TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: Name- Vandon Sozek Occupation- sorcerer, former assassin Height- 6’3” Age: unknown, he has been around since the rule of King Jerrod Race: rumored to be an Edenian Eye color- green Hair- black and long Alignment- Neutral Weapon- A gold plated, dual bladed staff with a large ruby embedded along the shaft of it. The staff can be detached into two swords and reattached into a staff during battle making for stylish and deadly combos in his weapon stance. It is called the Blades of Carnage. Fighting Styles: Kithna Ton- An ancient fighting style of the edenians used primarily by assassins. It is quick and well balanced. Shadow Fist- A slower but more powerful style coming from the ancient scripts of the Book of shadows. Blades of Carnage- A weapon which Vandon created himself which is extremely fast and can be used in insanely intricate combos Outfit 1- He wears a long black hooded cloak with the sleeves ripped off. On his hands he wears ornate gauntlets with sharp blades at the tip of the finger of each. On his face he has a black tattoo which twists along the side of his face in a serpent like pattern. A long scar runs down the side of his arm and on his chest is a medallion with a ruby placed directly at the center of it. Outfit 2- A full iron helmet decorated like a demon’s face covers his entire head with two red slits for his eyes to see through. He has no shirt on but has a black cloth wrapped around his arm just underneath his shoulder. The scar remains on his arm and he wears the same gauntlets from the first outfit. He has black somewhat baggy pants which are tucked into armored boots. The buckle of the belt he wears is the medallion from the first outfit. A long black cloth is draped around the back of his belt, one side of his waist to the other, which hangs down to his ankles. Special moves: (button commands done for PS2) Black Dragon- Stepping to the side, Vandon holds out his arm and fires a black fire ball with the head of a dragon at front of it. When it hits the opponent it bites into them and then explodes sending the opponent into the air, setting up for a possible juggling combo. (forward, forward, triangle) Shadow Teleport- Vandon disappears and appears either in front of or behind the opponent flying at them with his hand out in front of him, grabbing them by the throat and choke-slamming them to the ground. (back, down, square) Seeking Black Dragons- Vandon slams his fists together, knuckle to knuckle, and three black dragon fireballs fly out, one goes up in the air a few feet, another goes to the right of him the same distance, and the third flies to the left of him same distance as well. The triangle button sends one of the fireballs at the opponent no matter what distance they are from Vandon. This can be done until all three have been sent at the opponent. The attack can be cancelled either by hitting the circle button or by not launching any of the fireballs within 4 seconds. (back, down, forward, triangle triangle x3 to launch . Circle to cancel attack) Dark drain- Vandon grabs the opponent and lifts them into the air, a dark energy flows into Vandon as some of the opponents life is drained and partly replenishes the health of Vandon. Afterwards he tosses them to the ground and jumps back.(back,forward, x) Fatalities: The Shadow Dragon: Vandon raises his arms straight up into the air and emits a dark aura as a giant black dragon jumps out of the ground and growls loudly. It nosedives back into the ground and then bursts out from underneath the opponent, biting down on them, eating their entire body except for the head which goes falling to the ground and is caught by Vandon he throws his head back and laughs loudly. Blood Lust: Vandon slams his fist into the opponents face causing them to fall to the ground. He then takes out the Blades of Carnage and picks the opponent up with them. He teleports quickly from one side of the opponent to the other as he butchers them with his weapon, blood flies everywhere and he continues until there is nothing but a skeleton left. Story: Vandon used to work under King Jerrod as an assassin, and he excelled at what he did. He was extremely ambitious, however, and had been trying to find a way to overthrow the king of Edenia and place himself in the place of power. Then came the invasion of Shao Kahn, and Vandon saw his opportunity to satisfy his ambition. Jerrod sent him to assassinate the conqueror of realms but he had his own plans. Sneaking into the stronghold of Shao Kahn, Vandon was able to sneak his way before the throne of Kahn himself. Kahn immediately sent his guards to kill him but they were struck down and dismembered like nothing as they lay upon the floor at Vandon’s feet. Kahn was impressed, so he asked the purpose behind Vandon’s intrusion. “I have come to offer a proposal to you” he stated. Shao Kahn tilted his head a little and glared at the Edenian assassin. “I do not make deals with pests, especially with one who comes from a realm I am to conquer.” “Well I am just offering Edenia to your control on a silver platter,” Vandon spoke slyly. Kahn smiled a little then studied the assassin for a moment, “And what is it that you want in return for aiding my cause?” Vandon spoke confidently, “to rule Edenia under you, to act as a king over these lands under your authority of course.” Kahn let out a mighty laugh as he heard this and smiled as he thought for a moment, “very well, if you do as you have promised you may rule over this realm underneath me.” From that point on, the Edenian assassin would act as an advisor to Kahn, helping him exploit all of the weaknesses in the defense of King Jerrod’s kingdom. After Jerrod had died Shao Kahn took Queen Sindel as his wife and claimed the throne of Edenia, thus breaking his end of the bargain with Vandon. Vandon approached him furiously, “I was supposed to be given control over these lands! What happened to our agreement!?” Kahn laughed and stood up, his towering figure casting a shadow over Vandon, “You were a fool to think I would ever give you control over this realm, I used you and now your usefulness has been lost.” “You liar! I will kill you for this!” With those words Vandon charged the emperor with an enraged cry. “You fool, you cannot win!” A battle took place between these two and lasted for a short time before Shao Kahn held Vandon by the throat above the ground. “I do owe you a debt of gratitude for having helped me easily overthrow your king and for this I will reward you,” suddenly a portal opened beneath Vandon and Shao Kahn dropped him into it. Vandon spent the better part of a millennia trapped in the depths of the Netherrealm, his anger and his hatred were all that kept him moving forward. He would have his revenge and in the process take control over all of Shao Kahn’s empire. While in the Netherrealm, Vandon came across a dark book hidden in one of the many caverns of this hellish place. It held secrets to a power over the shadows and a beast known as the Shadow Dragon. For a good deal of time Vandon spent his days studying this book and practicing the arts within it, becoming more an more powerful, the next time he and Shao Kahn would meet the outcome would be different. He escaped the Netherrealm during the events of Deadly Alliance and was disturbed to hear of the supposed assassination of Shao Kahn. He traveled all the way to the throne of the Emperor to view the evidence for himself, but the area where the body had been was devoid of Shao Kahn’s corpse. This lead to certain suspicions which arose into Vandon’s mind about the truth of Shao Kahn’s death. He explored the mighty fortress and came across a huge hole in the wall which appeared to be caused by a heavy weighted bludgeoning weapon of some sort. Vandon smiled widely as he realized his chance for revenge has not been taken away from him. When the Dragon King arose to try to claim the realms of Shao Kahn and continue forth with the empire, Vandon realized that this threat may lead Kahn to return in order to reclaim his empire from him. If this should happen, this reborn Edenian will be there awaiting him to strike him down. Ending: Vandon makes his way into the throne room of the Dragon King, who awaits him. A great battle ensues and Vandon tears into the great King mercilessly, blood stains the floor as both combatants continue to battle viciously. The King falls to the ground lifelessly and Vandon decapitates his defeated opponent and places his head upon the top of the throne. He sits upon the throne and waits. After a day or so, a huge commotion occurs through the Dragon King’s palace as the doors to the throne room are busted open with a large war hammer and a tall muscular figure stands there staring directly into Vandon’s eyes. Vandon smiles widely as he pulls out the Blades of Carnage, his time has come. Stage: The Dead City- This is a crumbled city within the realm of Outworld with several dark figures creeping around in the background. The sky is black and screams echo throughout the city. The characters fight in front of a decrepit temple along a street and can fight their way up the stairs of the temple and knock each other through the stone door of the temple. The floor is broken inside the temple and whoever is knocked through the door falls down a floor into the basement of the temple which has a stone torture table and a large portal swirling on the side of the wall. Stage Weapon: Ritualistic Executioner’s Axe- Near the torture table in the basement of the temple the axe stands. This axe is used for beheading people in sacrifice to the gods. Stage Fatality: Netherrealm Portal- Knocking the opponent into the portal they are sent to the Netherrealm and burn to nothing but a charred skeleton.

