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07/29/2004 03:54 AM (UTC)
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As Sabre and Ghost walk off Sensui calls out to Sabre.
Sensui"Hey, I have something for you."
Sabre"How stupid do you think I am?"
Sensui"If looks are any indication, then you're dumb as hell."
Sabre turns around in anger only to see a fist coming at his face. Sabre's eyes widen as the hit connects and sends Sabre realing from the courtyard to the arch way enterance at the palace. Sabre digs his hands into the ground trying to slow himself down, unfortunatley all he can grab is a hand full of tiles as he's shot back and hits the arch way hard.
Ghost turns around to Sensui.
Ghost"You'll pay for that!"
Sensui snickers"Doubtful"
As Ghost is about to make a move Sensui's partner warps in half an inch from Ghost's face and looks at him straight in the eyes, glaring all the while.
Ghost"Who are you?"
"Xion"
That's the last thing Ghost hears before Xion grabs him by his head and smashes his skull against his knee causing Ghost to black out while blood drips into his eyes from his forehead.
Sensui jumps a couple of inches into the air and warps towards Sabre who's just getting up.
Sensui grabs him by the throat and pushes him back down to his knees. He shoots to energy spikes into Sabre's calves pinning him from the back.
Sensui"I believe that I was the one who pretty much slaughtered you in the throne room before your master." Sensui tightnes his grip on Sabre's throat as his eyes start to glow. Sabre grabs Sensui's arm hoping to break the hold only to have his arm go limp from the lack of oxygen.
Sensui"I'll say this once. I don't give a damn if you don't fear me. However, if you get in my way, here or in the tournament, next time there won't be anything stopping my from ending your wretched existance." Sensui lets go of Sabre's throat and is about to walk off, when he suddenly grabs Sabre's arm and with one swift palm strike to the shoulder, he breaks off Sabre's arm, and drinks the blood that spills out.
Sabre screams in agony. Sensui's jigon eye opens and glows with an ethereal blue flame.
Sensui"You'd best regenerate and think twice about challanging me again. Next time, it will be my malice blade that rips off your arm. I don't need to remind you that if that happens it's one wound you won't recover from."
As a final measure Sensui creates an exact copy of Sabre's Ice Fang blade and shoot's it through Sabre's shoulder, pinning him further to the ground.
Sensui"Being cold-blooded's got to suck."
Sabre, with blood trikling out of his mouth and his new wounds manages to speak."Damn, you. When I get out of this, there will be no place you can hide."
Sensui lurks down and looks at Sabre in the eyes, then smirks."I look forward to it. But next time, instead of being a little bitch and jumping me from behind confront me face to face."
Sensui phases out in a tornadao of black fire, leaving Sabre to his wounds, as the Ice Fang replica hinders his regeneration.

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DKakaR, nice addition. It's cool to see that you noticed that Talon is part of Sensui. So the Shadow Dragon and Talon are connected? Works for me.
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Sabre tears the blade out of his arm and sits up.As he begins to stand,he feels a sting in his arm,he looks down to see nothing.His arm is lying on the floor.
Sabre "Oh yes.That little thing."
He picks up his arm and pops it back into place then bandages it up.
Sabre "Once again,using your little body guard to make things even.Really,you should learn to protect yourself.As said before,all your enemys,it will be your death,and there is nothing you can do about it,not even Xion."
Sabre walks up to Ghost and throws him onto his shoulders.
Sabre "Ghost,he will be yours,not before Ryoko though,she will die first."
Gabrielle runs in front of him.
Gabrielle "Why?"
Sabre begins to walk away."Stay away from me."
Gabrielle "Tell me."
Sabre "Stay away from me..."
Gabrielle "Why Sabre?You were not born bad.Just tell me."
Sabre stares her in the eyes
Sabre "WHY?WHY?YOU DON'T KNOW ME,YOU DON'T KNOW I WASN'T BORN BAD.STAY AWAY FROM ME!"
Gabrielle "Calm down.I have seen you before,you were working for me,with me.To save me from Sensui."
Sabre calms down "You see,that name,Sensui,a dreaded bastard,I helped,to get to him."
Gabrielle "Thats not the only reason,I know it.You are not bad in heart."
Sabre "Stop this shit!We will talk later,just stay away from me."
Gabrielle "Why do you want to kill Ryoko?"
Sabre "I have my reasons..."
Sabre walks away with Ghost still on his shoulders.
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Cool, just one thing. Sensui didn't just brake Sabre's arm. He broke it OFF!!! That's how he drank the blood that spilled out of it. Like I said, I enjoy having this power struggle with Sensui Sabre, and Vandon.
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07/29/2004 04:43 PM (UTC)
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SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
Cool, just one thing. Sensui didn't just brake Sabre's arm. He broke it OFF!!! That's how he drank the blood that spilled out of it. Like I said, I enjoy having this power struggle with Sensui Sabre, and Vandon.


