frozenspear2004 Wrote: I have a character. He needs a little work,but he's not done. I hope finish in time.

Well, we need some challengers, so try to get it done soon.

(character update)

Name: Kithak Scorne

Height: 6'7"

Weight: unknown (floats above the ground so his wait is assumed to be ethreal)

Allignment: Evil

Weapon: A double sided blade which can be disconnected into two during a combo.

Outfit: His first outfit is a dark cloak with black angellic wings and a black iron mask covering his nose and mouth. He also has golden arm bands on his arms.

His second outfit would be a black regal armored suit with no helmet and long flowing black hair and black wings of mist.

Eyes: Red pupils surrounded by black.

Special abilities:
Black fire: a series of 3 black fireballs encircle his opponent and explode

Soul of Darkness: A black shadow jumps out from kithak's arm and raises the opponent up and slams them to the ground.

Shadow snare: A black arm arises from the ground and slowly chokes the opponent and incapacitating them for a couple of seconds as it drags him/her towards Kithak.

Reality shift: Kithak's wings spread out as a ripple occurs around the area which the opponent is standing. An explosion occurs from underneath them.

Fatalities:
Shadow Oni: He raises his hand up in the air as five shadow oni claw up from the ground surrounding the beaten foe and they rip off his arms and legs one at a time. Four of them kneel before Kithak Scorne as the fifth grabs the foe by the back of the neck and raises him/her to face the warlord. As his eyes begin to glow a crimson color, Kithak slams his hand into the chest of the opponent grabbing their heart ripping it out as the opponent screams and is dragged into the ground by the oni.

Disciple of Hate: Kithak backhands the opponent, who falls to their knees then kicks them in the gut as they are keeled over. He reaches down and picks up the beaten foe by the throat, staring into their eyes as his glow a bright red. Placing his other hand upon the fallen foes forehead they begin to burn slowly... their entire body turning red and they scream as they fall to ashes upon the floor.

Bio: Kithak is an ancient Warlord from a forgotten realm whose history no longer exists in any record. He saw the pursuit of domination as a ridiculous endeavor... only that satisfaction of destroying was what he lusted for... to see the blood of those he vanquished strewn across the ground. Even at the age of 15 he had shown considerable skill as a warrior. Some of his teacher's were aware of his insatiable bloodlust but he had been to well trained for them to stop his progress, so when the refused to teach him he taught himself. As a young man he rose an army and waged war on the entire realm. He enjoyed all the bloodshed the war caused and lived for the rush he recieved from killing mercilessly. All came to fear his malicious strategies and came to regard him as a living devil.

In searching for more power he stumbled upon an ancient ruin which was built to worship a clan of Oni which dwelt in the shadows. As he walked in he was amazed at the incredible architecture and could feel the presence of these ancient netherrealm creatures. A pedestal stood in the center of the room,he approached it and a silent humming flooded the room. Out of the walls dark shadowy creatures jumped at him and dragged him into the shadows. Days passed and suddenly he reemerged holding the heads of several of his captors and his body pulsing with the dark power of the Shadow Oni. A ground shaking scream is said to have been heard throughout the realm that day. Soon afterwards he exhibited his great power as well as his undeniably cruel will by slaughtering his own army. Not much is known of what occured after that except that his realm no longer exists.

Now he has appeared in Outworld, drawn to the violence and bloodshed linked to the rising of the Dragon King to continue his lust for the destruction of all Realms. He watches the events unfold upon this realm as great fighters gather from several of the realms to help or battle the Dragon King. All he shall come to face are his to destroy, none shall remain alive. To face this powerful new force is his ultimate goal, that challenge he lives for, any in his way shall fall before his feet helplessly. His is not a fight for conquest, but complete annihilation.

Ending: Leaving a trail of ashes behind as he approached the beaten Dragon King he lifts the Great King up with one arm and smiles. "You are truly pathetic you fool. You are a King of nothing and now I will send you to your kingdom in oblivion." The screams of the once dominant force of the Dragon king could be heard echoing throughout Outworld as the ground itself pulsed with an explosive power which tore reality itself to nothing.