After reading this, I'm a little puzzled as to why you asked for any advice.

This concept is excellent! I love the story, the powers and the design. You've done a great job, dude! You need help from no one.

So far this is the beggining of the tournament storyline that has come about while waiting to begin...Contestants have been adding different parts from where the previous person left off...

However I will be making a new thread called the "Storyline of the Create a Character Tournament" Where this can continue, and not knock this thread off topic. :) This should be fun!

Keilienaten stands up straight in a combat zone calling out Ryoko, ready to tell her off right on her face.
"I call upon you Ryoko. Show your face if you are not afraid of Keilienaten's wrath. I will demolish that ugly face of yours, and shred you to pieces!" Keilienaten laughs veyr obscure waiting for Ryoko.

Keilienaten still waits and remebers she dislikes another foe. SHe brings out a picture of Gabrielle. SHe gets angry and SPits on pic before crunching it up. "You're also mine, Gabrielle."
SHe spots Amanuet far away, and smiles. "She would be a good alignment. Not to mention she;s extremely hot."

While waiting for Ryoko...Keilienaten doesn't notice that Gabrielle has stepped out of the shadows...she throws two of her throwing knives, pinning Keilienaten to a tree...then walks towards Keilienaten with a nasty little grin...Keilienaten has broken free and throws out a fierce roundhouse...Gabby is too quick catches the leg and twists the foot, then uses her other leg to sweep Keilienaten's remaining leg out from under....however....

Keilienaten comes down hard to the ground. With one leg broken and two feire warriors about to take him out it looks like the end. Suddenly the ground begins to shake violently and magma starts rising from the ground. The surrounding forest is completely set a blaze as a giant pillar of blood and screaming souls erupts out of the ground. A figure can be made out from within the blood. Two glaring eyes shoot through the crimson curtain as a sinister laugh fills the ears of the surrounding warriors. A fire ball is shot from the pillar and aimed at the three warriors.
Ryoko"It....it can't be!"
Gabrielle"Ryoko who is that?"

The warriors Stare in disbelief..as the fireball just narrowly misses them.

Gabrielle: Ryoko? How bad is this?
Ryoko: Define...bad...
Gabrielle: ?? bad can kick my ass, anything else...not so bad.
Ryoko: In that case, this is the Grand Daddy of bad.
Gabrielle: Of course it is...cause that's just always the way. *sigh* I'll flip you for it, the loser fights whatever the hell that thing is.
Ryoko: WHAT? You don't think for one second that your leaving here!
Gabrielle: Hey, your the all powerful Goddess remember? Call me when it's done ok...I have a hair appointment..laters!
Ryoko: I'll kill her!
Just then Ryoko is tapped on the shoulder, When she turns around....

Keilienaten hits Ryoko upside the head with his one good leg, dazing her for a split second.
Keilienten"If you survive this, we will meet again"
Ryoko"This is just perfect, first my best friend deserts me and now I have to deal with an evil incarnate killing machine."
Sensui starts to come out of the pillar of blood while singing.
Sensui"People screaming, people dying, blood is flowing, it's killing time."
Half of Sensui's body is cover in a silhoute and onle his flaming red eye shins in the darkness. He aproaches Ryoko with a sinister smile and an evil stare.
Gabrielle quickly tries to run of but Sensui uses his soul manipulation to bind her in spirt shackles.
Sensui"People screaming, people dying, blood is flowing, it's killing time."
"Hahahahahahaha!!!"

Gabrielle: ummmm Ryoko? A little help...
Ryoko: Are you kidding? You were on your way to hair bliss and had no problem with leaving me here! NOW i'm supposed to help you?! You have some nerve you know that?"
Gabrielle: 'K, so does that mean...no? Or are you coming?
Ryoko: YOUR IMPOSSIBLE!
Gabrielle: Ryoko?
Ryoko: NO, I don't wanna hear it..
Gabrielle: Yeah...but..
Ryoko: SHUT IT GABBY! Or I just may kill you myself!
Just then Ryoko is hit from behind with such force that her face hits the floor and then skids on the ground a few feet...
Sensui: I believe the young lady there was trying to warn you about me. Not that it will do you any good.... Sensui get's a really evil grin on his face and steps toward Ryoko. As Gabrielle, not able to move, looks on..
Gabrielle: HEY!
Sensui ignores her and continues toward Ryoko who has been temporarily stunned...
Gabrielle: I SAID HEY DAMMIT!
Sensui: What?!?! You insufferable little knat, WHY IS YOUR MOUTH STILL RUNNING..
Ryoko starts to come to...
Ryoko: Because her mouth is ALWAYS running...welcome to my world! With that Ryoko goes Invisible and Sensui looks around dumbfounded...Gabrielle smiles..
Gabrielle: Your sOOO about to get your ass kicked.

Ryoko: *Laughs* You know.....

Ryoko dashes to Sensuis left.

Ryoko: There are many.....

Ryoko dashes behind Sensui. Sensui turns left towards her voice.

Ryoko: Who underestimate....

Ryoko dashes to his right as he turns again.

Ryoko: My power. You......

Ryoko dashes overhead so that she is near Gabby.

Ryoko: Will learn.....

She dashes straight at him as Sensui turns to face her

Ryoko: How stupid such a thought can be!

Ryoko jumps and performs the Blitz Kick!

Blitz Kick: Ryoko teleports behind the opponent, reappearing at head height. Ryoko brings her right foot across the left side of his/her face and then the same foot back across the other way (hitting with the heel this time.) Then for the final strike she quickly brings her left leg straight up (in a flip motion and still in the air) sending them sailing skyward. Ryoko lands just as the opponent is starting to fall back down leaving an easy juggle option open.

Sensui was in the air screaming in pain. Ryoko looked up smiling. Gabrielle is cheering Ryoko on!

....As Sensui hit's the ground, Gabrielle realizes that his concentration must be slipping because her bonds are loosening, she struggles for a bit and is free! Ryoko becomes visible and walks over to Gabrielle.

Gabrielle: Finally! Nice work Ryoko, though I think your delivery of the Blitz kick was a bit sloppy.

Ryoko: WHAT?!?! I can't believe you! He's down, your free....What's with the insults!?!?

Gabrielle: Ah don't get your underwear in a bunch Ryoko...I was kidding. Ummm, we've got problems though....he's gettting up for round two!!

Ryoko looks behind her to see that Sensui has risen, and he is NOT happy. The girls stand ready for battle.

Ryoko: Looks like were gonna have to take him together...Plan Nova?

Gabrielle nods...Gabrielle: Plan Nova.

Ryoko Goes invisible again, Gabrielle runs towards Sensui and executes her Kick Crusher (Gabrielle takes advantage of her speed and does a hard round house to her opponent's face then fluidly goes into a lightning fast foot sweep, and as the opponent lays on the ground she jumps up and comes down hard with both feet on the chest of the opponent.) After landing on Sensui chest Gabby Backflips off of him. At that same moment as he's looking up, Sensui sees that Ryoko has made herself visable again in the air and is coming down with both feet aimed at his head. Sensui rolls just at the last seconds and saves himself from a messy death.....

Raiden_is_god Wrote: Isn't there a website for this contest

Yes there is a website for this tournament.
It's already up, it's just that it needs all the characters inputted.
Any Pictures would be nice to have with your character, so send em to me or give me a link.