Oh thanks,didnt read it right I guess,I fixed it now.
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-High Balcony-
After her earlier discussion with Sabre Gabrielle distants herself from the others to have some time to think. As she leans over the rail and looks over the courtyard she takes a deep breath and sighs.
Gabrielle"How could I have lost to him? Could I have been holding back? Impossible!"
A voice is answers from behind."If you feel so bad, I can end your suffering right here."
Gabrielle turns around to see Shao Kahn standing there with his war hammer, cape flaing in the light breeze.
Gabrielle"Kahn!! What's your business here?"
Kahn"Simple, to extinguish every trace of you sickening mortals, along with the Dragon King and Vandon."
Gabrielle"Not if you die here and now!"
Kahn"You think you can kill me? You will die trying."
Gabrielle"Hah! You think your threats have any meaning to me? Sensui has put me through such pain and suffering that your threats are nothing."
Kahn"Sensui? So, the fallen demi-god is here after all. Why hasn't he shown his face?"
Gabrielle"Who cares?! You wont live long enough to see it."
Gabrielle launches at Kahn with a swift and vicious storm of kicks and punches, all of which hit there marks, on target and with full power. Gabrielle's assault causes Kahn to slide across the balconey, tearing at the floor with his feet. When he finally stops, he grabs his chest and falls to one knee, while leaning on his hammer.
Gabrielle has a vicious look in her eyes as she sinks into her stnace and gets ready for another attack. She lunges at Kahn full force with a tornado kick.
Gabrielle"Your life ends her Kahn. I'll make sure of that."
Kahn looks up and quickly regains his balance. He warps just as the kick is about to make contact with his skull. Gabrielles heels comes down on the floor, causing it to shatter.
Gabrielle"Where is he?"
Kahn warps in with four after images fillling in, right behind Gabrielle, arms crossed and chuckeling.
Kahn"You have grown strong little one. Too bad I'm much stronger."
Kahn says his signature quote"You, will die." He then warps again, leaving a trail of after images.
Gabrielle takes a deep breath and focuses. She exhales and does throws out a back kick which is exactly where Kahn appeared, hiiting him in the kneck. Unfortunatley, Kahn is unharmed. He grabs Gabrielle's leg with one arm so she can't get away. He then hit's her across the face with a strong combo of single hand back fist strikes, scraping her beautiful face with his spiked knuckles. While Gabrielle is dazed Kahn lets go of her leg and as quick as lightning hits her one more time across the face with a spinning back fist, causing her to fly into one of the far corners of the balconey, leavin an imprint on the wall. Gabrielle, bruised, but not beaten stands up, with bleeding scars on her cheecks, and ripped clothing, regains her balance and gets into her fighting stance, only to get a glimpse of ball of screaming green energy launched at her, from Kahn's palms she dives out the way, avoiding the blast, but the after shock fead back delivers a blow, that manages to knock the wind out of her, tossing her up a couple of inches into the air. From twenty feet away, Kahn does a Shadow Shoulder and rams Gabrielle against a wall.
Gabrielle"AAAAAGGGHHHH!!"
Kahn"What a lovely scream. Now do it again!"
Kahn grabs her by the ankle and tosses her fifteen feet into the air. And does a Shadow Knee into her stomach. Gabrielle coughs up spit and blood. In mid air Kahn grabs her by her arm and tosses her into the ground. Gabrielle shoots down into the concrete like a bullet. As she regains conciousness, she sees Kahn winding up in mid air.
Kahn"Now die." Kahn grabs his hammer and shoots the qaurter ton weapon, head first at the downed Gabrielle. Gabrielle looks on with fear. Her injuries, along with the incomping projectile have rendered her paralyzed.
-Dragon Chamber-
Hatsuma, has been moved back into his chamber, to await the next match. Already, on the brink of death, and his power fading Hatsuma can barely stay concious. As he drifts off and closes his eyes, he somehow sees what's happening to Gabrielle, and the fate that awaits her.
Hatsuma snaps back to conciousness and lashes out."Gabrielle!!!!!" His eyes glow a familair white fire, as he channels some of his energy and releases it. The Sennoku spell constricts his energy again and fills him with crippling pain as he screams.
-Back on the High Balcony-
Gabrielle is seconds from death, when she hears an echo."Gabrielle!!!!"
Gabrielle"Hatsuma!?!"
Suddenly she is covered in a bubble made of diamond which protects her from the war hammer. Kahn lands back on the ground, with a confused look on his face."What is this?" As he's about continue the assault, when the Dragon King walks in (or out).
Dragon King"Enough!! Kahn, I said that you will have your chance in the tournament, but I will not allow you to dismantle my castle.(There's been enough damage already.) Now leave."
Kahn smirks and stretches out his hand, the war hammer flies into his grasp as he leaves without question, only saying "Next time there will be nothing to save you."
He and the Dragon King leave Gabrielle alone. Seconds later the diamond shield around her disappears, and her friends run to her side, Ryoko, Sub-Zero and Smoke leading the way.
Ryoko"Gabby!"
Smoke"Where's Nightwolf when you need him?"
Sub-Zero"Forget that, get her to her quarters so she can rest."
Before they can leave
Nightwolf stumbles in with a gash on the side of his head.
Nightwolf"Gab..rielle!" He takes a step and falls to his knees.
Smoke rushes to help him up but Nightwolf refuses.
Nightwolf"I'll be fine."
Ryoko rests Gabrielle's head on her lap and looks at Nightwolf"Please you've got to use that potion on her. Please!!"
Nightwolf"I can't. It's too early. If she recieves another dose, it could very well kill her. The effects will still be in use, but it will take much longer for her to heal. But I can try speed up the procces, but that might to more harm then good.
Gabrielle manages to speak"Do it, please. I need to see somebody."
Nightwolf"Very well. Everybody, step away." Nightwolf takes out his tomahawk and charges it with energy."May the great wolf Keeba protect you my friend." He launches the tomahawk into Gabbrielle, hitting her dead center in the chest.
Sub-Zero"Have you lost your mind?"
The energy in the tomahawk surges through Gabrielles body, and wraps her in an energy coil.
Gabrielle screams in pain.
Ryoko, not fully understanding what's going on screams at Nightwolf"What are you doing to her?!"
Paying no attention to Ryoko Nightwolf starts chanting "Yahkue, yahkue no samshu na kuara. Yahkue, yahkue no samshu na kuara." Suddenly Nightwolf's spirit wolf enters his body and his eyes blank out. He forms his bow and shoots an anergy arrow into Gabrielle, causing her to fill with light, as the energy coil dissapears.
Nightwolf"Take Gabrielle to her room. She'll be fine in a few hours."
The others leave as Nightwolf, exhausted falls to his knees and tries to regain his strength.
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(The Dragon King walks into his throne room to find Kahn sitting there smiling condescendingly)
The Dragon King: You are quite bold, EX emperor of Outworld.
Shao Kahn: Just admiring your throne.
The Dragon King: I think you have had enough time to pretend you're in power again, Kahn. Now move yourself so the real ruler of the realms may sit upon the throne.
Shao Kahn: (standing he smiles) It fits me nicely, just making sure that I'll be comfortable after I destroy you.
The Dragon King: (laughs a heavy laugh then looks diectly into Shao Kahn's eyes) Awfully confident for a man who was nearly defeated by two sorcerors.
Shao Kahn: They got what was coming to them, unfortunately I was unable to deliver the finishing blow to Quan Chi, Someone els took the liberty of doing that.
The Dragon King: Correct me if I'm wrong but Shang Tsung is still alive and well. In fact he was at this very tournament posing as Raiden.
Shao Kahn: (Smiling widely) Oh Tsung? He's still alive, but well... Hmmm I'll let you decide for yourself. (He summons a portal and reaches in dragging out a half naked bloody body whose hands and ankles are tied together. There are several bloody cuts in his body exposing his ribs and even the bone of his skull. If it were not for the fact he was breathing, one would swear he was dead) Say hello to the Dragon King, Tsung.
Shang Tsung: *cough* ahhh....eerrrggg... *cough* (he coughs up blood)
Shao Kahn: After his plan failed to work I awaited him at his lair. I was quite amused by the look on his face when he saw me. Anyway, I was waiting for a good time to tie up this loose end, and there is no better time than the present. (Shao Kahn winds up with his war hammer) Good bye Shang Tsung.
Shang Tsung: (with a horrified look upon his face) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! (the sound of his scream echoes as his skull gives way to the force of the heavy hammer slamming down upon his head. Shards of his skull fly in different directions and a pool of blood forms on the floor as a huge area of cracked floor is left with a few recognizeable remains of Shang Tsung's head)
