Ether, you have shown yourself to be dedicated, hardworking, and prolific. You have a passion for this project and I also like your drawing style. I look forward to working with you.
My vote is yes.
VOTES
Yes = 2
Abstention = 1 (due to illness)
The motion passes unanimously. Ether is now a part of the team.
Congratulations and welcome!
My vote is yes.
VOTES
Yes = 2
Abstention = 1 (due to illness)
The motion passes unanimously. Ether is now a part of the team.
Congratulations and welcome!
strugler Wrote: good work man i like it guyz i applogize i am really seek some fever and headache i will be absent form the forum a couple days untill i get better i will try to contact darconus though take car guys and dont get fever its not fun believe me |
OH man the fever was os bAD i even wrote seek instead of sick without any notice
ok here is my vote:
i vote yes too
welcome man but i promise ill improve my drawings to make the covers at least for now and by the way we will help you man you wont be alone all of us know how to draw so well help you.
now we need a colourer
PLZ ANY COLOURER WE NEED TO START WITH AT LEAST A COVER THSI WEEK JUST TO SHOW PEOPLE THAT WE ARE SERIOUS.
good luck guys
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my contact (the one who drew my fire and ice pic) says that he may be interested for covers if a definite description is given.
There is absolutely no need to rush this comic. While we are trying to be as professional as possible we have to remember that atleast everyone involved has other things more important in life, whereas with a professional this is their job.
Take me for example - tuesdays, thursdays and fridays im out of my house from 7am - 7pm
mondays, wednesdays, saturdays and sundays i work an aweful lot.
but even so, seeing as how no one else has volunteered (And passed) i give my services as the colourist of the comic.
Strugler, any chance you could translate what you wrote into a proper script (as in like divided into panels so ether has a structure to work with) thats if he wants to.
There is absolutely no need to rush this comic. While we are trying to be as professional as possible we have to remember that atleast everyone involved has other things more important in life, whereas with a professional this is their job.
Take me for example - tuesdays, thursdays and fridays im out of my house from 7am - 7pm
mondays, wednesdays, saturdays and sundays i work an aweful lot.
but even so, seeing as how no one else has volunteered (And passed) i give my services as the colourist of the comic.
Strugler, any chance you could translate what you wrote into a proper script (as in like divided into panels so ether has a structure to work with) thats if he wants to.
the_dark_spectre Wrote: my contact (the one who drew my fire and ice pic) says that he may be interested for covers if a definite description is given. Take me for example - tuesdays, thursdays and fridays im out of my house from 7am - 7pm mondays, wednesdays, saturdays and sundays i work an aweful lot. but even so, seeing as how no one else has volunteered (And passed) i give my services as the colourist of the comic. Strugler, any chance you could translate what you wrote into a proper script (as in like divided into panels so ether has a structure to work with) thats if he wants to. |
1. Well, the first ish should obviously feature the dragon prominently; I don't know if it should have anything else on it.
2. Damn, you're busy. What do you do?
3. Cool. 'preciate it. Remember, though, sic8sic might still join us.
4. Hang on, I'm writing the second draft. It'll have basically the outine of the entire first story arc. It should be done by the latest, a week from now. I'm writing MK1,2,and 3 at once, so they connect properly with foreshadowing and such. That's why it'll take a while. Then we'll divide it into issues, and finally have a go at blocking it out into panels.
I'm writing it like a film script, since that's the closest thing I'm familiar with.
I'm pleased to join your ragtag entourage. I agree that there is NO REASON to rush this. I want this to look as nice as possible. I would love to be the penciler. Strugler, I like your Liu Kang drawing. Kano looks good too, however, his arms seem a little disproportionate. Go back over your drawings, clean them up, take as much time as needed! You have tremendous potential and I can't wait to work with you guys!
P.S. This is constructive criticism. Please don't be offended. I am by no means the greatest artist in the known world!
