That's great DKakaR! I love it! The original Badass himself coming to kick ass and take names...or hehe...have his ass kicked by Vandon! Excellent aadition!

Rabid, I think I speak for all when I say that you have done this story more than justice. Great Work. The same goes for you DKakaR. So Khan is comming to play, this is getting intresting.

**Edenian Royal Palace**

Sindel: What you say cannot be true...

Rain: but it is, my Queen. I am afraid the batallion was completely decimated. We were outmaneuvered and outnumbered. I along with several others managed to elude capture. What are your orders?

Sindel: ...rest, for now. Tomorrow, take up arms alongside the fifth battlement, to the south. Take ninety of our finest archers and riders with you. A frontal assault on their western flank tomorrow morning.

Rain: As you command, my queen.

Sindel: Curses. It is as though the lizard could read my mind...

**Rain turns, and walks down the hallway, not noticing the tiny figure who lurks behind a statue.**

**Dragon King's palace**

**The Dragon king sits in his throne once more, Kilvan at his side**

Dragon King: Well?

Kilvan: ...they plan to fortify their fifth battlement with archers and riders, and attack your western encampments.

Dragon King (chuckling): Indeed? Well, we shall just see to that.

Kilvan: In fact, I wonder that the Queen has not suspe-

Dragon King: What? What is it?

Kilvan: You'll have to excuse me for a moment. I am being...summoned...

**He shimmers and disappears**

**A wind-blown wasteland, poriung rain. Kilvan appears out of nowhere.**

Kilvan: Where are you? Show yourself, COWARD!!!

Voice: You, god of death, have not the right to speak of such things...

**The wind blows fiercely**

Kilvan: Of course you are a coward. Else you would have intervened when the sorcerers allied...

Voice: I had other matters to attend to.

Kilvan: I don't doubt it.

**From the skies, a figure descends, dressed in the soft garments of a deity.**

Fujin: Although the others may have been blind to your presence, I am not. I know not your current deeds, but of their nefariousness, I am certain. Whatever your aims are, you shall not succeed...

Kilvan: Try and stop me, god of wind...

**After a moment's pause, the two charge headlong at each other...**

KaTian sidesteps Mileena's attack and delivers a kick to the back of Mileena's head causing her to stumble forward. Mileena turns around sharply with her sai extended out trying to cut KaTian. KaTian grabs her arm with both hands and tries to kick her again but Mileena pushes her leg down with her forearm and slashes KaTian on the arm with her other sai. Mileena then kicked KaTian in the stomach knocking KaTian onto her back.
Mileena walks up to her slowly,"Since you're already gonna die, I'll tell you of my plan."
KaTian sits up on her elbows,"What plan? To get your mouth fixed?"
Mileena growls angrily, grabs KaTian by the neck, and puts her sai up against her throat,"No bitch, my plan is almost over. I was in Edenia posing as Kitana to get control over the throne to help give the Dragon King time to arise."
KaTian tries to struggle out of Mileena's grasp but Mileena holds onto her tighter.
Mileena continues,"Soon the Dragon King will fall and I will reign supreme."
KaTian says,"What about Baraka?"
Mileena scoffs,"What about him? He isn't getting shit from me. The most he could do for me is be my servant."
KaTian gets a smirk on her face,"And guess who just heard your plans." KaTian points to the open door and Mileena turns her head. There was no one there and KaTian pushed Mileena's hand away and punched her across the face then rolled away from her into her Mei Hua Zhang fighting stance.
Mileena stood up with an angry look on her face,"You deceptive little wench, after I took you in after your so-called family left you."
KaTian replied,"You never took me in, you used me just to get closer to the throne."
Mileena grew furious and threw her sais at KaTian. KaTian does a spin move to the side and the sais stick into the wall behind her. She charges at Mileena and delivers a kick to her stomach causing Mileena to bend over with a groan. KaTian then slaps Mileena across the face and Mileena falls to the ground. KaTian jumps back into her Mei Hua Zhang style waiting for Mileena to stand back up. Mileena stood up and ripped off her veil revealing her sharp teeth. KaTian shuddered at the sight of Mileena's face. Mileena does her roll attack and KaTian flipped over Mileena. But Mileena was fast and came up behind KaTian and wrapped her arm around KaTian neck. Mileena bit KaTian on the shoulder and KaTian released a howl of pain that echoed throughout the room. Mileena released KaTian from her grip and KaTian fell to her knees tending to her shoulder wound. Mileena saw KaTian's weakness and kick her across the face knocking KaTian to the floor facedown. Mileena places her foot on KaTian's back and stomps down hard making KaTian howl in pain. Mileena continues to stomp KaTian but Mileena forgot Kitana was there and Kitana ran and jump kicked Mileena from behind then fell to the floor from her beating from earlier. Mileena fell to the ground and rolled forward towards a huge open window. KaTian stood up slowly along with Mileena. Mileena teetered around and KaTian took in a huge breath. KaTian released a loud scream that pushed Mileena through the window and down the tower to hear not a sound of Mileena's body hitting anything. KaTian walks over to Kitana,"I've gotta get out of here before someone comes in to investigate all the noise."
Kitana smiles and says,"Do your best in the tournament, you better free me."
They both giggle and Kitana says,"You know I love you."
KaTian and Kitana hug each other and KaTian says,"I love you too."
KaTian kisses Kitana on the forehead and leaves the room holding her shoulder wound.

First off, I'm gonna go ah3ad and start using regular E's instead of 3s. peopple might begin to think I'm weird. Lot people out here think I am. lol

Anyways, I once again want to thank Brodeur for allowing me to be part of this tourny beside having my charact3rs in h3r3. It's a pl3esure for me to work in what has now become a popular contest. Thank you Brodeur...

I wanted to comment that I'm carefully reading all of the characters bio, so I can make this novel great. I wanna use all of characters instead of just having them in the fight scene. As we all see only a f3w charact3rs appear a lot lot more. I want to be fair to everyon3. I'm still using the entir3 story we all have written, but with just minor chang3s, and a lot of extra extra never before read scenes. So far we have about 126 pages worth of story we all have cintributed.

Let me know if this is all good, and fair for all. THank you

Gabrielle follows Ryoko, which is not difficult, due to the beating she recieved at the hands of Ghost and Sabre, slowing her down. They make it as far as the courtyard, and Ryoko finds she can run no more. She begins to fall, however Gabrielle was close enough to catch her. She lowered Ryoko gently to the ground. "My god! What the hell is going on? I can't...I can't believe what I just saw! How could Ghost...I mean that couldn't have been him right? He's under some spell? That has to be it, please let that be it." Gabrielle thinks to herself. "Ryoko? Are you ok?" She asks in almost a whisper..for the first time getting a good look at Ryoko's face. What she sees, brings instant tears to her eyes. Never before had she seen Ryoko beaten so badly. Till seeing her face, she hadn't been completely convinced that it had really occured. But the swelling and bruising, cuts and blood made it all too real for her. Ryoko stared up at her..she managed a weak smile and then spoke in a whisper at first.."I'll be fine Bri. Do not worry over me. I heal rather quickly." Gabrielle is comforted somewhat at hearing this. She is about to speak..but Ryoko speaks first. "I didn't think that you would follow, I was convinced you hated me after yestarday." Gabrielle sighs and looks up into the sky. "Ryoko...I don't hate you. I'm not sure that I ever could. I am angry with you. I don't agree with anything you said yestarday. And your total disregard for my feelings in the matter made it worse. I'm not ready to forgive and forget yet. The wounds are still to fresh. I came to make certain that you were ok. Beyond that...I can't talk to you now." "I understand little one. When you are ready I will be here. All I can offer is that I am sorry. You are the absolute last person I wanted to hurt." With that Gabrielle gently removes Ryoko's head from her knees and leans her against the tree they were under. And with silent tears leaves Ryoko.