The Dragon King: I'm beginning to think I should have held this tournament elsewhere, I grow weary of the constant damage done to my castle.
Shao Kahn: (grinning) I apologize about that, it was a nice floor too, I liked the tiling job.
The Dragon King: (with a distasteful look on his face) I don't suppose you're planning to clean that up.
Shao Kahn: HAHAHAHAHA!!! Not at all! Do I look like your maid service? Get Baraka to do it, he's always been good at dirty jobs.
The Dragon King: (narrowing his eyes at Kahn) quite...
Shao Kahn: Anyway I just needed to feel that joy of killing someone again. Its been awhile. (walks out the door of the throne room) See you later, alligator.
The Dragon King: I will enjoy watching you get ripped apart whether it be by one of the contestants, my pet, or me.
(A growling can be heard in the background as something is moving behind the bars in a prison like cell behind the Dragon King's throne)
The Dragon King: (turning) patience... be patient your time will arrive.
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07/30/2004 01:29 AM (UTC)
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Sabre wakes up from a sleep,seeing what had happened while he was out in his head.He sees Shao Kahn going after Gabrielle and killing Shang Tsung.
Sabre "He was mine...stay away."
Sabre looks into Shao Kahns mind and speaks to him.
Sabre "Shao Kahn...he was mine,Shang Tsung,you will regret killing him.Stay away...STAY AWAY!"
Shao Kahn stops in his tracks as the voice fades.
Shao Kahn "The hell was that?Must of been just me"
He hears the voice again "Stay away."
Shao Kahn "Stay away,from what.I have nothing to be afraid of."
Shao Kahn walks out of the thrownroom,then makes his way out the castle,walking outside.He sees Gabrielle and walks up to her.
Shao Kahn "Time to finish what I started!"
He raises the war hammer and brings it down with tremendous force...only to have an arm catch it.
Shao Kahn "And who are you?"
Sabre "STAY AWAY!"
Shao Kahn "You!"
Sabre tosses Shao Kahn backwards as he stares in shock.
Shao Kahn "I'LL KILL YOU!"
Sabre "Try me."
Shao Kahn runs to Sabre as Sabre moves behind him and shoves him down.He then jumps onto Kahn and bends him backwards.
Sabre "You shouldnt of kill Tsung,he was MINE!"
He pulls back harder then jumps off.
Sabre "And oh yes...STAY AWAY FROM HER!"
Shao Kahn "Make me."
Sabre walks away.
Sabre "I won't have to."
Shao Kahn "What is that supposed to mean?"
Sabre walks away,as Gabrielle runs beside him.
Gabrielle "Thank you,he would have killed me."
Sabre "You should be more damn careful.Now come,we talk."
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-Palace Roof Spire-
Alone, Sensui balances on one of the pikes and meditates. Drinking Sabre's blood has allowed Sensui to search through Sabre's memmories with relative ease. Sensui is shown a vision of the slaughter Sabre committed in his past life, when he slew the occupants of the castle. He sees the memmory of Tsung and how he used Sensui's magic to morph Sabre into the dragon ninja he is today.
Sensui opens his eyes and stares off into the distance as the Outworld Sun sets, and the horizon past the Living Forest is visible.
Sensui closes his eyes again and sees why Sabre entered the tournament. He sees that he wanted revenge on Tsung for what he turned him into.
Sensui"Hmph how simple. Drinking his blood has given me the ability to read his emotions. Now that I know which spell Tsung used to morph Sabre, it will be easy to bring him to his knees."
Sensui starts chanting something in a quiet voice. His black flame turns an icey blue. The top of the spire Sensui's standing on instantly freezes over.
Sensui"So, Sabre was one of the few dragons that could tap into the power of his ice lung. Impressive, very impressive. He has mastered Cold Fire, a technique that only Talon himself could do. However, so can I." His eyes glow two different colors, one icey blue the other, demonic black. He puts his palms together and slowley seperates them. His dark fire, merges with cold fire creating an imbalance between the two opposing energies. Sensui concentrates and fuses them into one blast. He shoots it into the horizon, through the Living Forest, all the way to the sea. The blast, burns, and freezes everything in it's path, destroying it instantly. A Huge strip of land, raging with cold fire, and absolutley no life scars the scenery, as the mid section of the Living Forest has been descimated, and the sea split in two for a few moments before the walls come crashing down and filling the scar.
Sensui"Very intresting." As he looks at his left forearm, he sees that it's frozen over from weilding the Cold Fire. He clenches into a fist, and it thaws instantly."Very intresting indeed."
Sensui then sences a spike in the Netherealm. His eyes glow with black flames."It appears we have a V.I.P" Sensui turns to Xion who has just found his friend.
Sensui"Wait for my arrival. I'll be back shortly."
Xion"Of course"
Sensui"And TRY to entertain yourself."
Sensui does a flip off the spire and free falls in a powerdive towards the ground. He glows for a split second and vanishes out off sight, leaving a smoking crater in where he would've landed."
Sensui arrives at his palace, the Chaos Sanctuary, and ignites his fists. He shoots them into the air, opening up a portal, as Shang Tsung's soul shoots in, straigh into one of the lava pits. Sensui reaches in and pulls the wraith out of magma.
Sensui"Well well, the mighty sorcerer that killed Lui Kang. What a joke."
Tsung"Mind your words if I had my body I would tear your soul right out."
Sensui "Really? Is that what's stopping you?" Sensui's fist glows as he grabs the wraith by its neck."Lets test that theory out." Suddenly, the wraith is engulfed in spectral flames. It screams uncontrolabley as a skeleton is forged from the fire. The wraith's spectral essence bonds with the skeleton. Shortly after, the skeleton begins to bleed, as living tissue forms on the bare bones, such as muscle and tendons. It's eyes fill in, and so do the organs. It is soon covered in skin, and a nude figure is floating in the flames. As the hell fire subsides the figure touches solid ground. It opens it's eyes, as the hair fills in and power returns.
Wraith"I, AM SHANG TSUNG!!!"
Sensui"You're also naked, lets do something about that."
Tsung's body becomes outlined in cinders, and his body is covered in his familair robe, and his chest in his gold armour. Tsung smiles as he clenches his fists and his power flows through his body once again.
Sensui"I believe you were going to rip my soul out now, so if you please."
Tsung smirks and quickley grabs Sensui by the throat, and plunges his fist into Sensui's chest, as it glows with spectral power
Tsung"You fool. You were warned that your cokyness would be the end of your existance." Tsung closes his eyes and tries to look into Sensui's soul, however, all he sees is endless torment, and all he hears are millions of screams. Suddenly, he sees an image of Talon who tries to snap at him. Tsung opens his eyes.
Tsung"What the hell was that? No matter, your soul will be mine." As he says this his eyes look up and instantly fill with fear, as an ethereal image of some horrific creature is right behind Sensui. It corrisponds diredtly with Sensui's actions as it spreads it's wings. As Sensui grabs Shang Tsung's hand, the creature's image does the same. The moment Sensui touches Tsung, Tsung's arm is blown off, only the wraith image is left.
Sensui grabs the arms that's thrust into his chest, again the ethereal image does the same. He touches Tsung's arm, and again it is instantly blown off. Tsung no armless stands there in horror. The image disappears back into Sensui, and his injury heals instantly.
Sensui"My mastery of soul control make you look like a novice." Sensui rips the wraith from it's new body and contains it into his fist. He sets it on fire and shoots it back into it's body, setting the whole thing on fire. Tsung screams with agony. Sensui pushes Tsung down on his knees and puts his hand over his forehead. An evil light shines and a pentagram is burned into Tsung's head.
Sensui"YOUR soul is mine." He shoots Tsung on an iron cross with his soul control. He clenches his fist and Tsung beggins to burn from the inside, slowly and painfully, just like Gabrielle did a while ago.
Sensui"Experience Eternal Damnation. You will never, die or loose conciousness. You will feel every ounce of pain until I say otherwise. Now, I have a tournament to get back to."
Sensui kneel's on one knee, and then disappears in a tornado of fire.
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ok, guys...guys. I just want to say something that I see as kind of silly. It seems that certain characters continually have to try prove that they are more powerful then every other character. I didn't have an issue with it when it occurred between created characters but when one of our characters completely owns an established bad ass already within the MK franchise doesn't that kind of undermine the purpose of mortal kombat. If all these people could easily destroy the Dragon King and Kahn like children, what is the purpose of the story?