P.S. This is constructive criticism. Please don't be offended. I am by no means the greatest artist in the known world!
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drac, im at college tues, thurs and fri and i work alot of the time im not at college (im saving up for a mac laptop)
You know what? I'll just give you what I have already and keep working on it. It's got some bits from the MK Plot faq as summary, sojme notes to myself, and... other stuff. It's kind of a jumble, but eh.
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Art Direction: Heavy Asian influence. Still sunny, and crowded. Only a hint of the nightmare to come.
Setting: Earth, the Mother Realm. Burning bright with power, it's influence spawns echoes in other realms.
Note: It should seem like Cage is the main character
Flashback: to the original Kung Lao fighting Goro.
SHAOLIN TEMPLE, sunny day, exterior view. The dragon Logo is clearly visible.
Tight on KUNG LAO's eyes.
Cut to: Goro's Eyes
Cut to: monk shouting. FIGHT!
They fight.
VO(during fight): Shang Tsung was defeated, but eventually returned with a powerful student, etc. etc.
Mortal Kombat was a Shaolin tournament held years ago in the name
of honor. But one year the evil sorcerer Shang Tsung brought his
apprentice, Prince Goro of the Shokan race to compete. He killed Kung
Lao, the reigning champion and plunged the tournament's good name into
darkness. Every tournament won by Goro meant the weakening of
Earthrealm's barriers. By "unbalancing the furies", Shang Tsung's lord
Shao Kahn would be able to invade Earthrealm and make it his own.
After a spectacular fight, Kung Lao loses to Goro
[Kung Lao is clad in a monk's orange garment, while Goro wears the armor of a prince]
Shang Tsung approaches Kungs Lao's body staring, at him and laughing.Finally he says YOUR SOUL IS MINE.
VO: Goro has been undefeated for 500 years.
1987
Kung Lao, last descendant of the original Kung Lao, the Chosen One, and the brightest hope for the Mother Realm cannot bear the pressure of expectations placed upon him. He leaves the monastery and goes to (Hong Kong or New York?) yeah, this'll take some more thought.
1992. I the same room, in the same temple, Liu Kang is training. It is the Temple of Light.
MASTER GUEN appears in the doorway, saying [in Chinese], Excellent. You have really improved, Liu
Liu Kang: Thanks to your training master Guen
Master Guen: Only few days left to the tournament. Do you think you are ready?
Liu Kang: I've been training all my life to compete in the tournament. I have been waiting for this opportunity since I was a child. Nothing will stop me from winning MORTAL KOMBAT!. Liu Kang bows to his master and leaves for the big city. While he looks alone Master Guen says : Do you think he is ready? RAYDEN appears behind Master Guen and says Believe me old friend, he is, his eyes flashing.
::Then the story goes to California, Hollywood, showing a fight between jhonny cage and some people (kinda like the movie) then after a short fight, it shows that he is only acting in a movie. Then someone came to cage saying that somebody left him something a strange letter he then read it : to the matial artist Johnny cage, it is with great honor that I inform you that you have been chosen to compete in the great tournament .etc then Johnny cge in a funny way says great what? Chosen? What kind of a sick joke is this he then hears a voice behind him : the great tournament, the contest that is held once in a generation, mortal kombat johnny it turn up to be a cage old friend (basically like the movie I really liked the idea) after explaining that the tournament will be johnnys opportunity to prove to the public that his fights are not fake, the guy left the studio and his shape starts to change and turn up to be chang tsung and then disappear. ::
I think maybe Johnny should get a ~mysterious~ letter promising glory and publicity, and a fight for the title of Freestyle World Champion. He covinces his agent, who (obviously) can't get any information on the tournament, that it's a good idea. "It must be legit - look at this expensive paper!". Packing his flashiest fighting clothes and a HANDHELD VIDEO CAMERA, he leaves for San Francisco in his PONTIAC BANSHEE.