As Gabrielle heads back towards her quarters, A female voice breaks her out of her thoughts. "You gonna stay mad at her forever? She really was only considering what was best for you. " Gabrielle spins swiftly in the direction of the familiar voice. "Jade! The last I heard you were dead! Killed by the Dragon King!" She runs to Jade and hugs her long time friend. Jade smiles and gently pulls back. "The reports of my demise are a bit exaggerated. You didn't answer the question Gabby." Gabrielle looks away. "You don't understand the situation Jade. There are a lot of difficult decisions to make. I just can't deal with Ryoko's high and mighty smarm right now. But that's not why you're here. What's going on?" Jade looks thoughfully at her friend. "Never one to beat around the bush were you? Queen Sindel has sent me to tell you that you are not to return to Edenia yet. You can best help our cause here, keeping an eye on the Dragon King and this new threat Sensui. She fears that no matter the outcome of this tournament, things will not bode well for Edenia...or any realm for that matter. You must find out what you can of any plans Dragon King has that Sindel does not already have knowledge of. Also, she says that she has heard of Sensui, and has heard that it is not wise to underestimate his evil power. I will be your contact, you pass your information on to me and I will relay to Sindel." Gabrielle sighs and looks down. "I miss Edenia very much. I miss Kitana and my father. However I will do as my Queen commands. My duty to her must come first. What of Tanya? Any news about that traitorous wench?" "No, it appears she has dissappeared for the time being. Though it is believed that she may show up here to inform her master of goings on in Edenia. So keep an eye out." "Oh believe that I will! If I see my darling sister, she will not live long enough to confer with the Dragon King!" With that Jade nods and starts to walk away. "Oh..by the way, good luck on your match tomorrow." Gabrielle watches Jade dissappear into the shadows and looks up into the sky getting a chill. "Yes...I fear I may need all the luck I can get." She says softly. Images of the tank that is Ravage fill her mind, causing Gabrielle to shudder. She continues to her quarters, unaware that she is being watched. "Jade is not the only one good at hiding in Shadows sister dear. Your time will come sooner than you think!" Evil female laughter is heard thoughout the courtyard.

Sensui is seen walking through a hallway as Sabre appears infront of him.
Sabre "I'm back."
Sensui steps to the side to move but as Sabre does the same.
Sensui "Out of my way."
Sensui attempts to punch Sabre to the side only to have Sabre grab his fist and throw him aside.Sensui stands up.
Sensui "Do not touch me young fool."
Sabre "Hahahaha,young?Fool?You dont know a thing."
Sabre tackles him and begins to punch him again then pounces off.Ghost walks up beside him.
Sensui "What the hell!?"
Sabre picks him up.
Sabre "Meet my new ally...Ghost..."
With that Ghost runs in and kicks him in the chest sending him backwards into a wall.
Sensui "What is this?A new alliance,strong but not strong enoug...."
Sabre "Shutup!You havent seen our power...yet."
Sabre and Ghost run up to him and stomp on his chest.Sabre picks him and flips him upside down preparing to drive his head to the ground,just as Ghost kicks Sensui in the back of the head,making him dizzy as Sabre drives him down.Ghost picks him up,and looks him in the eyes.
Ghost "We have had enough of you dominating around here,now its our turn."
Sabre goes behind Sensui and grabs him around the waist,Ghost kicks Sensui in the face as Sabre throws him backwards into a wall.
Ghost "Its our turn now..."
Ghost and Sabre walk away leaving Sensui with a spaced out look in his eyes as he passes out infront of them.

I know its a small addition but,all I can think of currently,dont feel like writing today anyway.

(Nightwolf, Sub-Zero, as well as some of the other fighters stand in the main floor of the Dragon King's stronghold as a huge tremor seems to be sent through the entire structure as the door to the Palace is busted through and in pieces on the floor. The dark outline of a tall muscular figure wearing a flowing cape can be seen through the dust)
Sub-Zero- what the hell?
Nightwolf- There is something famili.... NO!!! It can't be him!!!
Voice- What, no greeting, no welcome party? I was hoping for at least a red carpet.
(the dust settles to show a familiar warhammer slammed throught the wooden door and Shao Kahn standing with his arms crossed smiling evilly beneath his twisted skull mask)
Sub-Zero- (face in amazement) I thought you were killed.
(Kahn laughs a bit as he kicks his hammer up into the air and catches it in his hand)
Shao Kahn- I guess you just can't keep a good Emperor down. (smirks a bit) Though I wouldn't exactly refer to myself as good.
(A loud voice echoes through the room) I WILL KILL YOU THIS TIME!!!!
(Three black dragon fire balls fly at incredibly fast speeds towards Shao Kahn, who winds up his Warhammer and hits all three back as they explode into the ceiling)
Kahn- Hehehahahaha!!! Vandon... come out and have a chat with your old friend.
(Vandon Jumps down from the shadows of the ceiling and lands in a kneeling position as he slowly stands, the muscles in his arm Spasming a bit as his eyes are wide and glowing and his teeth are clenched)
Vandon- I've been waiting to rip your heart out and feed it to you you back stabbing SNAKE!!!
Shao Kahn- You seem a bit angry, I'm glad I left a lasting impression. You should never have trusted so willingly.
Vandon- A mistake I won't be making again! (he fades from view slowly and Kahn tilts his head to the side a bit as Vandon's fist comes whizzing by his face. Kahn quickly grabs Vandon's neck and holds him up)
Kahn- Well, well, well. This is awfully familiar isn't it? I believe this is the part where I dropped you into the Netherrealm, right?
(A deep growl echoes out from Vandon's mouth as a deafening calm fills the room and all goes dark and a sound of metal against metal is heard then all at once, light reenter's the room and Vandon's Blades of Carnage are crossed with Shao Kahn's Huge Sword, Vandon then kicks Kahn back and the stand apart from eachother, Vandon glaring at Kahn, and Kahn seeming mildly amused)
Kahn- You have some wonderful new tricks I must say.
Vandon- you haven't seen the half of it yet...
The Dragon King- ENOUGH!!!
(Kahn turns to look at the Dragon King, as does Vandon)
Th Dragon King- Nice of you to finally join us Kahn, I wondered when you would step out from behind the curtain of your minions.
Shao Kahn- (smiling) my "curtain of minions" as you so eloquently put it with your forked tongue, are currently at work against your army, which is falling quite swiftly.
DK- (smiles) They are undefeatable for a reason Kahn, don't be so sure of yourself.
Shao Kahn- (cracks his neck side to side) in any event I've come for you in particular my winged friend.
Vandon-(turning quickly) WE'VE GOT UNFINSHED BUSINESS YOU COWARD!!! YOU WILL DEAL WITH ME FIRST!!!
DK- Calm yourself Vandon, I will make you a deal.
Vandon- I came here for him what would I want to make a deal with you for?
DK- If you attack kahn now you will fight not only him but Baraka, Ghost, Sabre and Mileena as well. A bit of an extreme battle don't you think?
Vandon- (calming down) Fine, I want to face him one on one, what is it you had in mind?
DK- If you make it through the preset brackets to the end of the tournament, Your prize will be a one on one battle with Shao Kahn in an arena where there will be no escaping the fight. If you win, you must face me in Mortal Kombat afterwards. (turns to Kahn) if he fails to make it to the end, you have the honor of challenging the winner of my tournament, if you beat Vandon or any of the other contestants which make it to the end. You'll get your fight with me and we'll see if you can reclaim "your" empire.
(Vandon takes a deep breath as he fades away, dissatisfied. Kahn turns up toward the king and smiles)
Kahn- Very well, it'll be good to get some practise in before the main course. (The Dragon King turns and returns to his throne room as Shao Kahn turns towards the spellbound fighters watching.) Now then, would one of you kindly show me to where the feast is. (all are silent, Kahn laughs) Fine, I shall find it myself then.