In Earth realm the sky slowly blackens as the skull of the Dragon King falls to the soil and Kithak hovers silently above it staring at Earth Realms great Kombatants.

Stage:
Chaos Realm- This plane is all that remains of Kithaks once beautiful homeland. It is but a floating flat area of floor surrounded by a stone wall amidst a broken reality. A black throne with huge spikes jutting from it lay at the forefront of the arena, stairs leading up to it. Reason itself means nothing here as the sky fills with explosions, lightning and darkness. The floor is made of rocks and areas of the rock melt away suddenly at any random point in time, if an opponent falls through the floor he ends up falling from the sky right back to the stone platform taking on severe damage. Shadow Oni stand off in the distance upon the walls surrounding the arena and laughing as they watch the fight. Pillars and spikes can randomly arise from the floor. The ground can sometimes become frozen making it difficult to hold your footing upon or random areas may be set ablaze with fire taking damage from a fighter.

Death Trap:
Chaos Dominion- An area of the wall is cracked enough to send a fighter careening through into the madness surrounding the plane. The body of the fighter will be twisted and bent painfully as it is ripped apart by swirling gravities of small black holes then lightning strikes the body and a huge explosion occurs. The last thing seen is a charred skull landing back in the arena.

Stage Weapon:
Sphere of darkness- a black sphere within the throne of Kithak Scorne which can turn into any kind of weapon while being used. What weapon it becomes at what point in time is completely random though.

$anitariuM Wrote: Uhhh is it just going to be 1v2 3v4 etc... or are you going to mix it up??? Is it going to be a round robin? It may not be fair if two excellent characters meet up right off the bat... and one gets elimated because he loses to the #1 ranked character.

haha are you scared of TomTaz character? Well if you guys want us to mix it up we will. Were going to randomly choose the order then.

*New Additions*
-character ending
-another fatality
-more stage improvements
*new stage design, death trap, and interaction
-hari kari
-fighting styles
-More going thru and smoothing stuff out, the whole thing is really quite different.
*IMPORTANT Changes to biography



*Old Updates*
-added more detail to special moves
-added more detail to story
-added more detail to character weapon
-Generally went through the whole bio and added stuff here and their to make it smoother.



If you have any suggestions please don't hesitate to IM me!!! I really need some ideas for fighting styles if you can point me to a website that lists some i would be very greatful.

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Character Name: Hellscream

Character Looks: A Humanoid Oni demon necromancer. He is not of traditional brute strength Oni style, and is very quick and nimble. Pale "gollum" like flesh that is concealed in a dark cloak. His hands are very reptilian and have large claws that he will often use in combat. Large red fiery eyes and small pointed teeth. While formidable at hand to hand combat, Hellscream's forte is in his vast knowledge of necromancy.

Height: 5'8''
Weight: 160lbs
Origin: Netherealm
Affiliation: Evil, destruction of the Council of Elder Gods

Character Special Moves:
Soul Rot - A dark cloud of demonic energies is engulfs his enemy, damaging the enemy by corrupting his/her soul with demonic rage.

Skeletal Shackles - Being adept at necromantic magics, Hellscream is able to summon his skeletal minions forth from the ground... hands sprout up at the opponents feet and grab him and hold him in place... giving Hellscream a chance to perform a kombo or other move.

Necromantic Channeling - Hellscream is able to channel the dark energies of the Netherealm into a powerful orb at which he hurls at his enemy. When this orb makes contact it erupts as you can see the faces of souls fly in different directions.

Character Weapon: Schmitar forged in the fires of an unknown plain in the Netherealm, and cooled in human blood. His day's as a shaman he would often practice swordsmanship as a pass time, as a result he is a quit formidable swordsman... relying on precise strikes and combos rather than brute strength.

Character Fatalities:
Death and Decay - A spell is casted which makes his opponent slowly rot and decay... limbs and flesh falling off while their body as a whole begins shriveling up while the opponent screams out in agony.

