Brodeur Wrote: Cool stories guys, all this could be made into one whole book someday..it'd be great. Keep it up guys. Nice work Tazblade. It's a different scenario compared to the others..it gets a bit personal, but it's cool. You get to know much more about them..keep it up. slim3ddi3g Wrote: So sorry Rabid, to t3ll you th3 truth, I'm used to writing lik3 this. I use a 3 inst3ad of an E. I'v3 gott3n us3d to writing like this for a long tim3. Hey slim.... when you mentioned that...in a blink of a second i wondered...your name would be slimed dieg then... i guess it'd be better off calling ya slimed then. Interestin...never knew that... |
Yeah...I like to write emotional stuff, that let's you see a bit of another side to these fierce warriors. Glad you liked it!
Name-Siduru
appearance-Siduru is a young male.He has a dark complection,he wears a red and black outfit with a medallion attached too his chest.He wears a black and red bandana.
age-27
occupation-Silent assassinator
weapon-He generates a weapon using the power of his medallion
fighting styles-pigua,hapkido and a style that can
give the attacks of any fighting styles by the power of his medallion.
birthplace-It's unknown where Siduru is born,not even his allies knows where.
1.special move-His first special move is called,ernergy draining.He will grab his enemy and drain them of there power to execute a powerful attack.
2.teleport slam-He learned the teleport slam from his master Mirou.Mirou thought him when he was just a kid but now he can do it by using the powers of the medallion.
fire ermerges-This move can only be execute by using the energy steal move first.When Siduru executes this attack it will take half of the opponent's life points.
1.fatality-Siduru runs up to his opponent and start morphing into all different characters by the power of him medallion and doing a combo at the same time on the opponent and in the end the person explodes into pieces.
2.fatality2-When finish him comes up Siduru disappears for 3 seconds then reappear with five clones of himself,the opponent will stop spinning his head and start looking at all of them with a scared look,the army of Siduru will start draining his power while others rips his body apart and the opponent dies in pain.
Hari Kiri-He morphs into Shang Tsung and give up all his souls!
Stage fatality-Siduru teleport and throw his opponent off a cliff or in a deathtrap.


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firstly...this is not where you submit characters.
second...even if..the tournament has already begun
third....intersting character...
fourth...kinda cheap and needs more work...
fifth....you must be bored.
thanks for trying.
Nice to see Sarakia make her presence felt.
I think it's a great honour to meet Sarakia.
Congratulations tyrant-cenobite...
wondering...did you forget to enter the 2nd tournament?
second...even if..the tournament has already begun
third....intersting character...
fourth...kinda cheap and needs more work...
fifth....you must be bored.
thanks for trying.
Nice to see Sarakia make her presence felt.
I think it's a great honour to meet Sarakia.
Congratulations tyrant-cenobite...
wondering...did you forget to enter the 2nd tournament?


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probably cause you didn't put enough effort in making the character.
So, you just thought of using previous game ideas and incorporating it in. p.s. don't take it seriously bro..just work on your character and maybe you can enter in the next tournament.
So, you just thought of using previous game ideas and incorporating it in. p.s. don't take it seriously bro..just work on your character and maybe you can enter in the next tournament.
Ok guys....let's stop this right here before either of you get angry and a flame war erupts in my thread. Ok? Please.
Siduu: It was an honest mistake..the titles of the threads are very similar...perhaps you can develop your character some more and submit them for the third Tourney. This one is turning out to be a success..so the chances of a third are pretty good right Brodeur?
Siduu: It was an honest mistake..the titles of the threads are very similar...perhaps you can develop your character some more and submit them for the third Tourney. This one is turning out to be a success..so the chances of a third are pretty good right Brodeur?


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LOL..Thanks Tazblade.
Don't worry about me getting angry.
I know whose thread this is.
I wouldn't want anythin happenin.
Just didn't know what to say..good luck with your character Siduu, i guess you might not have noticed the topic properly.
Yes.definitely a sucess. The 3rd one..i wonder how much advanced it can get..can't wait.
hey didn't mean it to say it the way it looks..u know when all of us are bored..sometimes we just use premade ideas...don't blame ya..but anyways..sorry dude..peace.
Don't worry about me getting angry.
I know whose thread this is.
I wouldn't want anythin happenin.
Just didn't know what to say..good luck with your character Siduu, i guess you might not have noticed the topic properly.
Yes.definitely a sucess. The 3rd one..i wonder how much advanced it can get..can't wait.
hey didn't mean it to say it the way it looks..u know when all of us are bored..sometimes we just use premade ideas...don't blame ya..but anyways..sorry dude..peace.


