annihalating the Dragon King to keep her Ulterior secrets hidden, she still has another two destined objectives.
The first is to claim a necklace worn by her arch adversary Nitara - so she can diverse throughout realms but most importantly to gain access to the Exposed Netherrealm to unite and bargain with the Oni who are currently spawning forth a new legion, hungered for flesh...BUT...most disturbing of all, plans to capture Edenia as a foundation, to eliminate all the Edenians and transform the realm of beauty and tranquility into her own dark, twisted image...
No one knows to dars to discover her true intentions and still the connection between her and the Dragon King remains to be seen. She will play an integral part in either the Destruction of Outworld or more importantly Earthrealm..
Promising to spread the fear once again...........

Ending:
The mutilated corspes of Kitana, Sindel and the rest of the Edenians lay benath Sarakia's feet. The realm of Edenia now merges into Sarakia's dream, her tribesmen hail her as she has been responsible for the death of thousands, one of her destined missions completed...
Sarakia knew that the Dragon King was becoming increasingly stronger but with the combined force of her tribe and thge Oni, they were set to be a good contender, then then then travelled back to the rejeuvenating Netherrealm to obtain all its souls to use in an incantation which could vanquish the Dragon King for good. Then, the united force marched into the derelict Outworld and wagered war against all...They slaughtered thousands of enemies from different races and they had lost only half a dozen of warriors. Cackling at the lifeless bodies of Rayden and the chosen warriors from Earthrealm.
The ultimate showdown was now to commence between her and the Oni and the Dragon King and his undefeatable army...
It was the most brutal and extreme battle in Outworlds history! The Dragon King was severely wounded but his will against death repelled, but Sarakia was barely scrapped nor was her Tribe as they had use a spell to shield and reboundattacks
The Dragon Kings armies numbers hit a downfall and a miniscule amount still stood. But betrayal arose when an unknown force converted the Oni to their cause and the Oni then started to last out at Sarakia and her tribe, their shield spell suddenly became dormant, leaving them vulnerable to death. In a strange turn of events the Onis' were no match for Sarakia and her tribe and the entire legion of Oni was erased from existence, their mangled corspes were all that remained, their souls disintergrated, Sarakia was on the brink of victory until another batch of adversaries lunged into her tribe on the deathlands - the remainder of Earths Forces, The Elder Gods implemented an explosve cameo but soon returned to the heavens as they could not withstand the substantial damage which was being dished out. The shokans emerged swaying their quadrouple arms in fury, then an unexpected, familliar, allegedly death force arrived...Shao Kahn.
Shao Kahn made a temporary alleigance with Sarakia to destory the Dragon King and she agreed only until the Dragon Kings death would they turn on each other. Shao Kahn released the Nomads from the portal led by Baraka and Mileena and they savagely tore into the Dragon Kings army.
The numbers from all forces started to diminish, the battlefield looked liked an overpopulated graveyard. The Dragon King still had the Undefeatable army but they suddenly started to destruct themselves crumbling into the floor. The Dragon King was blind to see that the Sorceror had reclaimed the amulet and destoryed the army. Upon Realization the Dragon King multiated the sorceror into a pulp and absorbed his soul.
Then a suprise attack surfaced, Shao Kahn retaliated into Srakia's Tribe, assasinating them all, destorying the spell to slaughter the dragon king, leaving Sarakia for dead.
The two emperors clashed together in an explosive showdown, face to face they duelled it out. After an extensive viscious fight, Shao Kahn leered over the erupting carcass of the Dragon King...
Outworld was engulfed in flames as the Netherrealm finally overtook Outworld. The blaze wiped everything in Outworld from existence, apart from Sarakia who in the brink of time traversed to Earthrealm escaping the Inferno............

Special Moves:

- Shrunken Head toss.
Sarakia withdaraws a batch of shrunken heads and throws them at her opponent, splattering upon impact.

Hair Lash: Using the spikes at the end of her dreadlocks Sarakia whips her hair around slicing the opponent

-Whisp.
Withdrawing her talisman, Sarakia dispenses a mist which clouds the opponent intoxicating them, (temporarily immobilizing them)

-Cretin spawn (think Noob Saibots clone throw in MKT)
Sarakia withdraws her talisman and spews forth a hideously deformed demon which leaps onto the opoent gnawing them with its teeth them exploding in blue flames.

Head Shrink: Sarakia throws a spark at her opponent and the opponents head shrinks temporarily (2 seconds) whilst they panic, Sarakia can obtain a free hit.

Thorned Rose: Sarakia lunges forth a chain embedded with spikes which cling round the oppoents ankles, then tugs them towards her along the floor giving her a free hit.

Weapon: Talisman - with an orb at the tip and a long spike at the bottom - intricate details engraved on the stick itself.

Fatality One:

Scorned

Withdrawing her talisman she spears it towards them impaling them in the chest - it catches alight with Blue flames and engulfs the opponent and then the flames dissapear - leaving the alive victim horribly burnt. Then their head starts to shink and Sarakia rips it off and puts it with her collection of Shrunken Heads..

Fatality Two:

Dolly Wolly

Sarakia withdraws a voodoo doll and chants an incantation - she then starts to toy with the doll and thus the opponent starts to react like she is doing to the doll. She then rips off the dolls arm and then starts to beat the doll with it - the opponent doing this also, beating them to a pulp. She then twists the doll and then snaps it in half along with the opponent...