Hellspawned - Hellscream begins to chant while you can see the necromantic energies swirl around his body in the form of a red mist. With a final word he makes a sharp motion and the mist enters his opponent. As soon as the mist enters a small demon rips out of his body and then procedes to decapitate Hellscream's defeated opponent.

Hari Kari-
Self Evisceration - Hellscream crabs his schmitar and violently thrusts it into his stomach and slashes himself open, letting his organs spill out on the arena.

Stage Name: Altar of Darkness
Stage Interaction: The Altar of Darkness is Hellscream's main temple used to pay homage to his dark demonic gods. It has several large statues at the edges with their hands outstretched as if asking for something. Becuase of the dark energies surrounding this place there are a number of hazards. At the edges of the arena is a barrier of demonic energy which will damage whoever walks into it. The structure is also far past its prime. Due to this; the ceiling has began to crumble during intense moments of combat, heads up!

Stage Weapon: Slayer's Axe... a large double headed axe that had originally been used only for ceremonial sacrifices... the beheading and slaughter of other men. Very good range and damage but slow and leaves you vulnerable to attack if a hit does not connect.

Stage Fatality: Hellscream Grabs the Slayer's Axe, kicks his opponent to the floor, then grabs his head and places it on a large nearby stone slab. Hellscream then raises the Axe high over his head and decapitates his opponent while pronouncing an incantation to pay favor to his gods. Once the body is dead hell levitates the body and places it in the hands of a large statue of his fallen God, which snap shut and crush the victim.

Death Traps: Sacrifice - you are able to kick your opponent down into a pit of hellish creations...

Styles:
-Escrima
-Shintaido
-Schmitar

Story: Hellscream had once been a once proud and noble Shaman of a peaceful tribe in the outworld. When Shao Kahn's armies began to take up war this peaceful tribe was enslaved by Kahn and forced to give up their peaceful magics and shamanistic way of life. Kahn's council of sorcerer's was able to convert this peaceful tribe into practicioners of the dark necromantic magics. Commanding hordes of undead and hellish Warriors, HellScream had been a very powerful asset for Kahn. However, the use of these dark magics attracted the attention of the Council of Elder Gods. Infuriated at the resurrection of this forbidden magic, Hellscream's entire tribe was executed.

Hellscream however was doomed to a far worse fate, for they feared that not even death would contain him. He was banished to the Netherealm. The twisted energies of this land slowly began to corrupt Hellscream... and his human form slowly began to corrode into that of an Oni. Surprisingly however, due to his incredibly high intellect, forget who he was. Infuriated that the Elder Gods banished him to the Neatherealm for something he had no control over, Hellscream dedicates his life to finding a way out of the Neatherelm and exacting his revenge. He finds his salvation in a strange amulet. With his escape, the Outworld and Earthrealms have much to fear. He is a wild card in this battle between good and evil.

Ending: During a furious battle with the former Elder God, Raiden, Hellscream absorbs a particularly strong bolt of lighting. The pure energies of this projectile render him unconscious. While unconscious Hellscream has a vision. In this vision, his true past is revealed. ~~~He invisions Shao Kahn single handly slaughter his whole tribe in cold blood, as he then procedes to frame the Elder Gods in an elaborate ploy for power. Knowing how much of an asset Hellscream would be, he decided to banish him to the Netherealm, with intentions of him escaping and Kahn being able to use him once again. Hellscream is infuriated that he had been so naive to think the Elder Gods had done such a horrible thing... and even more angered that Kahn had ruined his peaceful life and slaughtered his tribe. As he slowly comes to realize this sad past, the demonic energies leave his body, returning him to his original human state of mind and body.

Hellscream is now known as Sinjito. Becuase the demonic energies have left him he know wields his shamanistic powers once again. With vengeance on his mind these powers are not as pure... and are more powerful for he is fueled with only one thought, REVENGE!

Awesome. Thanks for choosing my character. I'll be updating him soon. Also congrats to Tai Tsung and Hellscream to making this far and being on this journey with me.(O.K. that was pretty corny but who cares.)