The link will be coming up soon, and when it comes i'll change the title of the thread and place the link on the 1st page of this thread.
Hope that helps.

The BJE, bracket judging entry is going now right now, the characters are all in a list for the tournament, but we judges have to look at these characters and see if there are any characters that aren't worthy enough of any characters that don't have enough detail or characters that look like users with 100 less visits have created or characters that look very similar to mk related characters. Characters that lack detail and creativity. For Example, right now, i see one character i would like to get rid of during the BJE, you judges know who it is.You judges let me know if there are any others right now or in the upcoming completed list before the tournament begins. See if you guys can find any 100 visit cloners or anything like that, thanks.


Also, we have a new judge!
We have 5 judges right now. And we will not need anymore unless judges don't show up at all.
The new judge is Wanderer! Congratulations.
Your avatar will be up on the site soon.

Brodeur I've asked this before but I guess you didn't see it.
I'm no artist, is it imperative that the artwork is done by myself or can I google and try to find something that suits my characters?

On another question how exactly is the actual tournament functionality? The judges decide who wins and who loses? I haven't paid atention to previous edition so I have no idea. Cheers

Brodeur Wrote: Raiden_is_god Wrote: Isn't there a website for this contest Yes there is a website for this tournament. It's already up, it's just that it needs all the characters inputted. Any Pictures would be nice to have with your character, so send em to me or give me a link. The link will be coming up soon, and when it comes i'll change the title of the thread and place the link on the 1st page of this thread. Hope that helps.

Here is the link to the MK Online Character Tournament-2nd Edition Character Speculation Thread by TomTaz.

DamRho Wrote: Brodeur I've asked this before but I guess you didn't see it. I'm no artist, is it imperative that the artwork is done by myself or can I google and try to find something that suits my characters? On another question how exactly is the actual tournament functionality? The judges decide who wins and who loses? I haven't paid atention to previous edition so I have no idea. Cheers Brodeur Wrote: Raiden_is_god Wrote: Isn't there a website for this contest Yes there is a website for this tournament. It's already up, it's just that it needs all the characters inputted. Any Pictures would be nice to have with your character, so send em to me or give me a link. The link will be coming up soon, and when it comes i'll change the title of the thread and place the link on the 1st page of this thread. Hope that helps.

You can do it yourself if you want, but if you're thinking of using a pre-made artwork from the internet, i suggest either get permission first, or make sure you're not using copyrighted images and if done so, make sure the image doesn't resemble popular characters from other games or cartoon series and such. Make sure and take caution, because in doing things like these, we don't want MK Online getting hurt.

DamRho Wrote: On another question how exactly is the actual tournament functionality? The judges decide who wins and who loses? I haven't paid atention to previous edition so I have no idea. Cheers

We judges will send our votes to each other by pm, and we'll tally up the votes, then we will look at the viwer votes and tally those votes up as well. Then we judges will decide the outcome if the viewer votes do make an impact on the situation.
Now that we have 5 judges, the viewer vote could tie the whole voting, and if that happens, a temporary judging system will be established where all of us judges will just have a chat between ourselves and then name the winner.

Ok, I've done it...I've come up with another one. Hope this isn't too late:

Name: Ghost
Age: Unknown (believed to be well over 25,000)
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 215 pounds


Fighting Stlyes:

Mantis
Kenpo
Raknar: Self made Weapon that can be thrown.

Bio:

Ghost was King of Edenia, before Jarred's rule. His name was Collin. He was a fair and just King, beloved by his subjects and his Queen. For a long time life was peacful for Collin and his Queen, Shivrea. However, what was not known by the Royal couple, was that treachery was upon them. Treachery that was years in the making. Jasal, King Collin's brother, was ever resentful of Collin's status. Not just as King, but his status with the people of Edenia as well. It sickened Jasal to see that they loved him so. Jasal beilieved that Kings were meant to feared and rule with iron fists! He decided this insult could continue no further. So he planned and schemed and waited....well now his time had come.

King Collin recieved an urgent message. Word had come for the North...his cousin, Serba, needed help defending his city from the Shokan Army. The King wasted no time in gathering his army and heading off immediately. However, before he left, Shivrea told him to hurry back to her...she had important news to tell him. Collin promised he would be back as soon as he was able, and with that was gone.

Shivrea looked at Jasal, who was watching her husband leave with a rather disturbing grin on his face. A sense of overwhelming dread came over Shivrea and she prayed her husband would be back soon.

When Collin reached the Northern city of Pavmai...he was greeted by a cheerful Serba. Everything appeared normal, no sign of war at all. Collin explained the events that had transpired and led him there. Serba said he sent no such message...his people hadn't heard from the Shokan in well over 10 years. Collin immediately thought of his wife and his Kingdom. He prayed it was not to late. The normal 5 day journey, only took Collin and his men 3 and 1/2 days. When they reached the heart of Edenia, they saw the streets were litered with dead bodies of men, women, and children. It was not long before Collin and his men were ambushed, and beaten by the army of Shokan that Jasal had waiting for them. Jasal explained that he had sent the message to get Collin out of the kingdom just long enough to take over with his allies the Shokan. Those who didn't comply with the new order were slain. King Collin learned that one of the people that didn't give in was Shivrea. She was one of the first to die at the hands of the dispicable Jasal. Jasal also went on to inform Collin that he was to be a father. This sent Collin into a rage and he freed himself from the grip of the Shokan holding him before Jasal. He hit Jasal hard and knocked him to the ground. He then grabbed Jasal by his throat and Slammed his head into the grond multiple times before he was again a prisoner of two Shokan this time. Jasal slowly got up shaking his head to clear the dizzyness. He than glared at Collin and took out the dagger at his waist. He told his brother goodbye and stabbed him in the heart.

Collin's body was taken to the royal crypt and placed in the spot reserved for him. Where he lay for the next few years. One night, in the dead cold of winter...A being made of pure bright energy entered the crypt.
"Sleeping King...You were cut down before your time. Rise again to take your revenge, make right what has been made so wrong." The being touched the decayed corpse of Collin, and he was made whole again...except he now had white eyes and pale skin.
"What is this sorcery? How have I come back? Why?"
"I have revived you my Lord. And do you not remember?"
"I remember...I remember...JASAL!! He has betrayed us all! Shivrea! My child! HE MUST ANSWER FOR HIS CRIMES!"
"Aye, my King, he does. And now you have been changed, granted the power to carry out your mission...restore Edenia to a realm of peace!" With those words the being was gone. Collin left the crypt immediately. His revenge would be long and bloody, none who stood in his way would be spared.

Moves:
Ghost out - Ghost has the power to become a literal ghost...he becomes intangable for a brief period of time. (While intangable his other specials may NOT be used)

Twin Destruction - Ghost has the ability to make a solid copy of himself. Then both he and the clone do an 8 hit kick combo to the opponent simultaneously.

Swift Vengence - Ghost takes out the Raknar and throws the blade which slices the chest...While the weapon does not stay impaled in the opponent and flies back to Ghost...it acts as an impale move would as the wound is too deep to stop bleeding.

Deadly Vortex - Ghost summons a tornado of lost ghosts, as the opponent is sucked into the tornado their life force is drained from them for a brief period.

Vitality Transfer - Ghost chants and his hands start to glow he fires energy at the oppent that swirls around them draining life, the energy then returns to Ghost swirling around him and adds the stolen life to his own vitality.

Fatalities:

Retribution - Ghost walks over to the opponent and punches them in the face, causing them to be dizzy, he then grabs the opponent, spins to get momentum and then flings the opponent into the air, he then throws the Raknar after them and the spinning blade slices the opponent in half at the abdomen. Both halves of the body fall to the ground as the Raknar returns to Ghost...who then gives the weapon a swift shake to get the blood off.