Hari Kari:

Takes out a Voodoo doll which is bonded to her soul and starts to toy with it inflicting damage to herself then grasping it tightly she squishes it with her foot -Killing herself in a gory, bloody way........

Appearance:

Primary Outfit: Black Mask with red/White markings, Black hair (long, portions of it in dreadlocks with small blades dangling from the tips. Her neck is confined with metallic gold bangles, on her arms there are more red/black markings, with gold bangles wrapped around her forearms, her biceps are encased with black leather straps. Her breasts are covered with human bones which make a swirl shape covering only the nipples. Her stomach is also decorated with red/black markings. Her waist holds a leather belt with spikes embedded in it, connected to the belt by a chain is a sack full of shrunken heads which were once sarakias victims who fell to her and there heads shrunken due to her excellency at voodooism. A woven flap consisting of metal and leaves covers her knickers which are black with spikes on them. On her back is a tatoo of some unknown force (revealed in the story) and her arse is covered with another flap similar to the one on the front. Her thighs are plastered with more human ribcage bones and her knees are covered by two leather spiked straps that criss-cross one another. Her calves are covered by long grass which is tied together by black leather straps and her feet are wielding spiked leather boots with minature chains surrounding them.Her fingernails are black and measure two inchesin length,She also has completely yellow eyes.

Secondary/Alternate Outfit: Sarakia now has a headress on and her face is covered by a Black/red voodoo mask.Sarakia's hair is now all tied up together and hidden under the headress, Her arms are fully sheathed in black leather with spikes trailing up the arm. Her right leg has leather straps around her thigh and the knee highleather boots with spikes up the back of her calf. Her left leg is completely bare apart from the black chain which has been embedded into her knee and has been stabbed through the roof of her foot. Her nipples are simply covered by a single black leather strap with six spikes sticking outwards. Different red/black markings appear on her abdomen. Her groin is covered up by a metal plate held up by leather straps which connect to her hips. Her arse is hidden by a large leaf. Black straps are connected to her elbows - they dangle and flow when she moves. The sack of shrunken heads remains but tied round her left thigh by a small chain. a red veil covers the back of her head. Her Back is bare and the Same tatoo in her 1st outfit is visible.

Stage Name:Voodoo Plains

Enviroment:
-A large burial ground with a sacrifical fire burning in the middle - blue flame. Dug-up graves appear on the west side of the level,Dead warriors and wolves splayed on the floor surrounding the area, derelict huts and statues crumble and fall apart, wolves howl in the night, strange soundsarise in the forest in the distance, tribesmen run and attack wolves in the background whilst playing on that level. A portal is open on the NE side and if you are knocked through it you are torn apart by an unknown force and the remains of the oppoent are spewed back out onto the level. The sky is pitch black with only the moon and stars and the fire giving light. The forest in the background is also ablaze, and bats swarm the skies, voodoo tools lay strewn on totem poles, and voodoo mask are hung on hooks on a cabin wall, blood is splattered all over the floor. This level is Sarakia's native homeland. (Like in the MKA movie but more elaborate and better...)

Interactivity: The ability to smash opponents through Totem poles and through the crumbling huts and statues, the fire will scald the opponent if they are near it.

Stage Weapon: A large Mace sits astrewn between logs - opponent snaps logs and wields the mace.

Death Traps: If the oppoents near the portal they can be either thrown, shoved or kicked into it. The portal closes after they are in it then it re-emerges the portal them spews the remenants of the opponent then vaccums it up and blows it into the sacrifical fire. 2.)If the opponent is knocked through the wooden fence in the south a pack of rabid wolves attack and gnaw at the opponent until it is nothing more than a mutilated, skeletal corpse..

Stage Fatality: The opponent is picked up by the other player and it impaled onto the totem pole. the Totem pole then lowers itself into the sacrifical fire and the flames engulf the opponent. The opponent screams in agony and the flame drages the opponent into the fire completely. Then after a few short seconds the fire blazes down into the earth with the victims souls screaming while deceased voodoo tribesmen hack and slice at the opponent...

Its not very good but at least I made an attempt, I couldn't even compare to some of the genius' on the forum. But I don't have a chance of winning but still its the effort you put in. Kudo's to everyone else so far, your characters have all been terrific, Regards,

Tyrant-Cenobite.