$anitariuM Wrote: *New Additions* -character ending -another fatality -more stage improvements *new stage design, death trap, and interaction -hari kari -fighting styles -More going thru and smoothing stuff out, the whole thing is really quite different. *IMPORTANT Changes to biography *Old Updates* -added more detail to special moves -added more detail to story -added more detail to character weapon -Generally went through the whole bio and added stuff here and their to make it smoother. If you have any suggestions please don't hesitate to IM me!!! I really need some ideas for fighting styles if you can point me to a website that lists some i would be very greatful. -------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------- Character Name: Hellscream Character Looks: A Humanoid Oni demon necromancer. He is not of traditional brute strength Oni style, and is very quick and nimble. Pale "gollum" like flesh that is concealed in a dark cloak. His hands are very reptilian and have large claws that he will often use in combat. Large red fiery eyes and small pointed teeth. While formidable at hand to hand combat, Hellscream's forte is in his vast knowledge of necromancy. Height: 5'8'' Weight: 160lbs Origin: Netherealm Affiliation: Evil, destruction of the Council of Elder Gods Character Special Moves: Soul Rot - A dark cloud of demonic energies is engulfs his enemy, damaging the enemy by corrupting his/her soul with demonic rage. Skeletal Shackles - Being adept at necromantic magics, Hellscream is able to summon his skeletal minions forth from the ground... hands sprout up at the opponents feet and grab him and hold him in place... giving Hellscream a chance to perform a kombo or other move. Necromantic Channeling - Hellscream is able to channel the dark energies of the Netherealm into a powerful orb at which he hurls at his enemy. When this orb makes contact it erupts as you can see the faces of souls fly in different directions. Character Weapon: Schmitar forged in the fires of an unknown plain in the Netherealm, and cooled in human blood. His day's as a shaman he would often practice swordsmanship as a pass time, as a result he is a quit formidable swordsman... relying on precise strikes and combos rather than brute strength. Character Fatalities: Death and Decay - A spell is casted which makes his opponent slowly rot and decay... limbs and flesh falling off while their body as a whole begins shriveling up while the opponent screams out in agony. Hellspawned - Hellscream begins to chant while you can see the necromantic energies swirl around his body in the form of a red mist. With a final word he makes a sharp motion and the mist enters his opponent. As soon as the mist enters a small demon rips out of his body and then procedes to decapitate Hellscream's defeated opponent. Hari Kari- Self Evisceration - Hellscream crabs his schmitar and violently thrusts it into his stomach and slashes himself open, letting his organs spill out on the arena. Stage Name: Altar of Darkness Stage Interaction: The Altar of Darkness is Hellscream's main temple used to pay homage to his dark demonic gods. It has several large statues at the edges with their hands outstretched as if asking for something. Becuase of the dark energies surrounding this place there are a number of hazards. At the edges of the arena is a barrier of demonic energy which will damage whoever walks into it. The structure is also far past its prime. Due to this; the ceiling has began to crumble during intense moments of combat, heads up! Stage Weapon: Slayer's Axe... a large double headed axe that had originally been used only for ceremonial sacrifices... the beheading and slaughter of other men. Very good range and damage but slow and leaves you vulnerable to attack if a hit does not connect. Stage Fatality: Hellscream Grabs the Slayer's Axe, kicks his opponent to the floor, then grabs his head and places it on a large nearby stone slab. Hellscream then raises the Axe high over his head and decapitates his opponent while pronouncing an incantation to pay favor to his gods. Once the body is dead hell levitates the body and places it in the hands of a large statue of his fallen God, which snap shut and crush the victim. Death Traps: Sacrifice - you are able to kick your opponent down into a pit of hellish creations... Styles: -Escrima -Shintaido -Schmitar Story: Hellscream had once been a once proud and noble Shaman of a peaceful tribe in the outworld. When Shao Kahn's armies began to take up war this peaceful tribe was enslaved by Kahn and forced to give up their peaceful magics and shamanistic way of life. Kahn's council of sorcerer's was able to convert this peaceful tribe into practicioners of the dark necromantic magics. Commanding hordes of undead and hellish Warriors, HellScream had been a very powerful asset for Kahn. However, the use of these dark magics attracted the attention of the Council of Elder Gods. Infuriated at the resurrection of this forbidden magic, Hellscream's entire tribe was executed. Hellscream however was doomed to a far worse fate, for they feared that not even death would contain him. He was banished to the Netherealm. The twisted energies of this land slowly began to corrupt Hellscream... and his human form slowly began to corrode into that of an Oni. Surprisingly however, due to his incredibly high intellect, forget who he was. Infuriated that the Elder Gods banished him to the Neatherealm for something he had no control over, Hellscream dedicates his life to finding a way out of the Neatherelm and exacting his revenge. He finds his salvation in a strange amulet. With his escape, the Outworld and Earthrealms have much to fear. He is a wild card in this battle between good and evil. Ending: During a furious battle with the former Elder God, Raiden, Hellscream absorbs a particularly strong bolt of lighting. The pure energies of this projectile render him unconscious. While unconscious Hellscream has a vision. In this vision, his true past is revealed. ~~~He invisions Shao Kahn single handly slaughter his whole tribe in cold blood, as he then procedes to frame the Elder Gods in an elaborate ploy for power. Knowing how much of an asset Hellscream would be, he decided to banish him to the Netherealm, with intentions of him escaping and Kahn being able to use him once again. Hellscream is infuriated that he had been so naive to think the Elder Gods had done such a horrible thing... and even more angered that Kahn had ruined his peaceful life and slaughtered his tribe. As he slowly comes to realize this sad past, the demonic energies leave his body, returning him to his original human state of mind and body. Hellscream is now known as Sinjito. Becuase the demonic energies have left him he know wields his shamanistic powers once again. With vengeance on his mind these powers are not as pure... and are more powerful for he is fueled with only one thought, REVENGE!