Ashes to Ashes - Ghost starts to chant, and summons a much bigger version of the ghostnado used in the move Deadly vortex and lets it lose upon the dazed opponent. Inside the Ghostnado you can see the shadow of the opponent writhing and struggling and you can hear terrible sceams coming from him/her. Suddenly the ghostnado dissappears and all that's left of the opponent is a pile of ash, which get's blown away by the breeze.

Suicide: Ghost switches to Ghost form and phases half of his body through the ground...once he reaches his waist he suddenly becomes solid again with the bottom half of his body in the ground. He screams in agony and then his top half falls over onto the ground.

Stage: Royal Edenian Grave yard

Ghost's stage is the Royal Grave yard of Past rulers. At first glance is like any other normal graveyard...with head stones and crypts placed about. As the fighters begin to fight however...dangers become apparent. If you get to close to certain head stones....Zombie arms reach out of the ground, taking hold of your ankles then the head of the zombie appears and he starts chewing on the fighters leg. Different ghosts fly about the arena constantly...if one flies through a fighter they become terrified and unable to move (stun move) and the other fighter is free to inflict easy damage.

Stage Death Trap: If the opponent is knocked through to the inside of King Collin's crypt, (marked by a lion's head on the door) The decayed corpse of Shivrea awakens and eats the fighter alive!
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Ghost Pic

Bracket Judging Entry:

1.Gabrielle - by Tom Taz

2.Sabre - by Rabid_Wolverine

3.Unit TK-787 - by SmokeNc-017

4.Kilvan - by Shadaloo

5.Nemesi - by tgrant

6.Deceptame/Ryu Sagen-by deceptame

7.Rajhul - by raiden_is_god

8.Psykong - by frozenspear2004

9.Pele - by LadyRaiden

10.Keilienaten - by slim3ddi3g

11.Leon - by johnny_cage_rules

12.Amanuet - by DamRho

13.Slick - by mrmortalkombat

14.Sensui - by SmokeNc-017(2)

15.PX-07A2 - by phoenixwarrior

16.Ka Tian - by Deceptame

17.Celestial - by Slim3ddi3g

18.Ryoko Hikari - by tgrant

19.Ayido Hwedo - by DamRho

20.Vandon Sozek - by TheDragonKingakaReptile

21.Lorne - by Ko-jah

22.Vortex - by Shadaloo

23.Ghost - by TomTaz
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One More Character
Soon There Will Be An Important Announcement
to let you'll know which character will be eliminated in the BJE made by krsx66.

*Character edit* I have added a Hari Kari move as well as a key quote and changed some of his bio and ending, making him alittle more interesting and going a little more in depth into his character.


Name- Vandon Sozek

Occupation- sorcerer, former assassin

Height- 6’3”

Age: unknown, he has been around since the rule of King Jerrod

Race: rumored to be an Edenian

Eye color- green

Hair- black and long

Alignment- Neutral

Weapon- A gold plated, dual bladed staff with a large ruby embedded along the shaft of it. The staff can be detached into two swords and reattached into a staff during battle making for stylish and deadly combos in his weapon stance. It is called the Blades of Carnage.

Fighting Styles: Kithna Ton- An ancient fighting style of the edenians used primarily by assassins. It is quick and well balanced.
Shadow Fist- A slower but more powerful style coming from the ancient scripts of the Book of shadows.
Blades of Carnage- A weapon which Vandon created himself which is extremely fast and can be used in insanely intricate combos

Outfit 1- He wears a long black hooded cloak with the sleeves ripped off. On his hands he wears ornate gauntlets with sharp blades at the tip of the finger of each. On his face he has a black tattoo which twists along the side of his face in a serpent like pattern. A long scar runs down the side of his arm and on his chest is a medallion with a ruby placed directly at the center of it.

Outfit 2- A full iron helmet decorated like a demon’s face covers his entire head with two red slits for his eyes to see through. He has no shirt on but has a black cloth wrapped around his arm just underneath his shoulder. The scar remains on his arm and he wears the same gauntlets from the first outfit. He has black somewhat baggy pants which are tucked into armored boots. The buckle of the belt he wears is the medallion from the first outfit. A long black cloth is draped around the back of his belt, one side of his waist to the other, which hangs down to his ankles.

Special moves: (button commands done for PS2)
Black Dragon- Stepping to the side, Vandon holds out his arm and fires a black fire ball with the head of a dragon at front of it. When it hits the opponent it bites into them and then explodes sending the opponent into the air, setting up for a possible juggling combo. (forward, forward, triangle)

Shadow Teleport- Vandon disappears and appears either in front of or behind the opponent flying at them with his hand out in front of him, grabbing them by the throat and choke-slamming them to the ground. (back, down, square)

Seeking Black Dragons- Vandon slams his fists together, knuckle to knuckle, and three black dragon fireballs fly out, one goes up in the air a few feet, another goes to the right of him the same distance, and the third flies to the left of him same distance as well. The triangle button sends one of the fireballs at the opponent no matter what distance they are from Vandon. This can be done until all three have been sent at the opponent. The attack can be cancelled either by hitting the circle button or by not launching any of the fireballs within 4 seconds. (back, down, forward, triangle triangle x3 to launch . Circle to cancel attack)

Dark drain- Vandon grabs the opponent and lifts them into the air, a dark energy flows into Vandon as some of the opponents life is drained and partly replenishes the health of Vandon. Afterwards he tosses them to the ground and jumps back.(back,forward, x)

Fatalities:
The Shadow Dragon: Vandon raises his arms straight up into the air and emits a dark aura as a giant black dragon jumps out of the ground and growls loudly. It nosedives back into the ground and then bursts out from underneath the opponent, biting down on them, eating their entire body except for the head which goes falling to the ground and is caught by Vandon he throws his head back and laughs loudly.

Blood Lust: Vandon slams his fist into the opponents face causing them to fall to the ground. He then takes out the Blades of Carnage and picks the opponent up with them. He teleports quickly from one side of the opponent to the other as he butchers them with his weapon, blood flies everywhere and he continues until there is nothing but a skeleton left.

Hari Kari:
Dark Sacrifice- Vandon falls to his knees and lowers his head as his hands are held up in the prayer position. The head of the Shadow dragon slowly raises fron the ground behind Vandon as he stays entirely still. The Shadow Dragon opened his mouth widely and snaps down upon Vandon, diving back into the ground.

Key quote: "Lay before me as I crush you beneath my fist!"

Story:
As Vandon had grown up he was always preoccupied with making himself stronger and stronger. His obsession with fighting and strength was so noticeable that his family consented to sending him to a clan of warriors in the kingdom of Edenia. He became too much of a handful, even for this group of powerful warriors, that he was sent out of the clan for his insatiable lust for battle and for having tried to kill the leader of the clan in order to proclaim himself leader. Eventually Vandon became part of the Royal army, moving up in ranks with awe-inspiring ease.

Vandon came to work under King Jerrod as an assassin, and he excelled at what he did. He had became marvelous at sneaking past enemies defenses and his fighting skill was renowned throughout the kingdom, even being hailed the kingdoms grand champion of fighting by Jerrod himself. Jerrod considered him to actually be one of his closest allies and friends since they had been through many wars together and had always fought side by side. Vandon was extremely ambitious, however, and had been trying to find a way to overthrow the king of Edenia and place himself in the place of power. Secretly he also lusted after Queen Sindel and many a time had tried to seduce her. Sindel would dismiss his advances as childish games, nothing to be taken seriously. This often angered Vandon and he became more and more obsessed with her, almost as obsessed as with his lust for power. He bode his time and awaited an opportunity to take both the Jerrod's throne and his wife as his own. Then came the invasion of Shao Kahn, and Vandon saw his opportunity to satisfy his ambition. Jerrod sent him to assassinate the conqueror of realms but he had his own plans. Sneaking into the stronghold of Shao Kahn, Vandon was able to sneak his way before the throne of Kahn himself. Kahn immediately sent his guards to kill him but they were struck down and dismembered like nothing as they lay upon the floor at Vandon’s feet. Kahn was impressed, so he asked the purpose behind Vandon’s intrusion.