tyrant-cenobite Wrote: Reposted due to inability to edit errors on previous post. Name: SarakiaReal Name: Unknown Origin: OutworldHeight: 5'11Weight: 143lbsAge: 12000+Status: Voodoo QueenAlignment:EvilFighting Styles: - Vornitua- Mortizola- Dual Scythes Profile/Bio/Storyline:A woman who became a legend in Outworld centuries ago...her memory still lives in their nightmares...Her untimely inevitable death struck her realm like an earthquake, her tribe spiralled into chao's. During her expansive life she mastered every Voodoo incantation and spell and of coure the Dark Arts. Sarakia then became an inpregnable force to be dealt with, always protecting her realm of Kearenia. Although her skills were simply drastic, she was unintentionally slain by Shao Kahn who had been an inch from death, with once last strike he flushed her into the Netherrealm, concealing her body and soul in a tomb, then lowered into the lava... Then Shao Kahn did the unforgiveable in Sarakia's eyes- slaughtered all of her fellow Tribesmen alongside the Great Shamans' and the Witch Doctor, then claimed her realm as his.... But something happened.......... With the rise of the Dragon King,the D-Kunintentionally created a rift between the Netherrealm and Outworld, causing millions of Outworlders to plummet into the Netherrealm and millions of minions from the Netherrealm to resurface again...this included Sarakia, acknowledging all of what happened after her death, learning of her realms' inprisonment by Shao Kahn. Determined to reclaim her realm, she locates the souls of her fellow Tribesmen, etc and ressurects then from the deceased, successful in doing so, she travels back to her home realm only to discover that The Outworld Emperor is dead and her realm released from his grasp, constructing her realm into its original sick, sadistic form...Only once again to be hailed as the "Voodoo Queen". Excelling further into new methods of Voodoo, Sarakia has more depth into her arsenal. But something trapped inside her soul is about to be unveiled...by the Dragon King, who has a somewhat unclear connection with her. Hell bent on annihalating the Dragon King to keep her Ulterior secrets hidden, she still has another two destined objectives. The first is to claim a necklace worn by her arch adversary Nitara - so she can diverse throughout realms but most importantly to gain access to the Exposed Netherrealm to unite and bargain with the Oni who are currently spawning forth a new legion, hungered for flesh...BUT...most disturbing of all, plans to capture Edenia as a foundation, to eliminate all the Edenians and transform the realm of beauty and tranquility into her own dark, twisted image... No one knows to dars to discover her true intentions and still the connection between her and the Dragon King remains to be seen. She will play an integral part in either the Destruction of Outworld or more importantly Earthrealm.. Promising to spread the fear once again........... Ending:The mutilated corspes of Kitana, Sindel and the rest of the Edenians lay benath Sarakia's feet. The realm of Edenia now merges into Sarakia's dream, her tribesmen hail her as she has been responsible for the death of thousands, one of her destined missions completed... Sarakia knew that the Dragon King was becoming increasingly stronger but with the combined force of her tribe and thge Oni, they were set to be a good contender, then then then travelled back to the rejeuvenating Netherrealm to obtain all its souls to use in an incantation which could vanquish the Dragon King for good. Then, the united force marched into the derelict Outworld and wagered war against all...They slaughtered thousands of enemies from different races and they had lost only half a dozen of warriors. Cackling at the lifeless bodies of Rayden and the chosen warriors from Earthrealm. The ultimate showdown was now to commence between her and the Oni and the Dragon King and his undefeatable army... It was the most brutal and extreme battle in Outworlds history! The Dragon King was severely wounded but his will against death repelled, but Sarakia was barely scrapped nor was her Tribe as they had use a spell to shield and reboundattacks The Dragon Kings armies numbers hit a downfall and a miniscule amount still stood. But betrayal arose when an unknown force converted the Oni to their cause and the Oni then started to last out at Sarakia and her tribe, their shield spell suddenly became dormant, leaving them vulnerable to death. In a strange turn of events the Onis' were no match for Sarakia and her tribe and the entire legion of Oni was erased from existence, their mangled corspes were all that remained, their souls disintergrated, Sarakia was on the brink of victory until another batch of adversaries lunged into her tribe on the deathlands - the remainder of Earths Forces, The Elder Gods implemented an explosve cameo but soon returned to the heavens as they could not withstand the substantial damage which was being dished out. The shokans emerged swaying their quadrouple arms in fury, then an unexpected, familliar, allegedly death force arrived...Shao Kahn. Shao Kahn made a temporary alleigance with Sarakia to destory the Dragon King and she agreed only until the Dragon Kings death would they turn on each other. Shao Kahn released the Nomads from the portal led by Baraka and Mileena and they savagely tore into the Dragon Kings army. The numbers from all forces started to diminish, the battlefield looked liked an overpopulated graveyard. The Dragon King still had the Undefeatable army but they suddenly started to destruct themselves crumbling into the floor. The Dragon King was blind to see that the Sorceror had reclaimed the amulet and destoryed the army. Upon Realization the Dragon King multiated the sorceror into a pulp and absorbed his soul. Then a suprise attack surfaced, Shao Kahn retaliated into Srakia's Tribe, assasinating them all, destorying the spell to slaughter the dragon king, leaving Sarakia for dead. The two emperors clashed together in an explosive showdown, face to face they duelled it out. After an extensive viscious fight, Shao Kahn leered over the erupting carcass of the Dragon King... Outworld was engulfed in flames as the Netherrealm finally overtook Outworld. The blaze wiped everything in Outworld from existence, apart from Sarakia who in the brink of time traversed to Earthrealm escaping the Inferno............ Special Moves: - Shrunken Head toss.Sarakia withdaraws a batch of shrunken heads and throws them at her opponent, splattering upon impact. Hair Lash: Using the spikes at the end of her dreadlocks Sarakia whips her hair around slicing the opponent -Whisp.Withdrawing her talisman, Sarakia dispenses a mist which clouds the opponent intoxicating them, (temporarily immobilizing them) -Cretin spawn (think Noob Saibots clone throw in MKT)Sarakia withdraws her talisman and spews forth a hideously deformed demon which leaps onto the opoent gnawing them with its teeth them exploding in blue flames. Head Shrink: Sarakia throws a spark at her opponent and the opponents head shrinks temporarily (2 seconds) whilst they panic, Sarakia can obtain a free hit. Thorned Rose: Sarakia lunges forth a chain embedded with spikes which cling round the oppoents ankles, then tugs them towards her along the floor giving her a free hit. Weapon: Talisman - with an orb at the tip and a long spike at the bottom - intricate details engraved on the stick itself. Fatality One: Scorned Withdrawing her talisman she spears it towards them impaling them in the chest - it catches alight with Blue flames and engulfs the opponent and then the flames dissapear - leaving the alive victim horribly burnt. Then their head starts to shink and Sarakia rips it off and puts it with her collection of Shrunken Heads.. Fatality Two: Dolly Wolly Sarakia withdraws a voodoo doll and chants an incantation - she then starts to toy with the doll and thus the opponent starts to react like she is doing to the doll. She then rips off the dolls arm and then starts to beat the doll with it - the opponent doing this also, beating them to a pulp. She then twists the doll and then snaps it in half along with the opponent... Hari Kari: Takes out a Voodoo doll which is bonded to her soul and starts to toy with it inflicting damage to herself then grasping it tightly she squishes it with her foot -Killing herself in a gory, bloody way........ Appearance: Primary Outfit: Black Mask with red/White markings, Black hair (long, portions of it in dreadlocks with small blades dangling from the tips. Her neck is confined with metallic gold bangles, on her arms there are more red/black markings, with gold bangles wrapped around her forearms, her biceps are encased with black leather straps. Her breasts are covered with human bones which make a swirl shape covering only the nipples. Her stomach is also decorated with red/black markings. Her waist holds a leather belt with spikes embedded in it, connected to the belt by a chain is a sack full of shrunken heads which were once sarakias victims who fell to her and there heads shrunken due to her excellency at voodooism. A woven flap consisting of metal and leaves covers her knickers which are black with spikes on them. On her back is a tatoo of some unknown force (revealed in the story) and her arse is covered with another flap similar to the one on the front. Her thighs are plastered with more human ribcage bones and her knees are covered by two leather spiked straps that criss-cross one another. Her calves are covered by long grass which is tied together by black leather straps and her feet are wielding spiked leather boots with minature chains surrounding them.Her fingernails are black and measure two inchesin length,She also has completely yellow eyes. Secondary/Alternate Outfit: Sarakia now has a headress on and her face is covered by a Black/red voodoo mask.Sarakia's hair is now all tied up together and hidden under the headress, Her arms are fully sheathed in black leather with spikes trailing up the arm. Her right leg has leather straps around her thigh and the knee highleather boots with spikes up the back of her calf. Her left leg is completely bare apart from the black chain which has been embedded into her knee and has been stabbed through the roof of her foot. Her nipples are simply covered by a single black leather strap with six spikes sticking outwards. Different red/black markings appear on her abdomen. Her groin is covered up by a metal plate held up by leather straps which connect to her hips. Her arse is hidden by a large leaf. Black straps are connected to her elbows - they dangle and flow when she moves. The sack of shrunken heads remains but tied round her left thigh by a small chain. a red veil covers the back of her head. Her Back is bare and the Same tatoo in her 1st outfit is visible. Stage Name:Voodoo Plains Enviroment:-A large burial ground with a sacrifical fire burning in the middle - blue flame. Dug-up graves appear on the west side of the level,Dead warriors and wolves splayed on the floor surrounding the area, derelict huts and statues crumble and fall apart, wolves howl in the night, strange soundsarise in the forest in the distance, tribesmen run and attack wolves in the background whilst playing on that level. A portal is open on the NE side and if you are knocked through it you are torn apart by an unknown force and the remains of the oppoent are spewed back out onto the level. The sky is pitch black with only the moon and stars and the fire giving light. The forest in the background is also ablaze, and bats swarm the skies, voodoo tools lay strewn on totem poles, and voodoo mask are hung on hooks on a cabin wall, blood is splattered all over the floor. This level is Sarakia's native homeland. (Like in the MKA movie but more elaborate and better...) Interactivity: The ability to smash opponents through Totem poles and through the crumbling huts and statues, the fire will scald the opponent if they are near it. Stage Weapon: A large Mace sits astrewn between logs - opponent snaps logs and wields the mace. Death Traps: If the oppoents near the portal they can be either thrown, shoved or kicked into it. The portal closes after they are in it then it re-emerges the portal them spews the remenants of the opponent then vaccums it up and blows it into the sacrifical fire. 2.)If the opponent is knocked through the wooden fence in the south a pack of rabid wolves attack and gnaw at the opponent until it is nothing more than a mutilated, skeletal corpse.. Stage Fatality: The opponent is picked up by the other player and it impaled onto the totem pole. the Totem pole then lowers itself into the sacrifical fire and the flames engulf the opponent. The opponent screams in agony and the flame drages the opponent into the fire completely. Then after a few short seconds the fire blazes down into the earth with the victims souls screaming while deceased voodoo tribesmen hack and slice at the opponent... Its not very good but at least I made an attempt, I couldn't even compare to some of the genius' on the forum. But I don't have a chance of winning but still its the effort you put in. Kudo's to everyone else so far, your characters have all been terrific, Regards, Tyrant-Cenobite.