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TomTaz Wrote: Courtyard: Unable to get Ravage's words out of her mind, Gabrielle decides she has to talk to Ryoko about Hatsuma. She is confused, she doesn't really know why she has feelings for Hatsuma...however she cannot deny that she does. A new piece of her heart breaks everytime she must listen to Hatsuma's screams in her head. Why does he have to suffer so? Can she not help him in some way? As she rounds the corner that leads to the Northwest part of the courtyard she scans the area for any sign of Ryoko. She spots her under an apple tree talking with Ghost. As she slowly makes her way over to them, she considers Ryoko's reaction to her news. 'Will she hate me? I can't believe that she would, but she views Hatsuma as evil. I tried to ignore it, but i saw her face when my feelings about Hatsuma were revealed to her...hell, I could practically hear her heart breaking. I think the only thing keeping her calm right now is the fact that it didn't come straight from my mouth. Now that it will...I'm scared as hell! But I have no one else to talk to.' These are the thoughts that Gabrielle wrestles with on her path across the courtyard. Ghost: "Hello Gabrielle, how are you feeling today?" Ryoko: "Hey Bri!" Gabrielle: "I'm doing ok, I guess. Thanks for asking." She says managing a weak smile. "Ryoko, could I have a word with you in private please?" Ryoko is instantly stiff, some part of her knows what this is about, she knows it's not something she wants to hear. "Um, sure. Collin would you excuse us a moment?" Ghost "Of course. I will speak with you later." He bows to both ladies and leaves. Ryoko turns back to Gabrielle trying very hard to maintain a smile. "So what's on your mind Bri?" Gabrielle Takes a deep breath and let's it out very slowly. "I-It's about Hatsuma." The smile fades from Ryoko's face, and she looks hard at Gabrielle. "What about Hatsuma? He is of no concern to us." Gabrielle stares in disbelief at what she's hearing. "He IS of concern to me! I..I think I love him!" Ryoko's eyes open wide, and her mouth is formed into a nasty sneer. "What did you say? A-Are you telling me that evil Bastard was right about you and that filth!" Gabrielle looks away from Ryoko, her eyes starting to fill up...then she turns back to her with the most defiant look she can muster. "Yes! And he is not filth! YOU DON'T KNOW HIM!" Ryoko starts to pace. "OH AND I SUPPOSE YOU DO!? Gabrielle It's been barely four weeks since all this started! And you've hardly been around him. He almost knocked you through a wall do you remember that? Is that love? IS IT?!" Gabrielle stands in front of Ryoko so she is directly in her face now. "Hardly been around him?! When I was held captive by Sensui...Hatsuma was there all the time! But you wouldn't know that would you? Would you?! BECAUSE YOU WEREN'T!!" Gabrielle is crying now. "Gabri.." Gabrielle puts her hands up "NO! And as far as him hitting me goes, I feel I have to remind you of two things. One, I attacked him first remember? Two, He could have done much worse! He held back because it was me! Neither of us understands these feelings! I have no idea why I am drawn to him, and he is just as confused. We are so connected now that I hear him EVERY time he screams in his prison. Do you have any idea what that's like?! You are...no..were my best friend Ryoko, I thought that I could talk to you about this because it's ripping me up inside. I see differently now...you're never going to come down from your pedestal are you? You know what you are Ryoko? Your nothing but a glorified snob! The world is Not all black and white! There are grey areas! It's time you realized that. For your information it's not Hatsuma's fault that he is the way he is...Sensui did that to him, and in one of the worst ways imaginable. You don't know what he's been through! So don't you DARE sit up on your high horse and look down on him and with your judgments!" With that Gabrielle runs off crying uncontrollably. Ryoko wants so badly to go after her, tears forming in her own eyes. But she thinks better of it...Gabrielle needs space right now. Ryoko:"Have I really become so heartless? So blind? How could I have missed it before?" Sensui: Steps out of the shadows Chuckling. "You know you'll never get her back now right? She'll never trust you again. And do you wanna know what the most delicious part of that is? Without you, it'll be all TOO easy to make her my slave as Hatsuma is." Ryoko: "You so much as go near her, and I will rip out your spine and wear it as a necklace! Do you hear me?!" Sensui just laughs and disappears, his evil laugh echoing in the courtyard. *Whew* I know it's been a while since I've written for the story, sorry about that guys...hope you like the new addition. |
Dude! That's killer. Great story, I like how you actually went back to teh begining of the story and brought up some events. Ok, so to continue the story....lets start off with the other half.
-Dragon Chamber-
Hatsuma has suffered greatly. His body is covered in blood from head to toe. His clothes ripped and his will fading he hangs there as a example to all who interfere in the Mortal Kobat.