Wow, nice revisions dude. Hmmm...Maybe Tai needs to worry about Hellscream! Oh well no matter who wins, they are both great characters. Seriously I wish you the best of luck man.

Same goes to you.

I just have a question... are the characters being into the hall of fame according to rank? As in Tai being the #1 choice and Hellscream being #2 hatsuma #3???

$anitariuM Wrote: Same goes to you. I just have a question... are the characters being into the hall of fame according to rank? As in Tai being the #1 choice and Hellscream being #2 hatsuma #3???

I honestly don't know.

$anitariuM Wrote: Same goes to you. I just have a question... are the characters being into the hall of fame according to rank? As in Tai being the #1 choice and Hellscream being #2 hatsuma #3???

Absolutely not, thats just the order they were picked, which has nothing to do with ranking.

See $anitariuM nothing to worry about. They seem to be even.

Updated[the sections updated are the parts marked with ***]

Name: Erebus [E-ray-bus]
Real Name: Unknown
Origin: Unknown
Height: 6'5
Weight: 213lbs
Age: Unknown
Status: Bountry Hunter
Alginment: Neutral


Erebus is the son of the elder God chaos,who has come for those who are meant to be dead[johny cage,liu kang and scorpion]. Hes on no ones side and just out to get his job done, no matter who steps in his way.He has two forms.One is human,whereby he has longish dark hair, which covers his sunken jet black eyes.So basically he looks like a rugged bad ass mutha ha. He wears a long dark coat and his scarred body is wrapped in barbed chains.The second is his true form,which shows him as the demonic demi-God that he really is.Burning red eyes,blood red skin and two long horns coming from the sides of his head.With a collection of teeth that would give Baraka a run for his money.Also i wanted him to have large metallic wings in this form but as he walks around they are folded in. I was thinking when you change styles there could be a nice effect of shape changing,for examples his long black coat could change into his long metallic black wings...Although i know that would be hard to actually do.