Don't sell yourself short. I happen to think your Character concept is very interesting. It was just the previous pics of her look that I didn't agree with. You have just as much a chance of winning as anyone else.

can some1 let me know when theres space for another character?Cheers!

*UPDATE 10th Elimination*

OK we the judges have come to an agreement to boot one of the current characters. The Challenger taking one of the spots is Ryukeshen Seir. I myself think this character would make a better boss I think due to his intentions. He does seem like a type of ?RYU? from street fighter, I felt that he does travel through realms looking for good challengers. Anyways he will be replacing..................
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DONNA. Sorry but your characters concept was really good but the whole story was a little odd. The whole part about Raiden and her wasnt very interesting. Other judges will surely add their personal comments on to why they chose you. Remember im not the only one booting these characters. I liked this character but the other judges felt it wasn?t good in some parts. Anyways thank you isk8element21 for participating and at least your character got 6 stars. . And congratulations to the winner.


*Updated After 10th Elimination*

The Tournament:
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1.Jackal (**)
2.Senim (*********)
3.Ryukeshen Seir
4.Hatsuma (*********)
5.Hellscream (*********)
6.Tiger (******)
7.Assault (*********)
8.Phoenix (********)
9.Tai Tsung (*********)
10.The Enygma (*)
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"THE CHALLENGERS":
1. Sarakia
2. Althea
3. Kithak Scorne
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*UPDATE 11th Elimination*

Another elimination is about to take place. The next character was just really awesome. I really liked this character and the way this character was involved with so many other MK fighters. The moves, fatalities were just amazing. And that character is Sarakia This character will be replacing...................
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Assault. Your death trap was really good. I loved that idea. But someone had to be booted and your character was chosen. Thank you very much for participating MetadragonX for participating. Your character left with 9 stars. I would love for you to join us and become a judge. PM me and let me know if you want to. Thanks. And congrats to the Winner

*Updated After 11th Elimination*

The Tournament:
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1.Jackal (***)
2.Senim (**********)
3.Ryukeshen Seir (*)
4.Hatsuma (**********)
5.Hellscream (**********)
6.Tiger (*******)
7.Sarakia
8.Phoenix (*********)
9.Tai Tsung (**********)
10.The Enygma (**)
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"THE CHALLENGERS":
1. Althea
2. Kithak Scorne
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TIGER CONTINUATION: Another part to my Tiger story, and yet again it is set before the last part, enjoy....

Nightwolf had calmed Tiger down enough to begin talking about his past, and his unusual attire. Tiger explained that his clan was so secretive that if he even mentioned the name to an outsider, he would be marked for death. Seeing that Tiger would not reveal anymore on the matter Nightwolf asked where he was from, before he joined the clan. Tiger told the shamen that he was once a student at the Wu Shi Academy and had been taught by Liu Kang and Kung Lao. He had been their mightiest young warrior, the next Chosen One, but he lacked the discipline. More importantly though, his soul was tainted by evil. This was never more evident than in the annual Wu Shi Academy tournament, a contest to determine the best student at the Academy, and judged by Kang and Lao. Tiger annihilated all comers before reaching the final where he would face another promising fighter, Chong Wei. This was the first proper competition Tiger had encountered during this exhibition, and he soon realized this was a worthy opponent. Wei fought with intelligence and avoided many of Tiger's attacks, infuriating the arrogant student. In one swift move, Tiger incapacitated his opponent - but illegaly. Chong Wei had been a victim of Tiger's eye gouge special move, something that was strictly against the rules and left Wei blinded. But before Kang could stop the fight and disqualify Tiger, he had lunged at Chong and bit into his neck. He died quickly, but in agony. Tiger was banished from the Academy for ever and was almost sentenced to death. Fortunately for him the Order of Light decided he should be exiled and told that if he was ever seen again by Kang or KUNG LAO (at the tournament perhaps??) he would not escape next time. He wandered Asia for months aimlessly, stealing to survive, a skill he was surprisingly good at. One day he was attempting to pick pocket someone at the local market in Tokyo, it turned out to be Chow Chan - a leader of a very secretive clan. He saw the young man's potential for thievery and invited Tiger to join his clan.
Tiger accepted.....

Character Requirements:
Character Name:darkness rain
alignment:evil
Character Looks:5`7,140 lbs, dark skin, red eyes,bald,long black trenchcoat.
styles:tae kwon doe,kung fu (northern and southern substyles)
Character Special Moves:(2)
shadow fight:snaps fingers and shadow of opponet gets up and fights useing there own moves aginst them as darkness sits back laughing
whip crack:swings his whip at the opponet and catches there legs and swings them around till they hit a wall
Character Weapon:whip
Character Fatality:fatality 1:(shadowtality) snaps finger again and this time when the shadow comes up it performs the opponets own fatality on them
fatality 2:(whips of life) swings out his whip and wraps it around opponets neck and hangs them while sliceing at them wit a dagger till their skin falls off in its entirety
Stage Requirements:
Stage Name: red dragon headquarters (a ring with a red dragon in the center and members of the clan all around cheering on the fight
Stage Interaction:certain ropes around the ring bounc the opponet into the air and the ringposts hurt double
Stage Weapon:in one corner are kabals hookswords and at the other is kanos butterfly knives
Stage Fatality:loser gets picked up and thrown into the crowd where they get ripped apart by the clan members
Death Traps:clan members will grab ur arms and
hold u down so free hits can be had

story:darkness rain is a member of the red dragon clan and malvaldos new right hand man since hso hso died at the hands of jax. was single handedly responsible for the death of sonya blade and kano. his newest assignment is to hunt down whats left of the oia then report to malvaldo himself.

buterbals113085 Wrote: *UPDATE 10th Elimination* OK we the judges have come to an agreement to boot one of the current characters. The Challenger taking one of the spots is Ryukeshen Seir. I myself think this character would make a better boss I think due to his intentions. He does seem like a type of ?RYU? from street fighter, I felt that he does travel through realms looking for good challengers. Anyways he will be replacing.................. ....................... ....................... .......................