Hatsuma"So, this is the way I die? Hmph, doesn't surprise me. After all I've done, I desreve to die slowly and painfully."
Hatsuma closes his eyes and images start running through his mind. He remembers what he has gone through in these past four years. His first image is that of Iayka, his first love, and how her remembers spilling her blood on the ground, not being able to stop it. The fear in her eyes tears at his heart. He's then shown an image of Saika. He sees how they grew up in their village and how close they were. He remembers giving her the first Lotus Blossom of the summer. As well as the last time he would ever see her of his own free will. The same terror in her eyes as were in Iyaka's appear as she was naked on the ground inches from death.
Hatsuma"Stop it! Cut it out! Why...why am I seeing all of this?"
A third image appears, and it is of Gabrielle.
Hatsuma"Please no. No more"
He relives their battle in the Higher Plane. Again the same fear in Gabrielles eyes is reflected back at Hatsuma.
Hatsuma"Why is it that every time I care for someone, they always get hurt, or worse? First Iyaka, the Saika and finally her."
A final image appears, it is of Senui. He remembers when he first touched the Black Chaos, and Sensui's voice filled his head. He feels the pain and torment that Sensui felt so long ago. The dying image of Tsunami, and the final image of Ryoko as she weilds her dagger with Tsunami's bllod staining the blade. He sees how Sensui's insabordination and curse for the love of blood, and carnage had damned him to the Netherealm.
Hatsuma"Just kill me now and get it over with. I know that I'm going to die in the presence of those who are important to me. I won't give you that satisfaction. If this Sennoku spell works how it should, than I will take my own life to end this."
The Dragon King walks into the room, with a sinister look on his face and an evil grin.
Dragon King"Such bravery, or is it cowardness? Do wish to die to end your own torment or to end it for those you care about? I won't let that happen."
Hatsuma laughs histarically as he looks up from under his brow with a grin. He spits in the Dragon Kings face.
Hatsuma"You know that if I die there will be nothing to stop Sensui from unleashing all sorts of hell on your sorry ass don't you?"
Dragon King thrusts his hand into the cell an into Hatsuma's chest, squeesing his heart.
Hatsuma lets out a deafining scream which fills the castle as well as the courtyard outside.
Hatsuma's lungs fill with blood as well as his mouth. Blood spills from out of his wound. The Dragon King releases his grip on Hatsuma's heart as he extracts his hand from out of his chest.
Dragon King"What an awesome scream. Your lord can't save you. He will die in this tournament, I'll make sure of that."
Hatsuma, who should be dead lifts his head as blood drips from his mouth smiles again.
Hatsuma"Go ahead, kill me now and give me peace. But, in doing so Sensui will rip you to shredds. Keep me alive and I'll end my own life, thus transffering my power to my master, giving him more than he already needs an lessening his chances of loosing the tournament. Either way, kidnapping me was what screwed you over."
Dragon King"Will you end your life and commence the suffering of Gabrielle anew?"
Hatsuma's eyes open as he realizes this fact."Don't you dare touch her. If you so much as get near her, it will come back to haunt you for the rest of your days! You hear me?!"
The Dragon King grabs Hatsuma's head and pulls him close.
Dragon King"This chamber is the only thing supporting your miserbale existance. With out you would've been dead long ago. Not even the Black Chaos would be able to save you. So, it appears that for now atleast, we're at a stalemate."
The Dragon King turns around and is about to leave when he suddenly stops.
Dragon King"Oh I almost foregot." He quickly lunges his hand into Hatsuma's chest again and squeeses his heart."Now let me hear the delicious scream again." He applies more pressure to the heart to the point where it ruptures.
Hatsuma lets out a blood curdling scream as his eyes blank out from the pain. Blood gushes out of his mouth and down his body as it creates a pool at the bottom of the cell.
The Dragon King smiles and releases Hatsuma's heart with a grin.
Dragon King"Excellent." He turns to his shaman as they kneel to their lord.
Dragon King"I want this example to be present at the next match, cell and all. Is that understood?"
Shamen"Yes, my lord."
-Courtyard-
Sensui is fueled with rage which unleashes a darker power than he already weilds. In another part of the courtyard, Gabrielle is crying on her knees as Ryoko observes from a far, her heart aching for her still dear friend.
Ryoko"I can't stand to see her like this. Why does she care about that filth? It makes no sense."
Ravage of all people(for lack of a better term) along with Ghost approach her.
Ryoko"Yes, Ghost. What is it and what are you doing with that thing by your side?"
Ghost"So it's true, what Sensui said. She has feeling for his general."