Note: Cage will frequently use the camera to document his voctories in the tournament and make smarmy comments, all the while flashing a million-dollar-smile.
Cut to: China in the deep Forest. A temple that has been hidden for centuries: the LIN KUEI temple
The Lin Kuei are a guild of assassins for hire. They combine traditional chi techniques with hi-tech weaponry and gadgets. A client has posted a hit on Shang Tsung (Do you think it could be Kenshi?)
Story Arc 1 MORTAL KOMBAT: THE LAST TOURNAMENT
The Black Dragon is wreaking havoc in the San Francisco(?) bay area, Their destruction is interrupted by the arrival of the USSF. A multiple car chase and gunfight ensues. Kano is separated from the group and starts to run on foot. Weaving around corners, he trips and lands at the feet of a dark and mysterious old man [Tsung] who offers him sanctuary aboard a barge about to leave for parts unknown.
After a furious search, Sonya and co. fail to catch up to the barge, but manage to shoot a tracking device. They retreat to HQ to ready their own boats*. The island could be the stage for an even bigger bust!
Note: The barge should be HUGE
On Tsung's barge, Kang takes pity on the clueless Cage, who believes he's in for a standard, if eccentric tournament. During the week of travel he teaches Cage some rudimentary chi manipulation techniques. This is where Cage learns the SHADOW KICK and POWER BALL. This must be portrayed from Cage's POV. He meets a weird stranger who claims to have superpowers. Stranger still, his claims are true. He tells Cage that all the kombatants are similarly armed! They spend the next couple of days training.
The barge arives at the island, along with several others. The kombatants are given a warm welcome. Accomodation in a palace, a feast, dancing girls...
Note: Never show the size of the island.
Sonya and her team show up hours later, thinking they are unnoticed
Cage later befriends Sonya after she is captured and thrust into the banquet hall. Most of her weapons have been confiscated, but they have not recognized her bracelets for their offensive power: they are portable concentrated sonic beam emitters, and she will put them to good use against the freakish abilities of her opponents.
Lt. Blade, lacking anything better to do, sits down to eat with Cage and Kang.
>Insert humorous scene with Sonya<
The tournament begins the next day.
Scorpion catches up to Sub Zero and defeats him in a dramatic and ostentatious finish - 2 page spread! a painting? This should be the third most impressive scene in the komic! Immediately after, Scorpion faded to ash. He had no reason to face Goro or Shang Tsung. His duty was fulfilled.
An extra must fall into the pit
Sonya is summoned for her match. A stunned and furious Kano is thrust into the arena. They fight. Sonya wins by knockout. Tsung is furious, and has the two of them chained and imprisoned. They are not seen until the finale.
Note: Bo Rai Cho first appears on the Island as a spectator, and secretly helps Liu Kang during the tournament
Liu Kang vs. Goro: Liu Kang believed that he could use Goro's
overconfidence to secure a victory. Luckily for him and the people of
Earthrealm, he did win.
Liu Kang vs. Shang Tsung: Despite Shang Tsung's ability to morph and use
the abilities of other warriors, he still fell to the might of the
Shaolin fighter Liu Kang.
********
Goro vs. Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Kano: This is according to the MK2
comic. The four of them fought at the Pit and the three humans were likely
going to win in the end. But the crumbling of the island separated them and
Raiden could only find Johnny Cage. He flew the movie star away from the
island and dropped him off near a Special Forces boat. Sonya and Kano
found themselves in the forests of Outworld and Goro's whereabouts were
unknown.
*************
- Uh, I don't know about this one...
The Deafeated Shang Tsung flees, taking Sonya Blade and Kano with him, under guard. He causes part of the island to explode, killing any survivors.
Kang and Cage commandeer a barge and sail it to mainland China.
--The Beginning--
Death toll: Sub-zero and countless extras
Assumed Dead: Goro
*perhaps Jax cahases down the rest of the Black dragon, while Sonya goes out to the Island. He succeeds in taking them down, with the help of Hsu Hao. When Sonya doesn't return, he follows the trail into outworld...