Actually I don't know anything about Street Fighter because the only time I've played characters from Street Fighters was in the VS. series and they don't have endings. Eh, doesn't really matter, I had a hard time coming up with something for him to do in the Outworld, hahaha. It should be noted that the last name is Seir-Aristata. ;)

Also, if you didn't get from my character description, his fighting styles are...Tekura, Necromancy, and Dual Rapiers.

Edits:

Soulspear- Attacks the essence of the opponent, not the mind. Mind just doesn't make sense, lol.

Additions:

Hara Kiri- Ryukehsen cannot accept defeat and will not let his opponent have the honour of finishing him off. Therefore, he causes his soul to flow out of his body and the body to implode using an old trick of Necromancy and his Portal-creating skills to create a time-space rift within the area of his body. The portal erases all traces of his existence and after a time disappears. The soul drifts around for a few seconds before vanishing from existence.


OK, my creative juices have been stale lately. This is crap hahaha...oh well. Once I start up thinking actual good ideas I'll update again.

updated my character!

Name: Jackal
Age: 637
Height: 5’9”
Weight: 190lbs
Race: demon
Alignment: neutral

Appearance: black hair with a widows peak (think vegeta from dbz but not so high) with greying temples. Black pants and boots with the remnants of a white tunic torn to shreds and hanging in strands from his belt. Shirtless with a massive Chinese kanji branded onto his back. He has broken shackles on his wrists and his hands remain forever burning. Skin – tan but forearms are red with burnt bits of brown flesh closer to the hands. A black demonic symbol is imprinted on his forehead.

Alt1:
Keung Poh as a member of the Jackals
Decorative metal shin and forearm guards with intricately designed breastplate. Black tunic and trousers which appears slightly puffy around the thighs and shoulders, where it is not held down by armour. Hair is longer and tied in a bun. Still has burning hands and demonic symbol on forehead for this alt and next despite them being outfits for his human character.

Alt2:
White lotus garb (in honour of its teachings)
Black baggy pants with small slipper type shoes (don’t know the name). White sandal style binding over the ankles to secure the loose cuffs. White vest with big white lotus symbol on the back. Small version of Raidens hat tied under the chin with white string and brass wrist bracers.

Specials:
Ground pound – Jackal hits the ground with a fiery fist sending a circular ring of fire outward.
Lo-hi – first a low aimed sweep and as the opponent falls Jackal grounds his sweeping foot and, whilst facing away from his opponent, brings his other foot up to a backward vertical split kick, kicking the falling opponent for a popup attack.
Fire frenzy – Jackal lunges forwards and spins with his burning hands making a dazzling light show, landing three quick punches

Lo-hi + fire frenzy provides an easy 5 hit combo.

Throw:
Grabs and lifts opponent by the throat and Jackal’s fiery hand intensifies, burning the opponents face and chest before they thrash and finally break free.

Styles
Tiger kung fu, Wudan, quarterstaff

Victory pose
Anything that involves fast arm twirling to make an impressive display with his burning hands.

Fatality:
Jackal reaches his burning hand into the stomach of the victim and they begin to spasm, first light twitching as smoke begins pouring from their mouth and wound, then more violently as the insides catch fire and melt. When the whole body bursts into flames, Jackal lifts up the body and slams it down at his feet. The victim tries to get up but Jackal puts his boot at the base of the victims neck and pushes them back down, twisting his foot as though he was putting out a cigarette butt.

Hara kiri
He just simply grabs the sides of his head and snaps his own neck. The fire on his hands slowly fizzle out. Hmmmm just read that Hotaru snaps his own neck as his hara kiri... therefore i change Jackal's to: Jackal takes out his quarterstaff and snaps it in two, then he takes each half, points the snapped ends towards his chest and plunges them in. hands fizzle out.

Unusual FX
When Jackal connects punches there is a clear sizzling sound and smouldering puffs of smoke are released as the opponents flesh is burnt.

Stage
Shou’s pit of Despair
Deep within Mu Shou’s fortress lies his torture chamber – the pit of Despair. Shou used this room to extract valuable information regarding his enemy, Emperor Yongle – the second Emperor of the Ming Dynasty. It is a circular room with a prison cell side and a torture area side. On the torture side there are various torture devices – a person can be seen tied to a water mill-like wheel where a person operating the crank can stretch them. in the middle of the torture side there is a great furnace in the form of a huge bear head with the fire blazing inside the bear’s mouth. Its look is menacing and there are two red tapestries either side of the head which hang from ceiling to floor with kanji’s that read ‘Red Bear’. There are several pokers, swords and irons poking out of the furnace, one of which is the stage weapon. To the left of the furnace (opposite of the wheel) there are several prisoners lined up at a chopping block where a masked executioner chops a limb off periodically through the course of the fight. (could be hands, feet or even the head.) as the fight progresses this corner gets bloodier and bloodier and a blood trail eventually makes its way towards the centre of the stage. Fighters track this blood around during the course of the match. Plenty of ambient screams and sizzling sounds fill the arena. The executioner yells a foreign chant in the background if he is going to behead one of the prisoners, giving time for fighters to take the fight over that side so that the kill is visible in the BG!!

Stage interaction:
Various dangerous objects lie around. rusty spikes line the walls and several wrought iron fire baskets spit sparks if you get close. There are also two body racks placed at either end of the stage which characters can jump onto. Pressing the throw button enables the STAGE MOVE.