(Back on the fields where Celestial's army has already devastated much of the Dragon King's army, many of the dead and fallen soldiers begin to rise up and grab their weapons as they regroup and continue towards their goal)

I'm noticing a reacuring theme between Sensui and Sabre.
-Palace halls-
Sensuk does a Spining Star Kick back onto his feet and shakes the cob webs out of his head.
Sensui"Well, that was intresting, now where'd they go?"Sensui opens his jigon eye and scans the palace."Ah there they are, they think they can double team me with an alliance huh, fine. Since Hatsuma is under the Sennoku spell, I can use someone else."
Sensui uses his Dimension Gate to warp out of the hall ways an to Sabre and Ghost's current possition.
-Throne Room_
Sabre and Ghost appear before teh Dragon King.
As they kneel Sabre is the first to speak.
Sabre"My lord, with this alliance, that weakling Sensui is no longer a threat to you."
Dragon King"Watch your tongue, or Sensui will remove it for you." The Dragon King points to the center of the room as Sensui warps in from a dark portal.
Sabre"You just don't get it you stupid bastard, power is nothing if you don't have the skills to compliment it.
Sensui's aura fades along with his eye, showing of their color.
To Sabre's astonishment, they are much like his own, dragon eyes.
Sensui"You doubt I have any fighting potential just because you have dropped me on very encounter? Fine I'll kick your scaley ass around this palace mortal style."
Sensui get's into his Zui Quan stance Sabre sinks into a Dragon stance.
Ghost"Master?"
Dragon King"I'll allow this, but critical injury is forebidden outside the tournament, any one who disobeys will deal with me."
Sensui looks at Sabre square in the eyes"Make a move."(Slightly grining.)
Sabre rushes Sensui at full speed. As Sabre is about to make contact with a swift right hand Sensui seemlessly vansishes.
Sabre"Sensui you lying bastard! You said mortal style!"
Sensui from behind"Easy there you walking suitcase, I'm right behind you."
As Sabre turns around he gets hit straight in the face with a swift hook kick. Sabre stumbles back as he sees stars for a split second. Before he can regain his focus Sensui flips behind him, grabbing him by the neck and slamming it on his knee.
Sabre screams in pain as he drops off of Sensui's knee and to the floor. Sensui does three butter fly kicks to distance him self from Sabre then goes into a drinking pose as a taunt.
Sabre"Oh, you're going to regret that." Sabre does a kick up and turns around to face Sensui. As he does he sees Sensui charging towards him. Sabre rushes in with a flying side kick trying to quickly close the distance, Sensui stops in mid charge and bridges back as Sabre flies right over. Sensui quickly wraps his legs around Sabre's stomach on the pass by and bridges forward, stopping Sabre in mid-air and slamming him head first through the ground.
Sensui"Had enough or should I slap you around some more?"
Sabre answersfrom under the floor tiles"You wish."
Sensui"Fine, you asked for it."
Sensui lets go of Sabre's waist and roles back into a cat stance. Sabre pulls his head out of the ground as blood trickles down between his eyes.
Sabre"Bastard, I'll kill you!"
Sensui"You're all talk and no action, especially when you're confronted with someone face to face."
Sabre again rushes Sensui in a blind rage. Sensui spins behind Sabre seconds before contact and delivers a dual palm strike to his shoulder blades, causing Sabre's momentume to increase and shoot into a pillar. Sabre's agility proves useful as he uses his momentum to run up the pillar and back flip off it instead of crashing into it.
Sensui"You're so slow, I won't even use my hands to block your next attack."
Sabre"I'll hold you to it."
Sabre rushes Sensui with a flurry of fierce strikes which would send anybody into a world of hurt. However Sensui stays true to his promise as he uses the Zui Quan style of movement sway back and forth avoiding every hit that Sabre throws, mean while Sensui just grins to goat Sabre even further. As Sabre is about to finally make contact with Sensui by predicting his next move, Sensui quickly flips backwards and kicks Sabre under the jaw, flipping him around and back on his face.
The Dragon King stands up, having seen enough he calls for a stop to the brawl."Enough!. It is clear that you Sensui posses great skill to go with your power."
Sensui powers back up again as he looks at Sabre
Sensui "Try jumping me again, and I promise that next time you won't live."
Sabre stands up bruised and battered as he takes a deep breath and regenerates his wounds."Next time I won't be alone."
Sensui"Neither will I."
Sabre"Don't make me laugh, your two lackies can't stand up to the combination of Ghost and myself."
Sensui"Who ever said that they would be by my side.?"
Sensui walks to the middle of the room and kneels on one knee and bows his head as he spreads his arms. A familiar purple aura begins to swirl around him as his eyes glow a dark purple. A bolt of lightning comes down behind Sensui and a dark gate is opened.
Dragon King"No! You can't."
Sensui in a double voice"Too late."
The doorway opens and the bridge to the Genma Realm is complete.
Sensui"Come forth my apprentice."
A familiar shadow to the Dragon King steps through the doorway.
The whole palace shakes as the presence manifests into the throne room.
The doorway closes as the figure steps through and his awesome power can be felt by everyone in the palace as well as the surrounding areas.
Sensui stands up and laughs demonicaly as he and his new alley vanish into thin air.
The Dragon King shakes his fist in anger"Damn you."

Here's the fight scen for Gabrielle and VS Ravag3. I hop3 you guys like it. I did just write it, about half an hour ago, and it's late. SO I hope you guys like, since I'm f33ling I didn'y put much effort, but I know I tried my veryy b3st. Pleas enjoy.

P.S. tgrant, I hope you don't mind I used your stage Temple of Elemts for this match. Great stage btw.


- Temple of the Elements - Mid Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
This room is barren and unimpressive! It’s only features are two openings where swirling wind
vortexes can be seen. The openings are huge and appear to be harmless. After several seconds,
no matter where you are the wind vortexes build up. They suck you inside them and transport you
either up or down to the next floor. They are wind lifts.

Gabrielle and Ravge are orbed in. Seconds later, Tha Dragon King teleports in, flying above the two
opponents.

Dragon King: Welcome to the Temple of Elemnts. This is a very well thought stage concept, created
by a great mortal known as Tgrant. As you see there are four different swirling vortexes each in
its own unique color. Blu represents the element of water, red the element of fire, green of-- ah
fuck this you know the rest. I'm not the announcer, just FIGHT! NOW!

Dragon King teleports away. Gabrielle and Ravage stare at one another.

Gabrielle: I'm gonna rip those wires and stick them up your ass.
Ravage: I would do the same for you, but you wish for Hatsuma to disembolish you cherry.
Gabrielle: You are pretty sick for a robot.

Ravage rushes at Gabrielle and attacks her. He trips her, and quickly stomps his foot on her head, smashing it on the floor.
He lifts her up, tosses her on the air, and roundhouses her. Gabrielle is thrown accross the room, and the the green vortex sucks her in.
Ravage leaps through the portal.

- Temple of the Elements - Earth Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
The usual wind lifts are opposite each other on either side of the room. To the side of each, is a single statue. On the far walls opposite these statues is the MK dragon symbol. The rest of the room is covered in dirt and rocks and boulders line the outside edge with two noticeable gaps marked with the MK dragon symbol on the walls. Occasional tremors cause rocks to roll around and the earthen ceiling to release some rocks.