I think that the struggles between Sabre and Sensui in particular have become a "whose got the bigger dick" match which kind of makes the story a little silly if most of it is one character trying to prove how macho he is to the other character. Now don't get me wrong, rivalries are great if done correctly, but when a rivalry is when one writer makes their character god for a segment and then the other character's writer does the same in response, it takes the fun out of it. The way these characters have portrayed themselves, if they lose in the tournament it wouldn't make any sense. How can these overpowered demi gods, half dragons, (and even my character was overpowered a bit in the story but I toned it down when I entered Kahn into the picture) possibly lose to any of the other character's in a one on one match? It makes no sense, and at least two of them have to lose and all three of them might.

I don't want to sound like I'm attacking anyone but I think the power of these character's needs to stop being an episode of DBZ where the characters become considerably stronger for no apparent reason and spend half an hour doing it. Lets try to keep each character within reasonable range of being beaten by eachother so that the outcomes of certain matches make sense. Not only that but also because all of the power becomes spread through only a few characters and overshadows the others and I don't think its fair if other characters become meer toys to a select few characters.
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Agreed. I'll tune down Sensui, just so it won't be like DBZ. Plus, I'm getting a bit tired of having him power up, so yeah, I'll be more conservative.
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07/30/2004 05:51 AM (UTC)
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Good smile I was scared I'd get a negative response from that. I am enjoying this and I just want everyone participating to feel their contributions mean something and that their character won't just be used as a rag doll by the top overpowered bad asses.
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07/30/2004 05:56 AM (UTC)
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TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote:
ok, guys...guys. I just want to say something that I see as kind of silly. It seems that certain characters continually have to try prove that they are more powerful then every other character. I didn't have an issue with it when it occurred between created characters but when one of our characters completely owns an established bad ass already within the MK franchise doesn't that kind of undermine the purpose of mortal kombat. If all these people could easily destroy the Dragon King and Kahn like children, what is the purpose of the story?

I think that the struggles between Sabre and Sensui in particular have become a "whose got the bigger dick" match which kind of makes the story a little silly if most of it is one character trying to prove how macho he is to the other character. Now don't get me wrong, rivalries are great if done correctly, but when a rivalry is when one writer makes their character god for a segment and then the other character's writer does the same in response, it takes the fun out of it. The way these characters have portrayed themselves, if they lose in the tournament it wouldn't make any sense. How can these overpowered demi gods, half dragons, (and even my character was overpowered a bit in the story but I toned it down when I entered Kahn into the picture) possibly lose to any of the other character's in a one on one match? It makes no sense, and at least two of them have to lose and all three of them might.

I don't want to sound like I'm attacking anyone but I think the power of these character's needs to stop being an episode of DBZ where the characters become considerably stronger for no apparent reason and spend half an hour doing it. Lets try to keep each character within reasonable range of being beaten by eachother so that the outcomes of certain matches make sense. Not only that but also because all of the power becomes spread through only a few characters and overshadows the others and I don't think its fair if other characters become meer toys to a select few characters.