Ryoko"Yes, she actually loves him. How can that be?"
Ravage"Love is illogical. Why organics fall in love does not compute."
Ghost"He has a point. It doesn't have to make sense. It..just does."
Another one of Hatsuma's screams echos through the palace grounds.
Gabrielle puts her head on her knees and clenches fists."Please, make it stop."


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Just incase, me and lordcobra2 are going to hide in the bombshelter, anyone else is free to join us.LOL.


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Brodeur Wrote: Cool stories guys, all this could be made into one whole book someday..it'd be great. Keep it up guys. Nice work Tazblade. It's a different scenario compared to the others..it gets a bit personal, but it's cool. You get to know much more about them..keep it up. slim3ddi3g Wrote: So sorry Rabid, to t3ll you th3 truth, I'm used to writing lik3 this. I use a 3 inst3ad of an E. I'v3 gott3n us3d to writing like this for a long tim3. Hey slim.... when you mentioned that...in a blink of a second i wondered...your name would be slimed dieg then... i guess it'd be better off calling ya slimed then. Interestin...never knew that... |
H3y Brod3ur call m3 what you wish. I tak3 no off3ns3, and about th3 book thing, I had off3r3d to do it. You know, actually going ov3r th3 entir3 stories and edit th3m. I alr3ady hav3 ev3ry singl3 story copi3d to my hard driv3. I'm thinking of r3writing th3 entir3 thing, using ev3ryon3's stori3s of cours3. And just fill in th3 empty spac3s so it can b3com3 an actual book. I had also ask3d for lots of drawings, sk3tch3s, etc.


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I think i need some yoga...
or a vacation..
i've been awake for 20 hours..and soon it'll be at least 31 hours..
can't wait to see your book, don't mind me, but i'd like to make a book as well for the tournament as easy access with images and such, it'll be cool.
Yawns..Tazblade, got a bucket of water handy?
Congrats with the story Taz.
or a vacation..
i've been awake for 20 hours..and soon it'll be at least 31 hours..
can't wait to see your book, don't mind me, but i'd like to make a book as well for the tournament as easy access with images and such, it'll be cool.
Yawns..Tazblade, got a bucket of water handy?
Congrats with the story Taz.
Brodeur Wrote: I think i need some yoga... or a vacation.. i've been awake for 20 hours..and soon it'll be at least 31 hours.. can't wait to see your book, don't mind me, but i'd like to make a book as well for the tournament as easy access with images and such, it'll be cool. Yawns..Tazblade, got a bucket of water handy? Congrats with the story Taz. |
LOL Sure man, *throws Bucket of water on Brodeur*
Better?
And thanks.

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TomTaz Wrote: Thanks man! Hopefully the judges will get back with who won the match between Ghost and Ryoko...so we can get going with it again. I think Rabid is rather anxiuos to get he fight up. |
Yes,I need to get it up,two great characters,a hopefully great battle.

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Well here we go,finally.Hard to write these things.
The Dragon King looks over the courtyard,his guards roll up a cage with a bloody Hatsuma in it.
Gabrielle "Hatsuma!"
Hatsuma looks up at Gabrielle and smiles
Gabrielle "Let him go!"
Dragon King "Quite,he isnt going anywhere."
Gabrielle "Screw you Dragon King!"
Dragon King "Our next fight is Ryoko vs. Ghost,the fight will start...NOW!"
Ghost nods at Ryoko,as a sign of respect,Ryoko does the same back.They circle eachother as they get into their fighting stances,Ghost in Mantis and Ryoko in Ninjitsu.
Ryoko thinks "Could I be wrong about Hatsuma could I..."
Ghost charges at Ryoko before she can finish thinking,unleashing a combo,but Ryoko blocks all the shots and fights back coming in with a combo with lightning speed hitting with each hit.Ghost tumbles backwards falling to his back.
Ghost "An honour."
Ryoko "Indeed."
Ghost jumps to his feet and creates a solid clone of himself,they begin to punch and kick at Ryoko continously until both of them kick her hard in the chest sending her flying into a wall,Ghost charges towards her but Ryoko uses her flash ability to temporarily blind him,Ghost stumbles around,feeling for Ryoko.But as he gets close she teleports onto the courtyard gate and comes down with a fierce flying kick to the face.
Ryoko "My turn."
Ryoko spreads her arms,forming many versions of her self,they all charge up for an Aurora Blast,Ghost looks confused,not knowing who is the real Ryoko,all of the Aurora beams are fired and create a very bright light,while all this is happening the Ryoko runs in and slices at Ghost with her dagger,he bends over,holding his abdomen in pain,as blood flows.Ryoko runs to a wall and springs off of it,coming back at Ghost and hitting him with a big kick to the face,knocking him backwards,she runs to him as he grabs her and throws her into a stone wall,breaking it.