Upon entering the room, a sandstorm is built up and it travels randomly around the room. Anyone sucked into is spun around and then blasted across the room into the far wall causing heavy damage. The storm dies down and grows again every so often.

Gabrielle shoots out from the vortex and falls hard on the ground. Soon, Ravage somersaults in. He lands in front of Gabrielle who is geeting up. She is already bleeding from her face. Angrily, she attacks the robot, doing combos in her Pencak Silat fighting style. She immidiatelly changes to her Avate fighting style adding more killer combos. She pulls out her Sectional Staff to finish off her brutal combo. Ravage is knocked against a statue, breaking it to pieces. He them rams right through the wall.

Ravge gets up, and notices he's in a room with very sensitive ground. Soon, and earthquake begins. Ravage tries to runs out, but the earthquake becomes very violent, and Ravage can't help himself up. Soon the ground beneath him begins to crack open. Ravage shoots his dual tentacle from both wrists unto a statue outside the room. The ground just opens up completely, letting Ravage fall. He hangs freely, as his tentacles hold themselves on the statue. SLowly they begin to pull him upwards. Unfortunately, the ground begins to close.

Gabrielle sees how Ravage is using his tentacle to pull him out of the pit. She draws out her Sectional Staff, and is about to attack, but to her surprise a sandstorm is built up and it travels randomly around the room. It sucks Gabrielle right in, and she is spun around like a toy and then is blasted across the room into the far wall causing her a great amount of heavy damage. The storm dies down.
Gabrielle weakly begins to get up.

Back in the room with the violent earthquake, the ground is now closing in on Ravage faster. He is running out of time. He uses his Ion Jets to fly him out. The ground beneath almost grabs him so he swings his legs upwards, escaping from the ground closing in on them. Unluckily, the ground manages to close in on the Ion Jets, immidiatelly crushing them to pieces. Ravage angrily gets up, and looks at his back, and shrugs sadly as he sees only wires spitting out sparks, as the Jets have been literally eaten by the ground. He has no time to complain, for the earthquake is about to begin. He quickly hops out, and barely misses the spikes that run out from within the other walls.

As he lands on his feet, Gabrielle had already gotten up, and she does her Hurracanrana at Ravage, throwing him back through the vortex. She dives in right after.

- Temple of Elements - Mid Chamber -

Both Ravgae and Gabrielle shoot out from the vortex, but the blue vortex sucks them in.

- Temple of Elements - Wind Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
Ravage and Gabrielle fly out from the vortex, but are duking it out as they fall to the floor. They get up as if nothing, and continue to fight one another. The fans on the side of the walls begin to swirl, causing great winds, and have the opponents fly around. They try to fight, but the winds keep pushing them apart.
Ravage shoots out his dual tentacles from his wrists again, on the ceiling, having them hold him down tight.
Gabrielle rams right up against Ravge. The winds had push her unto him.

The fans begin to swirl the opposite direction, trying to suck them in. Good thing Ravage's tentacles are very strong. They hold him down tight. Gabrielle takes this advantage and locks her legs around Ravage's waist, and begins to punch the hell out of his robotic face. She madly punches the hell out of him, screaming her ass off.
Ravage frees one set of tentacles from one wrist. One tentacle grabs a hold of Gabrielle's waist, and the other realease punches in her beautiful face. Gabrielle grabs the tentacle bitch slapping her, as soon as the other tectacle had let her go. Ravage was trying to let her get sucked into one of the fans. It didn't happen.

The fans stop swirling. This gives Ravage an idea. He locks all four tentacles on Gabrielle as he lets himself fall. He slams her hard on the ground, crashing right through it.

- Temple of Elements - Water Chamber

Ravage falls in still holding Gabrielle with his tentacles. They crash right through the crossed shaped bridge. Gabrielle manages to free herself, and starts fight back. SHe hops on Ravage's shoulder and once agian punches the hell out of his head. TO there surprise eels and huge hungry prinahs are swimming there way. Gabrielle stands up on Ravage's shoulders and leaps over to the nearest post. SHe quicly climbs up the pole, and climbs up on a very thin ledge. She watches as Ravage gets attacked by the fish below.
Lucky him, he feels no pain, and the piranah can't even bite through his armor. The eels electric shock only stun him for a couple of seconds, but then he's all better. He uses his tentacles to pull himself up. A piranah's teeth is stuck on his shoulder. AS his tentacle pull him up, Ravage pulls out the piranah from his shoulder and throws it at Gabrielle. The fish hits her face, which quickly begins to gnaw on it eating the fresh flesh on her face. Gabrielle looses grip as she pulls the fish out of her face. She begins to fall, but the vortex reappear, sucking her up. Angrily, Ravage lets the vortex suck him in.

- Temple of Elements - Mid Chamber

They both fall in thorugh the vortex. Gabrille and Ravage get up, and each get on their fighting stances. Gabrielle on her Savate style, and Ravage on his Berserker style. Gabrielle's left side of her face has been bitten through. It looks like like grinded meats still fresh as the blood drips down. Eew, wonder if Hatsuma still wants her.
SHe attacks the robot, and both continue to fight, block each other's moves.
Gabrielle does fast cartwheels thre times, knocking Ravage down. She then takes out three silver throwing knives, and tosses them to Ravage. The stab themselves on his chest plate. He tries to pull them out, but they're really stuck in there. She quickly does her kick crusher move: She round houses Ravage hard on his face, and quickly sweeps him. When he falls on his back, she quickly jumps up, and lands with both hard on his chest. A loud crack and snap is heard, as the chest plate breaks.
Ravage pushes Gabrielle off of him. He gets up, and rips the broken chest off of him, and tosses it at Gabrielle. As soon as the iron chest hits her, she is knocked through the red vortex. Ravage looks where his chest plate was, and sees nothing but wires.

- Temple of Elements - Fire Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
here is an enclosed fire chamber in the middle of one wall. The roof is open revealing the sky above. It is a violent fiery sky. The usual wind lifts are opposite each other and opposite the second chamber is another statue. The other walls are lined at the bottom with burning coals, which are ready to hurt anyone who steps on them. Two gaps in the ring of coal in contain are small pits filled with lava. Lava flows down the walls from a gap in the walls filling these pits. Anyone falling in suffers a painfully hot death.

Gabrielle falls in, almost falling into the lava below. SHe grabs onto the bridge and pulls herself up. She is all bruised up, full of deep bleeding cuts, and her clothing is all tore.
Ravage hops out from the vortex. He attacks Gabrielle, but she still manages to fight back. As soon as dashes by her, she gets ahold of him, and "Angleslams" him hard on the ground. She begins stomping her legs on his face. She is too quick, he can't escape her hits.
Ravage grabs her leg, and with one tentacle grabs her camel toe. The tentacle squeezes hard, making Gabrielle scream in agony. SHe begins to bleed from downtown. It keeps on squeezing, bringing Gabrielle to her knees. SHe doesn't give up. She grabs his left hand and uses his own built in laser cannon attachment against him. He is fired across the arena, crashing up against the wall.
Gabrielle remains on the floor, grabbing her private as she bleeds tremendously. She cries in full pain. A small firey rock falls on her leg. She looks up, and sees the sky is now raining with firey rocks. She moves as they begin to hit the ground.
Ravage gets up, but the rocks hit his body, melting his body armor. Gabrielle thinks she has him, so decides to igonre her pain, and attacks him. As she kicks and punches him, the fire shower stops, and rain begins to pour. Ravage uses his tentacles tp grab Gabrille by the throat, and pulls her onto his robotic face.