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Art Direction: Heavy Asian influence. Still sunny, and crowded. Only a hint of the nightmare to come.
Setting: Earth, the Mother Realm. Burning bright with power, it's influence spawns echoes in other realms.
Note: It should seem like Cage is the main character
Flashback: to the original Kung Lao fighting Goro.
SHAOLIN TEMPLE, sunny day, exterior view. The dragon Logo is clearly visible.
Tight on KUNG LAO's eyes.
Cut to: Goro's Eyes
Cut to: monk shouting. FIGHT!
They fight.
VO(during fight): Shang Tsung was defeated, but eventually returned with a powerful student, etc. etc.
Mortal Kombat was a Shaolin tournament held years ago in the name
of honor. But one year the evil sorcerer Shang Tsung brought his
apprentice, Prince Goro of the Shokan race to compete. He killed Kung
Lao, the reigning champion and plunged the tournament's good name into
darkness. Every tournament won by Goro meant the weakening of
Earthrealm's barriers. By "unbalancing the furies", Shang Tsung's lord
Shao Kahn would be able to invade Earthrealm and make it his own.
After a spectacular fight, Kung Lao loses to Goro
[Kung Lao is clad in a monk's orange garment, while Goro wears the armor of a prince]
Shang Tsung approaches Kungs Lao's body staring, at him and laughing.Finally he says YOUR SOUL IS MINE.
VO: Goro has been undefeated for 500 years.
1987
Kung Lao, last descendant of the original Kung Lao, the Chosen One, and the brightest hope for the Mother Realm cannot bear the pressure of expectations placed upon him. He leaves the monastery and goes to (Hong Kong or New York?) yeah, this'll take some more thought.
1992. I the same room, in the same temple, Liu Kang is training. It is the Temple of Light.
MASTER GUEN appears in the doorway, saying [in Chinese], Excellent. You have really improved, Liu
Liu Kang: Thanks to your training master Guen
Master Guen: Only few days left to the tournament. Do you think you are ready?
Liu Kang: I've been training all my life to compete in the tournament. I have been waiting for this opportunity since I was a child. Nothing will stop me from winning MORTAL KOMBAT!. Liu Kang bows to his master and leaves for the big city. While he looks alone Master Guen says : Do you think he is ready? RAYDEN appears behind Master Guen and says Believe me old friend, he is, his eyes flashing.
::Then the story goes to California, Hollywood, showing a fight between jhonny cage and some people (kinda like the movie) then after a short fight, it shows that he is only acting in a movie. Then someone came to cage saying that somebody left him something a strange letter he then read it : to the matial artist Johnny cage, it is with great honor that I inform you that you have been chosen to compete in the great tournament .etc then Johnny cge in a funny way says great what? Chosen? What kind of a sick joke is this he then hears a voice behind him : the great tournament, the contest that is held once in a generation, mortal kombat johnny it turn up to be a cage old friend (basically like the movie I really liked the idea) after explaining that the tournament will be johnnys opportunity to prove to the public that his fights are not fake, the guy left the studio and his shape starts to change and turn up to be chang tsung and then disappear. ::
I think maybe Johnny should get a ~mysterious~ letter promising glory and publicity, and a fight for the title of Freestyle World Champion. He covinces his agent, who (obviously) can't get any information on the tournament, that it's a good idea. "It must be legit - look at this expensive paper!". Packing his flashiest fighting clothes and a HANDHELD VIDEO CAMERA, he leaves for San Francisco in his PONTIAC BANSHEE.
Note: Cage will frequently use the camera to document his voctories in the tournament and make smarmy comments, all the while flashing a million-dollar-smile.
Cut to: China in the deep Forest. A temple that has been hidden for centuries: the LIN KUEI temple
The Lin Kuei are a guild of assassins for hire. They combine traditional chi techniques with hi-tech weaponry and gadgets. A client has posted a hit on Shang Tsung (Do you think it could be Kenshi?)