Story
The elder God, Chaos has been planning something for Eons,something big...Hes been slowly building a vast, ferocious army of demons[Oni] in the belly of the neatherrealm.An army of epic proportions.Like his fellow elder Gods,he has for seen the remergence of the dragon king and being the God of chaos has decided to sit back and watch the inevitable war,which is something which greatly amuses him.But soon the ground of the neatherrealm will burst open and his hoarde will be released and will scorch the land,kill and maim everything[man,woman and child].Already the cracks has started to show,as moloch and Drahmin have crawled to the surface.He has released his son,the demon demi-God Erebus, and commanded him to return with the souls of those warriors that have died and been brought back to life.This is the task that Erebus needs to complete to prove to his father, he has what it takes to lead the army of darkness on a crusade to wipe out life itself. Therefore for the moment Erebus is a demonic bounty hunter,who is packing some hellish gadgets to.

His first fighting style is him in human form,second is him in his demonic form. In his weapon style,two seperate chains,both with a bladed tip, run down each of his arms in a circular motion, creating two barbed wire swords connected to each of his arms.

moves in human form: a move similar to scorpion's spear throw,except he launches chains straight at the opponent,which if they connect ,wraps them up for a short period enabling him to deliver some blows.
move2:well hes packing some serious weapons on him...so a move where he lets rip with one of his hellish guns...but not bullets cz im not really a fan of those the gun moves in mk games..but some hell weapon that releases a flaming projectile
move three3: seizmic punch,a slow move but extremely powerful...sends opponent flying across the screen...could have a cool kind of rippling effect where you see the energy spreadin across the areana.

Demonic form:move1: projectile where his chest opens and releases the souls of many of his victims which head straight at the opponent.
move2:the ability to fly...can unleash soul projectile down at the opponents and other quick moves.So should have wings or just b able to levitate.
move3:Hells fury .A short period of time where his damage is greater and his moves are quicker..but there should be a limit..and maybe some weakness in it..his energy goes down?or theres a period aftr where the damage he receives is greater...so although effective this move needs to be used at right time.

Finisher:human form the opponent begins to run away,but the bounty hunter sends two chains from within his coat wrapping up the opponents legs...then when the opponent is defenceless on the floor and screaming for mercy,he sends fourth barbed chains[And lots of em] which scramble across the floor covering the opponent..and slowly grinding over his body...the chains are within drawn leavin a shreaded corpse.

Fatality2: he wraps ups his opponent in chains but they r still partially visible and are being held up just over the ground,horizontally,with their face and chest still visible...then a huge chain bursts from his chest, raises into the air ..opens up at the front and plows straight into the opponents chest...when it withdraws you see a light form of the opponent in the chains grasp[struggling and shouting]..then the chain withdraws into the bounty hunter,as well as the chains that wrapped the enemy up...leaving a pale dead version of the opponent on the floor.

***Erebus would start off as a secret character but with future mortal kombat games he gets more of a key role.With his victories i was thinking of him going down the lines of becoming power hungry,psychotic and arrogant.
This results in him murdering his own further and taking complete control of the unholy legion.Erebus not only intends to wipe out life itself in the mortal worlds but because he is a demi-God, he has the power to slaughter the elder Gods themselves and all those in the heavens above. This eventually becomes an epic of Erebus and his hoarde of demons against an alliance of the heavens[an army of angels] and the remaining mortals[earth].
Erebus would therefore become a boss in future mortal kombats.After he murders his father,he absorbs his powers, which changes Erebus.Making him bigger,more powerful and more demonic in look.This is when he would become the boss of the games.

***Stage: The surface of netherrealm. The arena is a just a plain circular fighting ground with energy walls surrounding it.In the back round is the waste land of the netherrealm.The battle is occuring during a raging storm.Lightening and rain beats down hard to add to the atmosphere,although it is taking place at night.As the fight goes on cracks form around the outside of the arena.Slowly Oni begin to crawl from the cracks.So by the end of the third round, the arena will be surrounded by hundreds of blood thirsty Oni[ not just oni that look like moloch,but a variety of hideous creatures and because it is happening at night,you wont be able to cleary see the horrors around you until lightening strikes and for a few seconds you get to see everything].Imagine the tension as you are getting to the climax of the fight and all you can see is demonic beasts trying to get to your characters.Many of which throw their bodies at the energy walls, bursting on contact...and all that gets through is an explosion of blood from the side of the wall into the arena...so that by the end of the third round blood will pouring through the sides of the wall and the noise from the hoarde around you will make it so hard to think.