Ravage: Flawless victory.
Gabrille: Not by a bit (spits on him)

Ravage tosses her through the bridge, making her crash through. She falls freely to the lava pit. She screams as she falls. As soon as she is about to splash into the lake of fire, Ravage's tentacle grabs her and pulls her back up. He is hanging under the bridge letting his other tentacles hold tight on the bridge.
His tentacle holding Gabrille, pulls the poor girl back up to his face.

Ravage: Ravage wins. No Fatality. I rather see you as our cyborg. We need Fembots. By the Lord Sektor we need them like you.

Ravage starts to crawl upwards with his tentacles carrying Gabrielle along, laughing devileshly.

Ummm, to much like hentai for my tastes. Ok let's do a short conclusion.
-Aftermath-
Ravage and Gabrielle are teleported out of the areana and back to the throne room. Gabrielle, a bloody mess and Ravage not looking any better.
Dragon King"Ravage wins. Now finish her infront of her friends and her love."
Ravages concious circut boots up".....Negative. The target is incompassitated, furhter assault is useless."
Dragon King"Very well, but if somebody doesn't die soon I will choose who's blood I will spill myself."
Ravage lets Gabrielle go as she's thrown to her commrades, battered and broken. Ravage's visor glows blue. He unleashes his Nano core. The nano bots incompass hie body. Within seconds Ravages, chest plate, along with his ion jets are repaired. The nano bots retreat back into the core and Ravage is again operating at 100 percent.
Ryoko and Nightwolf run towards the broken Gabrielle.
Ryoko"Gaby! What has he done to you?!"
Gabrielle gasps for air"So..powerful."
Nightwolf inspects Gabrielle's injuries."The wounds are severe, but not critical."
Nightwolf takes out a small pouch and opens it up, revealing the herbs inside.
Nightwolf"These are ancient herbs used by my people as a gift from the Elder Gods."
Nightwolf crushes them into a fine powder and sprinkles them on Gabrielle, as he chant's in his native language. A spirit wolf emerges from Nightwolf's body and enters Gabrielle. A blue flame comes over her body and her eyes glow white. The flames subside and Gabrielle's injuries are healed.
Dragon King"Hmmph these mortals, they care too much for their own to fully commit to anything."
Hatsuma"Go to hell. The human spirit is stronger than you can imagine. And this is what will lead to your down fall. You sadistic Son of a Bitch!"
The Dragon King stands up and walks over to Hatsuma's cell."WORM!!! You don't deserve the peace of death." The Dragon King plunges his hand into Hatsuma's fresh wound, this time going all the way through and coming out of the left side of his back.Hatsuma screams in unimagineable tourment as his eyes blank out from the pain and blood once again flows from his mouth like a river.
Dragon King"No, this time you will suffer more."
He turns to one of his shaman."You are certain that no matter what happens, this chamber will keep him alive."
Shaman"Yes my king."
Dragon King"Excellent."
The Dragon King ignites his fist as the surging fire blends with Hatsuma's blood and courses through his veins. Hatsuma's ignites into an inferno of demonic hell fire as his screams make everyone around squirm.
Gabrielle quickly regains conciousness only to see the tourture that Hatsuma is going through.
Her eyes instantly fill with tears as she cries out."HATSUMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The Dragon King removes his fist from Hatsuma's chest with a demonic sense of accomplishment in his mind. He warps infront of Gabreille with his hand stained with blood.
Dragon King"The blood of your love is on my hand." He flicks his hand, covering Gabrielle with Hatsuma's blood."Or should I say on your body."
The Dragon King laughs demonicaly as he warps back to his throne and licks the remaining blood off his fingers.
Gabrielle is so broken up as she puts her hand infront of her eyes that she can't even shed tears as the blood of her love runs down her hand, face, and body.
Hatsuma's screams still echoing as the inferno still burns through his viens.
Gabrielle kneeling with wide eye and tears pouring down whispers"Ha...Hatsuma. No please, Hatsuma no."(Screams)"HATSUMA!!!!!!!!"

My bad SmokeNC. I came up with that the last minute. I wanted Gabrielle to hurt very bad, but I guess a beating would have done. I didn't mean to make it sound perveret3ed. U think I should rewrite it?

Most of the fight was pretty good. It's just that Ravage has enough moves to make Gabrielle bleed. He doesn't neeed to shoot a wrist tenticle through her uteris. Just check out some of his moves and see if you can edit the story a bit. See if you can include him using more than just his tenticles, he does have more weapons.
Overall it was a pretty good fight.

P.s. What do you think of my "Aftermath" conclusion?

I will, but edit the fight scene. I did see he had more moves, and I shoulda have used them. I was tire last nigth and felt lazy to read the bios entirely. To cl3ear on3e thing up, I didn't mean fore him to jam his tentacles up in her uterus, just squeez3e ht3e outer area, but either or youre right, it sounds pervert3ed.

I did like the aftermath. Great plan to conclude the fight, and the fact theat Ravage rebilt himself, fucking A! It's a nice way to use Nightwolf's potion to cur3e Gabrielle. I just hope3 not every good guy decides to use it lat3er on.

Question, how can I edit the fight, k3eeping eve3rything else th3e same? Thanks SmokeNC...

I was being sarcastic about the uteris part. But I think you get what I'm saying. To edit it, try taking some parts out like that begining statement that Ravage made to Gabrielle, although that was pretty funny, it was kind of disturbing to hear an android say that. Put more empahsis on the moves they do, and just try to broaden the whole fight, by more events. I hope that helps.

Okay, heres the edited version of Gabrielle VS Ravage. I did minor changes, with no peversion and the usage of special powers from fighters. Thanks to SmokeNC... Hope you guys like this one-- well it;s almost still th3 same. Tell m3-e what you guys think...


- Temple of the Elements - Mid Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
This room is barren and unimpressive! It’s only features are two openings where swirling wind
vortexes can be seen. The openings are huge and appear to be harmless. After several seconds,
no matter where you are the wind vortexes build up. They suck you inside them and transport you
either up or down to the next floor. They are wind lifts.

Gabrielle and Ravge are orbed in. Seconds later, Tha Dragon King teleports in, flying above the two
opponents.

Dragon King: Welcome to the Temple of Elemnts. This is a very well thought stage concept, created
by a great mortal known as Tgrant. As you see there are four different swirling vortexes each in
its own unique color. Blu represents the element of water, red the element of fire, green of-- ah
fuck this you know the rest. I'm not the announcer, just FIGHT! NOW!

Dragon King teleports away. Gabrielle and Ravage stare at one another.

Gabrielle: I'm gonna rip those wires and stick them up your ass.
Ravage: My Unit has now become 187. Murder, death, kill.

Ravage rushes at Gabrielle and attacks her. He trips her, and quickly stomps his foot on her head, smashing it on the floor.
He lifts her up, tosses her on the air, and roundhouses her. Gabrielle is thrown accross the room, and the the green vortex sucks her in.
Ravage leaps through the portal.

- Temple of the Elements - Earth Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
The usual wind lifts are opposite each other on either side of the room. To the side of each, is a single statue. On the far walls opposite these statues is the MK dragon symbol. The rest of the room is covered in dirt and rocks and boulders line the outside edge with two noticeable gaps marked with the MK dragon symbol on the walls. Occasional tremors cause rocks to roll around and the earthen ceiling to release some rocks.

Upon entering the room, a sandstorm is built up and it travels randomly around the room. Anyone sucked into is spun around and then blasted across the room into the far wall causing heavy damage. The storm dies down and grows again every so often.