Stage move
Kind of a new thought I had. Executed from the raised platforms (racks) it more or less a wrestling move (like from the top turn buckle) and has the damage of a powerful throw. Even a blocked stage move will put the recipient off balance for a split second.

Stage weapon
Branding iron. This iron is long with a red-hot ending that inflicts extra damage to the victim. The brand is the seal of Mu Shou – a kanji meaning ‘Red Bear’

Death trap
Opposite the furnace (on the prison side) there is a standing coffin (open) with spikes protruding inwards from the door. It is a medithisthingisdisabled torture device, though it doesn’t leave the victim alive. Kick the oponent into the coffin and the door slams shut! Blood seeps from the door crack and eye slot.

Stage fatality
The executioner comes over and chops your head off with such force that the head flies all the way into the furnace and the fires roar with more intensity.


In the year 1367 on Earthrealm, Keung Poh, was born during the twilight of the peasant rebellion to the Mongolian rule under the Yuan Dynasty. With Zhu Yuanzhang leading his free peoples to victory and pushing the Yuan warriors back to the Mongolian Steppes, the Ming Dynasty began. Poh’s family pledged their lives, and the lives of their children to serve the House of Zhu.

Before his reign as Emperor, the orphaned Yuanzhang joined a monastery to avoid starvation. During this time he became a member of a Buddhist secret society known as the White Lotus, to which he attributed his strong will and leadership qualities.
As Emperor, Zhu wanted his House and future line to be protected indefinitely and so enlisted one of the White Lotus monks to train his bodyguards. Emperor Zhu’s youngest son, Chengzu handpicked the most elite of the bodyguards at the request of Zhu. The Emperor commanded that these elite bodyguards be the protector of the next Emperor which was to be Zhu’s grandson and nephew to Chengzu. This did not sit well with Chengzu and usurped the crown from his nephew after Zhu had died and pronounced himself Emperor Yongle in 1403. He took the bodyguards for himself (code named his Jackals, to keep the White Lotus society secret). With Yongle feeling unstoppable he enforced radical new innovations to the Ming Dynasty including consolidating government so that no other group could gain enough power to overthrow him. He also moved the capital back to Peking.

Now the remnants of the Mongolian Yuan Dynasty were defeated but not forgotten. One of the wealthy Monglian Lords, Mu Shou, secretly built a warrior clan known as Red Bear, with his men terrorising the outlying villages which presented easy targets. Hearing word of this, Yongle commanded his Jackals to discretely fix the problem. The Jackals, led by Keung Poh, discovered that Mu Shou was behind the attacks of the Red Bear but had underestimated his army resources. The modest army that the Jackals accompanied was no match for the military might that Shou had gathered at the border of Mongolia, and were utterly annihilated.

Amongst those that were captured was three of the original 20 Jackals including Poh. They were taken to Mu Shou’s Pit of Despair beneath his Mongolian Fortress where they suffered torturous interrogations from Shou himself. Shou showed no mercy in order to obtain any and all information about Emperor Yongle, and how he could use it to get the House of Yuan back into power. Shou also devised a plan to ensure Yongle’s most elite Jackal, Keung Poh, would die a dishonourable death. He branded Poh with the symbol of the Red Bear and released him back into China, where Shou perceived that Keung would be found with the tattoo of the Mongolian clan and executed with dishonour along with the entire House of Poh.

Despite being weary and delusional, Keung fought off his escorts (Mu Shou’s double agents) and headed for the mountains of Tibet. He knew that he could not again set foot in China. Several weeks after being in the wilderness, weak and still suffering from the arduous torture in Shou’s dungeon, he finally conceded that death was near. With his waning strength, Keung Poh nestled himself in a small hollow near a rock fall. As he felt the darkness take him, he saw a figure of an old man dressed in tattered grey rags standing before him. Poh thought he was seeing things but then remembered the tales his father passed down from old Emperor Zhu about the afterlife. The White Lotus had said that those that were wicked would be taken to the next life by an old man cloaked in grey. Keung blinked repeatedly but the figure remained. He couldn’t believe it, what had he done to deserve the fate of evil men. Poh asked if the old man was the angel of death. But the bent figure replied that he was no angel and that he was not dead, but a living member of the Song Dynasty. Poh argued that it was impossible seeing as the Song Dynasty ended in 1279. The old man ignored the comment and offered Keung a deal. The bargain involved Poh offering his soul freely to the old man and he would give Keung immortality. Keung refused the offer three times and then the old man revealed himself and told him that he was a powerful Sorcerer. The old man extended his hand and a black symbol was emblazoned on Keung’s forehead.
“If I cannot have your soul then you shall remain in the Netherrealm forever!” the old man pulled a ceremonial black dagger from beneath his rags and slew Keung Poh. Keung felt the earth shift beneath him as a swirling vortex formed under him and gulp his body and soul into the Netherrealm, where he was to stay trapped. The Sorcerer had cursed him to feel the pain of Mu Shou’s torture forever more and his hands began to burn. But the demonic symbol had other properties that Poh discovered. Despite the pain he found he was something not dead but not human and he felt power surge within him. Since he was no longer human he discarded his human name and took that of his unit: Jackal.

With the large forces of Oni invading Outworld from a gateway opened by the Dragon King, the demonic Jackal slips out through the portal and finally free of the Netherrealm, he finds himself strong and powerful. Jackal was conflicted between the atrocities committed by Mu Shou’s men and the Sorcerer and that of the teachings of the White Lotus. One thing was for certain; he would trust no one.