Ghost "Impressive...but not good enough."
Ghost walks over and steps through the broken wall to see no Ryoko.He looks around,only seeing a waterfall infront of him.Ryoko jumps down from the top of a wall and hits Ghost in the back of the head with her fists,Ghost falls to the ground and slowly gets back up,Ryoko immediately begins punching at kicking at him but he blocks,she tries one last kick,it connects to his abdomen sending him closer to the edge of the falls.She comes to him but he quickly hits her with his arm in the throat.She begins to stand then turns around and is quickly kicked in the nose,blood begins to poor from her nose.
Ryoko "My nose!You didnt have to kick me so damn hard!"
She pounces on him,sending both of them over the side of the waterfall,while they fall,Ryoko teleports to the side away from the rushing water where Ghost is left as he plunges into the water with great force.Ryoko looks on in disbelief as Ghost jumps out from the water and lands on the dry the land.Both of them are standing there bleeding.
Ryoko "Alright?"
Ghost nods.
Ryoko "We must go through with this."
Ryoko runs at ghost and tries to kick him,however he catches her,then slams her into a nearby wall,then again into a tree,then rock,then tree,the rock one last time and then he charges at the tree as both he and Ryoko go through it,breaking the tree in half.They both fall to the ground,in immense pain,they begin to stand slowly.Ghosts body falls to the ground,Ryoko runs up to him,seeing if he is okay,however is attacked from behind,Ghost is standing behind her,in spirit form,he begins to punch and kick her for a good amount of time until Ryoko grabs his leg and slams him,the spirit disappears as Ghost stands back up.
Ryoko "What was that?"
Ghost "Im a Ghost,remember?"
Ryoko not knowing what had just happened,turns around,but is sucked into a tornado of lost souls as her energy is sucked out of her,she soon drops to the ground hard.Ryoko gets to her feet,to have Ghost throw the Raknar at her,however she bridges backwards to avoid it,she hears a type of howling sound behind her and hits the blade.She uses her spectrum blast on the Raknar and Ghost,the Raknar falls along with Ghost.
Ghost "My Raknar!And me!"
Ryoko "Gotta do what you gotta do."
Ghost punches Ryoko in the face,causing her to bleed more then she was before,Ryoko gets an angry look on her face and charges at Ghost,but the anger gets the better of her as she is tossed to the side.
Ghost "Control the anger."
Ryoko "I know..."
Ghost begins to chant and his hands glow as he fires the energy at Ryoko,stealing some life from her,he then runs at her and tackles her to the ground and begins to punch her.Ryoko quickly tosses him off.
Ryoko "What was that for?"
Ghost "I dont know what came over me."
Ryoko "Remember,control the anger."
The sun suddenly begins to rise to the highest point it can get at.Ryoko begins to have a faint glow.she begins to charge her hands,Ghost looking on in wonder,she releases a huge beam sending Ghost flying towards a wall,then he is hit again,by an unmoved Ryoko.
-The Courtyard-
A guard walks up to Hatsuma and begins to talk to him.
Guard "You have your love down there,watching you,and neither of you can do anything."
The guard stabs Hatsuma,he lets out another scream.The Dragon King looks over at the guard.
Dragon King "Dont touch him without my permission,understand?"
Guard "Y-y-y-yes sir."
Gabrielle stares up at the king.
Gabrielle "Leave Hatsuma alone!"
Hatsuma yells back "Do not worry,I am fine."
-Battle Scene-
Ghost stands up,and once again,creates a copy of himself.He and the copy attack Ryoko,hitting her with a mass combo,Ryoko is beginning to sway as the two stop,until both of them uppercut Ryoko at the same time.Ryoko is sent high into the air as Ghost uses a tornado of lost ghosts to violently whip her around.The tornado stops as Ryoko is sent plummeting 100 feet to the ground.Ghost walks up to a nearly dead Ryoko.
Dragon King "Finish Her!"
Ghost stares up to the king,and then reaches down to pick up Ryoko.
Dragon King "Fine,Ghost wins..."
Ghost picks up Ryoko but then throws her back down,a look of confusion comes over Ryoko's face.
Ryoko "Ghost,what are you doing?"
Ghost reaches for Ryoko again but grabs her by the throat and lifts her,she begins to struggle.
Dragon King "Hahahaha,you havent figured it out yet,Ghost is mine now,I control the dead.And that is what he is,nothing more than a soul.He is dead,and you cant do a thing about it."