I have to agree here guys. The story has been GREAT...however, this power struggle between Sabre and Sensui is getting a bit out of hand. Also TDKakaR even said the he himself was guilty of this...but he realized it and toned it down with Kahn's arrival. Like he said..Not any of our characters should be able to toss Kahn or the DK for that matter around like a ragdoll. Otherwise what's the point of a Tournament if it's that easy? Take the Fight Gabby had with Kahn for instance...she got some hits in..but in the end was ultimately OWNED by him. I didn't complain though as this was how it should have been. Gabrielle was not in Kahn's league...she attacked him and got bitch slapped for her trouble. She should have known better I say. DO NOT take this as an attack. Every writer to contribute to this story has been great. The story is more successful Than I ever imagined it would be..but if things continue the way they are...things are gonna go down hill fast. I don't think any of us wants that to hapen. Please just take the characters down a notch. You can have fights with whomever you choose to..but let's keep it logical ok? Kahn is an UBER badass...and it would take ALOT to put him down. Same, I assume, will go for the DK perhaps even more so.

Do not take offense to this...it's only constructive critism wich should be allowed and welcomed. Everyone is a good writer here, and I wouldn't want anyone to quit writing over hurt feelings.
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07/30/2004 06:06 AM (UTC)
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BTW, What'd you think of the fight between Gabbrielle and Kahn? I'm pretty proud of it. Yeah, looking over Sensui, I think that he should be quiet powerful but I don't think he should be unstoppable, the last thing I want is for people to get bored, so there will be changes starting in 3, 2, 1, now.
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07/30/2004 06:11 AM (UTC)
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The fight between Gabrielle and Kahn was bad ass I was glad to see someone else other than me jumping at the chance to use Kahn in the story after I introduced him.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
BTW, What'd you think of the fight between Gabbrielle and Kahn? I'm pretty proud of it. Yeah, looking over Sensui, I think that he should be quiet powerful but I don't think he should be unstoppable, the last thing I want is for people to get bored, so there will be changes starting in 3, 2, 1, now.

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07/30/2004 06:15 AM (UTC)
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SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
BTW, What'd you think of the fight between Gabbrielle and Kahn? I'm pretty proud of it. Yeah, looking over Sensui, I think that he should be quiet powerful but I don't think he should be unstoppable, the last thing I want is for people to get bored, so there will be changes starting in 3, 2, 1, now.


Very well done Smoke. As I said above..exactly how it should have played out. I like that Gabrielle was not afraid to take Kahn on...but was satisfied with the result as that fight At this time, could end no other way. And I'll admit, lol, I am VERY happy that Hatsuma saved her from certain death. I thank you for that.
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07/30/2004 06:22 AM (UTC)
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TomTaz Wrote:

SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
BTW, What'd you think of the fight between Gabbrielle and Kahn? I'm pretty proud of it. Yeah, looking over Sensui, I think that he should be quiet powerful but I don't think he should be unstoppable, the last thing I want is for people to get bored, so there will be changes starting in 3, 2, 1, now.

Very well done Smoke. As I said above..exactly how it should have played out. I like that Gabrielle was not afraid to take Kahn on...but was satisfied with the result as that fight At this time, could end no other way. And I'll admit, lol, I am VERY happy that Hatsuma saved her from certain death. I thank you for that.


Glad you liked it. Yeah, you know Hatsuma will look out for her. It felt kind of natural to Kahn own her. I also like Nightwolf's part at the end. I didn't want it to be a repeating theme where everytime somebody gets whooped the call for Nightwolf's special potion, so I set a limit, I hope that works out.
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07/30/2004 12:08 PM (UTC)
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This is actually why I have stopped writing for a bit.I can say im honestly getting sick of the Sensui/Sabre thing,all the power ups,all the fights,all getting sickening,so im planning on ending that rivalry soon.And with Sabre throwing Kahn,that wasnt meant to be an "Im stronger than you" thing,it was more trying to get into something else,so if it sounded wrong,it wasnt meant to.And I havent really upgraded Sabre,except for once,I have sortof just made him and Sensui go at it.So dont really expect that to continue much longer.Like I said before,with Kahn it was not meant to be the way it rubbed people,just bringing a new aspect of the story into play.Something new.I also think we need more writers,for other angles.As a matter of fact,now that I think about it.Expect the Sensui/Sabre to end today.

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ok, guys...guys. I just want to say something that I see as kind of silly. It seems that certain characters continually have to try prove that they are more powerful then every other character. I didn't have an issue with it when it occurred between created characters but when one of our characters completely owns an established bad ass already within the MK franchise doesn't that kind of undermine the purpose of mortal kombat. If all these people could easily destroy the Dragon King and Kahn like children, what is the purpose of the story?

I think that the struggles between Sabre and Sensui in particular have become a "whose got the bigger dick" match which kind of makes the story a little silly if most of it is one character trying to prove how macho he is to the other character. Now don't get me wrong, rivalries are great if done correctly, but when a rivalry is when one writer makes their character god for a segment and then the other character's writer does the same in response, it takes the fun out of it. The way these characters have portrayed themselves, if they lose in the tournament it wouldn't make any sense. How can these overpowered demi gods, half dragons, (and even my character was overpowered a bit in the story but I toned it down when I entered Kahn into the picture) possibly lose to any of the other character's in a one on one match? It makes no sense, and at least two of them have to lose and all three of them might.

I don't want to sound like I'm attacking anyone but I think the power of these character's needs to stop being an episode of DBZ where the characters become considerably stronger for no apparent reason and spend half an hour doing it. Lets try to keep each character within reasonable range of being beaten by eachother so that the outcomes of certain matches make sense. Not only that but also because all of the power becomes spread through only a few characters and overshadows the others and I don't think its fair if other characters become meer toys to a select few characters.

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07/30/2004 02:00 PM (UTC)
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It keeps screwing up on me,im posting it in another post.Hope it works.
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07/30/2004 04:31 PM (UTC)
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Need to end this thing,too sickening now,well heres the end of Sensui and Sabre.