“I have come to offer a proposal to you” he stated.

Shao Kahn tilted his head a little and glared at the Edenian assassin. “I do not make deals with pests, especially with one who comes from a realm I am to conquer.”

“Well I am just offering Edenia to your control on a silver platter,” Vandon spoke slyly.
Kahn smiled a little then studied the assassin for a moment, “And what is it that you want in return for aiding my cause?”

Vandon spoke confidently, “to rule Edenia under you, taking Sindel as my queen, to act as a king over these lands under your authority of course.”

Kahn let out a mighty laugh as he heard this and smiled as he thought for a moment, “very well, if you do as you have promised you may rule over this realm underneath me.”

From that point on, the Edenian assassin would act as an advisor to Kahn, helping him exploit all of the weaknesses in the defense of King Jerrod’s kingdom. After Jerrod had died Shao Kahn took Queen Sindel as his wife and claimed the throne of Edenia, thus breaking his end of the bargain with Vandon. Vandon approached him furiously, “I was supposed to be given control over these lands! What happened to our agreement!?”

Kahn laughed and stood up, his towering figure casting a shadow over Vandon, “You were a fool to think I would ever give you control over this realm, I used you and now your usefulness has been lost.”

“You liar! I will kill you for this!” With those words Vandon charged the emperor with an enraged cry.

“You fool, you cannot win!”

A battle took place between these two and lasted for a short time before Shao Kahn held Vandon by the throat above the ground. “I do owe you a debt of gratitude for having helped me easily overthrow your king and for this I will reward you,” suddenly a portal opened beneath Vandon and Shao Kahn dropped him into it.

Vandon spent the better part of a millennia trapped in the depths of the Netherrealm, his anger and his hatred were all that kept him moving forward. The Vandon of that era truly died, for his lust for power and queen Sindel faded from view, all that burned in his mind now was revenge. While in the Netherrealm, Vandon came across a dark book hidden in one of the many caverns of this hellish place, it was entitled, the book of shadows. It held secrets to a power over the shadows and a beast known as the Shadow Dragon. For a good deal of time Vandon spent his days studying this book and practicing the arts within it, becoming more an more powerful, the next time he and Shao Kahn would meet the outcome would be different.

He escaped the Netherrealm during the events of Deadly Alliance and was disturbed to hear of the supposed assassination of Shao Kahn. He traveled all the way to the throne of the Emperor to view the evidence for himself, but the area where the body had been was devoid of Shao Kahn’s corpse. This lead to certain suspicions which arose into Vandon’s mind about the truth of Shao Kahn’s death. He explored the mighty fortress and came across a huge hole in the wall which appeared to be caused by a heavy weighted bludgeoning weapon of some sort. Vandon smiled widely as he realized his chance for revenge has not been taken away from him.

When the Dragon King arose to try to claim the realms of Shao Kahn and continue forth with the empire, Vandon realized that this threat may lead Kahn to return in order to reclaim his empire from him. If this should happen, this reborn Edenian will be there awaiting him to strike him down.

Ending: As Vandon made his way, battling to get to the stronghold of the mighty Dragon King, he came across the Queen of Edenia reborn. Sindel was in a moment of disbelief as she gazed upon the man who betrayed her kingdom to Shao Kahn so long ago. Vandon smiled, "It's been a long time my lady."

"Not long enough," Sindel growled.

Vandon's smile turned to a serious look, "enough catching up on old times I have an appointment with a certain scaly weakling."

"What makes you think I'm letting you go?" Sondel prepares to fight.

Vandon laughs, "I may have wanted you once but make no mistake, you will die if you stand in my way."

Sindel leaps forward trying to hit Vandon but Vandon disappears. Sindel stand still confused for a moment as the blade of Vandon's staff penetrates through her stomach, raising her up into the air as she shrieks out in pain. He disappears a gain and begins teleporting all around Sindel tearing her to pieces with his staff, leaving her a bloody mess upon the floor. "I told you not to get in my way."

Vandon finally makes his way to the castle of the Dragon king and all the way to the throne room of the legendary King himself. The Dragon King arises and snarls as he looks upon Vandon, "Vandon Sozek, you were foolish to come here, I'm afraid I'll have to kill you before you can get the chance at revenge."

Vandon smiles confidently, "So you know who I am, I'm surprised but you are wrong if you think that even you could stop my vengeance. I've been called a fool before and I shall not let them same outcome occur this time. Its you who will die!"

A great battle took place as these two opponents viciously battled eachother. The Dragon King was able to, at several times, totally beat into Vandon, sending him to the ground bleeding. Vandon smiled as he sent his seeking black dragons at the king to knock him back into utter disorientation. Seeing his chance Vandon summoned the Shadow Dragon who brought the dragon king between its powerful jaws. Suprisingly, The Dragon King pried himself from the jaws of the dragon and continued to battle strongly. Vandon proved, in the end, to be the superior warrior and the Dragon King fell to his knees as he was decapitated. Vandon took his head and placed it upon the throne and sat, awaiting the true purpose behind his annihalation of the Dragon King and his minions.

After a day or so, a huge commotion occurs through the Dragon King’s palace as the doors to the throne room are busted open with a large war hammer and a tall muscular figure stands there staring directly into Vandon’s eyes. Vandon smiles widely as he pulls out the Blades of Carnage, his time has come.

Stage:
The Dead City- This is a crumbled city within the realm of Outworld with several dark figures creeping around in the background. The sky is black and screams echo throughout the city. The characters fight in front of a decrepit temple along a street and can fight their way up the stairs of the temple and knock each other through the stone door of the temple. The floor is broken inside the temple and whoever is knocked through the door falls down a floor into the basement of the temple which has a stone torture table and a large portal swirling on the side of the wall.

Stage Weapon:
Ritualistic Executioner’s Axe- Near the torture table in the basement of the temple the axe stands. This axe is used for beheading people in sacrifice to the gods.

Stage Fatality:
Netherrealm Portal- Knocking the opponent into the portal they are sent to the Netherrealm and burn to nothing but a charred skeleton.

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: *Character edit* I have added a Hari Kari move as well as a key quote and changed some of his bio and ending, making him alittle more interesting and going a little more in depth into his character.

Read them and it's all good man! Good luck!