Story Arc 1 MORTAL KOMBAT: THE LAST TOURNAMENT
The Black Dragon is wreaking havoc in the San Francisco(?) bay area, Their destruction is interrupted by the arrival of the USSF. A multiple car chase and gunfight ensues. Kano is separated from the group and starts to run on foot. Weaving around corners, he trips and lands at the feet of a dark and mysterious old man [Tsung] who offers him sanctuary aboard a barge about to leave for parts unknown.
After a furious search, Sonya and co. fail to catch up to the barge, but manage to shoot a tracking device. They retreat to HQ to ready their own boats*. The island could be the stage for an even bigger bust!
Note: The barge should be HUGE
On Tsung's barge, Kang takes pity on the clueless Cage, who believes he's in for a standard, if eccentric tournament. During the week of travel he teaches Cage some rudimentary chi manipulation techniques. This is where Cage learns the SHADOW KICK and POWER BALL. This must be portrayed from Cage's POV. He meets a weird stranger who claims to have superpowers. Stranger still, his claims are true. He tells Cage that all the kombatants are similarly armed! They spend the next couple of days training.
The barge arives at the island, along with several others. The kombatants are given a warm welcome. Accomodation in a palace, a feast, dancing girls...
Note: Never show the size of the island.
Sonya and her team show up hours later, thinking they are unnoticed
Cage later befriends Sonya after she is captured and thrust into the banquet hall. Most of her weapons have been confiscated, but they have not recognized her bracelets for their offensive power: they are portable concentrated sonic beam emitters, and she will put them to good use against the freakish abilities of her opponents.
Lt. Blade, lacking anything better to do, sits down to eat with Cage and Kang.
>Insert humorous scene with Sonya<
The tournament begins the next day.
Scorpion catches up to Sub Zero and defeats him in a dramatic and ostentatious finish - 2 page spread! a painting? This should be the third most impressive scene in the komic! Immediately after, Scorpion faded to ash. He had no reason to face Goro or Shang Tsung. His duty was fulfilled.
An extra must fall into the pit
Sonya is summoned for her match. A stunned and furious Kano is thrust into the arena. They fight. Sonya wins by knockout. Tsung is furious, and has the two of them chained and imprisoned. They are not seen until the finale.
Note: Bo Rai Cho first appears on the Island as a spectator, and secretly helps Liu Kang during the tournament
Liu Kang vs. Goro: Liu Kang believed that he could use Goro's
overconfidence to secure a victory. Luckily for him and the people of
Earthrealm, he did win.
Liu Kang vs. Shang Tsung: Despite Shang Tsung's ability to morph and use
the abilities of other warriors, he still fell to the might of the
Shaolin fighter Liu Kang.
********
Goro vs. Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade and Kano: This is according to the MK2
comic. The four of them fought at the Pit and the three humans were likely
going to win in the end. But the crumbling of the island separated them and
Raiden could only find Johnny Cage. He flew the movie star away from the
island and dropped him off near a Special Forces boat. Sonya and Kano
found themselves in the forests of Outworld and Goro's whereabouts were
unknown.
*************
- Uh, I don't know about this one...
The Deafeated Shang Tsung flees, taking Sonya Blade and Kano with him, under guard. He causes part of the island to explode, killing any survivors.
Kang and Cage commandeer a barge and sail it to mainland China.
--The Beginning--
Death toll: Sub-zero and countless extras
Assumed Dead: Goro
*perhaps Jax cahases down the rest of the Black dragon, while Sonya goes out to the Island. He succeeds in taking them down, with the help of Hsu Hao. When Sonya doesn't return, he follows the trail into outworld...
wow draconus, I can see that you've put a lot of work into this. which is good, because this is going to be a lot of work for me also! i will take what you've made here and begin concept drawings of the locations and characters. feel free to make additions and suggestions,
Here's my first submission for Kano.