Gabrielle shoots out from the vortex and falls hard on the ground. Soon, Ravage somersaults in. He lands in front of Gabrielle who is geeting up. She is already bleeding from her face. Angrily, she attacks the robot, doing combos in her Pencak Silat fighting style. She immidiatelly changes to her Avate fighting style adding more killer combos. She pulls out her Sectional Staff to finish off her brutal combo. Ravage is knocked against a statue, breaking it to pieces. He them rams right through the wall.

Ravge gets up, and notices he's in a room with very sensitive ground. Soon, and earthquake begins. Ravage tries to runs out, but the earthquake becomes very violent, and Ravage can't help himself up. Soon the ground beneath him begins to crack open. Ravage shoots his dual tentacle from both wrists unto a statue outside the room. The ground just opens up completely, letting Ravage fall. He hangs freely, as his tentacles hold themselves on the statue. SLowly they begin to pull him upwards. Unfortunately, the ground begins to close.

Gabrielle sees how Ravage is using his tentacle to pull him out of the pit. She draws out her Sectional Staff, and is about to attack, but to her surprise a sandstorm is built up and it travels randomly around the room. It sucks Gabrielle right in, and she is spun around like a toy and then is blasted across the room into the far wall causing her a great amount of heavy damage. The storm dies down.
Gabrielle weakly begins to get up.

Back in the room with the violent earthquake, the ground is now closing in on Ravage faster. He is running out of time. He uses his Ion Jets to fly him out. The ground beneath almost grabs him so he swings his legs upwards, escaping from the ground closing in on them. Unluckily, the ground manages to close in on the Ion Jets, immidiatelly crushing them to pieces. Ravage angrily gets up, and looks at his back, and shrugs sadly as he sees only wires spitting out sparks, as the Jets have been literally eaten by the ground. He has no time to complain, for the earthquake is about to begin. He quickly hops out, and barely misses the spikes that run out from within the other walls.

As he lands on his feet, Gabrielle had already gotten up, and she does her Hurracanrana at Ravage, throwing him back through the vortex. She dives in right after.

- Temple of Elements - Mid Chamber -

Both Ravgae and Gabrielle shoot out from the vortex, but the blue vortex sucks them in.

- Temple of Elements - Wind Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
Ravage and Gabrielle fly out from the vortex, but are duking it out as they fall to the floor. They get up as if nothing, and continue to fight one another. The fans on the side of the walls begin to swirl, causing great winds, and have the opponents fly around. They try to fight, but the winds keep pushing them apart.
Ravage shoots out his dual tentacles from his wrists again, on the ceiling, having them hold him down tight.
Gabrielle rams right up against Ravge. The winds had push her unto him.

The fans begin to swirl the opposite direction, trying to suck them in. Good thing Ravage's tentacles are very strong. They hold him down tight. Gabrielle takes this advantage and locks her legs around Ravage's waist, and begins to punch the hell out of his robotic face. She madly punches the hell out of him, screaming her ass off.
Ravage frees one set of tentacles from one wrist. One tentacle grabs a hold of Gabrielle's waist, and the other realease punches in her beautiful face. Gabrielle grabs the tentacle bitch slapping her, as soon as the other tectacle had let her go. Ravage was trying to let her get sucked into one of the fans. It didn't happen.

The fans stop swirling. This gives Ravage an idea. He locks all four tentacles on Gabrielle as he lets himself fall. He slams her hard on the ground, crashing right through it.

- Temple of Elements - Water Chamber

Ravage falls in still holding Gabrielle with his tentacles. They crash right through the crossed shaped bridge. Gabrielle manages to free herself, and starts fight back. SHe hops on Ravage's shoulder and once agian punches the hell out of his head. TO there surprise eels and huge hungry prinahs are swimming there way. Gabrielle stands up on Ravage's shoulders and leaps over to the nearest post. SHe quicly climbs up the pole, and climbs up on a very thin ledge. She watches as Ravage gets attacked by the fish below.
Lucky him, he feels no pain, and the piranah can't even bite through his armor. The eels electric shock only stun him for a couple of seconds, but then he's all better. He uses his tentacles to pull himself up. A piranah's teeth is stuck on his shoulder. AS his tentacle pull him up, Ravage pulls out the piranah from his shoulder and throws it at Gabrielle. The fish hits her face, which quickly begins to gnaw on it eating the fresh flesh on her face. Gabrielle looses grip as she pulls the fish out of her face. She begins to fall, but the vortex reappear, sucking her up. Angrily, Ravage lets the vortex suck him in.

- Temple of Elements - Mid Chamber

They both fall in thorugh the vortex. Gabrille and Ravage get up, and each get on their fighting stances. Gabrielle on her Savate style, and Ravage on his Berserker style. Gabrielle's left side of her face has been bitten through. It looks like like grinded meats still fresh as the blood drips down. Eew, wonder if Hatsuma still wants her.
SHe attacks the robot, and both continue to fight, block each other's moves.

Ravage pulls out his weapon and charges all of his power into his ion sabre and unleashes it into a series of horizontal and vertical slashes which fly at Gabrielle. Gabrielle is hit with Ravage’s PlasmaWave.
Ravage quickly uses his Nano lash with his nano core he creates a laser whip, created by super heated nano bots. It's a long range moves where he uses his nano whip to lash Gabrielle several times. Even though she was hit a shit loads of times, she jumps away from more harm. Gabrielle does fast cartwheels three times, knocking Ravage down. She then takes out three silver throwing knives, and tosses them to Ravage. They stab themselves on his chest plate. He tries to pull them out, but they're really stuck in there. She quickly does her kick crusher move: She round houses Ravage hard on his face, and quickly sweeps him. When he falls on his back, she quickly jumps up, and lands with both hard on his chest. A loud crack and snap is heard, as the chest plate breaks.
Ravage pushes Gabrielle off of him. He gets up, and rips the broken chest off of him, and tosses it at Gabrielle. As soon as the iron chest hits her, she is knocked through the red vortex. Ravage looks where his chest plate was, and sees nothing but wires.

- Temple of Elements - Fire Chamber

[based on tgrant's stage]
here is an enclosed fire chamber in the middle of one wall. The roof is open revealing the sky above. It is a violent fiery sky. The usual wind lifts are opposite each other and opposite the second chamber is another statue. The other walls are lined at the bottom with burning coals, which are ready to hurt anyone who steps on them. Two gaps in the ring of coal in contain are small pits filled with lava. Lava flows down the walls from a gap in the walls filling these pits. Anyone falling in suffers a painfully hot death.

Gabrielle falls in, almost falling into the lava below. SHe grabs onto the bridge and pulls herself up. She is all bruised up, full of deep bleeding cuts, and her clothing is all tore.
Ravage hops out from the vortex. He attacks Gabrielle, but she still manages to fight back. As soon as he dashes by her, she gets ahold of him, and "Angleslams" him hard on the ground. She begins stomping her legs on his face. She is too quick, he can't escape her hits.
Ravage grabs her leg with his tentacle and then his other tentacle grabs her other leg. The tentacles flip her over, and them pull her legs apart, breaking her inner legs wide open. A loud crack is heard, as Gabrielle lets out a loud yelp. Ravage releases Gabrielle, and quickly uppercuts her. She flies across the chamber. Gabrielel tries to get up, but the forced split done on her legs, have numbed her up. She falls helplessly on the ground.