Sabre and Gabrielle are walking away as Sensui appears infront of them.Sabre continues to walk past.
Sabre "Stay away from me."
Sensui "Lets finish this!"
Sabre "Its already over."
Sensui "Get back here,we will finish this thing right here.Right now."
Sabre "Not possible.Its already over,im not going to fight you anymore,just stay away from me."
Sensui warps behind Sabre and holds a blade to his throat.
Sabre "Go ahead,do it."
Sensui begins to press the blade in then stops.
Sabre "Come on whats stopping you."
Sensui "It is not over."
Sabre "Yes it is.Im not fighting you anymore you overpowered bastard."
Sensui "Dont talk to me like that.We finish it now."
Sabre "Go ahead,finish me."
Sensui puts away the blade.
Sensui "Fine.Then this thing is over."
Sabre "You have enough enemys already,now you have one less,but still.Dont do anything too stupid to piss me off.I will come running."
Sensui leaves in a tornado of flames.
Sabre "Same old exit.He better watch himself."
Gabrielle "Why did you do that?"
Sabre "I have my reasons..."
Gabrielle "Why do you want to kill Ryoko?Why does Ghost want to kill Ryoko."
Ghost appears infront of the two.
Sabre "He is under the control of The Dragon King.You want him back,kill the king."
Ghost "Ryoko must die.She will die,I will kill her"
Gabrielle "NO!Look into your soul.She is your friend."
Ghost "You cannot tell me what to do."
Ghost picks up Gabrielle by the throat."
Sabre looks at Ghost "Put her down."
Ghost "You cant control me."
Sabre grabs his wrist and applies pressure causing him to drop Gabrielle.
Sabre "Pressure points,learn them."
Ghost looks towards Sabre and picks him up by the throat.He begins to choke.
Sabre "What are you doing?Put me down."
Ghost "You have no control of what I do."
Sabre "Gabrielle leave."
Ghost tightens his grip then throws Sabre through a wall.Sabre is flat on the ground until he stands slowly.He stares at his wounds.They do not heal.
Sabre "What is going on?"
Shao Kahn walks in. "Immortal no more."
Sabre "What are you talking about?!"
Shao Kahn "I have more power then you thought.When you touched me,I mearly stripped you of your immortality.POOF!"
Sabre "Poof?Screw you Kahn."
Shao Kahn "You shouldnt of attacked me,now you have one more enemy."
Kahn walks away as Sabre looks as he sees that Ghost is gone.
Sabre "Traitor,where did you go."
Baraka walks infront of the broken wall.
Baraka "Remember me?
Sabre "Baraka...where have you been hiding?"
Baraka "I havent been hiding,I have mearly been staying away from you."
Sabre "And now you are coming after me at my weakest point?COWARD!"
Baraka "I am no coward!You will die no..."
Baraka is struck by a blue ball and frozen,just as he was about to leap.
Sabre "Sub?"
Sub-Zero "Looks like you needed some help."


I enjoyed writing this,need to get the Sensui and Sabre thing over with.And also bring back an old rivalry.Plus some twists in Sabre,goodbye immortality,that needed to go,not as fun with it.I would like some opinions on this,if it was too much or not,and I couldnt really think of a good way to end Sensui and Sabre,besides one dying so I did this.
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07/30/2004 06:27 PM (UTC)
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Kahn walks through the halls of the tournament participant's rooms with his War Hammer in hand. He sees a maid coming out of one of the rooms with a basket full of clothes.

Kahn walks up to the maid and asked,"Where the hell is KaTian?"

The maid shrugged her arms and walked past Kahn with her basket in hand.

Kahn grew furious and said,"Bitch, I asked you a question!" He held his War Hammer with both hands and swung it hard into the back of the maid knocking her through the wall, onto the grass outside. Kahn stepped through the hole in the wall and over to the maid's body.

A voice behind him said,"Dad."

Kahn turned to see Mileena limping to him and he said,"What the hell happened to you?"

Mileena replied,"KaTian."

"You can't beat KaTian?! You taught her everything she knows!,"scolded Kahn.

Mileena shook her head and said,"I know I failed but I've got an idea."

Kahn folded his arms and said,"I'm listening..."

Mileena continued,"She thinks I'm dead so we use that to our advantage."

Kahn agreed and replied,"Ok..."

Mileena gets a smirk on her face,"Alright....

-The Dragon King's Throne Room-
Deceptame sneaks into the room and runs up to the Dragon King's throne.

Deceptame remembers the throne from his past life in the Dragon King's Army.

"I will pay you back for what you did to me...," Deceptame said to himself.