UPDATED:
Changed roundhouse move to something more original
Updated stage description
Updated stage move and death trap
Updated stage fatality
Updated hara kiri and victory pose
Updated alt costumes
Updated bio

Incidentally Emperor Zhu was a real person and most of the events in Jackal’s story are historically correct. Ming Dynasty time period, Zhu joining the White Lotus society, Chengzu usurping the crown from his nephew etc.

And yes the sorcerer is Shang Tsung (using a similar alias to “Song” (song dynasty) where he tricked kenshi)

Cool I got through one round.

Thanks Judges :)

k saw a few people were booted so i thought there may be a vacancy on the challangers list heh if not then i may as well stick this up so when there is a slot u can stick it in CHeers!


Name: Erebus
Real Name: Unknown
Origin: Unknown
Height: 6'5
Weight: 213lbs
Age: Unknown
Status: Bountry Hunter from hell
Alginment: Neutral


Erebus is the son of the elder God chaos,who has come for those who are meant to be dead[johny cage,liu kang and scorpion]. Hes on no ones side and just out to get his job done, no matter who steps in his way.He has two forms.One is human,whereby he has longish dark hair, which covers his sunken jet black eyes.So basically he looks like a rugged bad ass mutha ha. He wears a long dark leather coat and his scarred body is wrapped in barbed chains.The second is his true form,which shows him as the demonic demi-God that he really is.Burning red eyes,blood red skin and two long horns coming from the sides of his head.With a collection of teeth that would give Baraka a run for his money.Also i wanted him to have large metallic wings in this form but as he walks around they are folded in. I was thinking when you change styles there could be a nice effect of shape changing,for examples his long black coat could change into his long metallic black wings...Although i know that would be hard to actually do.

The elder God, Chaos has been planning something for Eons,something big...Hes been slowly building a vast, ferocious army of demons[Oni] in the belly of the neatherrealm.An army of epic proportions.Like his fellow elder Gods,he has for seen the remergence of the dragon king and being the God of chaos has decided to sit back and watch the inevitable war,which is something which greatly amuses him.But soon the ground of the neatherrealm will burst open and his hoarde will be released and will scorch the land,kill and main everything[man,woman and child].Already the cracks has started to show,as moloch and Drahmin have crawled to the surface.He has released his son,the demon demi-God Erebus, and commanded him to return with the souls of those warriors that have died and been brought back to life.This is the task that Erebus needs to complete to prove to his father he has what it takes to lead the army of darkness on a crusade to wipe out life itself. Therefore for the moment Erebus is a demonic bounty hunter,who is packing some hellish gadgets to.
His first fighting style is him in human form,second is him in his demonic form. In his weapon style,two seperate chains,both with a bladed tip, run down each of his arms in a circular motion, creating two barbed wire swords connected to his arms.

moves in human form: a move similar to scorpians spear throw,except he launches chains straight at the opponent,which if they connect ,wraps them up for a short period enabling him to deliver some blows.
move2:well hes packing some serious weapons on him...so a move where he lets rip with one of his hellish guns...but not bullets cz im not really a fan of those the gun moves in mk games..but some hell weapon that releases a flaming projectile?
move three3: seizmic punch,a slow move but extremely powerful...sends opponent flying across the screen...could have a cool kind of rippling effect where you see the energy spreadin across the areana.

Demonic form:move1: projectile where his chest opens and releases the souls of many of his victims which head straight at the opponent.
move2:the ability to fly...can unleash soul projectile down at the opponents and other quick moves.So should have wings or just b able to levitate.
move3:Hells fury .A short period of time where his damage is greater and his moves are quicker..but there should be a limit..and maybe some weakness in it..his energy goes down?or theres a period aftr where the damage he receives is greater...so although effective this move needs to be used at right time.

Finisher:human form the opponent begins to run away,but the bounty hunter sends two chains from within his coat wrapping up the opponents legs...then when the opponent is defenceless on the floor and screaming for mercy,he sends fourth barbed chains[And lots of em] which scramble across the floor covering the opponent..and slowly grinding over his body...the chains are within drawn leavin a shreaded corpse.

Fatality2: he wraps ups his opponent in chains but they r still partially visible and are being held up just over the ground,horizontally,with their face and chest still visible...then a huge chain bursts from his chest, raises into the air ..opens up at the front and plows straight into the opponents chest...when it withdraws you see a light form of the opponent in the chains grasp[struggling and shouting]..then the chain withdraws into the bounty hunter,as well as the chains that wrapped the enemy up...leaving a pale dead version of the opponent on the floor.
Erebus would start off as a secret character but with future mortal kombat games he would get more of a key role.

Stage: The surface of netherrealm. The arena is a just a plain circular fighting ground with energy walls surrounding it.As the fight goes on cracks form around the outside of the arena.Slowly Oni beign to crawl from the cracks.So by the end of the third round.the circular arena will be surrounded by hundreds of blood thirsty Oni.Many of which throw their bodies at the energy walls, bursting on contact...and all that gets through is an explosion of blood from the side of the wall into the arena...so that by the end of the third round the whole floor will be covered in a small layer of blood..so as your fighters move around the blood splashes.

Death trap: you get knocked out of the arena and get killed by the oni.Depending what round you get knocked out depends on how badly you get killed..if you get knocked out early in the first round when there isnt many oni...you will see a couple run towards to and slowly pulls your limbs off and eat you...but if you get thrown out at the end of the third round you will see your character get ripped to shreds.