A small firey rock falls on her leg. She looks up, and sees the sky is now raining with firey rocks. She moves as they begin to hit the ground. She fights the pain, and slowly gets up, and manages to jump out of Ravage’s
Gabrielle gets a hold of his right arm, and using all her strength, she rips the arm off. She makes the huge claws pop out from the hand, and starts slicing and dicing Ravage. Ravage’s robot’s face plate is cracked open.
He now sees very static.
Firey rocks start to hit Ravage’s body, melting his body armor. Gabrielle thinks she has him, so decides to igonre her pain, and attacks him. As she kicks and punches him, she jams his own arm through his wiring chest. Once she pulls it out, she rips the wires from his chest. The robot falls helplessly to the ground.

Gabrielle: No machine will ever take man’s place in this world. Never.

The fire shower stops, and rain begins to pour. Ths turns off the fire rocks melting through Ravage’s armor. Electric spark surround Ravage. Two thick daggers slide out from the side of his feet. He jams them right on Gabrielle’s stomach, and slams her down to the ground. He quickly slides the blades too from his other foot, and jams it on the other side of Gabrielle’s stomach. Ravage savagely pulls his feet daggers out, ripping part of flesh from the sides of her stomach. Pieces of gore hang loosely from the ripped punctures. Gabrielle lays there, helplessly.

Ravage: You think I had an off switch? Ha. I am a futuristic robot that has no more shut downs.

He spits out his tentacles and grabs Gabrielle by the throat, and puls her unto his broken face.

Ravage: Flawless victory.
Gabrille: Not by a bit (spits on him)

Ravage tosses her through the bridge, making her crash through. She falls freely to the lava pit. She screams as she falls. As soon as she is about to splash into the lake of fire, Ravage's tentacle grabs her and pulls her back up. He is hanging under the bridge letting his other tentacles hold tight on the bridge.
His tentacle holding Gabrille, pulls the poor girl back up to his face.

Ravage: Ravage wins. No Fatality. I rather see you as our cyborg. We need Fembots. By the Lord Sektor we need them like you.

Ravage starts to crawl upwards with his tentacles carrying Gabrielle along, laughing devileshly.

*Will Smith from Bad Boys II*
Now, that's how you right a fight scene! That was awesome! Great work. I'm just surprised that Gabrielle was able to Angle slam an android who's 700+ pounds. Plus Ravage could've finished the fight right when his chest plate was ripped open since he has an ion cannon inside. But that would've been boring, the way you did it was much better. Plus I noticed that you used a spin-off version of one of Ravages fatalities, 1000 ways to die. Once again great job.

Thanks to you of course. Today I was able to think more straight, and you know something, I had no clue I had written thw phrase, Ravage told Gabrielle at the beginning. When I read it, I was cracking my ass off.
One more thing, it was a lucky guess bout the fatality spin-off. I yet haven't read his fatalities. Now that's a cool feeling.
Glad you liked it, Hope everyon3 els3 enjoys it too.

Excellent Rewrite Slim! Great work.

Smoke: Loved your "aftermath" too. Brilliant. I'm happy that Gabby is in one piece!

Thanks for not killing her Slim..and Smoke thank you for healing her..physically anyway. (Poor Gabby...I'm surprised she's still sane!)

Great work guys. Btw..hope nobody minds me bringing Jade back into the picture with my last submission. I needed a go-between for Gabby and Sindel and I could think of no one better for the job than Jade. Also what did you think of the submission?

Wow,that was a long time for the site being prepared,oh well,that fight was good,I like tgrants arena he made,very original.

-Sindel's Thrown Room-

"My Queen."
"Step forward Jade. What news have you?" Queen Sindel asks, as Jade walks forward and bows before her queen. "Rise Jade. And speak."
"Queen Sindel, I have successfully met with Gabrielle as you requested. I have passed on your orders to her and she will follow them to the letter. She is also going to keep an eye out for Tanya, as she will likely show up there."
"Excellent. Gabrielle knows her sister like no other. If anyone can find where Tanya is concealing her miserable hide, it's her. Were you seen?"
"I do not believe so my Queen."
"Good. The fewer who know you are still alive the better. I told Lianna that you had died at the hands of the Dragon King, because I am unsure of her alignment. She has always been a dear friend...but I have not seen her in a long time. Anything could have happend between then and now. The Dragon King's influence is strong, and growing ever more so with each passing day. Excepting yourself and Gabrielle, there are precious few now that I can say I trust without question. Should one of our enemies find that you are alive, it will severely hinder your effectivness and freedom of movement. Be mindful Jade. Eyes grow in the most unthinkable places if you get my meaning. Go now, do what you can to help in the battle. I must speak with Lianna again. It's time I find out for sure where her loyalties rest. I pray she is still the friend I remember from long ago. She will be a most powerful ally in the fight against The Dragon King."

-Dragon King's Palace Grounds-

Gabrielle is training in the court yard Using five practice droids. These droids are provided to all of the fighters to refine their skills before matches. Gabrielle, having lost her match to Ravage, is angry. She thinks back over the past weeks. She has been hurt and scared in almost every way imaginable. She and her bestfriend are not speaking. She is in love with a mysterious man, and can not understand why this is so...loosing the match to Ravage was the breaking point for her. Where there was sadness and fear before, Hatred and Rage now exist. She will kill the next person that tries to hurt her in any way.

That battle droids surround her. Two in the back, one in the front, and one on either side of her. "Ok...let's do this." With that Gabrielle does a back handspring wrapping her legs around the neck of one droid, and then while holding it she arcs backward as if to do another back handspring with the droid and crashes it head first into the ground. She then faces the other one that was beside it as another charges her from her left. She quickly roundhouses the droid closest to her taking it's head clean off. She turns and run towards a tree as the droid giving chase closes in on her. Gabrielle runs up the tree back flipping off of it and over the droid's head. On her way down she throws out four throwing knives. They hit with deadly accuracy, severing the droid's exposed wiring at it's neck, knees, and shoulders. This deactivates the third droid. Gabrielle fixes her gaze on the two remaining droids. "Well? You coming or not?" They both charge her at the same time. Gabrielle moves swiftly towards them as well. She leaps at the one on her right and, grabbing hold of it's neck, swings around it like a pole, bringing her feet round full force into the droid that was alongside it. The droid that was kicked flies into a tree; blowing up on impact. She kept her arms round the neck of the last one, and now had it in a head lock. It's head was facing behind her and she quikly kicked up her left leg, hitting the droids head with her heel and knocking it back. It did not fall however, and attacked her with a punch. Gabrielle ducked the punch, immediately going into a scorpion kick. This knocked the robot to the floor. It sprang up again and this time came at Gabrielle with a flurry of kicks. She dodged and blocked each one successfully and then Roundhoused the droid. She then fluidly went into a fast sweep, bringing the robot down again. To finish she leapt high into the air and came down hard with both feet to the droids chest crushing it. Gabrielle stood there a minute, looking at all of her downed opponents. She then hunched over a bit, breathing heavy.
"Here, you look like you could use this." Gabrielle looked up to see Nightwolf standing before her with a large glass of water. She smiled weakly. "Thanks Nightwolf." "You looked great Gabrielle. Glad to see your at full strength again." Gabrielle looked once again at her handy work, then back to Nightwolf. "Thanks to you. What ever you gave me healed my body nicely." "I'm happy to help. Though I wish I could make the emotional and Mental wounds heal as easily." Nightwolf replied looking sadly at Gabrielle. She touched his cheek. "Don't worry about me ok? I can handle it. I'll cope. You've done more than enough. I'm thankful for you making my physical pain go away." "Yes..but sometimes emotional pain can be far greater than the physical pain. I know this first hand." Gabrielle smiled at him, then kissed him on the cheek. "I'll be fine Nightwolf. I promise. Right now I think I'm going to go take a long bath. Be sure to let me know if I miss anything important?" "Of course." With that, Gabrielle walked off towards her quarters. Nightwolf stood there a moment looking after her. Then chuckled to himself shaking his head. "There goes one very strong girl. I pray she's handling this as well as she's pretending to." Nightwolf started to walk off towards the main hall. As he rounded the corner, he was struck from behind and knocked out cold. Tanya looked around, making sure no one had seen and then dragged Nightwolf away. "How dare you Shaman?! She was going to die! After all these years that bitch was dead! Then YOU, you had to step in with your herbs and happy dust, and make her good as new! Now I'll have to kill her myself!! Do you have any idea how far this has set me back?! I have a schedule to keep you know, if I'm going to have that Cow Sindel licking my boots! You'll pay dearly for this Nightwolf..dearly and painfully!"