Ryoko "Screw you!I know Ghost isnt like this,he can fight it."
Sabre walks up behind Ryoko and stares Ghost in the eyes.
Sabre "Let her go..."
Ghost drops her,she falls to her knees,as Sabre looks as if to help her up,he stabs her with the thrice dragon,he stares at the wound,bleeding as he tears out the blade.He smiles.
Ryoko "What has happened to you two?"
Neither answer,as they pick her up then throw her onto the ground,they begin to kick and stomp on Ryoko as Gabrielle runs in.
Gabrielle "Stop!"
Sabre and Ghost look towards her.Then continue to stop,but there is nothing there.They see Ryoko running away.They focus on Gabrielle again,who is also running.
Sabre "Cowards..."
Ghost "Come and fight!"
Sabre and Ghost continue to look,this time,watching Ryoko run away.
Ghost "We will get her.We WILL kill her."
The Dragon King looks over the courtyard,his guards roll up a cage with a bloody Hatsuma in it.
Gabrielle "Hatsuma!"
Hatsuma looks up at Gabrielle and smiles
Gabrielle "Let him go!"
Dragon King "Quite,he isnt going anywhere."
Gabrielle "Screw you Dragon King!"
Dragon King "Our next fight is Ryoko vs. Ghost,the fight will start...NOW!"
Ghost nods at Ryoko,as a sign of respect,Ryoko does the same back.They circle eachother as they get into their fighting stances,Ghost in Mantis and Ryoko in Ninjitsu.
Ryoko thinks "Could I be wrong about Hatsuma could I..."
Ghost charges at Ryoko before she can finish thinking,unleashing a combo,but Ryoko blocks all the shots and fights back coming in with a combo with lightning speed hitting with each hit.Ghost tumbles backwards falling to his back.
Ghost "An honour."
Ryoko "Indeed."
Ghost jumps to his feet and creates a solid clone of himself,they begin to punch and kick at Ryoko continously until both of them kick her hard in the chest sending her flying into a wall,Ghost charges towards her but Ryoko uses her flash ability to temporarily blind him,Ghost stumbles around,feeling for Ryoko.But as he gets close she teleports onto the courtyard gate and comes down with a fierce flying kick to the face.
Ryoko "My turn."
Ryoko spreads her arms,forming many versions of her self,they all charge up for an Aurora Blast,Ghost looks confused,not knowing who is the real Ryoko,all of the Aurora beams are fired and create a very bright light,while all this is happening the Ryoko runs in and slices at Ghost with her dagger,he bends over,holding his abdomen in pain,as blood flows.Ryoko runs to a wall and springs off of it,coming back at Ghost and hitting him with a big kick to the face,knocking him backwards,she runs to him as he grabs her and throws her into a stone wall,breaking it.
Ghost "Impressive...but not good enough."
Ghost walks over and steps through the broken wall to see no Ryoko.He looks around,only seeing a waterfall infront of him.Ryoko jumps down from the top of a wall and hits Ghost in the back of the head with her fists,Ghost falls to the ground and slowly gets back up,Ryoko immediately begins punching at kicking at him but he blocks,she tries one last kick,it connects to his abdomen sending him closer to the edge of the falls.She comes to him but he quickly hits her with his arm in the throat.She begins to stand then turns around and is quickly kicked in the nose,blood begins to poor from her nose.
Ryoko "My nose!You didnt have to kick me so damn hard!"
She pounces on him,sending both of them over the side of the waterfall,while they fall,Ryoko teleports to the side away from the rushing water where Ghost is left as he plunges into the water with great force.Ryoko looks on in disbelief as Ghost jumps out from the water and lands on the dry the land.Both of them are standing there bleeding.
Ryoko "Alright?"
Ghost nods.
Ryoko "We must go through with this."
Ryoko runs at ghost and tries to kick him,however he catches her,then slams her into a nearby wall,then again into a tree,then rock,then tree,the rock one last time and then he charges at the tree as both he and Ryoko go through it,breaking the tree in half.They both fall to the ground,in immense pain,they begin to stand slowly.Ghosts body falls to the ground,Ryoko runs up to him,seeing if he is okay,however is attacked from behind,Ghost is standing behind her,in spirit form,he begins to punch and kick her for a good amount of time until Ryoko grabs his leg and slams him,the spirit disappears as Ghost stands back up.
Ryoko "What was that?"
Ghost "Im a Ghost,remember?"