TomTaz Wrote: Ok, I've done it...I've come up with another one. Hope this isn't too late: Name: Ghost Age: Unknown (believed to be well over 25,000) Height: 6'5" Weight: 215 pounds Fighting Stlyes: Mantis Kenpo Raknar: Self made Weapon that can be thrown. Bio: Ghost was King of Edenia, before Jarred's rule. His name was Collin. He was a fair and just King, beloved by his subjects and his Queen. For a long time life was peacful for Jarred and his Queen, Shivrea. However, what was not known by the Royal couple, was that treachery was upon them. Treachery that was years in the making. Jasal, King Collin's brother, was ever resentful of Collin's status. Not just as King, but his status with the people of Edenia as well. It sickened Jasal to see that they loved him so. Jasal beilieved that Kings were meant to feared and rule with iron fists! He decided this insult could continue no further. So he planned and schemed and waited....well now his time had come. King Collin recieved an urgent message. Word had come for the North...his cousin, Serba, needed help defending his city from the Shokan Army. The King wasted not time in gathering his army and heading off immediately. However, before he left, Shivrea told him to hurry back to her...she had important news to tell him. Collin promised he would be back as soon as he was able, and with that was gone. Shivrea looked at Jasal, who was watching her husband leave with a rather disturbing grin on his face. A sense of overwhelming dread came over Shivrea and she prayed her husband would be back soon. When Collin reached the Northern city of Pavmai...he was greeted by a cheerful Serba. Everything appeared normal, no sign of war at all. Collin explained the events that had transpired and led him there. Serba said he sent no such message...his people hadn't heard from the Shokan in well over 10 years. Collin immediately thought of his wife and his Kingdom. He prayed it was not to late. The normal 5 day journey, only took Collin and his men 3 and 1/2 days. When they reached the heart of Edenia, they saw the streets were litered with dead bodies of men, women, and children. It was not long before Collin and his men were ambushed, and beaten by the army of Shokan the Jasal had waiting for them. Jasal explained that he had sent the message to get Collin out of the kingdom just long enough to take over with his allies the Shokan. Those who didn't comply with the new order were slain. King Collin learned that one of the people was Shivea. She was one of the first to die at the hands of the dispicable Jasal. Jasal also went ton to inform Collin that he was to be a fater. This sent Collin into a rage and freed himself from the grip of the Shokan holding him before Jasal. He hit Jasal hard and knocked him to the ground. He then grabbed Jasal by his throat and Slammed his head into the grond multiple times before he was again a prisoner to two Shokan this time. Jasal slowly got up shaking his head to clear the dizzyness. He than glared at Collin and took out the dagger at his waist. He told his brother goodbye and stabbed him in the heart. Collin's body was taken to the royal crypt and placed in the spot reserved for him. Where he lay for the next few years. One night, in the dead cold of winter...A being made of pure bright energy entered the crypt. "Sleeping King...You were cut down before your time. Rise again to take your revenge, make right what has been made so wrong." The being touched the decayed corpse of Collin, and he was made whole again...except he now had white eyes and pale skin. "What is this sorcery? How have I come back? Why?" "I have revived you my Lord. And do you not remember?" "I remember...I remember...JASAL!! He has betrayed us all! Shivrea! My child! HE MUST ANSWER FOR HIS CRIMES!" "Aye, my King, he does. And now you have been changed, granted the power to carry out your mission...restore Edenia to a realm of peace!" With those words the being was gone. Collin left the crypt immediately. His revenge would be long and bloody, none who stood in his way would be spared. Moves: Ghost out - Ghost has the power to become a literal ghost...he becomes intangable for a brief period of time. (While intangable his other specials may NOT be used) Twin Destruction - Ghost has the ability to make a solid copy of himself. Then both he and the clone do an 8 hit kick combo to the opponent simultaneously. Swift Vengence - Ghost takes out the Raknar and throws the blade which slices the chest...While the weapon does not stay impaled in the opponent and flies back to Ghost...it acts as an impale move would as the wound is too deep to stop bleeding. Deadly Vortex - Ghost summons a tornado of lost ghosts, as the opponent is sucked into the tornado their life force is drained from them for a brief period. Vitality Transfer - Ghost chants and his hands start to glow he fires energy at the oppent that swirls around them draining life, the energy then returns to Ghost swirling around him and adds the stolen life to his own vitality. Fatalities: Retribution - Ghost walks over to the opponent and punches them in the face, causing them to be dizzy, he then grabs the opponent, spins to get momentum and then flings the opponent into the air, he then throws the Raknar after them and the spinning blade slice the opponent in half at the abdomen. Both halve of the body fall to the ground as the Raknar returns to Ghost...who then give the weapon a swift shake to get the blood off. Ashes to Ashes - Ghost starts to chant, and summons much bigger version of the ghostnado used in the move Deadly vortex and lets it lose upon the dazed opponent. Inside the Ghostnado you can see the shadow of the opponent writhing and struggling and you can hear terrible sceams coming from him/her. Suddenly the ghostnado dissappears and all that's left of the opponent is a pile of ash, which get's blown away by the breeze. Suicide: Ghost switches to Ghost form and phases half of his body through the ground...once he reaches his waist he suddenly becomes solid again with the bottom half of his body in the ground. He screams in agony and then his top half falls over onto the ground. Stage: Royal Edenian Grave yard Ghost stage is the Royal Grave yard of Past rulers. At first glance is like an other normal grave yard...with head stones and crypts placed about. As the fighters begin to fight however...danger become apparent. If you get to close to certain head stones....Zombie arms reach out of the ground, taking hold of your ankles then the head of the zombie appears and he starts chewing on the fighters leg. Different ghosts fly about the arena constantly...if one flies through a fighter they become terrified and unable to move (stun move) and the other fighter is free to inflict easy damage. Stage Death Trap: If the opponent is knocked through to the inside of King Collin's crypt, (marked by a lion's head on the door) The decayed corpse of Shivrea awakens and eats the fighter alive! >Ghost Pic

Awesome character, Tazzer!

I'm glad you created this guy after all! Ryoko and Nemesi own him though! lol j/k

Thanks! I'm glad my block had left me too!

Sabre has been updated slightly

Great character TomTaz

anyway I slightly updated Deceptame

Sensui has been updated, with a couple of new moves(as if he wasn't deadly already) and he's age has been changed to be much older. He's now 42,000 years old.

Okay guys, after the announcement, we're just waiting for krsx66, there will be 2 empty spots for the bje.
When we get 2 more characters we will look upon the bje again and see if there's anyone who's not qualified to enter the tournament.
So, soon enough, there will be a final date as to when you can edit your character, so make haste, and be prepared, cause even if you do make an edit after, it won't be counted.

-ATTENTION PARTICIPANTS-

If you edit your character please let me know via PM, so i can edit it on my page, which i am later going to hand to Brodeur so he can edit it on the tournament's site. Thank You.

--- I have edited all characters so far. I have checked throught the thread to see if there were any updates made and i edited the changes.

I'll make another!

Name: Chris
Age:24
Height:6ft5
Weight:slim, but built
Sex:male
Alignment:good
BloodType:a+
Weapon:Blade(a blade from a paper cutter)
Fighting Styles:
1.je-kun-do
2.tang-so-do
Weapon Styles:
1.paper blade
Arena: work-shop(Chrises work shop... a slaughter-house)
Arena Weapon:long hooks
Arena Fatality:a huge metal slab falls on them
Arena Death Trap:saws on the machines
Arena Interaction:chrises 2 jobs in 1 building
Special Moves1:shoot(shoots them with a pistol strapede on his arm)
2:gash(Chris takes his blade and gashes their leg open)
3:death stab(he stabs them in the ribs with paper blade)
Fatality1:slice and dice:Chris takes his paper blade and cuts off their head off, then cuts off their torso, and finally cuts off their knees.
Fatality2: fatal blow:Chris shoots person in the neck and as the victom dashes back(holding their bleeding throat) he shoots their head clean off with his shot gun(that's on his back)
Story:After finding his brother limp on the hard ground, Chris decides to kill his brother's killer, the dragon King, Chris must kill the dragon king, Chris must revenge.... STRIKER!!!!
Character Description:a police-man, with a shot-gun on his back, a pistol on his arm, and his brother's old uniform(Striker's mk3 out fit)and a paper cutting blade in his hand, ,who also works for a slaughter-house, looking for revenge!
Character's Signature Quote:Rest In Peace Striker.



Hope you like it!!!

Deceptame Wrote: Great character TomTaz anyway I slightly updated Deceptame

Thanks....I'm proud of this one!

ANNOUNCEMENT ~ Leon eliminted, two spots left!!

After conferring and getting the opinions of the judges, Brodeur has informed me that the character 'Leon' has been eliminated from the BJE. Although he was quite a good concept, we felt that he needed developing and would have been eliminated in the first round - so we have eliminated him now instead. There are two spaces remaining for the tournament, we will choose the two most thought out, developed, interesting characters that are submitted in the thread.