Thanks to you both TomTaz and slim3di3g. I'm glad you both like my "Aftermath". I've been getting good responses with how Nightwolf healed Gabrielle. Honestly I didn't think much of it when I wrote it. Anybody like the fight I wrote between Sensui and Sabre eariler? One of my newer characters makes a second appearance this time.

-On a bridge between two spires of the palace-
Sensui and his partner are looking over the horizon, actively anticipating Sensui's upcoming match.
Sensui"Should I fall in this tournament, and Hatsuma either dies are falls to his emotions, and can't carry on, I want you to preform the Blood Sacrifice. Understood?"
Partner"Ofcourse, my friend."
The Dragon King appears behind them.
Sensui (sighs)"I'm getting tired of this."
Dragon King"Having doubts already?"
Sensui"Piss off. I can easily make this palace come crashing down on top of your head in an instant."
Dragon King"What if I take your commrade here and do the same thing like I did to Hatsuma?"
Sensui (snickers)"Go ahead and try."
The Dragon King grabs Sensui's partner by the throat at blazing speed."I don't even know why Sensui puts his trust into people like you."
The figure silently grabs the Dragon King's wrist and applies pressure.
Dragon King"What, what are you doing to me?"
He falls to his knees and lets go.
Sensui's partner calmly steps back and steps out of the Dragon King's reach.
Dragon King"What the hell are you?"
Partner"I am a genma onimusha."
Sensui"Powerful isn't he? Now if you'll kindly piss off, it's playtime."
Sensui backflips off the bridge and lands on the balcony 200 feet below kneeling on one knee, smashing the tile and below, and creating a small crater around him. He stands up and brushes dust off his shoulder and steps out of the crater as it surges with energy remaints.
Sensui"Are you coming?"
The genma looks at the Dragon King for a second then jumps on the railing and free falls to the ground below, he spreads his wings and glides down to the ground by Semsui.
Genma"Any target in particular?"
Sensui"Who else? Let's go."
Sensui and his partner walk into the courtyard where most of the other fighters are training with the battle droids, Sensui looks around the courtyard at many of the participants.
Ravage is surrounded by thirty droids, heavely armored and ready to kill.
*Inside Ravage's head*
A topagraphical map is displayed with his positiom and that of the droids. A lock-on marks the surrounding droids. PROCESSING appears across his visor, suddenly another message comes up saying "Ground Zero".
Ravage"Battle plan accessed, carry out in 3, 2, 1."
Ravages armour splits open as he shoots into the air. The droids around him are suddenly covered in laser disignators.
Ravage"Ground Zero initiated." He glows with blue ionic energy as he crosses his arms. He becomes surrounded by a ball of energy, he then launches into the ground like a warehead and causes an explosion completely destroying the robots. Ravage stands up, without a scratch.
Ravage"Resistance is futile."
In another corner Sensui sees Sub-Zero, using the droids as target practice.
Sub-Zero"Consider yourselves iced."
Sub-Zero creates a gaint collection of sub-zero mist into his palms. It then begins to glow as it surges with power. He then shoots the blast out in a beam like fashon blasting every enemy and freezing them instantly. Sub-Zero creates a kori ring and shoots it through the robots, shattering them instantly.
Sensui steps into the areana.
Sensui"Wait here for a second."
As he steps an army of droids surrounds him.
Sensui channels his energy between his plams.
Sensui"Let's put a little lead in the air, see what falls over."
Sensui shoots the energywave into the sky seconds later the sky goes dark and everyone looks stops what they're doing to see what's going on. They all turn their heads to see that Sensui's behind this.
Sub-Zero along with Ryoko and everyone else"What the hell's he doing?"
Suddenly countless pillars of energy come down on Sensui's surrounding androids, destroying them instantly and sending shock waves through the area. The sky is dark for acouple of minutes, surging with evil lightning. Sensui turns his head at his on lookers eyes blazing.

Need to revive the story abit.


Sabre walks in to see Sensui standing there staring down all the fighters.
Sabre "Whats going on now?Little Sensui showing off again?"
Sensui "Will you ever learn?You cannot match my powers."
Sabre gets right into Sensui's face and stares him in the eyes.
Sabre "WILL I EVER LEARN?hahahaha...will you?
Sensui "Will I what?"
Sabre "Learn that you do not scare me,you do not intimidate me,I dont care how much powers you have,you still ain't gonna indimidate me no matter how hard you try...you see,im not like all the others.I do not fear you,never have and never will."
Sensui "Step away from me,you should be scared...especially with my new partner.
Sabre "Oh yes...whats-his-name.The big guy that was brought to even the score,to make me fear you,to make you feel powerful."
Sensui "Shutup!He was brought to...to...SHUTUP,SHUTUP YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT!"
Sabre "Dont look like you do either."
Sensui raises his hand to punch Sabre as Sabre catches it.
Sabre "Control your anger...little man."
Sabre throws down Sensui's fist and walks away as Ghost follows.They look back.
Sabre "Tell your little bitch I said hi."
The two leave.

(Vandon slowly fades into view in front of Sensui and his partner as Sensui is grinding his teeth from the remarks Sabre had just made)
Vandon: Explain to me what purpose you had of dragging that thing out of the Genma Realm. Perhaps a body guard?
Sensui: WHAT DOES IT MATTER TO YOU!? Besides, your play pal is here, shouldn't you be bothering him?
(Vandon glows a dark glow and the ground beneath them cracks into a deep ravine which Vandon hovers over)
Sensui: Hehe, seems I struck a nerve. Perhaps you're not as strong as I thought you were, considering you're scared to face that weak excuse for an emperor.
Vandon:(Vandon fades then appears beside Sensui staring him coldly in the eyes) He and I shall meet in the tournament after I dismember you limb from limb and have the Shadow Dragon reabsorb the blood of its brother which was used to create you!! (Vandon takes a deep breath then smiles a bit) Besides, the way I see it, I have, at most, 6 enemies. Three of which have there heads so far up their asses that they pose no threat to me, one that is just biding his time to fight the Dragon King and is unwisely overlooking me, and you and your pet. You on the other hand, have everybody in this tournament pissed off at you because you can't just sit back and wait. Now you brought a little friend proving that you are not strong enough to deal with the number of enemies that you have created on your own.
Sensui: Don't underestimate my power, I could destroy everyone here with but a gesture.
Vandon: Then why did you bring him?
Sensui: ....
Vandon: Is it so that if you lose he can perform the blood ritual and save your pathetic cowardly ass?
(Sensui in a quick motion thrusts his arm up to punch Vandon with such force that it would break through his body, but as he thrusts his fist forward, Vandon is already gone)
Vandon: (voice echoing) If you last long enough to fight me, you better fight with all your might because if I beat you. I'll make it impossible for you to come back. The blood ritual will be useless once the Shadow Dragon is reunited as one with the blood of his brother. Enjoy your game. It may prove to be your end.