Ryoko not knowing what had just happened,turns around,but is sucked into a tornado of lost souls as her energy is sucked out of her,she soon drops to the ground hard.Ryoko gets to her feet,to have Ghost throw the Raknar at her,however she bridges backwards to avoid it,she hears a type of howling sound behind her and hits the blade.She uses her spectrum blast on the Raknar and Ghost,the Raknar falls along with Ghost.
Ghost "My Raknar!And me!"
Ryoko "Gotta do what you gotta do."
Ghost punches Ryoko in the face,causing her to bleed more then she was before,Ryoko gets an angry look on her face and charges at Ghost,but the anger gets the better of her as she is tossed to the side.
Ghost "Control the anger."
Ryoko "I know..."
Ghost begins to chant and his hands glow as he fires the energy at Ryoko,stealing some life from her,he then runs at her and tackles her to the ground and begins to punch her.Ryoko quickly tosses him off.
Ryoko "What was that for?"
Ghost "I dont know what came over me."
Ryoko "Remember,control the anger."
The sun suddenly begins to rise to the highest point it can get at.Ryoko begins to have a faint glow.she begins to charge her hands,Ghost looking on in wonder,she releases a huge beam sending Ghost flying towards a wall,then he is hit again,by an unmoved Ryoko.
-The Courtyard-
A guard walks up to Hatsuma and begins to talk to him.
Guard "You have your love down there,watching you,and neither of you can do anything."
The guard stabs Hatsuma,he lets out another scream.The Dragon King looks over at the guard.
Dragon King "Dont touch him without my permission,understand?"
Guard "Y-y-y-yes sir."
Gabrielle stares up at the king.
Gabrielle "Leave Hatsuma alone!"
Hatsuma yells back "Do not worry,I am fine."
-Battle Scene-
Ghost stands up,and once again,creates a copy of himself.He and the copy attack Ryoko,hitting her with a mass combo,Ryoko is beginning to sway as the two stop,until both of them uppercut Ryoko at the same time.Ryoko is sent high into the air as Ghost uses a tornado of lost ghosts to violently whip her around.The tornado stops as Ryoko is sent plummeting 100 feet to the ground.Ghost walks up to a nearly dead Ryoko.
Dragon King "Finish Her!"
Ghost stares up to the king,and then reaches down to pick up Ryoko.
Dragon King "Fine,Ghost wins..."
Ghost picks up Ryoko but then throws her back down,a look of confusion comes over Ryoko's face.
Ryoko "Ghost,what are you doing?"
Ghost reaches for Ryoko again but grabs her by the throat and lifts her,she begins to struggle.
Dragon King "Hahahaha,you havent figured it out yet,Ghost is mine now,I control the dead.And that is what he is,nothing more than a soul.He is dead,and you cant do a thing about it."
Ryoko "Screw you!I know Ghost isnt like this,he can fight it."
Sabre walks up behind Ryoko and stares Ghost in the eyes.
Sabre "Let her go..."
Ghost drops her,she falls to her knees,as Sabre looks as if to help her up,he stabs her with the thrice dragon,he stares at the wound,bleeding as he tears out the blade.He smiles.
Ryoko "What has happened to you two?"
Neither answer,as they pick her up then throw her onto the ground,they begin to kick and stomp on Ryoko as Gabrielle runs in.
Gabrielle "Stop!"
Sabre and Ghost look towards her.Then continue to stop,but there is nothing there.They see Ryoko running away.They focus on Gabrielle again,who is also running.
Sabre "Cowards..."
Ghost "Come and fight!"
Sabre and Ghost continue to look,this time,watching Ryoko run away.
Ghost "We will get her.We WILL kill her."


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Nice touch Rabid, i enjoyed reading it.
I'll give some more feedback later.
I'll give some more feedback later.


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V3ry w3ll don3 ind33d Rabid. I too enjoy3d it. Lov3d th3 outcom3.


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Thanks,didnt know if people would like the fight or not.


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(back in Shao Kahn's Lair)
(Noob comes slowly up to Shao Kahn, who is sitting in a newly erected throne, quietly walking almost in fear)
Noob- There is something I must tell you, my lord.
(Shao Kahn turns to Noob and stands)
Kahn- I trust I am not going to have to kill you for this, Noob.
Noob- (noob faulters a bit then speaks again) Its about Vandon, there is something....different about him from the time you dropped him into the Netherrealm.
Shao Kahn- (sits down) I'd imagine he'd have a bit of a vendetta against me. What is he not as cheerful as he used to be?
Noob- No... he is stronger... perhaps as powerful as you and the Dragon King if not more so. His power has even been put as a threat to the Demi God, Sensui.
Shao Kahn- I am aware of his power, Noob. Do not take me for a fool. Then again you do not know how powerful I've become, especially from absorbing some of Raidens essence in his failed attempt to destroy the Dragon King.