***Death trap: if its the first round[maybe second to to],then there will only be a few oni.So they drag you screaming and kicking down one of the cracks,where you hear your character let out one enormous scream.Then hear the sound of tearing flesh.
If you get knocked out during the second round when there is loads of oni,you simply get ripped to shreds.

WHere's our judges?

Ummmm, I think we need some new challengers to keep the game rolling.

Hey I updated my character with a new transformation and power.

*Fourth Hall-Of-Famer*
The Tournament:
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1.Jackal (****)
2.Erebus
3.Ryukeshen Seir (**)
4.Tiger (********)
5.Sarakia (*)
6.Phoenix (**********)
7.Kithak Scorne
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"THE CHALLENGERS":
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The next character going to the Hall-Of-Fame is...Tiger. Congratulations krsx66.

Hall-Of-Fame
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1. Tai Tsung
2. Hellscream
3. Hatsuma
4. Tiger
5. ?
6. ?
7. ?
8. ?
9. ?
10. ?

Only 6 spots left. WE NEED JUDGES

I think my character might not be good enough to survive.So I won't be posting my character. Good luck to the rest of the competitors.

Just post it man, you might be pleasantly suprised. Even if you do lose you will come out with more knowledge and be able to create a better character for the next tournament.

$anitariuM Wrote: Just post it man, you might be pleasantly suprised. Even if you do lose you will come out with more knowledge and be able to create a better character for the next tournament.

Yea man, just enter it. Im sure it is cool. Sidez, we need challengers.

wow it seems as though there is a sudden lack of interest... that is quite disturbing.

nah, it's not that we lost interest, we're just waitin' for the rest of the hall-of-famers to get inducted.

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: wow it seems as though there is a sudden lack of interest... that is quite disturbing.

There isnt much to update. There arent many people who want to add any more characters. Im going to just add another character in the hall of fame.

OK. I'll post it.

Name:Speege

Age:25

Height:6'11

Weight:179.3

Apperence:Skinny,built

Eyes:Varies on red,blue,brown

Hair:Red,short,spiky

Face:Pale brown,childlike,growing black mustage,smooth skin

Clothes(he mixes his clothes):Red ninja mask,blue T-shirt,brown sweatpants

Alt.1:Brown mask,red shirt,blue pants

Alt.2:Blue mask,brown shirt,red pants

Special Power:Lighting fast speed,Copies the opponent's move,Uses fire and water attacks

Special Apperence:Tatoos of dragons(on left arm) and fire(on right arm)

Status:Lui Kuei Ninja Trainer

Race:Male Human

Special Moves:Speedy Teleport: He runs at lighting speed on one side to the othe side. Button Combination:Forward,Forward,Low Punch

Super Fire Charge:He turns a firey red color and will be charged for one attack. It makes the attack stronger and faster than it is originaly is.(Can use 1 at a time. Carries into the next round.)Button Combination:Down,Back,Block

Speed Kick:A real fast kick that is real hard to block at a close distance. Has a shadow of different colors.It changes each time you use it up until the 5th time.Then it is just black(1st-Red,2nd-orange,3rd-purple,4th-gray,5th and up-Black.)Covers a meduim distance.Button Combination:Back,Forward,High Kick

Copy Cat:Turns a multi-color and can copy the move that makes contact with him while in this stage(Copy Cat can be done numerous times,but replaces the current copied move. Copied move goes into the next round.)Button Combination:Back,Back,Low Punch

Fireballs:Fireballs that have a diferent effect after they hit.Also there are two types:fire and water

Fire:A ball of fire that after it hits,it surrounds the opponent with a tornado of fire and drains the opponent's health and replenishes your health. Button Combination:Down,Down,Low Punch

Water:A water ball that as it hits,it covers the opponent in a sphere of water and the sphere drags closer to you. Button Combination:Forward,Down,Forward,Low Kick

*All Fire balls can be done in air

Weapon:Ninja Sword of half Fire and half Water

Styles:Ninjustu,Tae Kwon Do,Ninja Sword

Fatalities:Burning Up:He starts by glowing in a firey glow. Then he streches his arm at his opponent. Finally, he shoots a beam of fire at his opponent taht burns his opponent to a burning pile of ash.