Deceptame formed a ball of dark energy with his hand and placed it behind his throne chair. He started to leave the room, he got to the door, looked back at the Dragon King's throne, grows an evil smirk, and leaves, closing the door quietly behind him.
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07/31/2004 04:36 AM (UTC)
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OK, I promised I'd power down Sensui, or at least show that he isn't unstoppable.
-Palace Halls-
Sensui is still angry from what happened between him and Sabre outside.
He paces back and forth then calms down.
Sensui"What the hell was that all about. He wanted to tear my head off, now he ignores me."
He opens his fist and creates an image out of flames. Once again it's the image of the demi-goddess of water Tsunami.
Sensui"I have all this power, and what has it brought me?" He slams his fist through a wall in anger "Nothing!!!"
He calms down again as he senses a presence behind him.
Sensui"Kahn, what a pleasure to see you again."
Kahn "Likewise. You seem troubled, maybe I can put that to rest?" He takes out his war hammer.
Sensui snicker and turns around with a swift Crescent Kick at Kahns head. His kick only hits an after image as Kahn warps behind Sensui with the hammer already in full swing, coming down on Sensui. As the hammer is about to connect Sensui warps in back of Kahn and shoots him with a ball of energy right in the back. Kahn is thrown forward, as his cape is now ruined and he has scortch marks on his back. He regains his balance and stands still for a second, then he turns around and shoots his energy sphere at Sensui. It connects perfectly and sends Sensui flying out of the hall way and into an inner chamber, right into a pillar. His body hits hard and falls to the ground.
Kahn walks in with his hammer slung over his shoulder."How very dissapointing." Before he can make another move Sensui leaps up with his arm dislocated out of its socket.
Sensui"This is far from over."
Kahn"You have only one good arm, that alone wont save you."
Without a word Sensui quickly gathers energy into his arm and forms into into a ball.
Sensui"I haven't used this in quiet some time."
He shoots the ball of dark energy into the ground, causing a fissure flow to open and rage towards Kahn. The dark emperor is caught of gaurd and get's thrown back by the fead back. He manages to land on his feet and avoid the rest of the attack. His skin is slightly charred from the hot air that escaped.
Kahn"I will burry you alive."
Sensui pops his arm back in place."What do you want from me? Are really ready to die now?"
Kahn"I won't be the one who'll be screaming in agony."
Sensui"You have no idea of what agony truely is."
Sensui and Kahn charge at each other full speed and lock hands in the center of the room. they get each other in a Mercy grab, and Kahn puts Sensui down on one knee.
Sensui lets out a groan.
Kahn"Who will weap for you when you die by my hand.?"
Sensui"I weap for no one, and no one weaps for me!" With that Sensui does a flip kick and hits Kahn underneath the chin, causing him to fall backwards and break the hold. Unfortuneatley, this caused Sensui to rip his fore armes out of their sockets.
Kahn stands up and laughs"You have broken your main arsenal, now you will die by my hands without question." He charges Sensui who can't strike a visible defense while his arms are useless. Kahn revs up his forearm, spiked side out and runs right through Sensui, hitting him across the chest with the barbs on the pass-by. Sensui's goes tumbling into one of the corners of the room, scraping the ground and hitting hard.
Kahn"Now it's time for your life to fade from this world."
Sensui manages to get up, seamingly unscathed, arms still dangling."Not...quiet." Sensui begins to glow his signature black and blue flames. He shoots his arms to his sides, with enough force to snap them back into place. Before can can realize what's going on he's hit with a rising palm underneath his chin and an elbow strike to his spine. Finally he's hit in the ribs with a roundhouse kick and goes into a barrel roll across the room. Sensui stands their ready for another attack. Kahn get's up and stumbles back before catching his balance.
He takes a deep breath"You trueley are an awesome fighter, I look foreward to ending your life infront of everyone and useing your had as a trophy for all to see."
Sensui comes out of his stance."Few have given me a rush like you. I will enjoy an all out battle when the time comes. Now if you'll excuse me, I have people's lives to mess with."
Kahn turns to the exit and slings his hammer across his shoulder"Of course." He walks out of sight. When he is in the clear, he reaches to the spot where Sensui kicked him. His hand is stained with blood. Back in the inner chamber, Sensui stumbles foreward as he coughs up blood. He spits it out and grins. He dissapears in a storm of flames. The skirmish between Kahn and Sensui ended without out a victor as both opponents left battered, bleeding, but far from broken.
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08/01/2004 06:02 AM (UTC)
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Ghost sits, unmoving. To the normal eye...he seems most calm. However the goings on in his mind are a different story.

"Let me go! You cannot use me to hurt my friends! I cannot...no...will not kill Ryoko!"

"Hahahaha..Collin, you speak as if you have a choice when there is none. You are mine! I pull your strings my puppet. And make no mistake, you will kill Ryoko."

Ghost stares at the Dragon King, hatred in his features. This is not the physical Ghost, merely his psychic image. He is bound by glowing chains, unable to lunge for the Dragon King...unable to do anything but watch as his body commits unspeakable acts against his comrades. "I'll free myself eventually monster! When I do, I'm coming for you. When that happens no power in this realm nor any other will deliver you from my wrath." With that Collin Looks away from the Dragon King in disgust.

"Your..wrath? Hahahahahahaha what wrath?! You're an insect to me! I could destroy you with but a thought!" Dragon King grabs Ghost's face and turns it towards him roughly. "You would do well to remember that puppet."

'You keep thinking that way. Make no mistake, I will be free. I have a plan that will work, as soon as I can contact Nightwolf. Then you're finished!' Ghost thinks, as he silently stares into the Dragon King's reptilian eyes.

-Palace Grounds-

Gabrielle knocks on Nightwolf's door, she was wondering why he had been avoiding her ever since the Kahn incident.

"Come in" Nightwolf called.
"Hi, it's Gabrielle. Is this a bad time?"
"N-No..Not at all. What is it?"
"Well, I..the thing is..I think you've been avoiding me lately. I don't understand why. Have I done something? Please tell me."

Nightwolf Stares at Gabrielle. He cannot believe the sincerity he sees in her eyes. But how can this be? It was she who attacked him, she who was going to kill him. She had told him that she was really in this tournament to help the Dragon King cripple the forces of good, by taking out it's most powerful warriors from the inside. She said he would be the first, but others would follow him to hell. However, before she could act, she was scared away by the appearence of a shadowy figure that Nightwolf couldn't make out. He was still woozy from the shot to the head Gabrielle had given him. It was her..wasn't it? Nightwolf had used ancient spells to incapcitate her. He hoped that it would keep her out long enough warn the others of her treachary. He needed time as he had no idea how he'd tell Ryoko such a thing. If he told her, she would kill him if he even so much as glanced at Gabrielle. The spell had warn off faster than he anticipated. Was she here to finish him? Something about her eyes..her body language, told him no. This was the Gabrielle he met on the higher plane. The sweet and innocent girl who fought bravely the forces of evil. He had to be sure.

"Avoiding you? No, of course not. I have just been very busy. Gabrielle, tell me, do you remember the night I brought you water after your training?" Gabrielle cocked an eyebrow and looked at Nightwolf as if he had talked to her in a different language.

"Yes...what does that have to do with anything?"

"You said you were going for a bath, did you do that?" Gabrielle paused a moment. "Nightwolf, I don't see.."

"Please Gabrielle, it's important. Tell me."

"Yes. I went and took a bath. I was in there for a half hour."

"Did anyone see you? Going into the bathroom? Coming out?"

"Yes, Sub-Zero was on his way to the courtyard. We spoke for a few moments before he continued on his way." With this, Nightwolf scoops Gabrielle into his arms, huggin her tightly! Gabrielle is shocked, and doesn't know what to make of the situation. "Nightwolf?"

"Oh..I'm sorry for my suddeness child. It's just that I am very happy." He says, putting her down.