Noob- He gave me a message for you as well.
Shao Kahn- Oh I'm quivering with anticipation.
Noob- He said if you do not appear at the tournament he will hunt you down like the.....
Shao Kahn- Like the what!?
Noob- (choking a bit) dog... that you are.
Shao Kahn- Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
Noob- My lord!?
Shao Kahn- He dares challenge me... hehehahahaha... very well, I was planning on destroying the Dragon King myself anyway, this will be the perfect opportunity.
Noob- Do not underestimate your enemies... it is what left you open to attack by Shang Tsung and Quan Chi in the first place.
Shao Kahn- (turning to Noob slowly walks one slow step at a time towards him then grabs him tightly around the throat) YOU WORM!!! DON'T YOU EVER DOUBT MY POWER AGAIN!!!! (In one fluid motion Shao Kahn slams Noob Saibot 8 feet into the ground, leaving him lying there, motionless) Get me my armor
(A soldier comes walking towards Shao Kahn)
Soldier- As you command, My Lord.
(Shao Kahn Walks back up to his throne and grabs is Warhammer in one hand and a gigantic sword in the other)
Shao Kahn- It looks as though its time to play. Vandon will fall first, then the Dragon King will fall to my feet as I regain my rightful Empire!!!
(Noob slowly begins to climb out of the hole in the floor)
Kahn- Noob Saibot!!!
Noob- (freezes) ...y...yes...?
Kahn- Make sure Celestial keeps to my plan, if not... well you remember what I told you to do.
Noob- Yes my lord
Kahn- (donning his cape) I'm going out for awhile, make sure everyone plays nice!!! (laughs evilly)
(back at the palace in the tower where Vandon is watching, sudden tinge of almost insane rage comes across his face, his eyes fade and begin to glow green and his muscles tense as he growls)
Vandon- So he IS coming!!! Good... very good.
(Noob comes slowly up to Shao Kahn, who is sitting in a newly erected throne, quietly walking almost in fear)
Noob- There is something I must tell you, my lord.
(Shao Kahn turns to Noob and stands)
Kahn- I trust I am not going to have to kill you for this, Noob.
Noob- (noob faulters a bit then speaks again) Its about Vandon, there is something....different about him from the time you dropped him into the Netherrealm.
Shao Kahn- (sits down) I'd imagine he'd have a bit of a vendetta against me. What is he not as cheerful as he used to be?
Noob- No... he is stronger... perhaps as powerful as you and the Dragon King if not more so. His power has even been put as a threat to the Demi God, Sensui.
Shao Kahn- I am aware of his power, Noob. Do not take me for a fool. Then again you do not know how powerful I've become, especially from absorbing some of Raidens essence in his failed attempt to destroy the Dragon King.
Noob- He gave me a message for you as well.
Shao Kahn- Oh I'm quivering with anticipation.
Noob- He said if you do not appear at the tournament he will hunt you down like the.....
Shao Kahn- Like the what!?
Noob- (choking a bit) dog... that you are.
Shao Kahn- Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
Noob- My lord!?
Shao Kahn- He dares challenge me... hehehahahaha... very well, I was planning on destroying the Dragon King myself anyway, this will be the perfect opportunity.
Noob- Do not underestimate your enemies... it is what left you open to attack by Shang Tsung and Quan Chi in the first place.
Shao Kahn- (turning to Noob slowly walks one slow step at a time towards him then grabs him tightly around the throat) YOU WORM!!! DON'T YOU EVER DOUBT MY POWER AGAIN!!!! (In one fluid motion Shao Kahn slams Noob Saibot 8 feet into the ground, leaving him lying there, motionless) Get me my armor
(A soldier comes walking towards Shao Kahn)
Soldier- As you command, My Lord.
(Shao Kahn Walks back up to his throne and grabs is Warhammer in one hand and a gigantic sword in the other)
Shao Kahn- It looks as though its time to play. Vandon will fall first, then the Dragon King will fall to my feet as I regain my rightful Empire!!!
(Noob slowly begins to climb out of the hole in the floor)
Kahn- Noob Saibot!!!
Noob- (freezes) ...y...yes...?
Kahn- Make sure Celestial keeps to my plan, if not... well you remember what I told you to do.
Noob- Yes my lord
Kahn- (donning his cape) I'm going out for awhile, make sure everyone plays nice!!! (laughs evilly)
(back at the palace in the tower where Vandon is watching, sudden tinge of almost insane rage comes across his face, his eyes fade and begin to glow green and his muscles tense as he growls)
Vandon- So he IS coming!!! Good... very good.
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