I can't believe I just did that thing so small! It's only 8.5"x4", and it's inked with an 005 Micron. Somehow, at 1:23 AM, my hand was steady enough with the smallest pen I've got to do that. Go figure. But yeah, that'll also be the reason for the multiple flaws. I'm amazed it turned out as good as it was, at that size. So I apologize for that. Also, I'm not that good with guns. And it's late, so I'm running off at the keyboard. -Draconus out

I can't believe I just did that thing so small! It's only 8.5"x4", and it's inked with an 005 Micron. Somehow, at 1:23 AM, my hand was steady enough with the smallest pen I've got to do that. Go figure. But yeah, that'll also be the reason for the multiple flaws. I'm amazed it turned out as good as it was, at that size. So I apologize for that. Also, I'm not that good with guns. And it's late, so I'm running off at the keyboard. -Draconus out
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i work at a supermarket (an english one, highly doubt you would have heard of it) and i am doing a BTEC National Diploma (i think its only an english thing - its an nvq) in Media Production in which i will learn about basically all facets of the media industry.
just wanna show something off here, see what you guys think. as a task in one of my lectures (i have a whole lecture in page layout) i have to design a teaser poster for a fictitious film. As soon as my lecturer told us the task i knew what i wanted to do. the teaser is for "Snake-Eyes" (of GiJoe fame if you dont know)
thats like the first version of the final teaser, im gonna tweak with it alot. but the silly thing is, we have about a month to do it and i did it in an hour and a half last night
just wanna show something off here, see what you guys think. as a task in one of my lectures (i have a whole lecture in page layout) i have to design a teaser poster for a fictitious film. As soon as my lecturer told us the task i knew what i wanted to do. the teaser is for "Snake-Eyes" (of GiJoe fame if you dont know)

thats like the first version of the final teaser, im gonna tweak with it alot. but the silly thing is, we have about a month to do it and i did it in an hour and a half last night
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well, I got an e-mail from the inker, and he wants me to share some work. I'm gonna tell you I'm not too good at drawing, but I'm awesome at making up stories! I'll post an idea a lil' later.
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ok im getting a little confused on who is on the project and so on.
Ether is definitely the penciller
Strugler is the storyline writer
Draconus is the scriptwriter? (as in translating struglers story into a script)
Im atleast cover colourist.
Is draconus the inker??
so basically, if we have a penciller we need to stop talking about pencilling and get onto the other sections that arent finalised
Ether is definitely the penciller
Strugler is the storyline writer
Draconus is the scriptwriter? (as in translating struglers story into a script)
Im atleast cover colourist.
Is draconus the inker??
so basically, if we have a penciller we need to stop talking about pencilling and get onto the other sections that arent finalised
Ooh! Make us a teaser!
Officially I am the inker, but it seems after chatting with strugler about the project I am helping with co-writing the script, character concepts... I wear many hats. This is a great projetc; I'll do whatever I can.
I'm not sure what you mean. Are we really focusing on pencilling that much? And what sections did you have in mind?
d_s, check PMs.
-Oh, and I don't suppose you live in London?
Officially I am the inker, but it seems after chatting with strugler about the project I am helping with co-writing the script, character concepts... I wear many hats. This is a great projetc; I'll do whatever I can.
the_dark_spectre Wrote: so basically, if we have a penciller we need to stop talking about pencilling and get onto the other sections that arent finalised |
I'm not sure what you mean. Are we really focusing on pencilling that much? And what sections did you have in mind?
d_s, check PMs.
-Oh, and I don't suppose you live in London?
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im just getting quite confused when people are posting their drawings.
and no, i live about an hour away from london
and no, i live about an hour away from london
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actually dont worry about that thing, ive got an old ezboard ill dig up later on (im going to work in about 10 minutes for a couple of hours) and edit, so ignore that shitty board i posted.
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