"Over what?" Nightwolf looked down at the floor, almost ashamed. Gabrielle lifted his face gently and looked at him. His eyes were very sad. "Over what?" She repeated gently.

"I thought that it was you who attacked and nearly killed me." Gabrielle stared at him in shock. "W-Why would you think such a thing?"

"Because she said she was you. She looked just like you! Or at least from what I could see. My vision was a little blurred, so I wasn't clear. But after what you just told me, I realize it couldn't have been you. I was hit seconds after the door closed behind you! It must have been..."

"Tanya! My god..Nightwolf if she's already here, she can cause more problems than you know. I've got to find her! Jade warned me she may be coming here. I'm so sorry I didn't find her before she attacked you! You nearly died and the blood would have been on my hands!"

"No, this is not your fault. Besides I am fine. We must find her though. We don't need yet another enemy working against us. And one as cunning and ruthless as Tanya would be most deadly. I will inform the others and we can..."

"NO! Tanya is my responsiblity, mine alone. I will find her and I will deal with her. I won't see anyone else hurt by or because of her. Say nothing!" Nightwolf stares at her, astonished.

"Gabrielle, you shouldn't do this alone! Your still weak from the beating Kahn gave you. I can't allow you to go alone!"

"It's decided Nightwolf. I will do it. Respect my wishes please. And wish me luck, for when I find Tanya tonite...one of us will not survive. It ends now!"

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08/02/2004 01:43 AM (UTC)
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Anyone else? I can't beleive this was on the second page already..I just upadated yestarday.
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Very cool, as always. Too bad my fight between Sensui and Kahn wasn't as deep.
-Inner Chamber-
Sabre is on the floor, meditating, while all the while trying to keep the Dragon King out of his mind. His face slightly twists as he senses a presence. He opens his eye to see Sensui, fully healed standing in front of him.
Sabre"Sensui!" He launches at him with a powerful roundhouse. Sensui grabs his leg and his eyes shift back to Sabre. Surprisingly, Sensui doesn;t follow through with any attack. He throws down Sabre's leg and crosses his arms.
Sensui"So ice dragon, what would killing Tsung have proved?"
Sabre"What are you talking about? And how do you know about my past with Shang Tsung?"
Sensui"Simple, after drinking your blood, I was able to access your memories. I've seen what Tsung has done and I also know what spell he used to do it."
Sabre"What differance does it make? He's living death to the fullest."
Sensui snickers abit."What if I said that he was alive nad well. Ok maybe not well, but alive at the very least."
Sabre"Don't toy with me."
Sensui"It's no joke. Have you forgotten how I brought back Lui Kang? Death is something that isn't as hard to overcome as you might think."
Sensui creates a window between realms showing Sabre a glimpse into the Netherealm, and the armless Shang Tsung burning on a cross in the Chaos Sanctuary.
Sabre"Give him to me!" He grabs Sensui by the throat, eyes blazing."I won't say it again. Give him to me, or I'll crush your throat."
Sensui simply warps out of Sabre grasp."Nice grab. But I have no intention of just handing him over. I'll make a deal with you."
Sabre"Sure just like you did with Kung Lao? Only when Hell freezes over."
Sensui"I can do that too. Here's the the deal. If you can last long enough in the tournament to face me, and defeat me I will give you Tsung. However, if you fail, you will suffer the same fate."
Sabre"Fine."
Sensui"Excellent. There have been few who can give me a rush in combat, so far only Vandon, and Shao Kahn have gotten me that far. I see a great power inside of you, it's to bad that Tsung has burried it by imprisoning you in this form."
Sensui starts to chant a familiar spell, which Sabre realizes from long ago. It is the same spell that sealed his power away.
Sensui's aura changes from a black flame to one of ice blue. HIs hands start to steam as the begin to cover in cold fire.
Sabre"This can't be! How can you!"
Sensui"Simple, although I'm not of dragon origin your blood, combined with the Soul of Talon have given me precise control of the Ice Lung, or as I have named it Cold Fire. Now, here's a taste of the power that you left behind." Sensui charges up a plam blast. The blast is a wild flame, but it emmitts a freeze instead of a burn. He releases it in a jet of blue flames into a nearby wall. The blast takes the shape of a roaring dragon as it tears through the room and completely demolishes a the wall, it keeps going through several more rooms until a clean path is made.
Sensui"Your power isn't stripped away, just hidden. I suggest that you find away tobring it to the surface, because if you don't come through in the tournament, you will pay dearley if I'm let down."
Sabre"Why are you doing all of this?"
Sensui"I keep my friends close and my enemies much, much closer. Now I have someone's life to ruin."
Sensui snaps his fingers and Lui Kang, along with Kung Lao appear in two flames.
Sensui"Gabrielle will undoubtedly try to finish of Tanya. I want you both to protect Tanya. Give Gabrielle a choice, does she risk loosing her two former friends, and go after her sister or does she end their lives and go after Tanya?"
Sabre"You will pay for messing with her, mark my words."
Sensui"Good, feed of your anger, let it overwhelm you. But unlike everyone here, I know what true suffering is, it has made me strong, ruthless, an unafraid." Lui Kang and Kung Lao depart as Sensui dissapears, leaving Sabre to hi own.
-Junction Chamber-
Ryoko and the rest of the Earth's warriors, as well as others are getting in some training. Smoke and Sub-Zero relive their days in the Link Kuie as they show off a spectacylar display of skill. Sub-Zero freezes Smoke's ehtereal form and kicks through it only to see that his hit has gone straight through Smoke's ehtreal frame. Smoke runs in close and unleashes a combo of swift strikes to Sub-Zero's mid-section. As his last hit comes in Sub-Zero grab's Smoke's solid fist and tosses him into a pillar. Smoke's ethereal frame shatters, his clothes fall to the floor. Then the myst regroups inside the clothes and Smoke is whole once again.
Shujinko"In all my years, I have never seen such talent. Not even Sub-Zero's older brother possesed such skill."
Darrius"They might do some real good in my realm."
As Smoke and Sub-Zero bow and shake hands, they, along with everyone else here an ominus laughter. They look to the shadows, as a figure takes a step, eyes, blazing red, along with four orbs glowing on his body. He takes a step foreward, as the metal on his armor makes a clang. The figure steps into the light revealing himself.
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