So thanks to johnny_cage_rules for entering 'Leon' but we felt he wasn't up to the high standards of the other characters, your new character however, may make it into the tourney - but I must say that most of the character stories are rather long, and the story is a large determining factor in who we choose to fill those spots.

So more entries are needed!!

i hope all of you guys use this time to update to the most your characters, id¿f you do so PM buerballs, and let me give you a nice surprise (hope brodeur won't get mad) the tournament site is AWSOME you'll be enjoying this more than you can think Cheers

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: TomTaz Wrote: Two characters this time? Hmmmm...ok I'll see if I can come up with another one. You'll come up with another one, in the meantime I have a character. Name:Sensui Age:42,000 (appears to be only eighteen) Height:6'3 Weight:187 lbs Eye color: Red with green snake slits Hair color:Red with blonde streaks.Spiked up Race:Demi-god/demon Alliance:Pure evil Disciplines:Bui Zui Xuan Quan, Wu Shi Kempo, Judo, Copiara, Twin lava scimitars, lava cat claws Special intrest:Tsunami (demi-goddess of water) Elemental Mastery(s):Fire, Soul control, lava, negitivity Domain:Tenth Level of the Netherealm, Chaos Sanctuary Quote:"Fire has no equall.My fury will consume all!" Design:Since Sensui is the demi-god of fire and his appearance is young he has a punk look. His hair, as stated before is spiked up, not in a mohawk but like Jacky's from VF. His eybrows burn with a white flame flame. He has an earing on his left ear. He has a soul patch goat-t and he also has fangs. His final facial detail is a scare that goes across his face. He fights shirtless. His back is completely covered in a giant tatto which also reaches to his front. His skin is tan with a redish glow. His forearms have gold bracers with black cloth. His fists have orange "cracks" and are on fire. He wears half red, half black pants with twin dragons of opposite colors on the side. His pants tuck into his boots. The boots have knee gaurds which are shaped like skulls. The shingaurds are made to look like ribs that reach to the back and wrap around on his calves. He wears two side plates on his hips which go up just below his ribs and show off his abs. A gold sash is wrapped around the bottom of his waist. Moves: High Riser Hell Kick:Sensui uses his power of soul manipulation to toss the opponet into the air. Once in the air Sensui flies at them ingulfed in flames, kicking them in the chest, setting them on fire and finishes them of with a spinning axe kick in mid-air sending them to the ground like a blazing meteor. RyoKoshen:Sensui creates a fire bomb and shoots it into the ground. The bomb causes the ground to shatter releasing magma and fissure flows to ingulf the opponet. Soul abduction. Sensui breifly tears the soul out of his opponets body and grips it with his hands. He sets the soul on fire and shoots it back into the opponet setting them on fire. Magma blast: Much like Sub-Zero's ice blast except not only does it immoblize the opponet but it also does damage. Sensui launches a ball of molten magma at his opponet. It incases the opponet in a cacoon of fresh rock, scorching their body inside. Sensui can is free to either attack the opponet or let the blast drain their life away. Ground Sicle:Sensui does a ground sweep which creates a wave of fire to shoot at his opponet. Spectral shift: Sensui takes out his own soul out of his body. His body becomes ice cold. The player can now control the soul of Sensui. In this form, anytime Sensui does damage to his opponet, his attacks become exponentialy stronger and regenerate his health. However, if the opponet manages to attack Sensuis material body Sensui will automatically die. Scimitar Spectral Wave: Sensui molds two scimitars out lava which comes from the cracks on his fists. He then focuses his spectral arua and two X shaped waves of spectral energy at his opponet. The first wave breaks the persons gaurd, the second ingulfs them with spectral fire. Soul Chain:Sensui uses his power of soul manipulation to bind the opponet with a chain made from their own soul. Dark gate: Senui uses the energy from the his dark power open a gateway which he steps through, alowing him to warp any where he pleases. Darkness Cannon: Sensui uses the power of negativeity to shoot out a blast of pure evil at his opponet. This is much like Hatsuma's Extinguished Humanity, only Sensui isn't phased by it. Crimson tear: Sensui cuts his arm open, allowing it to bleed. He then launches the blood at his opponet marking them with it. It then combusts and sets the opponet on fire. Dark Lightning inferno:Sensui's hands glow black as the channel pure evil, and malice. His hands start to spark, as the energy begins to extend from his forearms and into the center of his palms he then releases the energy in the form of a giant streak of black lightning at his opponet. Demonic tempest:Sensui uses his super speed, along with his lave scimitars and charges at the opponet. He first does an 8 hit ground combo, then uppercuts the person in the air and fallows them up there. He then uses both scimitars as helicopter blade and slices down verticaly in a series of 13 dedly rotations. The last one igniting the opponet in fire, spectral, and dark flames as they hit the ground. He then does a back flip and lands on the ground with one foot in the air. Fatality: Dragon of lost souls: Sensui charges his fist with the energy that he channels from the Tenth Level of the Netherealm. The energy's glow is first green and then turns black because of all the malice and hatered that dwells on that level. Sensui then launches the energy from a plam blast at his opponet. The energy morphs into the shape of a devil dragon, roaring as it approaches the opponent. It quickly intagles itself around the opponet and stares at them for a split second. Then it grows to enormous size as it lurches back and suddenly shoots into the opponets mouth, at this point the dragon is twenty feet long, and all of it goes inside. The opponet is then dazed and staggers back and forth. Then their body begins to pulseate. Green and black lightening courses on the surface of their body. Blood starts to trickle out of theri mouth, nose, eyes, and ears. The opponet starts screaming as spectral light shines out of their eyes and mouth. Their chest beggins to swell and something is clearly growing inside. All of a sudden the dragon rips out of their chest cavity with their soul in its mouth. The opponet screams in agony as the dragons full length starts to sprout out of a fountain of blood which used to be the opponets chest. The opponet falls to his knees with their inerds falling all over the floor. The dragon eats the opponets souls and returns back into Sensuis fist. Sensui then glows with a green flame from the newly aquired soul. The opponets chest, now ripped to shreds is completely hallow as he is left their, dead on his knees. Fatality 2 Eternal Damnation:Sensui creats a pentagram of fire around the opponet. The flames go inside the opponets mouth and set them on fire internaly. However they do not die. Instead they are transported to Sensuis Chaos Sanctuary where they are instanly hung from a cross. Sensui appears in front of them and puts his hand on their chest and burns another pentagram onto their body and walks away. The opponet is then instantly engulfed in flames on the cross. Fire shoots out of their mouth and their stomach as the demonic flames eat away at their flesh. The complete midsection is eaten away completel leaving only the spine, and other organs that fall in place of where the stomach once was. The opponet is still alive as now their blood ignites on fire and they are a hanging torch. The opponet never dies as they are left there to burn for all eternity for Sensuis amusement. So far this is what I have, I'll update him tomorrow with his level design and story, tell me what you think. Update: Level Design:Chaos Sanctuary The chaos Sanctuary is a demonic structure which is located on the final level of the Netherealm, Level 10. It is located on an island in the middle of the River of Fire. There is no way of of this island by land. The sanctuary is built in the shape of a demonic cross. In the center is a flaming pentagram used for the execution of those who aren't fit for an after life. There is no roof to this place so fair balls come crashing in constantly. Souls are chained to horrific torture devices. Some are put into cages which are lowered slowly into lava pits others are torn to pieces by giant gears. Fountains of blood run down the walls of the Chaos Sanctuary. For those who are sent here, death would be a release. There are half eaten corpses impaled on spikes from walls which are always bleeding. Pools of flaming blood are everywhere, they feed the oni who act as the gaurds in these structure. Screams fill the air. Most of the sanctuary is shrowded in darkness only flashes of sillohutes on walls show some of the victims here. Hazards:There are hotspots for fire ball strikes all over the floor. The walls have jets of flames shooting out of them. Parts of the floor collapse to pools of lave below. Stage Weapon:Malice Blade The Malice Blade is a gaint two handed sword which has a serated blade. The blade has a black luster which which is a sign of pure evil. The blade constantly courses with evil lightning. The hilt of the sword is made of bones from the strongest oni. The arm gaurd is made of a demonic metal which is the materialization of evil and malice of all those who were tortured in the Chaos Sanctuary. It is directly extracted from their soul. The blade deals massive damage, in exchange for striking speed. It's power move is called Curtain of Sarrow. The blade is smashed against the ground and a wall of dark energy is shoot at the opponet, tearing up the areana floor. Story: Sensui was once a rightouse demi-god. He was held in high regard by the Elder Gods and was thought to be the succeesor to the postion of Earth Gaurdian. His only flaw was that he enjoyed the thrill of killing and the sight of blood. As he grew, he became more arrogant and careless. He eventually refused the position of Earth Gaurdian for a greater thirst, the thirst for power. By dishonoring the Elder Gods, he was banished to Earth. Stripped of his rank and nobility, Sensui was enraged and decided to destroy the human race. He slaughtered thousands, innocent and guilty alike. The constant carnage fed his hunger and twisted his mind. He loved every moment of it. His mastery of fire and the human spirit had left hundreds of graveyards in his path. He had no mercy or remorse for his actions. He kept killing because it made him feel superior. Young women and children were decapitated or hung on spikes. The Elder Gods feared of what they unleashed on Earth. Sensui was exiled once more, only this time, he was sent to the tenth and final level of the Netherealm. This however didn't side track Sensui from his mission. He was sent to the Chaos Sanctuary for all eternity. The Elder Gods believed that keeping him in insane tourment would eventually break him. It took little time for Sensui to establish dominance over the Chaos Sanctuary and all of its surroundings. He eventually ate the soul of Lucifer and became the most feared demi-god in existence. He killed any oni who got in his way and devoured souls to increase his power. Sensui knew of the Mortal Kombat tournamet. His power wasn't enough to shatter the barrier between realms to escape on his own. However the time of the tournamet would weaken the realms creating possibilities for numerous break outs. He heard of the great Dragon King. Supposedly he was the most feared ruler of all realms. Sensui made it his goal to spill the Dragon King's blood on his hands and eat his soul. By doing so he would achieve ultimate power. This power would let him cross between realms and challange the Elder Gods themselves. Killing them would allow him to bring forth the Apacolypse and complete the merger between the realms. Along with an Army of S type oni and his newly acquired general Hatsuma, the Black Chaos Ninja, should Sensui succeed there will be no realm that is safe from the Crimson Wave.