Water Rush:First,he sits down to meditate.He covers himself with a blue glow. Then he claps his hands to send a stream of water that hits so hard that it goes through his opponent's body and tuns the water a bloody color after the stream passes through the body.After the stream is gone, the opponent's bloodless body falls with a big hole in the middle of him,and is a pale color.

Hara-Kari-He sends a spiral of fire in the air,that comes down on top of him,that burns him.All that is left is a burning skeletion

Story:Since Speege was a child,he was part of the Lui Kuei clan. His father was a ninja trainer,and his mother was a ninja. Speege's life is normal, like everyone elses. But he learned every minute of his life.After school he went to learned ninjustu from his father. He was often tired and fell asleep fast,but he trained 2 hours a day,7 days a week.While he was 10 years old,Speege and his father were taking a walk in the Lui Kuei Forest when a unknown warrior came out of nowhere and started to attack Speege's father. During the fight,the warrior let out a attack of fire and water that hit Speege's father hard in the chest that some of the blast went behind him and hit his son,but it wasn't as powerful and as deadly as the one that it Speege's father. Speege's father was hurt serverly,but he used his remaining strenth to cut his opponent in half with his Ninja Sword.With his last bit of strenth, he told to take care of his mother and he gave Speege his Ninja Sword. Little did both know,the sword and Speege now possesed the powers of water and fire. Speege Cried all day over the death of his father.His mother took care of him and ws there when he needed her.She continued Speege's training.At the age of 11, Speege went to a creek. He put his hand over the water when the water started to rise.He thought this was strange,until he remembered being hit with that attack. Instead of being damaged, he absorbed the attack and can use water as a attack,and he doesn't have to be around water to use it.Two days later when he was using an open fire in the open field,he accidently put his hand in the fire,but it didn't hurt nor did it burn.He then again remembered the attack and now he can use fire to his advantage. He then rushed home to tell his mother these new powers he now holds.She thought he could handle it along with the Ninja Sword his father gave him befored he died. He trained with his sword and his powers to learn how to use them wisely.At age 13,he learned that this sword had the powers of fire and water.He would use this to his advantage.At 15,He found out he was getting faster and faster with each step.He started to go to a full sprint and found he was fast as lighting.He could run 5 miles in 3 minutes.His punches and kicks were also faster,too.At 16 he learned Tae Kwon Do.He has lighting fast speed,powers of fire and water,and a sword with the power of water and fire.When he was 19 years old,he told his mother he was going to be a ninja teacher.He has been a teacher for 6 years.He is now 25,and he has told ninjas how to use their powers wisely,helpfully,correctly,and thoughtfully.He visits his mother since he is living near the creek that he found out he had water power.His mother is now retired from being a ninja and is just at home by herself,except when her son comes to visit.

THE END.....Or is it?

Stage:Forest where his father died with debri and fully grown trees

Stage Name:Lui Kuei Forest

Interaction:Falling braches

Weapon:Bo staff made of branches

Fatality:Man-eating tree
First get under the tree. Then uppercut your opponent in the tree.Then tree starts to move and you hear screaming.Next thing you now is the tree starts to spits out bones and you hear a burping noise.

Death Trap:London tree is falling down
The closest tree,after it is hit hard,starts to topple and falls on the person who hit it.


So how do you like it?

come on there has to be more creative people out there! more challengers!!!

Yeah, we need more characters ended so we can finish this up and have a second tournament... one that is more organized since we will have more experience from this one.

Do you want me to PM some people to see if or do they have a character(s) to post? I'll do it.