One final update. He has a move called Spectral Readout: Using this move, Sensui can copy the abilites of his opponets, often killing them with their own move. He first extracts a piece of the opponets soul and then swallows it. He glows with a green flame and absorbs the fighers techniques for a short time.He will take great pleasure in killing someone after they surrender to their fear.

-Character Name: Nasha
-Age: Unknown
-Height: 197 cm.
-Weight: Unknown
-Sex: Female
-Alignment: Neutral (Evil)
-BloodType: Not a known type.
-Weapon: She has four arms with stings grown out of her back.
-Fighting Styles: Arakno (made-up style)
-Weapon Styles: Stings

-Arena:
A holy shrine, human and other races sacrifices is made here by the Maidens of Arachnid. It is a round hall, with pillars following the walls. On these pillars hangs bodies of several sacrifices. At on end is a grand door, looking like a spider-web. At the other end is an altar, where four Maidens of Arachnid, priestess' of the shrine, looks upon the fight. They are clad in black robes and has beautiful long blond hair and tan skin.

The opponents can break through the door and land in another hall, one level down. The stais down are broken, and there's no other doors here. Instead, from the roof, are hanging huge spiders and the floor is filled with skeletons.
-Arena Weapon: In the shrine is a scythe-looking blade, in the middle of the arena.
-Arena Fatality: At the second hall, one of the giant spiders come down from the roof and grabs the opponent, spins a web around him/her while going up to the roof again, which is shadowed so they disappear. A scream, some blood falling down, and then the skeleton of the opponent follows, crashing when hitting the floor...
-Arena Death Trap: At the shrine, slam the opponent up to the Maidens of Arachnid at the alter. They will catch the opponent and tear him apart.
-Arena Interaction: At the spiders hall, the skeletons on the floor can be picked up and thrown at the opponent, something like in MK4!

-Special Moves1:
Spider Sting - Nasha slashes the opponent with her stings 4 times.
-2:
Mind Crusher - Nasha grabs the opponent by the face and shoots out fire through the hand while crushing the opponents head with her claws. After a few seconds, she throws the opponent away from her.
-3:
Fire Pillar - Nasha's two upper stings shoots out fireballs at the ground in front of her, which causes a pillar of fire to appear.

-Fatality1:
Eternal Torment - Nasha summons stings like her own to appear under the opponent, which grabs the opponent and tears the opponent down into the Netherrealm. (kinda like Shinnok's great hand fatality).
-Fatality2:
Terror Ripper - Nasha grabs the opponent by the face, while her stings starts to tear and rip the opponents body apart. When the only thing left is the opponents head, she put it into flames and throws it away.

-Story:
Nasha is a Maiden of the Arachnid, a race who is following the Order of the Arachnid, a spider-like god. They have been enemies of the vampire race for milleniums and hated any other threats to their race. These Maidens were once vampires themselves, but they wanted more power than the vampire prince could ever gain, so they seld their souls to the spider-god Arachnid.

Shao Kahn has tried to take over their realm many times, without succession. They denied the way of the Mortal Kombat, so Kahn couldn't get the power. Instead he took over their enemies land, the Bloodlands, the homeland of the vampire race.

Nasha is a priestess apprentice, but she has done many rituals and succeeded, which would make her the perfect Maiden of the Arachnid. But she still needed to gain the perfect prey to sacrifice for the Final Offering. Nasha was guided by the tortured souls of the shrine and learned, that the legendary Dragon King was reborned in Outworld. That meant that many legendary and all powerful warriors would try to defeat him. One of those warriors would be perfect to sacrifice and complete Nasha's trials to become a pristess.
Nasha travels to the Outworld and searches for the perfect prey...

-Character Description:
Nasha is a tall and beautiful woman with tan skin and golden-blond hair braided into a long pigtail. She has a long scar over her face, from her left cheek, crossing between her eyes. Her eyes are all black and she has fangs like a vampire. All her teeths are red.
From her elbows and down her tan skin is dark and hard as steel. It looks just the same from her knees and down. She has four fingers on each hand with long red claws. She has spikes on her shoulders, arms and legs, which are also red. She has two toes on each foot, also clawed.
Out of her back is grown four arms with dark, hardened skin and huge stings in each end.

-Character's Signature Quote:
"You can not end the pain. Even your soul will be tormented."

My note: Nasha is based of my earlier character concept of Chimera, but I like this concept better.

Mk_FrEaK Wrote: i hope all of you guys use this time to update to the most your characters, id¿f you do so PM buerballs, and let me give you a nice surprise (hope brodeur won't get mad) the tournament site is AWSOME you'll be enjoying this more than you can think Cheers

Cool! I look forward to seeing it.

And as for udating, there is so much I need to do! Hopefully I'll have enough time.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: One final update. He has a move called Spectral Readout: Using this move, Sensui can copy the abilites of his opponets, often killing them with their own move. He first extracts a piece of the opponets soul and then swallows it. He glows with a green flame and absorbs the fighers techniques for a short time.He will take great pleasure in killing someone after they surrender to their fear.

I'd love to see him use that move against Nemesi! lol It would backfire so badly! hehe